A very good novel following the debut novel of the Griffin Series.
Well, I should have figured when Zachary offered to help Eleanor in the previous book that he was dissatisfied with his life. When I started reading this novel, I was not sure what to expect. I mean I kind of knew it would be another rake-innocent girl story. I love those kind of novels, but at the same time I wanted to read something s bit different.
I have to say I got my wish.
Zachary is 24, the third son of a duke. He wants to become something, someone in life, who other people will look up to. He wants recognition from his family and other people for being someone other than a Griffin. So he tries different places and occupations but no sooner than he starts something he realizes it is not for him. The novel starts with Zachary's new fascination - the army. Sebastian is thoroughly against it. And so he sends Zachary to accompany their aunt to Bath, hoping the change will shift his mind. Zachary knows what Sebastian thinks about him and his plans, but he agrees to go with his aunt just to show Seb that he can go through a plan.
Unknown to him, his aunt decided to take a detour and visit her school friend, who has not one, two but seven unmarried daughters, almost all marriageable age. And this group literally falls on him, except their oldest daughter. He finds Caroline staring at him intently but other than that she made no move to approach him.
Caroline is a painter who wants to join an academy in Vienna, but her portfolio must include a portrait of an aristocrat. She doesn't have to look far, because right in front of her sits Zachary, who very easily agrees to be her subject.
They bait each other, seduce one another and then fall in love. But Zachary has plans to go to the army and Caroline wants to go to Vienna. So how could they afford to fall in love? Even if Zachary changes his plans, finds something new to become - a cow breeder for instance - Caroline never wishes to marry and become a polite society wife. And of course if and when Seb hears this blooming romance, he will do whatever he can to protect Zachary from a fortune hunter, as he thinks Caroline is. So how do they end up together?
In this novel I have read about how Zachary grows. He is very young man and there are so many holes in his personality. He is confused, rebellious, bored and may be a rake-in-becoming. But before reaching that hard shell, he meets Caroline who makes him face a lot of questions in his life. He slowly fills up those empty spaces in his character. He finds something that he can aspire to be and tries his best to complete all the things he started. He goes against Sebastian and in this way he learns to be his own man. He confesses his love to Caroline knowing he will be rejected. And when Caroline decides to leave him, he sticks to the life he carved out for himself. He grieves, but he doesn't turn his grief to a negative feeling. He gives Caroline time to realize what she had let go before pursuing her. I find his change, his growth, very interesting.
I liked Caroline's belief in herself and her talent. I liked how she went after what she wanted. But I hated her when he turned Zachary down. It tore me apart reading it. What I didn't like was the inconstancy of Caroline's character. I could understand why she turned Zachary's proposal down, but I didn't understand why she accepted him in the end. It was too quick. I absolutely dislike when in the second last chapter authors fast forward to the future. "Two months later" No. I don't want to read two months later. I want to know what happened in those two months to change the story completely by the last chapter. Not 5 lines saying they regret.
But other than that I loved this novel! Peep is too cute. Sebastian still intrigues me. Shay so far seems like a rake. Yup that means I will be picking up the next one in this series pretty soon!