The Magicians Apprentice is 0.5 in the The Black Magician Trilogy. The first instalment in the trilogy was published in 2001 and this book was published in 2009. Perhaps I should have started the series in publishing order rather than story order, but I spent most of the novel questioning why this was actually a novel. I found it really hard to justify this 0.5 instalment needing to be 600 pages long, especially when it was published several years after the actual series.
The novel uses split POVs and split locations but the story begins in a country called Kyralia which a few hundred years ago was under complete control of a bordering country, Sachaka. Before the novel begins, the Kyralians were given back semi independence and are now just part of the Sachakan empire. However, the Sachakans still feel entitled to come to and fro about Kyralia and expect the people to play nice host games and provide an awfully large amount of food just for funsies and god forbid your cook serves the Sachakan something he’s already had.
Enter Lord Dakkon, magician and owner of a village that borders Sachaka, being forced to play host to Lord Takado of Sachaka, also a magician, who has been touring around Kyralia with nefarious intentions. Lord Dakkon has been tasked with plying him with wine to find out what those intentions are. During his stay, Takado gives nothing away except the slave he beats to near death and decides he has no use for, “gifting” him to Lord Dakkon. Lord Dakkon calls for the local healer, and his daughter Tessia who assists him, to tend to the slave, Hanara. Takado, it turns out, takes delight not only in beating his slaves, but also young women and it doesn’t take him long to try to rape Tessia. As a result, Tessia uses magical powers she didn’t know she possessed to repel Takado and becomes Lord Dakkon’s assistant.
While Lord Dakkon and his two apprentices Jayan and Tessia take an annual pilgrimage to Kyralia’s capital – Immardin – Takado strikes by slaughtering one village after another. As Takado and his group of Sachakan rebels quickly make their way through Kyralia, growing stronger every day as they suck the life energy out of people, the magicians of Kyralia are slow to respond and fight back. Once they finally do fight back, and slowly begin to beat the Sachakan forces, Kyralia begins to contemplate being free of Sachakan rule forever.
Kyralia is very much a slow, bumbling, passive country. There is very little to suggest that the reason the Sachakans rescinded control over Kyralia because of Kyralia’s growing strength. Instead, Sachaka relinquished control because Sachaka no longer had the forces and strength to continue to colonise Kyralia. Though the Kyralians have now been free of empiric rule for a long time, they have not grown into a strong nation full of growth. Education is poor, there is little unity between the outer villages and the capital city and the nation as a whole is stagnated. They rely solely on the protection the magicians can provide, yet there are very few of them and the training of new magicians is carried out individually rather than collectively in a school. As a result, knowledge and new ideas are scarce as everyone keeps information to themselves.
Sachaka, meanwhile, has given up trying to rule Kyralia due to in-fighting and a lack of their own number of magicians. However, driving Sachaka to higher levels of success is the fact that there are more magicians than fiefdoms and the younger magicians are restless. What fun is owning slaves if you can’t put them to work tilling fields, serving you food and providing you with large amounts of money to spend? So Takado, and his like-minded allies, have started restlessly thinking about good old Kyralia, too silly to use slaves and truly make the most of the land they possess.
So when Kyralia comes under attack from a skilful, planned army, they really don’t know what to do with themselves. As a result, while hundreds of villages are being slaughtered and making a more powerful enemy, the Kyralians philosophise and debate and lose an ever increasing amount of ground and people. Their inexperience with defending themselves is proven when the magicians decide to wear their best robes to travel the country and horseback, and insist on bringing a large trope of defenceless servants with them to cook their meals.
Interwoven in this incredibly long account of a very short war is the story of Stara. Stara is half Sachakan and half Elynian (I’m just guessing about that – her mother is from a country called Elyne). Elyne is another country bordering Kyralia, but it’s a much happier one where gays are widely accepted and women can have sex with whoever they want. Stara is sent to Sachaka to stay with her father in a country where women are only slightly better off than slaves and the fact that Stara knows magic and has had sex before makes her of little worth to a prospective husband. Stara, by far the most likeable character in the book, spends most of her screen time complaining to her slave about how unfair life is for her, how terrible it is to be a woman, and how her father doesn’t love her. She is married to a man who is secretly gay and once Kyralia invades, she and a group of like-minded oppressed women decide to escape to the mountains to make their own civilisation.
As I mentioned earlier, this book is a prequel. The rest of the trilogy takes place, I believe from other reviews I’ve read, a few hundred years down the track. None of the characters appear to be present in the trilogy. After the first hundred pages or so, I found myself constantly questioning why this novel was published. Why were the events of this novel so incredibly important that, six years after the series was finished, it was necessary to come back and write this book? Apart from the last 50-100 pages of the novel, I have managed to describe in 600 words what it took Trudi Canavan 600 pages. So surely, in the first book of the trilogy, this bit of backstory was quite easily explained to make the rest of the series make sense, and if not, couldn’t a bit of editing in 2001 have fixed this? Even the events of the last hundred pages do not justify the need to write this book.
After a very slow, dry, fairly uneventful, passive and unemotional 500 pages, the pace does pick up slightly, but the events seemed so entirely at odds with the first 4/5 of the novel that it honestly could have been two separate books accidentally stuck together. In the last 100 pages, Kyralia, after centuries of passive acceptance of Sachakan rule, decide to become the aggressors, invade Sachaka and declare themselves in charge. The final battle on Kyralian soil is over in about two pages and suddenly the Kyralian magicians have amassed at the Sachakan border and stampede their way through an anticlimactically empty country to take over the capital. Along the way they completely abandon their former morals and slaughter all who cross their path and take their life power along the way. They meet with the Sachakan Emperor briefly, he then disappears (presumably killed though there’s no mention of it), Tessia and Jayan declare their sudden undying love for each other, and a bunch of scared Sachakan women run away to start a civilisation in the mountains that will include no men (good luck with that everlasting civilisation girls). Tessia finally discovers how to heal with magic, Jayan says he’s going to create a Magician’s Guild to train apprentices and share knowledge and a couple of magicians are selected to stay behind and rule Sachaka.
The novel then cuts to several decades later in a rushed epilogue in which Lord Dakkon, a main character, gets given one sentence in which it is explained he died in mysterious circumstances, Tessia and Jayan are expecting a baby and Lord Narvelan, one of the magicians assigned to stay behind, has been ousted for being too crazy and decides that, out of a lack of gratitude from his peers, he is going to climb a mountain and blow up a very powerful magical stone. Blowing up this magical stone instantly kills himself, and poor Hanara the slave who was forced to go along, and creates an enormous wasteland which Narvelan hopes will prevent the Sachakans from being able to truly regain power.
From finishing the novel and the reviews I have read since I have ascertained that the important parts of this novel that actually affect the trilogy are: the creation of the wasteland, the discovery of how to heal with magic, the creation of the Magician’s Guild, the creation of the secret women’s only cave and the fact that Kyralia and Sachaka have an unpleasant history. Again, I still question why this novel was written. God knows it’s not hard for people to grasp that two countries that share a common boundary will squabble over turf, so that didn’t need 600 pages of explaining. Most fantasy novels include the ability to heal with magic because it makes life more fun and, in most cases, rules out the dangers of Black Death, herpes and accidentally stabbing oneself. Most fantasies also include a magic school or training hub and there’s usually some forbidden, dangerous land that no one dares enter except our poor hero/heroine who has no choice. All of these things can easily be explained in a paragraph to a page at most without anyone feeling confused or cheated of a great story, so again, why was this novel necessary? And why, if they were indeed so completely necessary to the story that they needed further explanation, did it take over five hundred pagesbefore they were even mentioned?
Perhaps, had this simply been the first novel in the series, none of these issues would have been a problem for me and I could have overlooked the dull writing and the poor character development and the lack of continuity in character and plot I experienced throughout this novel. Then again, most probably not. The final nail in the coffin for me was, after including a glossary of terms most of which are not mentioned in the book, I got to Trudi Canavan’s acknowledgements:
The first half of this book was written during a very stressful and frustrating year, then the second half, rewrites and polishing in a tight six months.
All I can say is: my god Trudi Canavan, it showed.