Fourteen original stories set in Mercedes Lackey's Valdemar universe, including a new novella by Mercedes Lackey! Today's hottest fantasy authors visit Mercedes Lackey's bestselling world of Valdemar, adding their own special touches to the ancient land where Heralds chosen from all walks of life by magical horse-like Companions patrol their ancient kingdom, dispensing justice, facing adversaries, and protecting their monarch from whatever threatens. Travel with Tanya Huff, Mickey Zucker Reichert, Fiona Patton, Judith Tarr, Rosemary Edghill, and others in this exciting, all-new anthology.
Included are: Moving Targets by Mercedes Lackey and Larry Dixon An Unexpected Guest by Nancy Asire The Power of Three by Brenda Cooper What Fire Is by Janni Lee Simner Dreams of Mountain Clover by Mickey Zucker Reichert The Cheat by Richard Lee Byers A Dream Deferred by Kristin Schwengel The Sworddancer by Michael Z. Williamson Broken Bones by Stephanie Shaver Live On by Tanya Huff Passage at Arms by Rosemary Edghill Heart, Home and Hearth by Sarah Hoyt and Kate Paulk Haven’s Own by Fiona Patton Widdershins by Judith Tarr
Mercedes entered this world on June 24, 1950, in Chicago, had a normal childhood and graduated from Purdue University in 1972. During the late 70's she worked as an artist's model and then went into the computer programming field, ending up with American Airlines in Tulsa, Oklahoma. In addition to her fantasy writing, she has written lyrics for and recorded nearly fifty songs for Firebird Arts & Music, a small recording company specializing in science fiction folk music.
"I'm a storyteller; that's what I see as 'my job'. My stories come out of my characters; how those characters would react to the given situation. Maybe that's why I get letters from readers as young as thirteen and as old as sixty-odd. One of the reasons I write song lyrics is because I see songs as a kind of 'story pill' -- they reduce a story to the barest essentials or encapsulate a particular crucial moment in time. I frequently will write a lyric when I am attempting to get to the heart of a crucial scene; I find that when I have done so, the scene has become absolutely clear in my mind, and I can write exactly what I wanted to say. Another reason is because of the kind of novels I am writing: that is, fantasy, set in an other-world semi-medieval atmosphere. Music is very important to medieval peoples; bards are the chief newsbringers. When I write the 'folk music' of these peoples, I am enriching my whole world, whether I actually use the song in the text or not.
"I began writing out of boredom; I continue out of addiction. I can't 'not' write, and as a result I have no social life! I began writing fantasy because I love it, but I try to construct my fantasy worlds with all the care of a 'high-tech' science fiction writer. I apply the principle of TANSTAAFL ['There ain't no such thing as free lunch', credited to Robert Heinlein) to magic, for instance; in my worlds, magic is paid for, and the cost to the magician is frequently a high one. I try to keep my world as solid and real as possible; people deal with stubborn pumps, bugs in the porridge, and love-lives that refuse to become untangled, right along with invading armies and evil magicians. And I try to make all of my characters, even the 'evil magicians,' something more than flat stereotypes. Even evil magicians get up in the night and look for cookies, sometimes.
"I suppose that in everything I write I try to expound the creed I gave my character Diana Tregarde in Burning Water:
"There's no such thing as 'one, true way'; the only answers worth having are the ones you find for yourself; leave the world better than you found it. Love, freedom, and the chance to do some good -- they're the things worth living and dying for, and if you aren't willing to die for the things worth living for, you might as well turn in your membership in the human race."
I cannot believe it!! M.L.'s contribution to this collection of short stories is a spoof! I laughed so hard when it hit me, and I couldn't explain it to anyone because they wouldn't have understood why it was so unexpected.
The fourth anthology in the Tales of Valdemar short stories includes 14 stories and revolves around Mercedes Lackey's fantasy world of Valdemar.
Short Series within the Valdemar Anthologies: "Heart, Home, and Hearth" (Heart, a.k.a., Ree & Jem) "Haven's Own" (Dann Family of Haven) "Broken Bones" (Wil & Leila) "The Power of Three" (Rhi and Dionne) "Live On" (Herald Jors)
The Stories Mercedes Lackey and Larry Dixon’s "Moving Targets" is cute, and I have to admit my judgment is partly influenced by the elaborately painted gypsy caravan. I want to re-organize it and try it out for myself as this trainee group heads out on a year-long circuit. I also adore Rod's inventiveness. Once we get into the story itself, we finally get to the purpose behind the story.
It's certainly a useful shakedown trip. In more ways than one, lol.
Nancy Asire’s "An Unexpected Guest" falls into Sweetwater and is approved by a Fire-cat. In spite of it being a scary day in the village as the "guest" is hunted by assassins, it's actually quite sweet.
Brenda Cooper’s "The Power of Three" is an interesting experiment, and fortunately, the Collegium is willing to be flexible. A cute story of the connectedness of twins.
Janni Lee Simner’s "What Fire Is" is a sad story that will make you cry and anger you with its religious ignorance.
Mickey Zuker Reichert’s "Dreams of Mountain Clover" is sweetly terrifying if a bit juvenile. A frightened servant hopes to save her mistress and heads out on a very adventurous quest.
Richard Lee Byers’ "The Cheat" could be set anywhere and is between two fencing masters, one of whom is cheating. It's an ingenious answer to the problem.
Kristin Schwengel’s "A Dream Deferred" is a confusion. I have no idea how the title relates to the story. That whine mentioned, I did like the story. It's a tale of an unlikely rescue and an unlikelier partnership.
Michael Z. Williamson’s "The Sworddancer" seems to be Riga's first exposure to guiding a party of refugees as well as to battle. It's a brief glimpse with her romantic notions of war turned on its head. Curious, but not a favorite as there was too little information as to the whys.
Stephanie Shaver’s "Broken Bones" finds us reading of Bard Leila (Shaver has her own miniseries going with Leila) and the advice she gets on writing a song and soothing her unrequited love. Good thing Shaver told me the lesson I was supposed to learn, as I don't think I'd've gotten it.
Tanya Huff’s "Live On" is a querulous trip with an old historian repeating the same stories over and over and complaining about cold, impersonal reports. But Tanis is a herald first, last, and always when he and his Companion, Verati, give their all to rescue a kidnapped girl.
Shaver could do with seeing how an experienced writer gets the point across without having to be so obvious.
Rosemary Edghill’s "Passage at Arms" follows two stories. One is of a new, young, and insecure Trainee and the other is at the other end of the age spectrum in an old servant who loves to serve the Collegium. I do like his philosophy about the students and his evenhanded approach to the anonymity. And he has a lovely story that will help young Aellele.
Gotta wonder if Edghill ever read any of Lackey's Valdemar stories about the Companions. She's got Companions coming back to Haven to seek rest and healing without their riders.
Sarah Hoyt and Kate Paulk’s "Heart, Home, and Hearth" is all about Jem and Ree's finding the farm with an injured Garrard. Hoyt/Paulk milk this a bit much emotionally, but I enjoyed it.
I've been working my way backward through the anthologies and by the second one (that I read) I realized that Jem and Ree were a recurring short, so it was a treat to finally read this one. I'm still working my way back, and I'm curious if I'll ever find the Ree and Jem story that is the first one.
Fiona Patton’s "Haven's Own" is a Hektor Dann story (yep, another recurring short) that sees Hektor receiving his sergeancy and demonstrating his street smarts. I do like this short series. It's very homey with great characters.
Judith Tarr’s "Widdershins" find Heralds Egil and Bronwen riding for days and never making any progress through the awful storms that besiege them. It's innocuous and safe and a dance that Egil and Cynara love. It would be too easy to fall into the complacency and beauty of this dance.
A cute story with a clever twist. It's rare to get a story about an average man, be he ever so much a Herald.
The Cover and Title The cover is consistent and yet different from other Valdemar covers. It has the inset shield bordered in a riveted gold with a Companion's head emerging from within, a woods in the background. The end point of the shield is covered by another shield of a red gryphon on a black background. The shield itself is backed by a rectangle of weathered leather which is all backed by the black of the cover's background. A bordered rectangle of deep red provides a background for the title in white, and it looks like bats flying between the title and the shield. Superimposed on all this between the shield and title is yet another shield in a bright orange (or a pale red?) with a quick blurb about the contents of Moving Targets and Other Tales of Valdemar.
The title is a metaphor for each story's protagonists. It's really a bit of a leap on my part. All stories have a character who is that story's center, a Moving Target for the conflicts that arise within each one.
I had to buy the book again in 2018. I think it got lost in Hurricane Sandy. =0/
Read the book for the 2nd time. Most of the stories were ok but nothing amazing. That is why I give this antho a 3 star rating.
1.Mercedes Lackey and Larry Dixon’s "Moving Targets"-4 stars it was good.I liked the characters a lot. Loved the Pelagirs kyree story aspect. Would love to read more!=0)
3.Brenda Cooper’s "The Power of Three"-4 stars it was good. Beautiful story. I would like more adventures from the sisters.
5.Mickey Zuker Reichert’s "Dreams of Mountain Clover"-4 stars it was good.
9.Stephanie Shaver’s "Broken Bones"-4 stars it was good.
10.Tanya Huff’s "Live On"-4 stars it was good.I cried. Sad end but fitting.
13.Fiona Patton’s "Haven's Own"-4 stars it was good. Love the stories about this family. =0)
14.Judith Tarr’s "Widdershins"-4 stars it was fascinating. Would like more stories about these two characters. =0p
Thanks Kathy Davie for the following info. Short Series within the Valdemar Anthologies: "Heart, Home, and Hearth" (Ree & Jem) "Haven's Own" (Dann Family of Haven) "Broken Bones" (Wil & Leila) "The Power of Three" (Rhi and Dionne) "Live On" (Herald Jors)
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1.Mercedes Lackey and Larry Dixon’s "Moving Targets"; Herald Elyn & Mayar(her Companion) Trainee Laurel(empathy gift,Chosen) Trainee Alma(ex-artificer in training,Chosen) Trainee Arville (gift luck,Chosen) & Pelas(his Companion) and Ryu(kyree,Pelagirs,Chosen of Arville) Trainee Rod(son of guildmaster) Guildmaster Fredrich(Goldsmith,dad,rich)
2.Nancy Asire’s "An Unexpected Guest"-Set in Karse. Their story continues in another antho. It was an ok story. Sosha(farmer,widow) Torgon(ex-retainer to Lord Jhasko merchant,guard) Beckor(village healer and Priest),
3.Brenda Cooper’s "The Power of Three"- Rhiannon(Bard, twin sis) Dionne(Healer,twin sis) Mari(journeyman healer, empathy gift) Deckert(Border Herald, Deck) & Kadey(his Companion) Cienda(Herald) & Tani(her Companion) Bard Breda Gavin(Master healer) Bard Lleryn Bard Stefan
4.Janni Lee Simner’s "What Fire Is"-Karse. Sad and confusing story,ok. The idea behind it is good. I understand why it ended the way it did but I did not want that end. Sigh. Tamar(farmer's son,9yo,gift fire,pal,died/suicide) Cara(9yo,gift farsight,merchant's daughter,pal,died/killed) Andaran(Priest)
6.Richard Lee Byers’ "The Cheat"-ok. Master Selden(fencing master,pal) Dromis(fencing master) Marissa(fencing master,pal) Falnac(fencing student died) Alsagad(fencing student)
7.Kristin Schwengel’s "A Dream Deferred"-Pelagris,ok. Liked it was about kyree and Tarma was mentioned. Would like more to this story like Rris adventures.=0p Laeka(horse trainer,mom,Clan Liha'irden) Rheena(kyree mom,Hyrrrull Pack) Jeatha(her daughter) Meros(guard) Warrl(kyree,cousin,famous) Rris (kyree pup) (Tarma shena Tale'sedrin)
8.Michael Z. Williamson’s "The Sworddancer"-ok Riga Gundesdati(sis,Sworddancer,merchant's daughter,Kossaki,pal) Erki Gundesdati(bro) Herald Bellan Swordmistress Morle Karlinu the Quick(Kari,Scout Spear,pal) Ruti Snorru Arwen Lar(uncle) Rabal(nephew) Brandur
9.Stephanie Shaver’s "Broken Bones"- Lelia(Bard,twin sis,pal,in love with herald Wil) Maresa(Bard, pal) Lyle(twin bro,Herald) Herald Wil(mentor to Lyle) Kerithwyn(healer) Artel(village healer) Olli(inn keeper)
This series of collections has falling into a steady rhythm - familiar contributors, mostly familiar stories. It's good, solid Valdemar stuff, and Heralds are particularly well-suited to episodic stories.
The title story by Lackey is worth a note - it is, of all things, a Scooby-Doo pastiche. It's dreadfully irreverent, and kind of note-perfect. I thought it was moderately hilarious, although I would not like it to represent a trend.
4/2/09: I've read 9 of the short stories thus far ... and only 3 of them are mildly appealing. So far, this book is a huge disappointment. It definitely did not help that the lead story (NOT a novella, IMHO) is essentially a Scooby Doo episode, complete with Scooby, Shaggy, Fred, Velma, and Daphne, their van, AND a "I'd've gotten away with it, too, if it hadn't been for those meddling kids" line! Ick!
4/4/09: I finished the book this afternoon & have to say there was exactly ONE story (Tanya Huff's) in it that I found enjoyable & entertaining. The others were dull and lifeless. PLUS, although the book is supposedly "Tales of Valdemar," less than half of the tales actually took place in Valedmar. If I wanted stories from Iftel, Karse, or Rethwellan, I'd look for those volumes, thanks very much!
This was a very pleasant collection of stories about the world of Valdemar. My favorite was "An Unexpected Guest," which turned out to be a prequel to a story in another collection of stories, "The Cat Who Came to Dinner" from The Sun in Glory. The Companions, as usual, are wonderful!
Read from 12/8 to 12/10. Lackluster collection with a few good tales. Lackey should be horsewhipped for the Valdemar version of Scooby Doo. No, I'm not kidding.
My review is broken into pieces following each individual story in the order I read them in. I read 5 stories from this anthology.
“The Power of Three” by Brenda Cooper: Here we meet Rhiannon and Dionne, twins with different callings but a ridiculously strong bond between them. The story itself was alright, introduced the girls well and showed off some of their power. I’m vaguely more interested in the mage they rescued, but he’s not really the focus here.
“Moving Targets” by Mercedes Lackey and Larry Dixon: Took me a stupidly long time to figure out that this one’s “Scooby Doo.” Like, 20-ish pages. Much shrugging, otherwise.
“A Dream Deferred” by Kristin M. Schwengel: Cute little rescue the kyree story. I enjoyed it.
“Broken Bones” by Stephanie D. Shaver: So, this is the second kind of miniseries where the spelling of characters’ names is off between “installments.” Just thought I’s note it. Interesting little story.
“Heart, Home, and Hearth” by Sarah A. Hoyt and Kate Paulk: Actually a fairly basic found-family story. It was alright.
I greatly enjoyed catching up with a number of old friends from previous anthologies. Most notably Jen and Ree, who have left the city to try to make a go of it in the possibly even more dangerous environs of the forests. The Dann family is fleshed out further with the history of their father's demise, and why the oldest brother got passed over for the promotion by the younger. Even the mercenary Toughs employed by Miklamar make an appearance. There are many more interesting, well written stories than almost any other collection I've read of it's size. That's a big win for Valdemar fans, like me..now buying and re-reading them on my Kindle, and donating my paperback editions. 'Tis the season!
It took me a bit longer to get through this collection than the last, primarily because I wasn't able to read as much during lunch at work as I had been for the last couple. I found this book to be a little more on the average side in terms of story quality, with only one in the book really standing out as really good. But even with that being the case, I really enjoyed the little glimpses of Valdemar and the areas around it, and it's nice to see more than just the Heralds and Companions; obviously they're my favorite bits, but there's so much to the world that Lackey's built than them and it's nice that these stories are a chance for those other people to shine.
I am listening my way through the beginning of Valdemar, in Beyond, and Into The West. That series has its own magic and grace in the voice of its bard, Ms Lackey.
But, these stories have a power and richness, derived from her world, yet building and stretching that world, that breathes in our imaginations. And...there are lots more of them!
So this started out with a fantasy version of a bad episode of Scooby Doo right down to the "and I would have gotten away with it too... if it weren't for you pesky [Heralds]". Seriously, how unoriginal can you get? That was the first of many stories that were mediocre at best. There were a few stories sprinkled in here that weren't awful, but they were few and far between. I definitely would not recommend this book to anyone. Mindless doesn't even begin to cover it.
I like the books Mercedes Lackey writes, she is good at creating a believable world and people to populate it. While her writing is not the strongest I do find it engaging ang and enjoyable. I like a series I can live inside of and her books are ones that have characters I feel invested in and a world I believe could exist.
My first Valdemar anthology, and an enjoyable read, though I think there are others published before this one, so I'll have to try and discover the proper reading order for them all - that's just the way my mind works, and what makes me comfortable 🙂
All-in-all, a good book, and some different outlooks to my favourite place ☺
Some stories were just great, absolutely loved them. And then there were those that barely even fit into the Valdemar universe. They wouldn't have at all in fact if the didnt have one word or one named location. And those kinda sucked. Over all a good read.
3.5 More tales of Valdemar and back to a mix with a few really good stories, some good and some average. But this is working to keep me in the world until I can get back to the novels either later in the month or next month.
I used to be such a huge fantasy fan, devouring almost every book I could get my hands on. Over the years though, that passion for the genre has died down a bit, but I still have a handful of authors that I will read every chance I get. Mercedes Lackey is one of them, and her Valdemar books are my favorite of all. As usual, I love every time I get to escape into Valdemar and get immersed in the stories of the Heralds and their Companions. Valdemar is that fictional kingdom, that if it actually existed, I would have ran away from home to go live there.
Because of that, when I got this one for Christmas, I couldn't wait to dive in and get lost once again. Now this collection actually is before the other two anthologies that I have already reviewed. I'm not sure how I managed to miss this one, but I'm glad that has been corrected as of now.
The biggest reason I loved this one was I got to see Ree and Jem again. The stars of my favorite short stories from the last two anthologies I read, Ree and Jem already feel like old friends to me. Instead of writing their own stories, as they did in the other two books, Sarah A. Hoyt and Kate Paulk wrote "Heart, Home, and Hearth" together. I got to meet Ree and Jem before they make it to the old man's house and the relative safety he provided for them. It was nice to see the two young men (one completely human, the other a changechild) again. They are such a terrific couple, who always look out for each other in a world that is dead set against them, a world that would be willing to kill one of them. This story is about how Ree has to find shelter for the sickly Jem before the bitterness of winter really kicks in. It's that journey that sends them stumbling into what they think is a abandoned farm house. But instead of it being vacated by those who previously lived there, the two young me find the family and support that they are so desperately needing.
I've just now realized that I haven't read the anthology that comes before this one either, I'm hoping that one will tell me how these two young men met in the first place.
I don't think there was a story in this collection that I didn't love or feel as if it added to the history of Valdemar and it's people, but there was one other that just had me falling in love and hooting with laughter. The title story "Moving Targets" is Mercedes Lackey's contribution. I found the story to be a wonderful homage to Scooby-Doo, what is there not to like about that. In the story a Herald Elyn is assigned the task of taking a group of four Herald Trainees out on their first circuit, as circuit that if successful will make all four full Heralds. These four students though, while talented and uniquely gifted, are a tight knit group that just can't seem to stay out of trouble. Because of the size of their group, they travel with a covered wagon. In the fist hint of Scooby-Doo, the wagon is painted in the same colors as the Mystery Machine. That paint is quickly covered up, but it's a great hint for what's to come.
Once out on the road they are caught up in what looks like a haunting designed to get people to flee their village. It's through some careful investigation, trap setting, and mishaps that the foursome discover the truth. The whole thing was set up by an old coot who needed people to leave so he could mine gold out of the stream. When he's caught, he even whines about how he almost got away with it, it if just wasn't for those darn kids. The story was hilarious, and for a kid who grew up with Scooby-Doo, it was wonderful.
Fourteen stories set in Mercedes Lackey's world, which includes Valdemar. 1. Moving Targets is Lackey's fairly cheesy tribute to Scooby Doo--would have worked better with a longer story. 2. Unexpected Guests--A stranger coming to a rural town needs to be protected from assassins tailing him. This wasn't bad, but I didn't love it. 3. Power of Three--Twins with a lifelong, somewhat mystic bond are forced to spend time apart, and it doesn't go well. Not really sure what the point was, here. 4. What Fire Is--In Karse, children with magical gifts are removed from their parents and many are burned at the stake. But what happens if their gift is fire? A sad story, and I'm not sure I understood the end. 5. Dreams of Mountain Clover--The servant to a dying Herald dreams that clover from a particular mountain will cure the Herald, and goes off to find it, having adventures along the way. Fairly typical story, didn't do much for me. 6. The Cheat--An armsmaster in Rethwellan keeps losing students to duels with another master, and is convinced the other armsmaster is cheating. I liked this one--creative solution. 7. Dream Deferred--A female horsemaster near the Pelagiris Forest helps a kyree whose pups have been stolen to be sold. This one didn't have a lot of plot--not sure what the point of it was. 8. Sword Dancer--A girl from a merchant clan in a land on the edge of war must serve as a guide to refugees to help them through the land, even though their leader doesn't want to follow a girl. Interesting culture, but very little plot. 9. Broken Bones--While trying to fall out of love, a bard ventures into the far reaches of Valdemar and stays in a village where one young woman seems a bit odd, and she investigates. This one wasn't bad, but a little gruesome. 10. Live On--Herald Jors accompanies the elderly and crotchety Herald Tamis on an 'easy' road trip, and discovers that you can never discount a Herald, no matter what his age. I liked this one--there aren't enough stories about elderly Heralds, mostly because they don't live that long. 11. Passage At Arms--A Herald trainee worries endlessly because she thinks she's not a good enough person to be a Herald. There wasn't much plot to this--it's all character, and not that interesting, alas. 12. Heart, Home, and Hearth--The second (?) installment in the tale of hobgoblin Ree and his lover Jem in the Eastern Empire. Starving and sick, they find a farm with an injured old man, and help out in return for food, shelter, and a possible future. This was my favorite story--the whole saga should be compiled at some point. 13. Haven's Own--Another tale of the Haven constabulary, represented by the Dann family. There was a fire on Iron Street, and blame is being thrown around. Didn't love this one--it's nice to see a different side of Haven than just Heralds, but still, not too exciting. 14. Widdershins--Stay-at-home Herald Egil is sent with one of his least-favorite former students to investigate a strangeness in a small town, and discovers something far more out of whack than he anticipates--and that only he can fix. I liked this one; unusual magic and a novel idea.
Overall, this was my least favorite of the collections I've read. I like the collections because when you already know the world, they're very undemanding to read. I also like them because they are not always about quests and swordfights and magical battles, but can also be about relationships, characters, and interesting settings. This one was just not as interesting as the others, unfortunately, though there were some good stories.
As with the others in this series of anthologies, the short stories in this collection are set within the Valdemar world. While there is a story by Mercedes Lackey, the rest are by other authors, many of who are seen in several of the other anthologies. The stories are short and episodic, but still have that familiar feel with the characters and places found within the main series’ books. New characters and old, these stories are a fun addition to the world!
I'm not usually one for compliations, but this being a Valdemar book, I couldn't resist another foray into my favourite fantasy world. Some contributing authors I'd heard of before, others were completely new to me. And I enjoyed most of the stories inside.
What disappointed me the most, however, was Mercedes Lackey's own contribution to the book. Yes, it was as well-written, stylistically, as anything else I've read of hers in recent years. But it seemed so very out of place for Valdemar, comic relief where relief was not needed. I'd say it was a thinly-veiled homage to Scooby Doo, but there was no veil there at all, thin or otherwise. It was glaringly obvious, and quite unrealistic even when put into the bounds of a fantasy world. Ryu's presence was utterly pointless, the Heralds more annoying than helpful, and the whole point of the story was baffling.
That being said, I can understand the urge to want to have a little fun with the world you've created. It is, after all, your world, and if you want to throw in homages to old cartoon shows, it's your own right to do so. But in this instance, I found all the other stories in the book more enjoyable than the one written by the world's creator, and that, to me, isn't exactly a good thing.
Still, in spite of that, it's a book I considered well worth the money I spent on it, since I am such a fan of Valdemar and the world of Velgarth. If, out of all the books and stories she's written in that world, only one short story evokes this reaction in me, then I'd still have to say she's doing something right, and I eagerly await the next novel she writes.
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.