I think the premise for this book is great, but the execution is lacking. Flora, adopted as a baby, is determined to find out who her birth mother is and perhaps why she left Flora on a doorstep of the town doctor and his wife one winter morning. Thus, leaving a holiday celebration for no real reason other than her thought about who her birth mother is, Flora returns to Pooley, the village where she was found on the door step. Standing and staring at the door step of this house where she was found, Flora is stopped by the local police, who want to know what she is doing there. During their discussion, Flora drops a paper, and she and one of the cops, Joel, both bend to pick it up at the same time. They butt heads, and Joel ends up with two black eyes and a broken nose. His partner Scott immediately arrests Flora for assaulting an officer, though Flora and Joel try to protest that what happened was merely and accident. Joel is off to the hospital to have his nose looked at, while Scott takes Flora to the local station to book her. There, as the locals question Flora, they realize she is the once-famous abandoned baby from thirty years ago. Unfortunately, the mystery of who she is and where she came from were never solved, and life moved on. However, the town has never forgotten. After having charges dropped, Flora stays on at the local pub and inn, the Peacock, owned by the loving Annie and her husband Mick. Thence, Flora continues her search for her mother, wondering each time she sees a woman about the right age if this woman is the one who left her on the door step that day. Everyone in the small town remembers the incident and has a basic opinion, but no one seems to know many details. Still, Flora stays on, hoping to discover who her mother is and what exactly happened. At the same time, Flora and Joel begin a relationship, fraught with events, emotions and memories that may just prevent it from becoming a real thing, while Flora continues her search.
This is a pretty good story. I did find it difficult to see the relationship between Joel and Flora, as, for a large part of the book, there was nothing between them except a basic friendship, though could see something hiding in the background and there was a basic chemistry. However, Joel had just left a relationship with and older woman, who later decided she probably should not have broken off with him and was thus trying desperately to rekindle what was once between them. Flora also has a history of bad relationships, and her current ex, like Joel’s, also wants to get back together. Neither of these makes things easier for the two. I think a lot of time in the book was spent going into background, with little of this adding much to the story, which made the story drag on and on—while there was no deepening of the Flora-Joel relationship. A missed opportunity. In addition, the author used a lot of British slang, which I was not familiar with, throughout, which only made it more difficult to plough through. I think the book would have been more enjoyable with less “Britishisms”. Not sure who the author intended as an audience, but, if it included American readers, she ought to keep that in mind for future books. Like other reviewers, I also skipped large parts of the book, as I found I could not bear to go through another chapter with little or no bearing on the ending, which I eagerly anticipated. This is a good story with a pretty good plot. I am just not sure of the execution. I received this from NetGalley to read and review.