The Devil's Eye (Maddy Wimsey, #1) by
J.R. Rain and Matthew Cox
Once again I validate my dislike of co-authored books. However, in fairness, although Rain is one of my favorite authors, I've read books him that I wasn't too fond of, so perhaps it's something else than the co-authorship that just didn't fit for me.
The main character in this book is Maddy Wimsey, a 35 year old woman with wild red hair and a sassy personality. She is a practicing Wiccan who also happens to be a police officer. In this story, she and her partner are investigating a gruesome murder that might be connected to Satanic ritual. The authors do a good job with their character, giving her quite a range of knowledge of both the Wicca lifestyle and police protocol. I found only one proofing error, a left out word or two at 174 on my Kindle, so the editing and proofing were good. The plotting and pacing were good and the story flowed well. I very much liked Maddy, and her character is well fleshed out. Some of the supporting characters will hopefully be more fully explored in coming books in this series. Those are the things I liked.
Here are the things I didn't like:
gypsy skirt: This appears 4 times in the book. 1) the word Gypsy should be capitalized if it is going to be used. You wouldn't write american flag, would you? Or african lion? 2) The word shouldn't be used at all. Not just because it doesn't adequately describe the piece of clothing, which it doesn't, but because the word is a perjorative to the Romany people. Just the use of the word knocked a star off my rating.
Wicca: If your main character is Wiccan, why use the words clockwise and counterclockwise. She would say deosil and widdershins. Use the correct verbage for your character, please. You did manage that in other places, so why not for the above? Yeah, I went ahead and knocked another star off for this.
Two other things bothered me about this book, although I didn't take off any more stars for them. One occurred at 3644: "Most of today, I'll be touching my computer in naughty places, working on a mountain of reports. Later tonight, I'll be touching Caius in naughty places." Sigh. First, I've been using a computer since the 1980s and I don't know any of those naughty places. I feel left out. Second -- how old are you guys? 14?
The second is the very last sentence of the book: "If only I could come up with a spell to fill out these damn reports." Okay, first of all 'these damn reports' are all about the stolen items recovered at the end of the book. That means that most of the reports would be filled out similarly. This is a high tech police station with -- gasp! -- photocopiers and computers! This means the officer can fill out one report, if they are paper and not a computer form, with all of the information which will remain the same in each and every report, leave the spots where it will vary blank, make as many photocopies as needed and then just fill in what is needed as to each individual item. If the report is on computer, do the same, but instead of photocopying, just save the form, and the copy it for each item, filling in just the necessary information on each item. Yeah, this is very nit picky, but I would hope anyone who has ever had to work with tedious forms in their job would know both of the above tricks. It made the ending a real let down for me.
So will I read another book in the series? I already have the second, so sooner or later, yes, I'll read it.