Yes, this author is as talented as Cormac McCarthy with his prose, which evokes deep emotion like a musical artist can stoke latent longing. In fact, this brings to memory McCarthy’s Suttree and felt autobiographical – the protagonist is inscrutable, perhaps the author’s most naked yet still there is a mysterious core he protects. The plot in this story is of a long, slogging journey where Billy Edgewater (just out of the navy) seems to ultimately not go very far, mired in the “lost” country of rural, wooded and small town Tennessee. I’ve spent a bit of time in this beautiful and austere and perpetually uneven land. It is set in the 50s, yet bootlegging is still the main action – that being unlicensed liquor for which there is a brisk trade in most of the dry counties in the bible belt. These characters are as original, rich, hilarious and frightening as you will encounter – they ring true as a bell and obviously are built from the author’s first-hand knowledge (more about him later). The way people speak, the turns of phrase, the odd geometry of backward turns of phrase is clearly authentic. The author truly knows these people and the way they talk. Gay’s prose is as good as Faulkner and O’Conner, and the characters fascinating. The dialogue is superb, not marked with quotations (like McCarthy) and interspersed with italicized dream sequences and memories. The story revolves around Edgewater’s days running with two particularly mischievous troublemakers, the one-armed grifter Roosterfish and the young Bradshaw. Both are scheming and land Edgewater in jail and perpetually hiding from the law. But they are hard to find, and their troubles are mostly outside of the law in opposition to a good old boy (Harkness) who owns most everything in sight in his roguish backward ways. Edgewater is stuck, however, as he is largely uneducated without family and direction. He spends a great deal of time with solitary wandering, falling in and out of trouble.
The story of this story is of the author himself, who did not get published till late in life after most of his work was done, all in his spare time. He was a reader and writer in secret, by day a laborer. This was published posthumously, by accumulation of hundreds of notebooks squirreled away in moth-eaten attics. The late discovery of a hidden typed manuscript made this book possible – apparently it was written in the 1970s and for a period of decades, and his ex-wife thought it was his magnum opus. It took two years to resolve the rights to publish after his producer passed away (with massive debt). Gay was secretive, apparently, and there is a great deal we just do not know about this man who privately wrote and dreamed of creating novels worthy of what he would know to be great literature. Apparently, there is more to come, but I suspect they will be of diminishing value as his writings were scattered and incomplete at the time of his untimely death. I imagine he smoked (who didn’t of that ilk and in that time) and his body couldn’t keep up with his brain. One thinks of Larry Brown here, but without the friends and town of Oxford to keep him on task and collected. I found myself marking this book frequently, the prose is just so breathtakingly beautiful, and the people so perfectly interesting. Here are a few. If I could write, I would probably be like this author, quietly pouring it out in solitude, caring only that it brings pleasure to some stranger or kindred spirit after I am gone – William did this for me, and I can’t but be grateful for his commitment to excellence and capturing a time and place to perfection.
p. 19: “He could hear her fumbling out the keys. The engine cranked and they were in motion. She squealed the tires savagely, spun smoking into the street, not looking at him. They rode for a time in silence. He lowered his hand, watched her clean profile against the shifting pattern of traffic, pedestrians moiling like ants. He studied her intently, as if he had never seen her before, some unwary stranger who had lowered her guard and permitted him trespass to her very soul. He saw for the first time the faint cobwebbing of lines fanning out from the corners of her eyes, the grainy skin magnified by the merciless sun. He looked past her eyes into her and found there imperfections as well. Cold vapors swirling off the river Styx. We grow old, we grow old.”
p. 47: “The nights were never long enough, the night would not replace what the day had stolen. IN all their beds in all their shotgun shacks they lay burled against the quilts in agonized crucifixion, their troubled dreams biased by the enormous tug of gravity from the invisible and lost country they had come from.”
p. 124: “He could smell him. Cheap perfume, Sen Sen, whiskey, dissolution: all the sweet smells of deliberatre ruin, the carrion smell then of slow and self-inflicted death… He looked down into the glossy little eyes as depthless as a stuffed animal’s or the result of some inexpert taxidermist’s art and saw there for one moment pain, a quick flash of outraged dignity; then perhaps they read on Edgewater’s face not fear, but pity, for they went instantly malevolent, a loathsome doll’s eye.”
p. 183: “There was a man and a woman ascending the steps to the Knob and a pickup with an enormous set of bullhorns mounted on the hood sitting in the parking lot. Edgewater followed the pair in. The man was heavyset and unshaven and he wore shapeless dirty overalls. His face was florid as if he dwelt perpetually in some state of banked rage. His eyes were shrewd and small and not unlike holes chiseled into some chaotic darkness that seethed behind the mask he wore for the world to see. He moved with an inherent arrogance as if whatever was in his way would move before he reached it. The woman clutched his arm as if he were holding her afloat in perilous waters. She was younger than he was and heavily made up, eyebrows shaved off and then penciled ack on in an expression of arch surprise, as if the world was constantly coming up with new toys to amuse her. She stood unsteadily, swaying slightly as if drunk or deranged with the heat.”
p. 185: “Edgewater studied him. He could see nothing about Harkness that would cause women to cast aside home and hearth and follow him. Yet there seemed something elemental about him, as if all the layers of convention had been peeled away leaving nothing save the need for procreation and violence.” Wow.
p. 196: “Her blond hair was tousled, she had an old white bathrobe wrapped about her. Her thought her face a trifle too round, but the skin was smooth as fired pottery, a pale glaze unpored or blemished and the blue eyes looked serene, untouched. Innocent. Deep wells blue with distance, remote, fabled repositories for such innocence as remained in the world.”
pp. 229-230: “Crippled Elmer cadged beer with a sort of wistful desperation while his mother searched faces foreign enough to these shores as to be unaware or desperate enough to be unmindful of her generosity with gonorrhea spores and body lice. Her wrinkled face powdered and rouged grotesquely as if her cosmetologist was a failed undertaker so inept as to be drummed from the craft, her hair an electric orange red so absolutely divorced from anything that ever grew on a human head that it appeared something purloined in haste by mistake from the trunk of a clown. She wore brash and groundless confidence like some bright garment of youth that did not fit anymore. She forced on Edgewater a drink of Bobwhite from a halfpint she wore on a string about her neck like some gross bauble. Hauled up from whatever grubby depths of her garments and warmed to body temperature by her collapsed and withered dugs. The bottle itself lipsticked and scented alike with dime-store perfume and the acrid musk of her body; the bottle tilted to her upraised face and upon his ears like some backdrop or soundtrack to whatever drama he played out came through the graffiti-ridden walls of the men’s room the clock of the pool balls. The clanging of the pinball machine, the drunken voices crossing boast with complaint, farther yet and lost a wailing ambulance was shuttled down the endless walls of the night.”
p. 241: “Preachers hinted apocalypse in Sunday sermons to rows of limp parishioners among whose ranks fans fluttered listlessly as leaves in the vagaries of the wind. Saturday corner gospelmongers were more direct. Demented and hydrophobic they ranted of man’s dark side. I told you and you wouldn’t listen, they said with satisfaction. Maybe you’ll listen now. The wrath of God had kicked aside a rotten log, bared the sun’s white agony onto a motley of writhing grubs, sexton beetles scuttling for shelter. The earth wearying of its tenants, shuffling them off into the eye of the sun. Choking with vitriol these men of God looked savagely about for such souls as Saturday night might bring within the range of their voices and saw little worth sparing. Mad faces turned toward the hot sky, they demanded God smite all these whoremongers and adulterers, honkytonk brawlers, whiskey drinking fornicators. That not even the young be spared for evil already ran through them like a fault line.”
p. 306: “The world is full of fools looking for places ain’t there no more. He arose and took up the grain hook. I’ll see you, he said…. He came back out and sat in the chair by the window wishing for daylight but this night seemed timeless. In these clockless hours before day he knew he’d overstayed his welcome but he didn’t know what to do about it. He knew he was leaving but there did not seem to be anywhere he wanted to go or any face left in all the world he cared to look on.”
p. 309: Edgewater in a reunion with the old Roosterfish: “I had some after you left, too. Got kind of squirrelly there after they killed my rooster. They purely kicked the hell out of me, too. That old pisol hadn’t of blowed up I believe they’da killed me. They wanted you as bad or worse than they did me. They hated your ass, son. They could understand me; they couldn’t figure you out for shit”. Surely this is Gay writing about himself.