This book has been quite disappointing. I’ve loved Nevill’s work for years, but this book totally ruined my impression of her writing. This book has been painfully generic, especially considering our main heroine and her love affair. Everything has been easy to guess and there were no exciting twists.
Verity is a vice president of Bank of the World, constantly fighting with her chauvinistic superiors who always dismiss her suggestions unless they can claim them as their own. Tired of not getting what she deserves, she decides to show them how flawed their computer security system is by temporarily stealing the money. Into the picture comes Tor, her former mentor who taught her everything she knows. He decides he wants to join her game and it becomes a competition between the two. They make a bet - if Verity loses, she'll have to work for Tor for a year and one day and if she wins, Tor will get her appointed to The Federal Reserve Bank.
While the plot sounds intriguing, it's not even nearly as good as her other works. It's barely solid. I chose it because I have a great love for Katherine Neville, particularly for the book Eight. I started to love chess because of that book. Unfortunately, this is a boring story with forced romance and underdeveloped supporting characters. The novel lacked the intensity, action, plot twists and character development from her other works. There was a lot of purposeless description of banking processes but it seems that not even Neville herself understands it well enough.
Honestly, Verity is such a prude. I couldn’t connect with her because it seems like she got through her life with barely surviving, not truly living it. While I get the career part, since I’m quite ambitious myself, I still couldn’t understand how she could almost be like a plant. She’s worse than generic example of Mary Sue.
Verity and Tor had potential at the start, since their suppressed chemistry was obvious. Suddenly, all of their conversations and moments of bonding seemed unrealistic, forced and anticlimactic. I felt like it was shoved down my throat that they will end up together, their relationship didn’t have a natural course of action. It even shadowed the plot, which was another downside.