I get this is a romance, and from 2007, but there were so many HR violations in the first few chapters, I couldn't finish reading. C'mon. Get with the times. When a trembling female needs a male protector, especially when she's in a bathrobe, she doesn't need sexual advances. On a professional level, when you are hired by a woman, you don't call her honey, etc. Above all, how DARE he take sexual advantage of a woman who has lost her memory. That's not love or romance, that's abuse. A true man would step back and give her respect and time to remember if she is married, in a relationship, etc.
SO MUCH HEAD HOPPING! In the middle of a scene there's another POV without line breaks. I wish the editors were more vigilant, not only with the physical edits, but with the changing times of what is sexually appropriate.