Serial killer chase with a twist of the supernatural? Yipee! I Couldn't wait to read the book.
It was SOOOO bad.
It is completely contrived, totally unbelievable- and not the supernatural parts! The main characters are FBI agents, doctors and lawyers, but they all wander around like intellectually disabled 10 year olds. If you wouldn't encourage your second grader to get in the back of a stranger's van to play with their puppy, you will have a real hard time with most of this book. The author HAS a supernatural out- why also make the pro's retarded?
I'm going to generally describe some of the more ludicrous plot twists in the first 2/3 of the book to follow, it wont spoil the ending, but it will probably take some of the drama out of the incidents earlier in the story- so if you dont want any up-front data and still intend to waste your time on this book, consider carefully before you proceed.
The beginning of the book leads the reader to believe the killer was confined his entire childhood, he's 18 before he's ever heard of a train and is completely socially inept, terrified of women. But he's also a freaking genuis- and probably a ninja and lotto winner- the way he, on foot, faces down three FBI agents in a moving car. He manages to stop the car, shoots them all, before any of them get their guns out, then recaptures his victim from the back seat of their car, throws her over his shoulder and walks off into the woods... literally, with two swat teams right behind them, and the local cops all around. The people chasing him and everyone around them make the STUPIDEST DECISIONS EVER! An unemployed, socially inept orphan who grew up in a cave with a Bruce Wayne style billionaires tech gadget closet??
The killer goes out of his way to kidnap the EX wife of the behavioral shrink trying to catch him, then lets her go. A serial killer who involves his pursuers- nothing new here- but he captures her outside of all of his previous MO on every level, then lets her go without injury, seeming for no purpose except to scare the FBI guy into leaving him alone... By kidnappng his ex wife? Then letting her go unharmed? So where's the threat?
The FBI guy is so obsessed the wife spent YEARS demanding he stops, he wont, and THATS WHY she divorced him. Whats the point of the ex-wife kidnap? To make FBI guy stop chasing killer.. but wait, she tried to get him to stop- to the point she DIVORCED him over it... So the evil genius's thought process goes something like "how am I gonna get this FBI shrink- who already published my behavioral profile- to stop chasing me (what about the other 10,000 FBI agents who have the completed profile?) OH! I know, I'll capture his ex-wife in a violence free event, then I'll let her go. She'll run back and nag him about it!... more than she did BEFORE she divorced him over this exact same thing. BRILLIANT! Gotta work!" Huh?
He calls to taunt his hunters from a coal mine, where there is no cell signal, with a different number each time, so he must have "multiple untraceable satelite phones" (as per author). Sat phones only work in large open swaths of land and water, and they are extremely expensive, I dont know if an untraceable satellite phone exists, but if it does, a guy who works part time as a dishwasher holed up in a coal mine has a box full? Wonder why I cant get a direct TV sat signal in a drizzle if this guy makes calls from a coal mine?
He sends an FBI AGENT on this wild goose chase, and the FBI agent follows blindly, doesnt call any of his FBI friends, wont answer his cell phone and walks smack into the trap as fast as he can. Do not pass go, do not collect $200, do not answer your phone, do not tell your FBI friends what you are up to- sneak out of the hospital and run. Earlier, he got shot by the killer with two agents in the car with him and two swat teams in the rear, and now his best plan is to run off by himself? oh, and he's following instructions from the killer he got through a near death experience that he doesnt believe is anything but his own mind playing tricks on him? How am I supposed to believe any of this mess when the author makes such a good argument against it?
Want more? The lady lawyer ex wife divorces the FBI behavioral phsycologist becasue he is obsessed with the case. But we learn she has a super secret computer command center in her basement where SHE tracks the case too. No one knows she's doing this, but the SAIC in charge still includes his agent's defense lawyer Ex wife as one of only 3 people in the FBI task force strategy meeting to track and capture a nationwide serial killer who just kidnaped an agent on top of the 16 people he's murdered- where she plays a pivital role? Why is she in this meeting?
A FBI Dr. experienced something relevant to the case he cant remember becasue he was shot close to the time of the interaction, causing his death, and is later revived. He convinces another FBI MD (pathologist) to stop his heart to kill him again (oh, yeah, and make sure you can bring him back) so he can have another near death experience in order to remember the realavnat experience he had before. Huh? And the charaters go to lenghts to explain that a near death experience is your own subconcious mind acting under the effects of chemicals released by the brain perimortem- so how could it possibly be relevant? And He gets this pathologist to kill him TWICE- on PURPOSE, AFTER his very dramatic initial save. That's like someone trying to recover from a spinal cord injury by convincing his vet to shoot him in the back. Not to mention its murder. I think the FBI frowns on such things- and btw- these two met a week ago, yeah, sure, I'll risk my medical license and jail to perform a procedure to kill you and hope I can bring you back later so your subconscious brain can make up a story. C'mon! The autor goes to lengths to describe near death experiences and how a person's religeous beliefs come into play- but lets try it anyway. They dont try hypnosis to access the memory becasue its too suject to suggestion. but a near death experience is better?
Its just nonsensical. Maybe there is a great twist at the end, but after the other mess, who cares.