I downloaded this as a freebie on Kindle the other day, because I thought it would be a good review for me as my class moves towards the American Revolution.
Blah! What a pain to read. I'm on the same, giant paragraph that moves from one founding father to another, one thought to another, with no spacing, paragraphing, or structure. Am I in the prologue? Where are the chapters? WTF is going on? I feel lost in a really bad student essay of verbal vomit.
I'm not sure I can take much more of bouncing from Adams to Hamilton and back to Jefferson. I'll try for another segment tonight, and if this book doesn't straighten itself out, it's in the DNF pile.
9/4 update: It's getting better. I realized that the giant run-on paragraph at the beginning was an unsuccessful attempt at a preface, or introduction.
I would have preferred a Title Page with a Table of Contents. Just saying.
First book completed - Benjamin Franklin. Nicely done, solid 3 stars.
9/8 update:
I finished the section on George Washington over a bowl of Special K cereal. Nothing new here on George, simply a familiar recitation of the Revolutionary War and early US history. I wanted something more personal, but I didn't find it here. Solid 3 stars.
9/18:
The sections on John Adams and Thomas Jefferson are complete. I enjoyed the short on Adams much more than that of Jefferson's, probably as I find Jefferson too complex a man to be done justice in less than 50 pages. Moving on to John Jay!
9/22:
John Jay bored me to tears! I think I need to give this up for a while. I'm sure Alexander Hamilton will have a few tricks up his sleeve. Pausing for a week or two...