1 star
I read 39% of this historical mystery set in mid-eighteenth century London before quitting. The period detail seems quite good and the book is pretty page-turning but unfortunately, the heroine’s motivations don’t make sense.
Lizzie Hardwicke is a sex worker in a high-class brothel (or at least as high class as bawdy houses got back in 1759) in London and one of her clients is murdered. Mr. George Reed wasn’t a particularly great guy; Lizzie only had two encounters with him, and she didn’t want to have sex with him but went ahead because it was her job.
According to the blurb, Lizzie decides to investigate his death to clear her name and there is some lip service paid to that in the book but since she’s not in imminent danger of arrest (at least in the first 39%), it’s not convincing.
Neither is it persuasive that Bow Street runner/ inspector Mr. Davenport not only agrees to her suggestion that he allow her to question the people she knows in the demimonde and the streets on his behalf, but even lets Lizzie come along with him to examine the dead man’s lodgings.
Again, why? Lizzie is an amateur and Davenport hardly knows her. He doesn’t even fully trust her, so why? No reason is given.
Throughout the section I read, Lizzie helps out Sallie, an alcoholic streetwalker. At one point she even sneaks Sallie into her room in the brothel, despite the danger this poses to her – she could be cast out of the brothel if that was discovered, and then she would end up on the streets herself. This doesn’t make sense either; Lizzie has only known Sallie for a few days, so why take this risk for her? Where would either of them be if Lizzie were booted out?
Lizzie keeps buying Sallie food and giving her money, but Sallie spends the money on gin, isn’t particularly appealing and doesn’t, as far as we know, remind Lizzie of anyone from her past. The only motive provided is that Lizzie feels she could end up on the street, too, but if that’s what’s behind the impulse, it should also serve as a deterrent to inviting Sallie into her room.
Later on, Lizzie is told by Sallie’s friends that Sallie remembered something pertaining to the murder and it’s a matter of life or death that she speak with Sallie right away. Lizzie can’t meet the girl just then because she is being herded back to the brothel and is threatened with losing her position if she doesn’t return there immediately.
That’s a good reason (finally), but the next morning Lizzie has the opportunity to go find Sallie and she doesn’t immediately take it, despite the urgency of Sallie’s request the night before. It’s a matter of life and death, so why doesn’t she leave right away? Again, we’re not told.
Lizzie wakes up groggy, which, okay, but then she goes through a whole scene that morning and doesn’t think of it. So… she risked ending up on the street to take Sallie into her room to sleep off gin but when Sallie’s life is on the line it escapes her memory?
Aside from the motivation issues, I also ran into another difficulty with the book. The setting was portrayed with detail and authenticity. But precisely for that reason, the sex work was difficult to read about.
The prostitutes in the book have to do their work to survive, and they don’t have other alternatives except pickpocketing. The nervousness they feel when meeting new clients is palpable. So the sex feels rapey. I’m glad the author doesn’t pretend otherwise and whitewash it, but at the same time, it was difficult to read. DNF.