The author sent me a free Kindle version of this book, so my review relates only to that version.
Because I have the Kindle version, I haven't read any of the jacket copy and don't know how it's being marketed, but I'd call it half cozy mystery, half traditional chick lit. If you forgive a couple of gaping holes in the premise, the story itself is very charming.
In brief, Finding Infinity is the story of an empty-nester/widow who decides to move to a small town in Georgia and open a French-themed cupcake shop. She sinks all her savings into the shop, but the designer cupcake business model is shockingly less well-suited for a small Southern town than, say, New York City. (I should note my own personal bias here; as someone who lives in New York, I am pretty sick of designer cupcakes and the market has been glutted for years. However, I understand that the cupcake phenomenon may just now be penetrating smaller towns.) The fledgling cupcake shop gets very little business, and becomes the target of vandalism that verges on hate crime.
Unfortunately this book had more than its fair share of typos and minor logical flaws, especially in the first half. For example:
1. "Sighing, she fumbled in her purse for a pack of Benson & Hedges she had bought earlier in the day. She hadn't had a cigarette for over twenty years. Somehow, it seemed like an appropriate thing to do."
Wait, wait, wait. The character hasn't smoked in TWO DECADES, but when things get a little tough and she decides to throw away twenty years of not smoking, it just so happens that she bought a pack of cigarettes "earlier in the day"? Wouldn't the decision to buy your first pack of cigarettes in twenty years be a decision worth mentioning in the narrative, instead of referring to it offhandedly as a fait accompli?
2. When she sees the empty store fated to become her cupcake shop: "The inside looked like a bomb had gone off but she imagined it was just the result of neglect and long-time vacancy."
I don't know about you, but my mental picture of a place where a bomb has gone off involves a gaping crater in the floor, and possibly a missing wall or two. A place that's vacant and neglected, on the other hand, makes me think it's probably pretty dusty, and maybe has some wicked cobwebs. Slight difference.
3. "Somewhere between the ancient mother and her age (does forty-five mean they think I'm really sixty?) she could literally hear e-Harmony registrants signing off en masse."
I think the word you were looking for is "figuratively."
4. "She said it would probably not be a very good PR move for me to call the cops before I've even opened the shop. That kind of advertising, I can do without. And it wasn't technically a break in since I didn't have a lock on the front door."
A basic Google search for the definition of breaking and entering would reveal the fallacy of that last line. Or, you know, watching a couple of episodes of Law & Order. Also, what idiot decides not to report a break-in to an unopened shop because of PR concerns? I'm seriously trying to imagine the thought process this would entail. "People won't want to eat my cupcakes if they know someone tried to steal cash out of my register!"
5. "'Yeah, sorry about that,' Danni-Lynn said looking not at all sorry. 'I meant to have Leroy get that lock for you all day yesterday. Well, you got it now.'"
What kind of [expletive] doesn't look sorry when you got robbed because she couldn't get you a damn lock in a timely fashion? And what kind of [double-expletive] would say, "Well, you got it now" afterward?
6. "'To break even,' Liddy said, her words dragging her down as she spoke them, 'I have to be able to produce and sell about two hundred cupcakes a day. Every day.'"
I freely admit I know nothing about the cupcake business, but two hundred cupcakes a day sounds like a LOT for a small town. It's not like coffee, where you can count on regulars drinking a cup pretty much every single day. No one eats a cupcake every day. I am really tempted to call up some cupcake shops in small towns in the South and see if this is anywhere close to a reasonable expectation.
We find out later that Infinity is a town of about 2,300 people. So roughly ten percent of the population needs to have a cupcake craving. Every day. For her to break even. Solid business plan.
7. "Tucker had invited one other couple (take that, Mama) and Liddy pretty much hated her from the get-go.
Apparently that couple is female and singular. Impressive feat.
8. "It occurred to her that she might be a tad overdressed for a casual dinner in the backwoods of small town Georgia. Why did she wear her Manolos, for crap's sake?"
Someone has watched wayyy too many Sex & the City reruns.
9. "She had tacked up fliers at her mother's rehabilitation center and at every public facility that would allow her within ten miles of Infinity."
So lots of grocery stores in Kansas and Oklahoma got fliers, because they really didn't care how close she got to the small town of Infinity, Georgia.
10. "Surely, if he had been thinking clearly, it would have realized why she was calling."
I'm pretty sure it = the phone. It's the newest upgrade for caller ID -- it realizes why someone is calling so you don't have to answer. But it only works when you're thinking clearly.
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