*****
Disclaimer:
* this review is full of spoilers, it will cover the story-line, as it is in fact my own way of tracking the progress for future references and research
* you'll find some of my own opinions, but I am not an expert nor claim to be one so you've been warned
*****
Pros
- very good detailed descriptions of the Gor world, people and their rules, traditions, habits, way of life overall
- very good and elaborate philosophical dissertation about the barbarian world of Gor, about the slavery concept, about the man's dominant nature and female's submissive nature, yet with no sex scenes of any kind
- great humor from time to time will spice the charters interactions
Cons
- maybe the fact that Caboot is Superman type, he is always a winner in any battle, or race, or game, sure he's the main protagonist and we should feel good when he wins, because we all love him, but still
- the fact Cabbot states he used to play chess on Earth, blindfolded against 20 players and he was playing and memorizing 20 table games at the same time,once again the Superman concept
Plot:
Setting
Disguise as one of the assassin cast
- Cabot reappears in Koroba, in disguise, with a new identity, posing as one of the assassins cast, being hired to go to Ar to avenge the death of Tarl Cabot that supposedly was killed by another assassin during of little after the Ar siege
- he seems to go with this plan, in accordance with this father, good and close friends from Koroba and with his new slave girl Elizabeth Caldwell from Earth, now, Vela, a slave girl on Gor with Cabot
Infiltration to salvers house in Ar
- Cabot the assassin is in Ar, and after an attempt to be hired by a rich slaver for protection, we learn about that in fact a more powerful slaver house is in Ar, attempting to gain monopoly over the slave trade business in Ar and then maybe in the whole Gor
- but more important we learn that this new slavers house, Sernus, has access to considerable amounts of money and riches that are not quite coming from the slave trade revenue and even more important, they have access to many "barbarian slaves" from the distant cities of Gor, that we in fact suspect are brought from Earth
- as a result - or maybe conform with the plan, we don't quite know yet - Cabot in disguise as an assassin and Vela as a slave girl, infiltrate to the slaver house and settle there to spy and take action when the time is right
On his way to Ar, the beggar and the player
- maybe worth mentioning that on his way to Ar, Cabbot as the assassin, he saves the life of a ugly and disgusting beggar followed by 4 warriors and this will ultimately please his new employer slaver Sernus in Ar and earn him some gold coins
- also, on his way to Ar, Cabot the assassin is watching "the game" similar but more complex and evolved game of strategy having maybe at the core the chess earthy game, between a blind, old, professional player - one who makes his living from wagers and playing against regular goreans and a regular fellow who accepts the challenge of "the game" - when Cabot disappointed by the lack of excitement from the game as it looks the player will allow his opponent to win, Cabot offers the player some gold coins that he will otherwise win maybe in a year of playing, just to prove he, the player, can really win the game even with a great handicap against him - since the stakes are so high now, the incentive motivated the player to play at his true value and with some few magnificent moves, he wins the game - however, after the audience left and the player is with Cabot the assassin only, when the player finds out in fact that the gold coins are from one of the assassins cast, he refuses to get the gold, crying it's "black gold" and as such is cursed and he will not take it
Flashback
Returning the last female egg to Priest kings
- we are taken in a flash back to Cabot and Vela, traveling on a tarn back to Sarda Mountains, to meet Misk and return the egg he finally got from the wagons peoples
- it looks like Cabot in his last trip to Priest kings after returning the egg, finds that there are indeed "others" somewhat equal in power and technology with Priest kings, just a bit less developed just because they have more barbarian instincts to kill and wage wars
- it looks the "others" are at war with Priest kings for more than 20 k years and they've attempted to conquer Earth and Gor, but failed since those are under the Priest kings protection under the so called 5th ring of the solar system
- it looks however the "others" found that Priest kings are weaken after their internal war and the Others are working on infiltrating on Gor and Earth, to work with humans, just to use them as tools and food in the end when they are done with humans in their quest to conquer Priest kings - it looks the others are carnivores in nature and as a result they eat humans - and other creatures - as food
- so, in a noble way Cabot and Vela volunteer themselves to start working with Priest kings against the Others and to their part in stooping the Others
- as a result is revealed the plan we already know some bits about, for Cabot to infiltrate as one of the assassins cast and Vela as a slave girl in the house of Sernus of Ar and learn as much as they can, in order to fight and try to do their part in stooping the Others
Spy mission, at the house of Sernus in Ar, a famous slaver
- infiltrated Cabot as the assassin, is visiting the large compound and we learn about some slave acquisitions, processing, storage and training procedures
- we learn how Sernus is receiving gold, goods, illegal weapons for Gor and girls to be used as barbarian slaves from Earth from a space ship that seems to be no doubt from Others
- we learn about exotic slave girls, breed and kept in captivity all their life, without bieng allowed to learn nothing about men - or woman - not realizing this way they are in fact females, not knowing there are males in the world and as such becoming a high prize slave for a yuba that will use them while they are under shock finding this way, about men and that they have to serve the men
- while in his private room with his slave Vela, he teaches her some knots and a bit of the skill and art of tying knots
- tying knots on Gor we learn is used to secure a capture, a room or a trunk or safe with valuables and same time in a customized manner to identify oneself as the owner and creator-inventor of a complex knot
- Cabot is learning more and more about Sernus house and the slaves girls in the house and how the house is organized, like a small city in fact
- we also learn more about the tarn races in Ar and different factions - somewhat equivalent with the sports teams on earth - and supporters of one the factions competing against each other
- we learn more about the extensive training of all the slave girls in the house of Sernus, with a focus on the Vela, Phyllis and Virginia, barbarian slave girls from Earth
- we learn that in fact much effort, time and resources are involved into their training, from how to walk, to talk, to serve, to dance, to assume some positions, to do pretty much everything with one purpose only, to please men
- we learn about some methods of "brain washing" by repeating for day at the time, in front of the mirrors their new status - as a slave girl - and their new mission, to please men
- we learn that sooner or later the girls will not only obey, but even more, will want to succeeded and excel with their training, so they can be better once sold, in the hope they will be purchased by a wealthy Master and will have a more pleasant life in his house
At the races
- we witness a scene when Cabot and his slave Vela, along with a friend, guard in the Sernus house and the two other salve girls in training, Phyllis and Virginia, they are out at the great tarn races of Ar, as an incentive for the girls, for good behavior and progress with their training
- Phyllis, who was a feminist on Earth is conflicted with her new role as a slave girl and she's attempting an escape when given the chance, unbounded and unleashed, she runs away in the crowd at the races
- of course, because she's only a slave girl in the Gorean world, he has nowhere to go, even worse another man is attempting to capture her, but watching if fact her back, Cabot and his guard friend save her from the stranger and recover her
- the guard, in the care she was with, is not in fact punish her in a cruel way, as one may expect according with the Gorean law, on the contrary, after he proves her she has no place to go, but to stay with her Master, she releases her back into the crowd, under the pretext to buy him some bread and honey, witch she does this time, and returns back with no hesitation
- we learn that a new mysterious faction is created and will compete at the tarn races in Ar, the faction of Ar
- we learn that even if creating and introducing a new faction into the races is a very expensive and risky business, still the new faction - called the Steelears - will race using not as traditionally race tarns, but using war tarns that are much bigger and not so used with the difficult flight track they need to fly during a race
- Cabot sees his war tran from Koroba brought for the race into the stadium preparation area
- Cabot is lead to the preparation area by a friend Mit, tarn keeper, and he receives the Steelers colors and he is invited to race with his tarn as Corintus of Cos, a mysterious hooded rider
- we learn that Cabot hooded to cover his real identity is winning - as usual - even against more experienced riders from more established factions, and slowly buy surely, he's making real progress for the new faction and also a name for his rider personage Corintus of Cos that very few know his real identity
- is not clear yet, not even for Cabot, why is he asked to race for this new faction Steelears, or who is behind this faction, financing the whole operation, all though we suspect important people are behind
- we also find numerous references to one hooded player in the games - similar with the gladiator games on Earth - who is unbeaten in the games, even by very experienced and powerful warriors and who despite his right to slay and kill his victim, he refuses to kill anyone, sparing their lives after defeating them by doing so, earning valuable points with he audience and so with the people or Ar
- like with Corintus of Cos tarn rider, same with the mysterious fighter, no one knows his real identity, however it's worth mentioning that once at the games Cabot saw and recognized in the crowd, dressed as a peasant, the former Yuba of Ar, Malenas, the father of his beloved Thalena, that was left as Yuba of all Yubas once Ar was restored to order after the siege 7 years agao
Sernus becomes Yuba of Ar
- we learn that having great wealth, from the slave trade but also from the undoubted help from the "others", Sernus was also on a mission to earn the title of Yuba of Ar
- he sponsored the games and the races, thus becoming popular with the masses
- he gave 1000 free passes per day, to races and games, to regular people of Ar, so again building and increasing his popularity with the regular people of Ar
- he gave significant loans to the actual Yuba of Ar, and to his dynasty and after a while, at the right time, he started to demand his money back, under the pretext he need it, but since the amounts were significant, the current Yuba couldn't pay back the money as faster as requested, as a result losing his popularity with the regular people of Ar
- Sernus requested and it was approved by the city council to become of the cast of warriors, as he was training and learning weaponry and warfare with tenacity in the past, maybe exactly for this purpose, this way paving his path on becoming Yuba, as only one from a superior cast - like warriors - can become a Yuba
- Sernus is at his core a slaver, thus one of the merchant casts, but even if they are often rich and influential, merchants are not a superior cast according with the Gorean law so that's why Sernus had to elevate his status as a warrior
- he also sent his loyal employees into the city, into taverns, to offer drinks to regular people and to speak of the need to have a new Yuba in Ar and to promote Sernus as a very possible candidate for the Yuba seat
- the current Yuba and his dynasty was discredited by the lack of funds in the treasury and some discrepancies while a financial audit from the city council, he resigned from his position as Yuba of Ar
- Sernus was appointed as the new Yuba as a result of his long and continuous campaign to take over this position
Cabot spy mission to an end
- with Sernus now out of his house to rule Ar in the administrator cylinder, the scribe - spying as well for Priest kings - has more time than before and less supervision, thus he can now copy more secret and significant useful documents, like maps, orders and such and soon will be ready to leave Sernus and report to Proest Kings
- we learn that a plan is formulated to save the three slave girls, Vela, Phyllis and Virginia, by being purchased like any other slave by a Priest Kings agent, then taken to safety and released as free women
- so Cabot is hopeful his mission as a spy in the house of Sernus will end sometimes soon, gaving once regret for now, the fact he didn't quite learned yet who killed the warrior from Fentis that looked like him and hoping in fact will kill Cabot himself
Kajularia - the festival of slaves
- we are introduced to Kajularia a slaves Gorean holiday and festival when the slaves are roaming around catching and capturing mostly free men and forcing them to serve their pleasure, most like a kind of revenge for being slaves one full year until that day
- Cabot is caught on the streets of Ar by a gang of slave girls, along with another warrior ad an tarn keeper
- even if they are bounded with ropes, they all three manage to escape and re-capture the girls in a amusing game that turns out to be in fact pleasant for the girls, even if they are slaves
- after much fun, Cabot returns to Sernus home, and there the fun continues
- in the house, during this holiday, Sernus is determined to humiliate the main slave girl of the house, that is a passion breed slave, that is the main trainer of the new girls, by offering her to be used by most of the men in the house at that moment playing dice, despite the fact that the main Master keeper of the house is deeply in-loved with her
- Cabot sensing the harm, he plays the ruthless assassin card and by simple intimidation claims the girl for himself only unless someone else will challenge him and of course no other man will challenge him for the girl, so he ends up with the girl in her quarter
- there he has no intention to in fact use her, instead learns more about her, how he was breed as a passion slave and how she had only an old doll from her mother that was sold before she was 5 y/o
- he also learns that she once had a son, not knowing the father as she was hooded when mated and her son taken away from her as soon as he was born, not knowing nothing about her child
- to make the time go easier, as per girl request, Cabot is teaching the girl the game - the one similar with chess on Earth, but more complex - and we find that despite she is only a female and a slave, she has a natural talent and great skills with the game that it looks she grasps quite fast
- her lover bust in, attempting to hurt Cabot blinded by jealousy, but as usual, Cabot defends himself well and the girl clears the situation stating that in fact she was saved from the others man by just being with him and doing nothing but talking and playing the game
Cabot is caught and chained
- well it looks like in his surveillance missions around the house of Sernus, Cabot finds in a dark corner underground the prisoners cages - different than the slaves cages - finds a prisoner that turns out to be in fact the real Caprice, the scribe spy, that was supposed to work with him and Vela for the Priest Kings, thus Cabot understands that all this time in fact Sernus knew about their missions, as he had his own scribe
- Cabot is chained, undressed and with no weapons by Sernus and his guards and Sernus explains that is was quite beneficial to keep him in the house, like a prisoner under observation, knowing same time that no other spy will arrive while Cabot was there
Game play for his life
- Sernus is setting up a game - the chess type - as a charade, with a "Hop the fool" playing for Cabot's life and a young beautiful man, who is the champion of all the champions undefeated at the game representing Sernus
- while Hop the fool is brought, same fool that Cabot saved his life in a tavern on his way to Ar, same time the blind player is brought as he is sharing a roof with Hop the fool, since no one else will give him shelter
- we learn that in fact this is how the player lost his eyes and his vision and he was tortureda while ago, by the orders of Sernus who lost the game against him
Plot diagram
sequence of events
Exposition-rising action-climax-falling action-resolution
Flashbacks-foreshadowing-flash-forwards
1. Exposition, settings
- place - on planet Gor, starts in city of koroba, some flashbacks in mounts of S to meet Priest Kings, but mostly in Ar
- time, current time on Earth, but medieval age in Gor
- characters
protagonist Cabot vs. antagonist ""The Ohters" represented by Sernus a slaver of Ar, that will become Yiba of Ar
- main, Cabot, Vela or Elisabeth and Sernus
- secondary, Phyllis and Virginia as barbarian slave girls brought from Earth, in training on Gor, Mit a tarns keeper, a guard and few more
mood,
- Cabot and vela are ready to do their part against "the others" to stop them from taking over Gor and Earth by defeating Priest Kings
- Phyllis, a virgin feminist from Earth is outraged he was taken as a slave girl and she slowly learns it may not be so bad in fact and that maybe she was wrong to promote her feminist ideology on Earth
- Virginia, a virgin timid girl from Earth, a former professor of antique history, is now learning the value of being a real woman and how to please men and she discover herself as in fact willing to be with a man
- Sernus, with great financial help from "the others" is taking over the city if Ar, step by step, first eliminating his competition and enslaving the only remaining salver who was asking cast sanctuary in his house, then elevating himself as a warrior, then taking over the YUba and administrator of Ar position
points of view
- Priest kings are weaken due to recent war among them, but they are recovering slow
- "The others" are working a smooth plan of improving their position and influence on Gor and Earth, supporting key characters in key cities, but just to use them as need it according with their own plans
- natural order of Gor is debated as a philosophical ideology and it is suggested that it was the same on Earth too, witch is not entirely false
2. Rising action
Characters roles, protagonist vs. antagonists, conflict, mood,
- Cabot and Vela, assisted by a scribe sent by Priest Kings spy in the house of Sernus
- Sernus is taking over the city of Ar with the help of "The Others"
- the slave girls from Earth learn that in fact is not so bad to please men after all
- Cabos keeps winning in his tarn races for the new faction of Steelears same way as a mysterious fighter - we suspect it maybe Malenas - keeps winning in the games
3. climax
- point of maxim tension, of greatest action or confrontation
4. Falling action
- conflict outcome
- resulting events
5. Resolution
- final outcome, theme
- story's meaning, bottom line, lessons to learn
- author's purpose (persuade, inform, entertain, teach, etc.)