Dragon Dreams (The Chronicles of Shadow and Light #1)
by Dusty Lynn Holloway
Dragons and elves and dwarves, oh my! Just my type of story. And a quest to boot. It's the story of a young human male, Nachal, who has been raised by a dragon sword master ("a title given to a dragon who had reach an unparalleled skill level in one of the five different major studies"), Cerralys. It is a time of war, if only during a lull in the fighting. Why are they fighting, well I am not quite sure. I never did find the initial cause of the war. Since Cerraly is a Dragon of Light, I will assume that this is a war of good against evil. Everyone knows that fierce fighting is going to begin again soon. Towns are being torched to the ground, the inhabitants slaughtered in the town squares. Fathers and sons abducted from their farms and families. Obsidian is on the prowl, wanting to usurp the throne and murder his brother. Banishment did not suit him; he was now determined to destroy the entire earth to assuage his anger.
Nachal has been experiencing dreams--dreams of a young women, an elf. Dreams of his death and the death of this young woman. Dreams in which he was unable to stop her death, dreams in which he watched her die. Obsidian was always there. He wanted her, was determined to have her. It was not clear to Nachal why this was so, but he knew that it was. The dreams had been occurring for such a long time that he knew her. He felt her resolve, her determination, her strength. Slowly over the past months, he found himself deeply caring for her, falling in love with her, and desperately wanted her. But how could that be ....
And the quest begins. The quest to find this strong, beautiful young elf women whom he would protect at any cost. And by thwarting her death, he could in turn somehow defeat Obsidian, the evil broth. He didn't understand her involvement in this war, but he felt deep down in his soul that she was somehow the key to all the evil taking place. Like all quest, the hero needs an entourage so off he goes to enlist his best friend, a dwarf. Off he goes towards Bremgar to find his friend Dhurmic.
I have no intention of revealing the twists of the plot; you will have to learn what happens to Nachal and the elf girl Auri yourself. This was a most enjoyable story. I found the characters engaging for the most part, the action quick moving and the plot engaging enough that the book was hard to put down. It was an fast read and mostly satisfying. Any young adult would find the tale most engrossing. I, myself an off to find book two as I have to find out what happens next. However, I found some elements that were troubling. There is a major fault in the transition from scene to scene. I found myself re-reading chunks of pages trying to find what I missed--how the characters got from one place to another. In one scene they are on a ship sailing to the elfin isle, the next moment riding a sea dragon. This happens a couple of more times. While Auri is somewhat developed as a charter; the characterization of Nachal and Cerraly is left to the imagination. Terrapin has been at war for many years so one would deduce that the soldiers in the kings service would be war-harden men. The dragon king more so. Nachal, too, has been raised to lead; he especially has been taught self-discipline, self-reliance, and the art of command; he had grown up "being tested, tried, and toughened". Yet both these warriors tend to cry and sob, wearing their hearts on their sleeves; maybe, though, I am just too acquainted with Ringo's and Weber's war-wearied soldiers. It seems to me, though, they would be more stoic in their response no matter how they truly felt. One major part of any quest is the entourage the hero acquires. Yet Dhurmic is hardly developed as a character. While I immensely enjoyed the trek to the dwarf town and the difficulties in crossing the Stratheim River, Nachal walked many days and miles away from the direction he needs to go to find Auri so that he could enlist Dhumic's aid, yet he is barely a passing character. His name seems to be thrown into the story just to remind us that he is there. He is never developed as a person. This is also true of Stephen, the young boy Cerraly adopts at the beginning of the book. He appears briefly again towards the end of the book. We see him watching Cerraly and Auri during their first meeting on the shores of Eldrin Sea. Again, it seems he is mentioned only to remind us that he is there. Auri's warder, Liran, an elven Watcher, reminds me somewhat of a Greek chorus. It is through his mind reading that we learn a great deal about Auri, but not much about him. The story revolves around Auri and everyone else is just window dressing to her. She seems an unlikely hero and her youth and inexperience shows. This is a great coming-of-age story. It will be interesting to see how she matures in the forthcoming books.