I received an ARC with no promise of a review, favorable or otherwise. Opinions are my own.
Ms. Starnes always finds new and excruciating ways to put Mr. Darcy through the wringer, and this book is no exception. I do think this time she has crammed one too many different elements into her story, but I'll get to that later in my review.
As the story begins in Hertfordshire, things are a bit different for the Bennet family. Mrs. Bennet has been dead for several years. Mr. Bennet, now raising his five daughters alone, is an involved parent rather than hiding away in his study. Lydia and Kitty are not out. Mr. Collins' attentions are directed away from Jane and Elizabeth and toward the more suitable Mary, to everyone's satisfaction, and thus the middle Bennet daughter is the first Bennet sister to marry when she becomes Mrs. Collins
Mr. Darcy comes to visit Mr. Bingley at Netherfield, and he is easily bewitched by Elizabeth Bennet. The book sticks with Darcy's point of view in this section, and he thoroughly enjoys all his interactions with the fascinating young lady. Before long, though, the sense of duty drilled into him by his parents starts to assert itself. Although he wishes he could have her as his wife, Elizabeth just is not an acceptable match. He also is concerned about Bingley marrying so disadvantageously. Therefore, Darcy follows the usual pattern of convincing his friend to leave Jane behind, just as he is abandoning his own desire to marry Elizabeth.
Meanwhile, Lydia's ungovernable high spirits assert themselves. Her foolish actions create enough gossip in Hertfordshire that Mr. Bennet eventually finds it prudent to bring his entire family on an extended visit with Mary and her new husband in Hunsford. Their presence changes the dynamics between Rosings and the parson's family by marriage, especially when Lady Catherine realizes the beneficial effects on her daughter Anne. A lovely twist in the plot is revealed to Darcy through a letter from Anne to Georgiana at Pemberley.
Ms. Starnes literally adds a whole new dimension by incorporating the ghostly spirits of the departed Mr. and Mrs. Darcy into the story. They watch over their offspring but are chained at Pemberley and frustratingly limited in their ability to intervene when Georgiana or Fitzwilliam need help. George and Anne Darcy also have some issues to work out in their own relationship. It's an entertaining side story that turns up in the beginning and end, and also at a particularly relevant moment in the middle of the story for young Mr. Darcy.
When Darcy goes to Rosings for Easter, he's finally ready to pursue Miss Elizabeth and has plenty of co-conspirators in Georgiana, Colonel Fitzwilliam and his cousin Anne. Unfortunately, we then get to see him at his most inept, fumbling and tongue-tied. Also, in contrast to how she behaved when Darcy was in Hertfordshire, Elizabeth doesn't seem to have any desire to spend time with him now. Lady Catherine's unrelenting presence makes it even more difficult for him to approach her. Darcy is not the only one frustrated by Lady Catherine's delusional insistence that he and Anne WILL marry. During this time, the POV gives us glimpses into Elizabeth's thoughts and feelings, some of which are surprising but not unbelievable. Mr. Bennet's wit and irreverence add a nice touch to the goings on.
It's around the 75% mark when the book takes what I feel is a wrong turn. It abruptly shifts from a delightful Regency romance with some humorous paranormal elements to a mysterious whodunnit. Even more unforgivable, the reader is not allowed a fair opportunity to guess the culprit. Over the course of several chapters, there is a crime committed in Rosings, a hunt commences to determine who is responsible, and the villain is apprehended. We are provided with the obligatory red herrings. The perpetrator, when cornered, confesses with a bitter litany of grudges against the household, none of which is relevant to the rest of the story.
Once this detour resolves, the primary storyline resumes, with Lady Catherine continuing to insist upon her way in all things. (Honestly, those mystery chapters could be ripped right out of the book without having any impact on the surrounding events.) I love the turn the story takes here, and supernatural guardians rejoin the action as things march on to the conclusion and a very satisfying HEA.
The plot gives us lots of Darcy-and-Elizabeth time, which means plenty of yearning, angst and "the feels." Ms. Starnes really knows how to turn on the heat without getting into MA territory. There's one particularly hot kiss that just about made steam rise up out of my kindle!
The quality of Ms. Starnes' writing is absolutely excellent. Her characterizations, including interactions and conversations among the characters, rival the very best in JAFF. Unfortunately, I have to point out one overused phrase, as someone's lips always seem to "twitch." (I actually did a search--There are 26 references to lips twitching throughout the story.)
I really, really love about 85% of this book, which would be worth a solid 5 stars from me if that strange 15% of mystery hadn't plopped itself down in the midst of a whopping good romance. It's well worth your time to read despite the unwelcome interruption, and I'm sure there are many who won't be bothered by it a bit.