i think i tried reading this a few years earlier, and couldn't do it, because the storyline, well,it sucks.she's a widow.i mean wth.
idk why i bother with inspirational-aka dry-romance.idk why christian/ inspirational romance books instantly means boring, dry and humorless. but it does.
its funny they don't go into detail-at all-about things and yet we gotta read about her nursing the guys child.um, gross! you go into disgusting detail about that but not about what we actually want to read about.
&what kind of romance is this anway?! u were married and had a kid &then they died.so you get with an indian who is also widowed &has a kid.wth?!
i love books that conveniently forget to mention on the back of the book that he already has a kid.&that she was married.&had a kid.
i picked up this book before &im now remembering why i didnt read it.
already flipped to the ending.her&him didnt even end up 2gether?!
ugh.i've seriously gotta stay away from these books.
how come the only people that get with indians in movies or books are widows.&women with orange hair.i mean wth?!
ugh.just ugh.
so the indian-&i can only guess its whats his face that the main character gets with-has his hand on this beautiful young squaws shoulder.if it wasnt for his injured leg i can just hazard a guess at what was about2 happen.&i dont think they were joining in the dancing.
if his injured leg hadnt have kicked in,they would have went off and did it.
what's christian about this?!
i mean dont christians wanna be with one person. like you marry someone and stay with them forever? not end up widowed and get with something who's also widowed.so u have to feed his child.yuck.
that was like a regular romance book except this lacks in everything like adventure, comedy, excitement, a smidgen of interest, character personality and plot originality.
i mean both characters in this series-lisbeth &jesse-are widowed and then get with an indian.wth?! do they all have to be widows?!
is her husband supposed to be rude&mean? cuz he's comin off rlly weak.&just stupid. thats a sad attempt at a bad guy.
-get an insult we can actually understand.&in plain english,plz. "nymph, in thy orisons, be all my sins remembered." even that is said in this bible-y way.
"some even spoke english, but that brought lil comfort to jessie, who viewed the indians as godless creatures 2be feared &avoided @all costs." -just love a character that hates indians. i mean, seriously.do u even want us2 like this character?
4sum reason, anytime sum1 writes about little kids,they make em sound so stupid. like "he seemed impervious 2the bumpin of the wagon &squealed w/delight most of the day,peekin @jesse over the back of the wagon box,pointing to rabbits that popped out from behind bushes or rocks." ugh. i dont like kids anyway,so this is just annoying.
omg r u gunna mention nursing the freakin kid every time u do it?! GROSS!
this girl is already irritating the crap out of me. she hates indians-points taken immediately for that-cries &begs her husband, who she doesnt rlly seem2 like, not 2cross the river.then she "became phsyically ill&bent over double, sobbing." hate whiny weak characters.who becomes so worried that they throw up? i feel like stuff like that is just what authors write, not things that actually happen2 ppl.
i thought jesse was gunna sneak along grain 4their horses cuz her husband was2 stupid 2 get sum. but she duznt.
things that sound stupid-"man alive!" "i swan!"
i love the things lil children seem2 be able2 do. u make him seem like a baby, because he's makin all these gurgling, bubbly noises &his mom still nurses him.so i find it quite extraordinary that he cud climb up from the back of the wagon 2the seat up front.
her husband is talkin about his son-"i may not have kept him safe...but i'll make sure the dang coyotes leave him in peace now." its so crude &just disgusting 2 picture coyotes gettin the body.
&then we go on2 read about jesse movin the body around.&struggling with it.ugh!
"i can do my work so much better, &be of much more use2 u, after i have spent time w/ the lord." i certainly don't mind comments about god or when characters pray.its in a lot of romance books. but inspirational/christian romance books put comments in there about the bible,praying, and god wayy too much.i dont like repition of any kind. &that gets old incredibly fast. &that comment doesnt even make any sense.its like authors like this arent christians.they're crazy christians.their whole way of thinking is just bizarre &out there.their whole world is centered around god.they eat, sleep,& breathe god.&they look down on ne1 who isnt like them.like they think they're the antichrist if they aren't the same way.&i hate that. they also just want to push their ways on other ppl.it irritates me wen ppl write about god like this,becuz then it makes me hate stuff like that, and i hate that.
"perhaps more,she thought, he does not have the comfort of the lord." wow,u think ur sooo superior. that just hit me so wrong.like he was grieving more becuz he dint have a strong bond w/god.like u.
-"as her body demanded to feed the child that was gone." duz ur body rlly do that??
he tells u 2get into the wagon &she "dropped her shawl on the prairie, grabbed the wagon side, hauled herself up." why wud u drop ur shawl? was it on purpuse or an accident?
how wud she know he was a siox warrior?
"homer? no,not homer any longer,yet it had been homer only a lil while ago." ur husbands dead on the ground &u dont have any feelings.u talk about his lifeless body-i think its a body.its hard2 tell becuz of this poor writing-n such an impersonal, detached way.
shes being taken by indians &put on his horse but her prayer isnt for escape but 2 "keep me on this pony." most ppl n her situation wud pray 2 fall off &die.so she cud escape the indians.but not her. for this d.a. its all about her pain.
i hate characters that get caught up over a lil soreness. "the soreness n her back &legs made her cry out in pain.she stumbled,tried2 stand but cud not." omg.this is annoying!!
just love characters that keep throwin up.&screaming.
then she says "death wud bring welcome relief from the torture of riding w/every muscle agonizing as each stride jarred her weary body." not that death wud bring relief from bein captured by ppl u hate,but so u cud stop ridin because of ur sore muscles.STOP WHINING ABOUT BEING SORE.
i almost feel like im gunna be sick.if i hear about this dumba** nursin a kid one more time im gunna freakin scream.this shudnt be n a book @all,much less a romance book.
wut is this authors problem? u freakin sicko.
why wud he pretend 2drop her just2 catch her.
"cud it be that he duz not plan2 kill me after all?but then...no,death wud be preferred 2sum things." 1st of all,that writin sucks.2nd,u mean it wud be preferred 2ridin w/ur sore body? becuz thats paramount n here.
she gets n his teepee &then is like "jesse spotted the reason she had ben brought here" wen she sees the baby.who just immediately knows shes brought2 nurse the child?!
"jesse felt her body respond2 the cries &looked down,embarrassed by the dampness beginnin2show thru the bodice of her dress." &then "jesse looked away,pretendin not2 understand,but the wail persisted-she turned2look @the child.the wail stopped momentarily wen the childs eyes met hers." she then touches the child&then "instinct took over" &she feeds the child.just unfastens her bodice n front of them.
why wud u wanna nurse the guys child,who isnt urs? wuts romantic about this?!
&wuts up w/this character &nursing? duz ur body even rlly do that crap? line up w/ur kids ppl.jessee can &will nurse them all! this is just repulsive.
u get captured.u c a child. &r immediately derailed.
&these authors act holier than thou,but just how christian is openin ur dress2 nurse n front of ppl?
he drags her2 his teepee &these girls r smilin&noddin.&i thought they knew he was gunna get w/her.but oh no,so not the case.she was gunna nurse his child.how freakin sweet.
i nvr understand why authors write things like this.why write sumthin unless u kinda wanted it2 happen 2 urself?
"as dusk arrived,the indian came back." i dint know he left.cuz the author dint mention it.
not only duz the plot suck but the writin duz2.who wants 2get w/a guy who already has a kid? &who just lets a kid nurse from them? she acts like its enjoyable.she fell asleep &the kid was still nursin.
i feel like the way she writes about the indians &the things they do arent realistic.
"waxed eloquent" seems extremely modern4this time period.much less 4an indian2 say.
"i am certain time will calm his heart," &here four skies paused&winked @those around him, "time &a good woman."
i was confused about who she was gunna end up w/.i got rides w/the wind(w/the limp) confused w/howling wolf(the blamer).had2 check back of book just2 clear it up.why put it in howling wolfs perspective sometimes? so confusing!
indian sayin "crazy." seems wrong.downword spiral does 2.&"i told u so" speech.
she seems2 adjust well2 indian life.i mean2 claim2 hate them&yet nurse babies when they're foisted @u.&u smile wen u envision urself n indian clothes.
"she has much milk.she did not want2 give it,but i made her." the old womans eyes softened, "i think she likes the child.rides the wind has named him 2mothers.she will stay." @that,old1 said, "enuff! u will c her 4urself." why wud u say enuff?! no1 sed nething.&jesse obvs. wanted2 feed it.its not like she refused.&u did not "make her." gah this writin sucks.
she seemed2 be adjusting2 indian life completely.carryin the baby around n the lil backboard thing. the whole thing just rlly irritated me.she dint seem2 mind that life @all so i dint believe her wen she sed "she found herself n such an unbelievable situation that all her energies were used2 cope w/it."
&i knew she dint care about homer,but it was still rlly dislikable wen she sed "she wondered @the lack of emotion she felt @the thought of him." he wasnt that bad.
"old1 pointed2 the child &sed "wableinca." jesse repeated the word.she pointed a finger@herself. "wakanka." jesse parroted the word." bad writin becuz u dint clarify who pointed@themselves.
she seems2 enjoy indian life becuz she nurses the child,goes plant hunting&then goes2 sleep w/o a word of complaint.&she hasnt mentioned escape once.
shes teachin u words-"pangi." &u call out "pow-gay!" 1st of all, that wasnt funny n the slightest. 2nd,why r u tryin2 adjust? most ppl wud have already tried escape now.its unrealistic.
-"you tell words in book." why is it italicized like that?!
"had she rlly heard her own language?no,she thought,it was only the wind...or my own dream..or..." so stupid!
i feel like this storyline is just a lil 2 convenient.like she had a husband and child. but to eliminate those bothersome aspects,her son conviently-&stupidly-dies. then her husband dies. she got rid of them both and then it paves the way for her to fall in love with an indian.why even have her be married &w/ a kid if ur just gunna kill them off? that was so unnesecary.&i hate ppl that r already married w/kids.ugh! this storyline just sucks.
she's ben given a choice2 leave&she act.has 2 stop2 consider it.wth.&of course her sister wudnt miss her,her family was glad she got married&she has nowhere2 go so shes all gung-ho 2stay.&the family crap came out of nowhere.we had no knowledge of ur careless family.&no,i dont feel srry4u. n fact,i dont like u @all.
u hated the indians.u call them savages as u agree2 stay w/them.&u decide2 stay.idk why.its completely unrealistic.&this story sucks.ive nvr read another like it&i dont want 2ever again.
u randomly sayhe shud smile more becuz u arent scared of him then.i dint realize u were ever scared of him.&she wanted him2 hurry &get back so he cud communicate w/her.hes gone half the time.u've talked2 him like once.&then u pray2find the words 2describe the bible2 him.&4u 2 understand their language.how stupid! god forbid u cant explain things right.this girl is DUMB.
shes actin like a baby cuz she cant make a fire&ppl r laughin.&actually flinches wen she finds out the women called her Woman Who Makes No Fire.thats not even insulting.like who cares?@
"workout" is SO modern.
'jesse struggled2 no just wut2 read,until rides the wind solved the problem.
"is not all of it from god?"
"yes it is all from god."
"then you tell it all."'
ugh!this book is full of crap.jesse gets hung up on idiotic things.
wut was this about??-
"jesse remembered old one's laughter as she&her son had butchered the buffalo.she remembered the look of disbelief on rides the wind's face."
wut?! idr that.&wut did that have2 do w/wut rides the wind asked u-which was ur fear ur horses.
"a dark red star nearly hidden by her forelock explained the ponys name." no1 had sed the ponys name.
u get mad@the horse &kick it &then u get dumped off.like an idiot.&then cry.like an idiot. this girl is WEAk.
"jesse wondered.how is it,old 1,that u always no my secrets?she gestured until old1 understood." how wud u gesture that?
theres a fire&i think jesse is about2 do sumthin.but she duznt.she grabs Two Mothers,gives him to old1.idk wut a parfleche is,but it must contain her bible,otherwise she'd nvr bother.i thought she was gettin sumthin2 scoop water2throw on the fire w/.but oh no.that wud be2 much like a herione.
her 1st concern upon waking is about 2mothers.not how bad she was hurt.but about 2mothers.why wud he be hurt?! hes not the kid who was actually near the fire.but i 4got,u prob.just wanna feed him, becuz ur obsessed w/that.
the only reason she prob saved that kid was becuz he was a kid.she's particularly sensitive 2 children.im surprised she dint immediately insist on feedin 2mothers,even tho she's hurt.becuz thats the kind of "acts of heroine" u get w/this girl.
&WHY wud the author choose to burn her characters hair? ugh!
sumtimes he sounds like an indian.other times it seems wrong.
jesse wakes sumtime after the fire&then we flip the pg2 "prairie flower was the bearer of the news." i thought sum1 had died.but it was that Rides the Wind loves her.that was so random &done n such a crappy way.
every time rides the wind duz sumthin his mom brings it up2 jesse.like "a new wife gives the mother n law moccasins." or "u have his fav horse."
'prairie flower spoke the unspeakable. "then if u cannot c that he cares4 u n wut he does, u must c it n wut he has not dun." the unspeakable? rlly?
"it is the wifes job." she blushed, realizing that she had used a wrong word-the word wife,instead of the word4woman." we're not stupid.u dint need2 clarify that.this writin is just terrible n every way.
"i will tell u how it is w/lakota.wen a man wishes2take a wife..." &then the author skips over wut he says.
it was supposed2 be a good moment wen he tells her of the buffalo robe custom &wraps it around her.but it wasnt.becuz this writin sucks.
sounds wrong that he'd talk like this-"whether she is my fav,i cannot say."
"there is 1 thing the lakota brave who wishes a wife duz that i have not described."
theres abs.no way he'd want jesse as a wife.at all.shes so stupid.shes not funny.shes weak.
indian saying "celebration" sounds off.
she gets all defensive about the bible-of course-&basically becuz he isnt white & has dif religion. "god says2 obey the way of the ppl.among the whites,the way of the ppl is w/a minister." shes basically sayin obey the whites&no1 else.
u dont have much of a reaction wen he basically admits he wants2 marry u.u act.kind of protest.but wen he walkss away,u "watch him walk away w/a singing heart.he cares 4me..he cares4 me..he cares!" btw,u sound like an idiot.
dint even no she loved him or he liked her.or felt@home there.or that god "gave her comfort thru homer wen lil jacob died." u dint seem2truly care about homer@all.&now ur only concerned about havin a minister 2marry u.
prairie flower&old1 r talkin like white women b4 the weddin.
she agrees2 be married &they're about2 ride thru the village.then she slides down off horse &hides her face.-"but2 b led b4 the entire village...2 have every1 watchin..i have given u my heart.but i cannot tell the village how i feel.it is n here." she puts his open palm over her heart. "it is24 u2no.it is not4 them." -when u get married,u walk down the aisle n front of ppl,so how is this ne dif? this character is2 dumb2 comprehend.
i dont believe shes "given him her heart." becuz she nvr mentioned she loved him.inspirational romances suck.this character sucks.this author sucks.
jesse says things that shes nvr mentioned b4.
&why wud ther ebe "murmurs of approval" wen he declared he was gunna marry her?who wud approve of that?
indian just talks like a white guy.he repeats the vows while lookin n2 her eyes.&that just seems so like a white guy.&he dint evem stumble over the words.&all these "shall's."
"but god was there.&he was pleased." how do u no that?
hate wen ppl have already ben married cuz they start swappin tales of their dead wife/husband.
he speaks like a white man.shes speakin like an indian all of a sudden.wth.
she was actin a lil slutty wen she came2 him n the nite 2tell him she wanted2 marry him.&then kisses him not so chastely.so im confused as2 why u'd completely skip over the sex part.i mean, idt it even happened the way the author duznt mention it.
the song about howling wolf seemed wrong-"come&see howling wolf."
"the love of god found a willing vessel in rides the wind,whereby it cud flow 2jesse."
"jesse rushed outside, mounted red star&rode away, thinkin all the while of the savagery of howling wolf. he must be punished." i thought she was ridin away2 yell@him,but then we move on 2 l8r that evening.
wen hepzibah-great name-looks up&sees the guy it says-"there stood howling wolf" as if she already knew who he was.instead of "there stood an indian."
hag.
"he added another course jest."
rides the wind.horse named wind.like Rides his Horse.
we dont no the progess shes made until u just up&say u've ben there4 yrs,speak good lakota,ride bareback.
"she found that she rlly did not care2defend herself or her adopted familys ways2this young,foolish woman." -u were old wen u gotthtere&u were foolish.
shes suddenly speakin like an indian&usin terms like ur ppl.
she turns2go &hes standin rite behind her&she isnt surprised or scared.
"i lived among the whites for 21 of their yrs.as they count time."
"best-beloved."
"god had filled the emptiness w/his luv poured out thru Rides the Wind." its like he cant just luv u.its gotta be gods luv goin thru him.
"my father."
"it was a valiant fite,but rides the wind realized as he fell against the cliff wall that it was useless.2much blood had been spilled."
think they're talkin about a fierce battle? nope.a battle w/eagles. mom&dad bird fightin.&then the babies.it was laughable.
she jumps from perspective2perspective n this bk w.no warning.
talks about killin animals in a way thats just wrong.like its just natural.
im not sure why he drowned the baby eagles.&if they're babies then why did they fight so good?or carry him from cliff?
why wud u kill his horse&hurt him,especially after he was JUST hurt a couple pgs back?
i thoght rides the wind had died3 dif times cuz she kept sayin "he lay still." &then i thought he was alive becuz she sed "i will need help 2care4rides the wind." so imagine my surprise wen i turn the pg2 find him dead.not even halfway thru.wth is the rest of the bk about?! who writes a bk where main character dies?sum1 dies &gets ovr it lightning quick.
this bk has abs.nothin goin4 it except that its about n.a.'s.
just becuz ur pregnant u suddenly cant do nething.u cant cook so u let old lady do it.u cant walk cuz ur feet swell in the heat.since wen duz that make u an invalid?
boy these ppl bounce back like rubber.