I’ve been desperate for ghostie romances because it feels like such an under-appreciated genre, so my expectations were admittedly pretty high for “The Library of Shadows”. And, sadly, this book fell short of those expectations for me.
I try to avoid making comparisons between books and other media because I feel like it can be super misleading and is an annoying tactic used by publishers that is definitely misleading, but this is going to be an exception for me. “The Library of Shadows” is literally Netflix’s Wednesday. No, like… seriously. There are so many similarities between that show and this book that it is actually absurd. And, look, I’m not saying this is on purpose, I’m truly, truly not. Books take years to write and develop, and Wednesday still isn’t even a year old. But I would think that maybe the author, the editor, someone would’ve seen the show and been like hmm, this might be a little too close for comfort and make some changes to the book before going to print. I guess not, though😭 At first, the similarities were more fun than anything, but not very far into the book, I feel like if you know how things in Wednesday go down, nothing in this book will be all that surprising in terms of character relationships, plot, or just… anything.
Aside from the Wednesday similarities, I think “The Library of Shadows” just overall suffered from a lack of development, mostly when it comes to the characters. I have to separate these out because I just have so many thoughts…
Este:
Este isn’t a bad main protagonist, but the biggest flaw with her composition is how inconsistent she is, especially in regards to her being fully comfortable being a loner but then suddenly switching to wanting friends/love/family on a moment’s notice throughout the story. I don’t think that this is something that doesn’t entirely make sense, in general, especially when considering Este has reasons for wanting to be on her own, but I think it was kind of just mishandled by the author and came off very stilted. More tell than show, I suppose.
Mateo:
First and foremost, I don’t believe Mateo as a boy from 1917. I guess the supposition could be that this comes from him watching other students throughout the years he’s been a ghost, but Mateo acted and spoke unlike someone you’d expect to act and speak if they were alive in 1917. There was one or two mentions of Este noting how Mateo moves gracefully or something like that, and you could tell this was the author trying to antiquate his character, but it just didn’t work when all his other actions and behavior negated this. Furthermore, the fact that Mateo didn’t act era-appropriate made him calling Este “dear” all the time super awkward and out-of-place. Like Este, Mateo is just kind of inconsistently written, especially when you consider how he starts off in this book as more of a mischievous character and pretty much loses that by not even halfway through with no sense of development to link that change in character.
Everyone else:
Truthfully, I don’t think any of these characters were safe from a lack of development. None of the side characters were that interesting (they were actually kind of annoying) and the circle of Este’s “friends” was a particular waste of time. We definitely needed those characters there to fill the environment given the setting, but I’d rather have seen classroom moments (maybe with Mateo causing havoc while invisible?) to fill that void rather than these awkward attempts at Este having a “friend group” when she was reluctant to even have friends. Again, a sense of development was missing here to make these friendships believable.
Aside from the characters, the romance in this story was also a let-down. I hate, hate, hate to admit when a romance is insta-love, but… yeah, this was insta-love😭 Este was clear from the beginning about how attractive she found Mateo, but then before even halfway through the book, her thoughts suddenly turned to ideas of getting closer to him and shit like that and it was kind of like okay, wait, where is this coming from. Teenage hormones, I guess? But that’s being generous. And, like, yes, we’d been seeing Este and Mateo working together, but this book as a whole was very fast-paced, so their scenes together didn’t really last long and there wasn’t enough of a presence of those key, subtle things happening between them to suggest a reason for them to start falling in love.
Given all this, I suppose the three-star rating should be lower, but honestly, I think this book had a lot of potential and just needed a few more rounds of edits to work out all the development issues. Because other than that, the plot was a good concept, the mechanics of the ghosts and Fades were interesting, and there was some great understated humor throughout! Some more time and attention was just needed to work out the kinks of this book.