Arghh! Why is it that so many writers of fiction feel such an irresistible compulsion to weave the words of Homer, and especially of his epic poem “The Iliad,” into their stories? Now, Reginald Hill has joined those other misguided authors. Contrary to apparent beliefs that quoting from Homer, or paraphrasing him, adds to the literary quality of stories, it just makes them stale and artificial. I’m sure that the purpose was some sort of metaphor, but it certainly didn’t work.
The plot of this novel is really far-fetched. It is complex, convoluted, and difficult to follow. If I had not already been familiar with this author’s writings, I would have abandoned the book after only about 100 of the 500-plus pages it contains. This is clearly not one of Mr. Hill’s better works. Of the twenty-four Dalziel and Pascoe books that I have so far read, this is probably as bad as “The Price of Butcher’s Meat,” which warranted only two stars.
As his writing career progressed, Hill began experimenting with various literary devices – perhaps in the vain hope of joining the classic authors that we studied in our college Literature courses. Filling his stories with the hijacked words and style of Homer is not, in my opinion, the way to accomplish that goal. Dalziel and Pascoe, along with Sgt. Wield, DC Novello and the other members of the Mid-Yorkshire CID gang, are interesting characters in their own right, and their straight-forward police procedural activities are entertaining and interesting enough that mucking them about with the writings of Homer is completely unnecessary. Actually, in fact, it is a distraction from the characters we have grown to know and love, and from the generally good detective writings of a talented author.
In this story, centered around Ellie Pascoe, wife of DCI Pascoe, the plot is so convoluted and chaotic that it defies comprehension. Colombian drug dealers and revolutionaries are mixed up with the Irish Republican Army (IRA) and the secretive British Security Service in an unlikely story about arms smuggling and drug dealing, along with revolutionary activities in South America. This one was too far over the top, and I award it only two stars. Skip this book. At 502 pages, it is more than twice as long as it needed to be. Of course, if you suffer from insomnia, this snoozer might help you get to sleep.