In the interest of full disclosure, I should note that I am not a teacher, but I am a writer, and I did teach an after-school writing class last year to students in grades 3-6. My co-teacher recommended this book, and although I'm no longer teaching, I figured that reading this book might pay dividends when it comes to my own writing. And in this supposition I was correct. (It's always useful to get back to basics from time to time, no matter how experienced one may be.)
The author emphasizes at numerous points that this book is not meant to be a teaching method, but, rather, a framework for assessing students' writing. From that point of view, it certainly has plenty to recommend it. By splitting the task of assessment into seven discrete areas, which can be focused on separately in the classroom depending on which of them any given student needs the most work on, Ms. Culham breaks down a potentially daunting task into manageable chunks. Nor does the author neglect to connect these seven areas to one another, the first five of which relate to revision, and the last two of which relate to editing.
Central to this text is the analysis of many authentic pieces of student writing which help to emphasize both strengths and weaknesses in various areas (i.e., the traits of the title). In addition, nearly a dozen more pieces are presented and carefully analyzed in a handy appendix.
Where this book falls short is in its formulaic structure, which results in a certain amount of redundancy between chapters. In addition -- and ironically! -- the final chapter, "Presentation: Rolling Out the Welcome Mat," breaks the conventions established in the previous six chapters, thus marring the book's overall presentation. Perhaps this is because presentation is given short shrift and defined as a "half trait" by the author. This feels like a misstep. It would have been better, in my opinion, to have given this trait the same status as the others and to treat its subject matter accordingly, thus creating a sense of a cohesive whole. As it stands, the final chapter feels like an afterthought (apparently it was) which has been grafted onto the main text. It is this writer's opinion that presentation is a substantive enough issue to warrant a more thorough treatment, and my hope is that subsequent editions of this generally useful book will address that particular shortcoming. All in all, however, this is a worthy resource to add to one's toolbox, whether you're a teacher or, as in my case, just a lowly writer.