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297 pages, Kindle Edition
First published January 25, 2015
“You smell nice too, Myne.” Lutz smiled warmly while looking directly at me with his jade green eyes.
Oh... Oh no! Lutz has a powerful color scheme! Golden blonde hair and jade green eyes alone make him look like a super cool, handsome guy!
“Plus, you look a lot cuter now that you’re pinning your hair back and I can see your face better.”
Hyaaaah! A finishing blow! Even though he’s a little kid, I’m feeling super embarrassed! I know he’s not doing it on purpose, but goodness! Please, stop! I may be kinda old, but I’ve never experienced anything like this! I don’t know what to do!
“Tuuli, do you know where (paper) is sold?”
“What’d you say, Myne?”
“I said (paper)... Ah!”
Tuuli tilted her head, braid shaking, in a gesture that felt very familiar. She was making the same expression that she did when my words ended up as Japanese and she didn’t understand. I didn’t know how to say “paper” in this place’s language.
Oh no...! I should have asked that pawn stand guy what paper is! “Um, Tuuli, you don’t know what (paper) is...?”
“Sorry. I don’t. The word sounds kinda funny though.”
My shoulders slumped and I let out a heavy sigh.
Of course, the whole exchange is stupid. In reality, someone would say, "You don't know what (paper) is? What's the thing that books are made out of?" (She knows the word for books.)
This kind of thing also happens constantly. She doesn't know the local word for something so she....just...gives up. Have you ever been in a foreign country where you know the language but not fluently? That's not what anyone does. You try to explain it. You describe it. And so on.
This is a self-published book and it shows. The writing is absolutely terrible. It was really, really, really hard for me to get past that.
Some people might be okay with it. They might be interested in the vaguely Dr.STONE 1 like progression as she tries to reinvent modern book publishing from the ground up, while not actually knowing about how any of it works. (Early sections has her trying to make papyrus to write on, then decides that's way too hard....)
But it definitely wasn't for me.