*SPOILERS*
When I first started this book, I wasn't that excited to read it. I had had this book since I ordered it from a Scholastic book order when I was in first grade and had been putting off reading it ever since.
This book is about a young girl named Hannah, who is living in 1775 Massachusetts. Hannah is horrified when she discovers once she recovered from the pox that her Aunt Pheobe had sold her beloved horse, Promise. However, one day she sees a boy riding a horse that looks exactly like Promise. Hannah stops the kid, and she learns that the horse is Promise and the boy, Will, is the new owner. The two instantly become best friends. When she is indentured for seven years to General Gage by her Loyalist aunt, she begrudgingly goes to live in Boston to serve his family at the Province House and leaves Will and Promise behind in Salem. There, she works under the strict Ms. Lydia and befriends another servant named Catherine. Hannah is given to Meg, the daughter of a friend of the Gages. She becomes her chambermaid and eventually her best friend she will ever have. Hannah also becomes friends with Caleb, the stable hand. At this time, there is a lot of tension between the Tories and Whigs (Loyalists and Rebels). After all, 1775 is the year before the American Revolution started. One night, Caleb and Hannah (dressed as a boy, a.k.a Cousin Hans) sneak out of the Province House to go to a gathering of the Sons of Liberty (the rebels). Cousin Hans eventually meets Paul Revere and other prominent members of the Sons of Liberty. Also, she does meet Will in Boston again and discovers that Promise is in Boston as well. As a servant, Hannah hears many things such as the General's plans and gossip. She takes this news to Paul Revere so that he can beat out the British by being ready for their ideas. Also, when she goes out at night, she often rides Promise around the town. Hannah plays some tricks on the British several times, which makes her wanted. Her trickery awarded her the nickname Midnight Rider; although, it becomes more and more dangerous to be the Midnight Rider and she eventually stops. Not to mention, there is a traitor in the midst of the Sons of Liberty. However, no one knows who it is. One day, Hannah hears an especially important piece of information that she knows she immediately needs to tell Paul Revere (some British troops were planning to take the people of Salem's arms from them like they did to the other cities). She tells Mr. Revere that the attack would happen on Sunday, however, Dr. Warren said it was on Saturday. He rides off to warn the Salemites but it was a trap, and he got arrested. Hannah knew what she had to do. She took Promise and traveled to Salem in a snow storm. On the way, Promise gets hurt because he slipped on the ice. When she arrived in Salem, she stormed into a church service and warned all of the citizens the British were going to take their arms. Hannah had to reveal her true identity for the Salemites to believe her. The people secured their weapons safely away before the British came. There was almost a battle when the British came, but both parties agreed to a compromise. When Hannah returned to Boston, General Gage accused Will of being the Midnight Rider. Hannah saved Will by admitting to the general that she was the Midnight Rider. General Gage didn't believe her until she tamed and mounted Gabriel, a horse that only the general had been able to ride. Although Hannah and Will could have been killed, General Gage spared them and banished them from Boston. The two travel back to Salem, where eventually Promise is healed and survives. Hannah receives a letter from Catherine telling her that Caleb died fighting in the war that has begun. The book ends with Hannah and Will living happily in Salem again.
One thing I disliked about this book is that I felt that the author told me exactly what was happening. For example, on page 208 the author wrote, "Catherine and Hannah sat near the back of the church with the other women. The front pews and balconies were filled with men who spoke loudly with another until a hymn brought solemnity to the gathering." This part isn't terrible, but it doesn't leave me much room to imagine what is going on. The women sit in the back, and the men are talking in the front. I dislike the author's style of writing because she is telling exactly what to picture. In other words, she tells and doesn't show.
Also, I found the main character, Hannah, to be annoying at times. She annoyed me because she wouldn't stop talking and thinking about Promise. To me, it seemed like all she cared about was her horse. Not to mention, she makes really bad decisions that are annoyingly stupid.
This is what I feel like goes through Hannah's mind:
- Let me mess with the British soldiers because they won't get mad and try to catch me
- I'm wanted and known for riding my black horse ... I'm gonna ride my ride my horse now
- I need to deliver an important message to Paul Revere, let me ride my horse there because no one is going to catch me even though I'm wanted.
First of all, she stated in the book that Mr. Revere's house was not that far so the Province House. She even said that she could walk to his house, but then she decides to ride Promise there. Her very poor decision making that makes you want to slap Hannah and go "What are you doing? Why do you make so many stupid decisions?" Additionally, people warned her not to go out on her horse but nope, she still goes. WHY DOESN'T SHE UNDERSTAND THAT SHE IS JEOPARDIZING HERSELF SO MUCH BY RIDING HER STUPID HORSE AROUND BOSTON WHEN EVERYONE IS ON THE LOOKOUT FOR THE MIDNIGHT RIDER AND SHE IS WANTED BY THE LOYALISTS. She must not realize that she could be killed if she was caught. I wish the author would have made Hannah wiser.
This book got two stars for a reason. It was okay. I didn't hate it, but I disliked it. There were some good aspects of this book. However, they were mostly overpowered by bad. I was somewhat pulled in because I did want to keep reading at some points but I was repeatedly disappointed. I would recommend this book to advanced elementary readers, people who enjoy stories about the American Revolution, and horse lovers. Midnight Rider is NOT for advanced readers, who would be annoyed by this book's bluntness. All in all, this book was okay, but I disliked many aspects.