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Friends and Enemies: A Pride and Prejudice Variation

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“If you know the enemy and know yourself, you need not fear the results of a hundred battles.” Sun Tzu, 5th Century BCEMr. Fitzwilliam Darcy, the hero of Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, has his world turned upside down when his character, of which he is particularly proud, is called into question by those whom he trusts. Will he learn from his mistakes or remain his own worst enemy?When he discovers a secret which could destroy not only the reputation of his beloved sister but threatens her very life, he can no longer hide behind his mask of social indifference. Dismaying circumstances will test the strength of his personal beliefs and convictions as well as his devotion to family and friends as a rival from his past determines to ruin him and take everything Darcy holds dear.Out of the flames of adversity, Miss Elizabeth Bennet, once scorned, becomes a beacon of hope.Can love grow from adversity? Is happiness possible? In this full-length novel set in Regency, England, true friendships are made, enemies are revealed, and happily-ever-after is on the horizon. Or is it…

236 pages, Kindle Edition

Published June 5, 2017

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J. Dawn King

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I go by the name "Joy". There is a well-published author that uses my full name (including the same middle initial). Imagine that!

I also write as Christie Capps. These are all variations of Pride and Prejudice that are about 100-120 pages in length.

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1,671 reviews75 followers
January 20, 2019
This is one of those books that's almost impossible to put down as soon as you start reading it. I usually appreciate Joy King's writing talent, and she's really outdone herself here.

Fitzwilliam Darcy gets started on the road of self-reflection much earlier than in canon thanks to a set down by Lydia Bennet at the Netherfield ball. He is completely taken aback by her assertion that her sister Elizabeth detests him and that, indeed, the entire neighborhood holds a negative opinion of him. Shortly thereafter, first Bingley and then his cousin, Colonel Fitzwilliam, confirm that others do see him as arrogant and high-handed.

He's barely digested this unwelcome information when a crisis involving Georgiana emerges, and the plot bolts forward at full speed from there. The story follows Darcy through all his internal reflection and external trials as he tries to win Elizabeth Bennet's heart and keep his loved ones safe from harm. The climax of the book is a doozy, with the major characters in the same room as a deathly threat faces them.

There's so much to admire here. The writing is flawless and gripping. Characterizations are richly drawn and believable. I love that Colonel Fitzwilliam gets his own love interest in this story, too, although the focus appropriately remains on the primary couple. I want Mr. and Mrs. Gardiner to be MY uncle and aunt! They are so sensible and sensitive in every situation. Lydia and Kitty are typical squabbling teenage siblings and provide some much-needed comic relief. Wickham and Mr. Bennet are shown to be worse than usual, the former in his scheming and manipulating and the latter in his failings as a husband and father. It's very satisfying when each eventually gets his comeuppance. Darcy and Elizabeth get lots of page time together, and the development of their relationship is a joy to read as he works to earn her respect and love.

This is easily a 5-star book, and one I will probably reread.
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2,653 reviews198 followers
May 20, 2019
Yes, again, I am sitting here with blurry eyes. And this is not the first time in reading this story. Having read this as a WIP on fanfiction.com I loved it and immediately upon its release had to reread it so as to have it fresh in my mind for this review.

In this story, Darcy's attention is brought to his faults, his disdain of those not of his social class & to the insult he spoke about pertaining to her sister...by Lydia. Yes, Lydia nails him with exactly what he is lacking, despite his good looks and his wealth. And Darcy is not allowed to dismiss her words when upon asking first Bingley and then Richard as to how others, or even how they, perceive his behavior, they both confirm that Darcy has need of correcting his character as perceived by those around him and by those he cares for.

Fitzwilliam Darcy has left Netherfield with Bingley and met Richard on the road to London. He determines after hearing their words, that he will return to Hertfordshire so as to correct the mistaken perceptions people have of him there. He is not there long when news of a disastrous nature sends him helter-skelter to Pemberley and from there to the docks of London.

A long time enemy's evil has bourne consequences which upset Darcy's life again and the rescue in the final outcome is mostly from strangers. Elizabeth becomes part of the effort to right a wrong. And he now meets the Gardiners. But as he comes to realize that he can't deny his feelings for Elizabeth, she comes back with a rebuttal and he learns that, again, his sense of words and actions differ greatly from what others see and hear.

Darcy keeps trying to correct his behavior. And he does not get it right overnight. It even takes a little eavesdropping to realize just how much he has been on the wrong track. AND surprisingly it has to do a great deal with how he has handled Wickham and the messes Wickham left behind over all the years they have known each other.

I truly love the way Wickham is handled in the final aspects of this story's development. He is not sent off to the Americas, nor to Australia and he does not have his debts paid off and receive a dowry from Darcy to marry Lydia. OH, I can't spoil the story. But, Well Done, Joy.

Lydia's remarks through out the story are priceless. You will smirk and laugh but some times in all her naïve outlook she hits the nail on the head. Mr. Bennet continues to be a disappointment. He has never been a favorite of mine but if you like the man you may cringe to read of his indolence in the face of being told that his daughters & the town's citizens are in danger. Sad but true.

As Joy writes Darcy has a great deal of sorting to do so as to discover who stands by his side in true friendship and who is just out for what they gain from it...yes, even Lady Catherine.

I can highly recommend this longer novel to all. I enjoyed it both times I read it.

5/10/19: I am now listening to this story on Audible when I do my daily walks. Finished May 20, 2019.
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1,736 reviews131 followers
June 10, 2017
“An excellent man; he has no enemies; and none of his friends like him.” Oscar Wilde

Darcy:
“I count him braver who overcomes his desires than him who conquers his enemies; for the hardest victory is over self.” Aristotle

Mr. Darcy was having a very bad night at the Netherfield Ball. A very inebriated Lydia told it like it was, as only she could do, and exposed Darcy’s every offense with Meryton and especially with her elder sister Lizzy. She gave a most excellent revealing description of his behavior and disposition and shoved it in his face. Darcy, for the first time in his life, was presented with the supposition that people did not like, exalt, or revere him. From that point on in the story, his life was one disaster after another.

Wickham was running amuck throughout Meryton spreading his lies to anyone that would listen. When Darcy tried to warn Mr. Bennet, he wouldn’t even listen to him and practically threw him and Colonel Fitzwilliam out of Longbourn.

When Darcy attempted to gently ‘guide’ Bingley in regard to his attentions to Miss Jane Bennet, Bingley suddenly decided that he wanted to make his own mistakes without Darcy’s help and no longer felt he needed leading strings with his life and decisions.

And then the worst possible happened, an express arrived from Pemberley, from a concerned Mrs. Reynolds. It only contained a few words that were in code, but it was enough to send Darcy packing and leaving immediately for Pemberley. Darcy simply could not wake up from a nightmare that seemed to never end. And as bad as he thought it was; it was about to get worse.

“I can be on guard against my enemies, but God deliver me from my friends!” Charlotte Brontë, The Letters of Charlotte Brontë

Caroline:
“Do you know the difference between a beautiful woman and a charming one? A beauty is a woman you notice, a charmer is one who notices you.” Adlai E. Stevenson

For Caroline, it was like biting the hand that feeds you, she just couldn’t help herself. Caro was so caught up in her attitude of doing as she pleased, when she pleased… Charles this is on your door step… that she walked right into her own destruction with her eyes wide open. Everything she had ever said or done was now coming home to roost at her feet. It was amazing to watch Georgiana step up to the plate and deal with issues. Way to go Georgiana.

Wickham:
“It is easier to forgive an enemy than to forgive a friend.” William Blake

Elementary teachers see this all the time. A child, who has had free reign at their home, comes to school and is suddenly confronted with rules and… consequences. That is a hard reality for some children. Wickham, like that elementary child, has suddenly been confronted with consequences to his actions. This man was evil personified. He was cruel and vicious. His letters to Darcy were horrid and full of vitriolic hate. His feelings of self-importance and entitlement were outlandish and bizarre and his consequence was totally due to his vanity and his pride.

Lydia:
“Some girls like to say one thing and mean another. And me being who I am, I’m very straightforward. Everything is very black and white for me. I don’t really like playing mind games.” Zayn Malik

Who was this girl? On the cusp of womanhood… Lydia vacillated between, being the silliest girl in England, and being very wise in her comments and observations. Wait… did I just say that? Lydia was the catalyst that started this whole process of Darcy’s self-discovery. Who knew she had it in her? There were several places that were LOL worthy. She was priceless and the afternoon tea was the best. I won’t spoil it. However, I loved her in that part. Her parents deserved ever bit of it.

Elizabeth:
“The beauty of a woman must be seen from in her eyes, because that is the doorway to her heart, the place where love resides.” Audrey Hepburn

Darcy was coming to know himself and Elizabeth was coming to know the true Darcy. He found it hard to believe that she was not impressed with his social standing, Pemberley, his wealth or his regal mien. No, she was more impressed with what was inside the man.

“A great social success is a pretty girl who plays her cards as carefully as if she were plain.” F. Scott Fitzgerald

There was one scene when Darcy and Elizabeth, along with her Aunt and Uncle Gardiner, Jane and Bingley, were all going to the theater. Someone attempted to create a scene and Elizabeth defused the situation. Right then and there… Darcy was smitten. Only this was not the only occasion of his being smitten by her grace, wisdom, intellect, ability to defuse situations and turn a remark back on the person attempting to lob it in their direction. Yeah, poor Darcy was constantly being smitten.

I was beginning to feel really sorry for our dear guy, as he was reduced to the essence of who and what he was. The process was painful. In refining precious metals, there’s a process of burning off the dross [impurities] in order to render the metal to its purist form, ex: silver and gold. So too, for Mr. Darcy. All those attributes that he thought were expected and prized, he came to realize meant nothing to people that really mattered.

His wealth, his social circle and connections could not garner him happiness. Darcy found himself in this story. It was really hard watching his struggle as he found his way. He was constantly misunderstanding, time after time, what it took to attract a woman worthy to be loved, and have her love him back.

I have now read 10 of JDK’s books [2 under a different name] and have loved every single one of them. I won this one during her blog tour at Rita’s ‘From Pemberley to Milton’ website, with no expectations of a review. This was a clean story… and, I must say, that cover was the most awesome picture of what I would think Darcy would look like if his foundation had been shaken out from under him. Well done.
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1,331 reviews124 followers
August 28, 2021
Only your real friends will tell you when your face is dirty. ~Sicilian Proverb

By the proverb above, Fitzwilliam Darcy’s first real friend is … Lydia Bennet!

Lydia confronts Darcy during a break from the dancing at the Netherfield Ball. In typical Lydia fashion, she blurts out a few truths including who her sister Elizabeth likes and who she dislikes. Darcy begins to understand when Elizabeth drags Lydia away with an admonishment not to be caught alone with Darcy lest she be required to marry such an unpleasant man!

Cherish the friend who tells you a harsh truth, wanting ten times more to tell you a loving lie. ~Robert Brault

Later Darcy asks opinions from Bingley and Colonel Fitzwilliam who are willing to spell out Darcy’s flaws. Darcy begins to see how his inactions – with Wickham, Lady Catherine, and Caroline Bingley – contribute to his problems and are also unfair to the trio themselves.

Darcy and Georgiana make plans to travel but are unable to sail because of Georgiana’s health crisis. During her illness Georgiana is befriended by two loving, sensible women and begins her recovery from Ramsgate. Darcy is also influenced by these women and falls more in love than ever.

When Darcy learns another harsh truth from a friend during an overheard conversation he knows he must take action.

It's hard to fight an enemy who has outposts in your head. ~Sally Kempton, Esquire, 1970

Because Wickham knows Darcy so very well, he is always a step ahead as Darcy searches for him. Darcy must work with friends and stay ahead of enemies to bring Wickham to justice.

I have read all the P&P fan fiction from this author and she never disappoints me. I can recommend this to anyone who enjoys JAFF.

When there is no enemy within, the enemies outside cannot hurt you. ~African proverb
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2,911 reviews1 follower
April 16, 2020
This was just what I needed on a rainy Monday. This beautifully composed P&P what if sucks you in and sends you on a wild ride of self -discovery with Fitzwilliam Darcy. Beginning at the Netherfield Ball Darcy receives a set down of EPIC proportion from Lydia Bennet when they encounter one another on the balcony. When Lizzy interrupts them it begins to dawn upon Darcy how truly loathed he is in Meryton. He leaves, then determines that he must tell the truth of Wickham before he can truly be free of Meryton and returns with his cousin Richard. Quickly his plan goes pear shaped. Mr. Bennet is at his worst here, indolent, lazy and hasty. Upon returning to Metherfield again Darcy recieves an express confirming his darkest fears following his sister's attempted elopement and rushes to Pemberley and Georgiana.

He decides to leave England and head for the colonies [this was the only real problem I had with the story; the 'colonies' had been independent since before Darcy was born if he wanted to go to colonies they would be in the Caribbean.] He books passage on a boat owned by a Mr. Gardiner. Their trip never gets started when Georgiana falls ill at the docks and Lizzy Bennet and Mrs. Gardiner come to her aid.

Darcy quickly realizes that Lizzy & the Gardiners are true friends but he needs to reform himself to get Lizzy to fall in love with him. This is truly a story of self discovery as Darcy thinks and behaves how he was raised and then must stop, analyze and correct these thoughts, actions and behaviors over and over and over until he can win Lizzy's heart and respect.

While this story is extremely fast paced it isn't lacking in anything. It has a perfect villain in an utterly nonredeemable Wickham. This Wickham requires a bit of handling and New Darcy is just the man to do it.
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569 reviews11 followers
June 18, 2017
Dear Reader,

Sometimes Fate intervenes in the most unlikely manner and alters the course of your life and that of your loved ones.

The well made plans you laboured under are for nought,the lofty opinions once cherished are diluted and the future you envisioned crumbles before your eyes leaving you initially bereft and with little choice but to stand to the side,reappraise the situation at hand and resolve to do your very best with this new strange set of consequences presented to you.

Not waving,but drowning,you cling to the nearest person,one that you initially found objectionable but one which now represents a new foundation on which to build your dreams,a strong and reliable partner,a face in the crowd that will defer people's attentions from the other source of turmoil and disappointment you labour under.

But said person is not easily persuaded that you are her heart's desire,the fount of her future felicity,her shining knight ready willing and able to bestow on her untold riches and raise her to unparalleled heights in society's eyes.

Indeed,so humbled are you by the severe life lessons and self imposed personality examination forced upon you to please said lady,a lady worth pleasing,that you begin a journey that transforms you into a man with the same inherent human frailties,but one who is consciously aware of such and endeavours daily to be a better man,one who procrastinates no longer when faced with injustice,unkindness and denigration of others. A man who has evolved into the true Master of Pemberley,one whose sister,future mistress and tenants would be proud of.


I loved this intriguing and captivating story. Based on a different yet very plausible premise,one that I had neither read of or contemplated before,I found this beautifully scripted tale heartbreaking,and angst filled,yet deeply satisfying and thoroughly enjoyable.
Highly recommended!

I won this book on Anna's diaryofanccentric blog.
My sincere thanks to both Joy and Anna for such a wonderful prize!

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Author 22 books111 followers
June 15, 2017
Excellent outing...although there were some questions in my mind about the feasibility of Darcy and Gardiner journeying to New Orleans in late 1810 (October) about a year before Fulton built his first steamboat traveling from Pittsburgh to New Orleans through a lot of unpacified Wilderness.
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1,206 reviews58 followers
May 1, 2022
Never wrote a review when I read this the first time in 2020. The book is so good.

2021-Reread via Audiobook- Outstanding story. Excellent performance by Stevie Zimmerman as narrator.
881 reviews71 followers
June 8, 2017
The truth hurts...worst of all it comes from Lydia Bennet!

During the Netherfield Ball, Lydia escapes to the balcony hoping to meet someone, anyone other than Mr. Darcy. Since she had been imbibing, she has no compunction in letting Mr. Darcy know what Lizzy and most of Meryton think of him!

"You know, Mr. Darcy, you could be an attractive man if you did not constantly have the look about you of sucking a lemon."

To say that he is stunned is an understatement. From there, Darcy's pride takes a beating. Not only does Charles confirm what Lydia has said, but his best friend and cousin, Colonel Fitzwilliam does as well. To make matters worse, Mr. Wickham has endeared himself to the Bennets and Meryton. Darcy does try to warn Mr. Bennet, but he has no time for him or the Colonel and dismisses them. Then disaster strikes, and Darcy must rush to the side of his beloved sister, Georgiana. It is during this time that Elizabeth Bennet truly shines as a beacon of hope for Mr. Darcy.

There is so much to love in this Pride and Prejudice variation. I loved being inside the head of Darcy as he struggles to come to terms with the new insights of himself. I loved Elizabeth's portrayal as well. Though she was quick to judge Mr. Darcy and accept Wickham's story, I did find her compassionate side so much stronger. Her intelligence and wit had a hint of pragmatism. Your heart breaks for Georgiana in this story, but she too comes to face some hard truths and rises brilliantly to the occasion. However, I must say, Lydia may be a termagant, but she certainly was a rather endearing one! As for Wickham...let's just say he didn't like the 'new and improved' Mr. Darcy.
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411 reviews31 followers
February 14, 2024
I could not put this down! I was hooked from the beginning. The scene at the dock, Elizabeth's silent strength and compassion, Darcy's humbling throughout the book are so well done. I love this author and was not disappointed. There is plenty of wooing and angst between ODC that I was hooked till the end. Wickam is the villain extraordinaire but I love how Darcy deals with him. BRAVO!! I will definitely read this one again.
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2,126 reviews1 follower
July 22, 2017
This Pride and Prejudice variation centers around Mr Darcy. He learns what people think of him first from Lydia Bennet, then Bingley, and then his cousin. He must learn to listen and really care about others in order to win the love of his life. An incident with his sister and the evilness of Wickham force him to take a new approach in dealing with his problems. His absolute love of Elizabeth as his driver to make him a better man is very romantic without being over powering.
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997 reviews337 followers
March 23, 2019
What If Lydia Told Mr. Darcy Everyone Disliked Him?

Source: Gift from Author


TYPE OF AUSTENESQUE NOVEL: Pride and Prejudice Variation

TIME FRAME: Begins during the Netherfield Ball

SYNOPSIS: Darcy learns – from the most startling of sources – what Elizabeth Bennet and the rest of Meryton truly think of him and it makes him realize how needlessly insulting his behavior and manners have been. He learns also that it isn’t just the people of Meryton that view him this way – Charles Bingley and his dear cousin, Richard Fitzwilliam have also commented on his officious and selfish tendencies. While taking the first steps to improving Elizabeth’s opinion of him and at the same time protecting the people of Meryton, Darcy receives some urgent and distressing news that immediately calls him home and requires him to reconfigure his plans for the next few months. What happens soon after that when Darcy and Elizabeth unexpectedly cross paths again in London? Could there be any love developing between these two or is it just compassion and friendly concern?

WHAT I LOVED:

- LOL, Lydia: Arguably sometimes Lydia’s outspokenness can be a mortifying sign of her lack of proper manners and impudence, but in this story Lydia tells it like it is and shows that she is observant and wise…although still immature! I loved seeing Lydia confront Darcy and all of her moments of speaking her mind. And even though this interpretation of Lydia is “in essentials very much what she ever was” it was lovely to see some moments of understanding and realness underneath all that sass and silliness!

- Georgiana Storyline: I really appreciated the unexpected twist Ms. King gave to Georgiana’s storyline in this variation. It is something that could plausibly have happened and Mr. Darcy’s reaction and plans felt very much in accord to his character. There was a secondary twist that changed the course of this storyline again and part of me is interested to see how the first twist would have played out. But at the same time, I enjoyed the course this story took and loved witnessing the close relationship and devoted love Darcy has for his sister.

- Enemy Indeed!: Another interesting development in this story is that Wickham becomes an even more nefarious villain than usual. He isn’t out just for money or an easy living, he wants revenge and is prepared to go to great lengths to exact it! I enjoyed seeing this darker and more vicious side of Wickham, it feels very believable that someone so jealous and spiteful would resort to such sinister means when desperate.

- A New Discovery: Can you believe after all the many times I’ve read Pride and Prejudice and all the numerous Austenesque novels I’ve read that there is still something new for me to discover that can blow my mind?!? That happened while reading Friends and Enemies – Ms. King makes an ingenious comparison between two characters that I never before realized. It is amazing how this similarity has been there all this time without me noticing it! I love how this comparison, when pointed out to one character, serves as an impetus for change! Just brilliant!

WHAT I WASN’T TOO FOND OF:

- Openness and Boldness: Once in awhile there were some conversations and behaviors that felt a little too open and forward for this time period. It may just be me, but I often feel like conversations such as someone declaring their feelings or taking a family member to task, would – in Regency polite society – happen in a more private setting. I am perfectly willing to accept characters like Mrs. Bennet and Lydia acting too bold, but it feels a little incongruous for someone as reserved and fastidious as Mr. Darcy to do things like make a declaration of love in front of others and then backtrack later to analyze his feelings and determine if what he felt truly was love.

CONCLUSION:

Reading anything by J. Dawn King is always a wonderful pleasure! Her stories never fail to entertain and bring a smile to my face. I thoroughly enjoyed the inventive twists she implemented in Friends and Enemies and I am forever grateful for the delight and heartwarming joy her stories always bring!

Austenesque Reviews
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Author 23 books157 followers
December 10, 2020
Unputdownable!
Loved this captivating, thrilling, warm, thoughtful, romantic and sweet story. Rarely have I highlighted more brilliantly romantic sentences...

Kings approach to the sensitive subject of a miscarriage was done with respect and thought.

Darcy gets the set down of his life as he happens upon Lydia on a balcony at the Netherfield ball. He has to come to grips with his own fallibility as both Bingley and the colonel supports her claims.
Settled upon changing peoples opinion of him he races to Longbourn. Mr Bennet, however, is not a willing listener. He flaunts Wickhams request for a private meeting with Elizabeth in his face as Darcy tries to warn him about the scoundrel. A bereft Darcy retreats to Netherfield only to be called away immediately to an ailing sister.
When all hope seems lost, an angel saves the day for both him and his sister and he can no longer deny his growing feelings for Elizabeth.
The lady herself remains rather unimpressed...
Wickham is more sinister in this story than in Canon, he is however dealt with accordingly.
Loved that the villains get their comeuppance in this story, Caroline is also dealt with in a refreshing fashion. Darcy is faulty but resolute in his dealings to right his wrongs.
Bingley sort of grows a backbone as well, though maybe not turned in the direction it was most needed.
The twist to Lydia was creative and inventive. Not redeemed beyond recognition but with more depth than I have seen before.
The development of the relationship between ODC was absolutely lovely. Not a rushed or quick turn but built with tender love and care.

I absolutely loved this fabulous book and heartily recommend it!

Would have loved a longer epilogue though...
Can never get enough of seeing ODC happily-ever-after ;)

Reread: 9-10.12.20 Holds up very well as a reread.
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1,414 reviews
August 29, 2021
Surprise after surprise. A most excellent story that I know I will come back and read again. Belongs on my shelf of favorites.

I hope the author will write a comparable type story from Lizzy's point of view where her faults, her prides and her prejudices are spotlighted so well and in an equally fun, positive way.
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Author 1 book4 followers
April 16, 2018
An interesting version of Pride and Prejudice. Georgiana is not only guilty of eloping with Wickham, but becomes pregnant! Darcy in attempts to save her reputation plans a trip the Americas.

Events transpire, which leads them to stay, and with the assistance of Elizabeth, all ends well. Wickham, however, wants revenge and comes after them.

I enjoyed seeing how much Darcy cared for his sister in this version, and at what lengths he was going to save her. I also enjoyed that Elizabeth and Mrs. Gardiner played such an instrumental part in her recovery. I really though Lydia was portrayed in a different and intriguing light.

My only complaints is that most of the novel just focused on how many mistakes Darcy makes, and less really on any character development or growth in Elizabeth. The whole time she just believes she's right, and then at the very end she's like, oh I was wrong, you are a good person. The book really just focused on Darcy and his growth. I also wished Caroline had a bigger role.

But overall, a definite interesting and goodread!
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172 reviews16 followers
August 6, 2018
I loved this new way for Darcy to understand his shortcomings. I admired Elizabeth taking him to task so strongly about Wickham, who is as wicked here as it gets. The way to smoke out Wickham was brilliant, I enjoyed the way Darcy managed to swallow his pride and exposed his former friend's crimes. Georgiana's recovery was described very well, and she blossomed.
Highly recommended.
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607 reviews27 followers
June 10, 2017
Friends and Enemies: A Pride and Prejudice Variation

Another excellently written story by J Dawn King. Thank goodness Elizabeth and Darcy were the friend part of this title after the usual Meryton Assembly remark. The enemy part was everyone verses wicked Wickham. Hateful, hateful evil man. Damage to the Darcys was far worse than in other stories, but with the unexpected help from Elizabeth and Madeleine Gardiner, Georgiana recovers from her disastrous interaction with the rake. During Georgiana's recoup time at the Gardiner's home, she and Elizabeth grow in friendship. Surprisingly, so does the friendship of Elizabeth and Darcy. Given excellent advice by his cousin, Colonel Fitzwilliam, Darcy humbles himself before Elizabeth and becomes the gentleman she can respect and admire. Their interactions are frequent and before long Darcy grows on Elizabeth. They still have their misunderstandings, but we don't have any major Hunsford meltdown. When Wickham makes another play against Darcy, Darcy fights back making Wickham furious and prone to stupidity at its finest. I enjoyed how Lydia Bennet was portrayed in this story. Still silly, but was more attuned to her surroundings than her parents and Kitty.
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394 reviews1 follower
August 4, 2017
So I usually really like J. Dawn King's work, but this one felt really weird. Not one person in the whole book acted with any propriety. Colonel Fitzwilliam's betrothed is spoken of a lot, but we never actually really meet her or hear anything from her so I'm not sure what the point was. There is also a lot of contradiction. Elizabeth questions if she can marry a man who doesn't take responsibility but then later says to Darcy that she knew he always took responsibility for things. And am I supposed to like Lydia or not? I was mostly just confused throughout the whole thing. I don't mind a variance from canon, but nothing about this book felt like P&P, not even the characters. Based on the ratings it's received on Goodreads, however, it appears I'm in the minority, so don't take my word for it :)
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530 reviews34 followers
August 8, 2018
I enjoyed this book, but I feel like there was too much piled into too little space, which made decisions seem too quick and like we didn't linger on things that needed more attention. Darcy readily accepted his faults within about 2 seconds of them being shown to him, and the behavior repeated multiple times. I think I would have found it easier to swallow if it took longer, or if it wasn't quite the same each time.

But overall it was pretty good. Solid 3 stars.
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1,289 reviews77 followers
October 19, 2020
Enjoyable
Very good read that easily draws you into the story and has you keep turning the pages. I really liked this Darcy very much. ... and Lydia! You go girl! Wickham gets his just due, even if he gets his own way. JD King writes well.

October 18, 2020— Read along on Audible. Excellent narration.
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471 reviews12 followers
April 4, 2023
Great book

I loved it just my kind of book love your books. The plot was good and I love happy endings. Love it when the villains get their just desserts.
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168 reviews7 followers
June 12, 2017
So good

Of course, J Dawn King is one of those writers where you KNOW whatever new piece she has written will be really good. At some point while reading this, I forgot it was her book, and thought, 'wow this is such a good writer, I wonder if they have more?' (She does BTW, and you should read them)

This is such a different approach but in a easily acceptable way. While all of this is new, it is all very reasonable in regards to what could have happened, and honestly much more satisfying in a lot of ways than the original. Elizabeth takes Darcy to task in ways that make perfect sense for her character. Many take Mr Bennet to task in ways he really deserved. Wickham is a terrible as he probably would have really been. Lydia is not a wholly irredeemable character. Georgiana suffers real consequences.

I loved this. Excellent story!
46 reviews4 followers
June 10, 2017
I really enjoyed this book and it is an insightful journey as we experience Darcy's determination to work upon his character flaws and arrogant and disdainful behaviour after Lydia, Elizabeth, Bingley and Richard opened his eyes truly. His courtship and romance with Elizabeth was so sweet as he tried to follow what Elizabeth wished for which was to get to know each other better first. Georgiana also grew to be a mature and independent lady emulating her Sister-in-law and bravo to her for chasing away Caroline Bingley when she arrived at Darcy House uninvited during tea. Lydia showed a surprising turn of maturity during that particular tea party (for only a moment) and she can be funny when you least expect it. When I found out that Ms. King's latest book is out, I was excited to get started and I knew I will not be disappointed. You would not be as well.
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7,054 reviews67 followers
September 23, 2017
At the Netherfield Ball when Mr. Fitzwilliam Darcy is confronted by Lydia Bennet of her opinion of him, of Meryton's opinion and more importantly Elizabeth's, plus receiving bad news from Pemberley, he leaves Meryton for town. Where his life is changed by the actions of the people he cares for and his enemies.
A really well-written good read which should really be a 3.5 rating.
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474 reviews
January 27, 2019
Wonderful story. You will love Lydia and really dislike Mr Bennet. Darcy is made to reflect on his life by the most unlikely person and is taken on a journey to self reflection while trying to help his sister and repair his relationship with Miss Elizabeth Bennet.

Well worth reading
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139 reviews3 followers
July 25, 2025
King is an excellent writer, and can certainly engage you with a page-turning plot. This is not one of my favorites among her books. The focus is on Darcy's viewpoint, and frankly, he's just so besotted with Elizabeth it turns him into a one-dimensional character. Lydia, however, is great.
25 reviews
June 10, 2017
Wish a 6 star rating was possible.

Or a 10 star. Finally a story that does not hide behind polite manners and indirect speech. The characters think, speak and act in a common sense manner. Worth reading for the character of Lydia is you can believe it.
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188 reviews17 followers
April 2, 2024
Dramatic and cute. Lidia is the MVP.
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