After p. 100
Hawthorne is an enigma - for Mellow it seems, and certainly for me. He, Hawthorne, that is, was altogether disinclined to offer personal disclosures of any kind to most anyone, it seems, and equally reluctant to commit them to paper - quite unlike the effusive and ever loquacious Margret Fuller (whom he could just barely abide, by the way). So we have to make due with the bits and pieces that Mellow has scratched together - until we take up another biography, that is.
But I, being me, have to take what's given, fill in the blanks - with suppositions consistent with the information at hand, I hope, and make sense of the entire assemblage of this, that and the other. So the following is what I've come up with for today, at this moment (I feel perfectly free to rearrange my thoughts when my construct doesn't seem to hold any longer).
Hawthorne was born with preternaturally acute powers of observation. He saw every last little detail of persons and places that interested him, and he was also possessed of a hugely capacious and retentive memory. With respect to people, he seems also to have had an extraordinary, innate capacity for empathy. He appears to have been able to read and interpret expression, gesture, posture, tone of voice, minds, as it were, to feel with others, even to project himself into their bodies and minds and to experience what they experienced as they experienced. In addition, he able to connect stimulus and response, to create "models" of persons/personalities as they lived their lives in their times and places. He may not have understood precisely why a certain stimulus produced one response or another as they did, but given the one he could predict the other accurately more often than not. And he remembered it all. Note that I have avoided the use of "sensitive" - and deliberately so.
So what does a person born in 1804 do when those powers, capacities and "gifts" dominate consciousness and they are compelled to observe and to imagine, unable to channel those mental energies into other activities? For one thing, a person of that time and place, so afflicted, could produce narrative - provided, of course, that external circumstances enabled them to acquire the education, time, money, etc., etc. to devote themselves to writing - rather than to the grind of keeping body and soul together.
Which is another point that Mellow seems not to have investigated successfully - through no lack of trying I suspect. But how was it at all possible for Hawthorne to occupy a room in his mother's house for ten years in uninterrupted seclusion while learning to write? Mellow tells us that his father, a ship's captain, died of yellow fever in some distant port, leaving his widow and children nearly nothing. We know that Hawthorne's mother was a member of a very enterprising and affluent family of merchants, tradesmen, etc., etc. And we know that Hawthorne was raised by no one in particular, but rather by a collection of aunts, uncles, cousins, grandparents, who appear to have spared no expense in raising him. But after they saw him through four years of college, then what? Did they continue to support him for another ten years? Not one word on that subject. Perhaps there's no evidence to adduce, but Mellow might have said as much.
We do know that during that decade Hawthorne produced a steady stream of writing, most of it published anonymously by publishers who neglected to pay him for the pages they printed, and when they did, a pittance that arrived late.
So how did he manage? Mellow doesn't say. Perhaps Miller or Wineapple will.
After p 200
Mellow has elaborated a bit upon the attributes of Hawthorne's personality.
He was a supremely curious individual. Mellow sense of the journals that Hawthorne kept as a young man [T]hey are the record of an observer keenly intent on capturing the human types he met." (p. 148)
Mellow seems to agree with Elizabeth Palmer Peabody's sense of the man (p. 116). She "sensed in the imaginative writer something awe-inspiring - that 'double-action' of Hawthorne's mind, which had the capacity to balance 'the appearance of the moment in the light of the great whole,' the writer's animating principle: a need to fix the moment permanently in all its hard factuality." Meaning, I think, that Hawthorne had to depict persons, places and events in sufficient detail to enable his readers to see and to experience with his characters, and yet to perceive and present the 'eternally human' in them, to extract the principles of "human nature" and experience or at least to delineate types and categories among the persons who eventually became characters or attributes of amalgams of persons whom he encountered. And he seems not to have liked what he discovered very much.
There was also his nearly impenetrable reserve and unalterable reticence. He wrote to his intended, Sophia Peabody, Elizabeth's youngest sister: "I was invited to dine at Mr. [George] Bancroft's yesterday with Miss Margaret Fuller, but Providence had given me some business to do; for which I was very thankful." And again. "Your husband has received an invitation, through Mr. Collector Bancroft, to go to Dr. Channing's tonight. What is to be done? Anything, rather than to go." (p. 170) Etc., etc. Instead, he married Sophia, with whom he retreated as far as humanly practicable from further encounters and engagements - except from the proximity he required for his observations of certain, selected specimens of Homo Sapiens.
So who is it exactly we're dealing with? Well, someone rather tediously self-conscious, hesitant - and boring, I'd say, like someone you'd first meet at a small dinner party, perhaps, who is not exactly rude, but clearly communicates through indirection his desire to be elsewhere, who makes no effort whatever to help make the gathering a pleasant experience for anyone, who makes one wonder why he appeared at all, and who seems intent on assuring that no one, but no one, will want anything further to do with him. Or I should say, Mellow's Hawthorne is rather tedious - and boring. Perhaps Miller and Wineapple have made something altogether different of Mr. Hawthorne.
Mellow's Hawthorne isn't so mysterious as his reputation suggests - after all. He's no Poe or Fuller, for certain. No enigma at all. So now I'm wondering: why did Mellow bother? Why did Miller and Wineapple bother? 'Tis a puzzlement. I certainly hope there's an answer in the next 400 pages (of Mellow's beautiful, marvelous prose.), but I will say that I'm more than a little impatient.
At End.
I suppose it would be easy to catalog Hawthorne's peculiarities. So I won't - well - except for just this little one. p. 379. Hawthorne seems to have had a distinct aversion to physical contact. "He hates to be touched more than anyone I ever knew." This from Sophia Peabody Hawthorne, the woman for whom he felt every particle of passion of which he was capable, which at times was entirely overwhelming for him. Odd.
I think it only fair to distinguish biographical narrative from the subject of the narrative. I don't understand why Mellow chose Hawthorne as a subject, but I must say that the only reason I finished this book is that Mellow writes among the clearest, most precise and evocative English prose I've ever read. His research must be exhaustive and definitive. The forward progress of his story is well paced. He introduces relevant detail in easily assimilable packets, as it were, and interlards summary, analysis, conclusions in just the right amounts and in the right points in his chapters so that he has given us something of a page turner - well, given those addicted to biography, perhaps, something of a page turner. So I am giving his book a five-star rating - not because the subject interests me, because it doesn't - at all, but because he has given us a masterful example of biographical narrative.
But this discussion raises two questions in my mind. (1) How is it possible that I find Hawthorne so peculiar and unattractive, and yet respond to Thoreau as warmly as I do - after six or seven biographies? Maybe that's the reason. (2) Are Miller's and Wineapple's Hawthornes any less peculiar and unattractive? They would have to be. We'll see. But if they are, and convincingly so, then I'll have to skim Mellow again to figure out how that could be the case. I really hope I don't have to. Really.