I did finish the book but it was troubling. Rating: minus 5
I think that I began a revision and never returned to it. Since I am revisiting all of my mildly negative reviews, this provides me the opportunity to write a more useful judgement of this writer and this trashy series. Trigger warning: Brutally honest opinion to follow of a very disturbed male writer with severe anti-feminist issues and a very pro-slavery agenda. When I began making reviews, I expected no one else to read them. After several years of harassment on this site, I now expect that at least one nutcase might and I aim to misbehave.
Before I write more, I will visit YouTube, a far more valuable site. This was only possible through the efforts of the following channels - LuckyBlackCat, Anna from Ukraine, Leeja Miller, Perun, KernowDamo, Sailing Melody, ATP Geopolitics, Kings and Generals, Times Radio, Trae Crowder, Cruising Crafts, Daisy Viktoria, Abby Cox, Ode to Joy Flashmob, 60 minutes Australia, Julie Nolke, The Bands of HM Royal Marines, Skip Intro, ILona Millinery, A Day of Small Things, Lizcapism, Verilybitchie, Hildegard von Blingin, Roomies Digest, May Moon Narrowboat, Deerstalker Pictures, Dungeons and Discourse, May, Abney Park, Space 1889, OrangeRiver, The Book Leo, The Clockwork Reader, Ukraine Matters, Atun Shei, ThePrimeChronus, A Cup of Nicole, Viva La Dirt League, Sarah Z, Mandy - web series, May, Smack the Pony, Discourse Minis, Mia Mulder, Max Barskih -Don't F@ck with Ukraine.
The world building must be addressed first and foremost. The background universe being the foremost issue, is funny. No. Never mind then. The writer has no sense of whatever period of the Age of Sail which he imagined that he was modelling. Instead of selecting a period, reading for a sense of the world in that period, then populating the story the writer chose a different course. His research seemed to have consisted of "Pirates of the Caribbean" viewings. Sadly I wish that I were being snarky but my judgement is solely based on what passes for the book's world building.
The society and its history are bad and badly drawn. There are only 50 or so citizen families, who between them own the entirety of the main character's home system. Every other resident is either owned by a citizen family or is a member of a tiny foreign professional community of which only one is identified. This is not an anomaly in the New London kingdom (?). The writer adds hereditary nobility to the cast, suggestive of a monarchy but no monarch is ever mentioned. The main character is herself of hereditary nobility (in her system the title is owner) which is carefully overlooked throughout the entire series.
It is suggested that this social system is normal practise. The citizen oligarchs in systems are both parliament and the voting population. In this system and others apparently, either men have not allowed the vote to females of the oligarchal families or oligarchal women voted to deprive themselves of participation in decision making. It is not made clear. Once women are not allowed to vote, men voted that women of their own families were forbidden to inherent property. This is completely in line with New London law and common.
The writer spends quite a bit of ink establishing the rightness of his little universe. His vision is not a future imaginary universe but his vision of a forgotten and surely missed past. The writer's overuse of direct exposition excusing very explicitly anti-human actions and concepts removed any question in my mind of the book's purpose. His sad expository story interruptions must have caused some readers discomfort. I read it as a guilty pleasure hoping that if I overlooked the worst, there might be an adventure story here. I am ashamed of that decision and barely was able to stomach Book two. I read as much as I could handle of the rest of the series, to write reviews as my penance.
The writer trips over himself in constant expositional insertions placing blame for this gender discrimination on the religious worlds somehow forcing this interesting perspective across the whole of the sector or women forced these restrictions on themselves across the kingdom. He writes that the core systems are more enlightened in terms of naval service but does not demonstrate this in the series. The "enlightened" core system civil societies are not shown to be different to the Frontier system societies. The status of women across this entire section of human space seems remarkably uniform.
The only women in the series shown to exercise agency are the Scandalous which is euphemism for Slut and other colourful terms favoured by the US evangelical, the Mormon sects, the US incel community and Men's rights groups. The only women considered as worthy of this denigration historically and in this book are the small number of children of the better classes. Women of the lower orders hauling heavy loads daily, managing small enterprises from canal boat haulers to flower sellers and often simultaneously raising children, both their own or those of relatives, etc are not considered as real people. They are though, considered useful as disposable victims in-universe. Their male counterparts suffer the same curse of invisibility in history and this series. This is a libertarian fantasy, ugly as they all are.
Another YouTube break is needed. This next was made possible by Biz Barclay, Jed Herne, SK Media, Sarah Millican, Tara Mooknee, The Russian Dude, Second Thought, Chris and Shell, Installation00, Times Radio, Kiko1006 - Empire of Angels, Lily Simpson, Mandy - web series, Shannon Makes, Up and Atom, Olly Richards, Dan Davis History, Crecganford, AllShorts, Silicon Curtain, Smack the Pony, Terrible Writing Advice, Lady Knight the Brave, Ship Happens, A Day of Small Things, Lizcapism, Break N Remake, Bobbing Along, Alysotherlife, J Draper, Alt Shirt X, Physics Girl, Gemma Dyer, Wayward Winchester, Mrs Betty Bowers, Atun Shei, Just Write, Lore Reloaded, No Justice MTG, Knowing Better, Meidas Touch, Jessica Kellgren Fozard, Narrowboat Pirate, Cambrian Chronicles, Times Radio, Beau of the Fifth Column, Hello Future Me, Jabzy, Ukraine News TV, Some More News, Andrewism, ASN Random, Ro Ramdin, Covert Cabal.
The scene of the slaves appreciating their Good owner was cringe-y. I saw a clip of "The Patriot" during a film criticism video by Brandon F, in which the slave owner protagonist is guiding a plough while a dozen of his slaves are lounging on fences looking on. Brandon went ballistic at that scene and that scene will make you ill. The scenes were almost identical. This is a sick writer but I am sure most readers based on the ratings found that scene in the book perfectly logical. Only in America. It is later explained that they are descendants of "indentured workers", who were shuttled from colony to colony in search of work. It is also shown that they can not leave their owner's land and they are not allowed to own property anywhere in the system. No money to leave, No right to property ownership if money were available, No human rights except those allowed by the owners and none are allowed by the owners.
The main character's grandfather is the most pathetic character in the series. He is used to justify this happy nastiness with regards to the status of the labourers. The grandfather in conversation with his granddaughter decries the frozen status of the workers/serfs until he more honestly claims, that "They knew what they were getting into". I really should have closed the book at that point but it was early in my Amazon odyssey and I was naive. The character refused to accept any responsibility for this disgusting society which he and his wife helped shape. While disgusting, the writer emphasising that character was a paragon of empathy was worse. The little princess sees nothing morally or logically troubling in the grandfather's speech. This exchange was a sad imagining of indentured servitude in North America or servitude anywhere and anywhen.
Coming back to this book after my time on Amazon, I now wonder if this was a representation of the North Atlantic slave trade. The politics clumsily and repeatedly delivered in his reference to historical precedence was a hint. The story-flow-breaking, direct exposition used to justify slavery in place of paid employment is the ultimate libertarian fantasy. That was a hint. Women of the nobility (in fact, if not in name) deprived of personhood being justified by female characters is the standard misogynist tactic. The fifteen year old girl being the voice of the accepting victim should but does not upset the Goodreads membership. The effective invisibility of the lower orders of both genders and all characters being straight and cis is the low end background default.
Given the above hints and my exposure to comments which included a number of American libertarians praising (not defending) US slavery, I have made a judgement. His exposition in defence of the horrible exploitation of entire populations in the book, is in fact meant as a defence of US slavery. A sad fact is that the US state of Texas within the last eight (?) years, have eliminated the term slavery from all history texts. It has been replaced with "involuntarily transported workers" or something like it. The US state of Florida have within the last two weeks redefined in all state texts, the period of slavery as a "humanitarian endeavour to rescue black immigrants from savagery and to teach them skills useful" for their future employment. Those two statements are actual fact, not hyperbole and not snark.
The limitations on women in the book are a sorry interpretation of the origins of and real nature of the plight of upper class women in the seventeenth and eighteenth centuries. I have no need to question his personal opinion on women's rights to abortion or even medical care. It does do a fairly good recitation of the Men's rights and other anti-woman talking points as well as the justification for every type of abuse of women, considered acceptable in the present. That he is American should surprise no one.
From comments and reviews which I was able to see previously, some fans of the book actually praised the "historicity" of this series. Some of those are female readers and thought the book charming. Those demonstrate the dangers to the mind over time of accepting substandard entertainment. Those were also the basis for my growing contempt towards many of the site members. Wilful Ignorance of history, science and cultural development are the writer's crimes. Assigning expertise to the writer of poorly conceived, badly written political rants is an insight into the reader's values. 😊
God, I need another break from this. This next is only possible courtesy of YouTube's - Smack the Pony, Mandy -web series, Armour Cast, Physics Girl, Terrible Writing Advice, Abbie Emmons, Snappy Dragon, Tom Nicholas, Kelly Loves Physics and History, Owen Jones, Truth to Power, History with Kayleigh, Bobbing Along, Lady of the Library, The Onion, A Life of Lit, Honest Trailers, The Juice Media, Emma Thorne, History with Hilbert, Eileen, Omeleto, Ben G Thomas, Annie's Literary Empire, JuLingo, RobWords, Digital Mermaid, Double Down News, DUST, Second Thought, LuckyBlackCat, Gemma Dyer, Historical Fashion, Break N Remake, Shannon Makes, OrangeRiver, IzzzYzzz, The Chloe Connection, Bernadette Banner, Hej Sokoly, Military History Visualized, No Justice MTG, Book Furnace, Sci-Fi Odyssey, Perun, Certifiably Ingame.
The writer also thinks that Dark Matter is an emptiness in space devoid of light, which for reasons not explained allows FTL travel. I read a comment on the one review which I am Allowed to see, praising his use of Dark Matter as scientifically grounded. Dark refers to that hypothesized missing matter required to explain observed galactic gravitational phenomena. Dark Matter does not interact with normal matter except though gravitational effects, hence it is invisible. Dark Matter does not cast a black veil over normal matter in four dimensional space-time. The Black hole swallows light and consequently can be seen only through its effects on light. Dark Energy is another hypothesized phenomenon used to explain the continuing expansion of space itself. I assumed all of that was general knowledge. For a more accurate and detailed explanation of those, see YouTube channels - Acollierastro, Sabine Hossenfelder, Arvin Ash, Up and Atom, Joe Scott, Sabine Hossenfelder, Science of Science Fiction, Elina Charatsidou, Dr Becky or other science educators.
This book is not worthy of more effort. Publisher indifference might be the answer, if so much of this low quality and nasty political views were not printed and touted across Goodreads/Kindle/Amazon rather than work from good Indie writers. I believe in guilty pleasures as a human right which should be enshrined in every national constitution but I can not conceive how the work of this and many other No Effort US science fiction writers can claim that place with so many readers on this site.
These books are standard US publisher choices for science fiction at the low end. The writer bypassed the No Effort and Insulting categories, committing his series to the consistently Abhorrent. Points for commitment. This series erased the last of my expectations from the low end of US publisher's science fiction selections. Since using Kindle for about five years, I admit to watching most of my fiction for the first time in my life. The streaming services provide usually better written and almost always more entertaining science fiction. YouTube host short film channels with DUST and Omeleto being awesome sources.
Admitting that Amazon/Kindle recommendations or Goodreads ratings and reviews were useless to me, I turned to YouTube not expecting much. I was very pleasantly surprised by the number and variety of science fiction channels. Those led me to lifestyle, educational, hobbyist and then essayist channels. Finally I stumbled upon my first book channel. 😍 These channels host communities of thoughtful, careful readers with varied tastes and interests but all of whom love the world of books. It is certainly worth visits to several for any reader and I have listed several. From sponsor spots on educational and essayist channels, I was introduced to the dedicated educational video sites all of which are worth a look.
About Goodreads value and discourse. About eighteen months ago, I wrote a short mildly negative review of Powers of the Earth, a poorly written salute to the January 6, 2021 hero by Travis Corcoran. He is a self-described libertarian and of course, a vocal advocate for the return of chattel slavery, an employee of an unnamed US agency and US veteran, a supporter of Putin's Russia. A nearly year long libertarian comment cloud demanded a response to their claims that white males created "all history". The writer commented among other things, that all black Americans would be deported to Jamaican plantations and that "rich blacks" should be deported to Brazil (?).
Claes Rees Jr/cgr710 wrote a comment finally declaring that They had "won" ( ?). I discovered that They had launched a year long assault of vile sexual and racist comments against channels which I mentioned. While They did not impress the Swedish essayist, the English solo boater, the Scottish PhD, the model builder and the many other female creators, They did increase the world's overabundance of unpleasantness. In also delivering the threatening image of the twisted American man-child to a broad multinational audience was probably a bonus in their little minds (assuming they possessed that luxury, of which I saw no evidence). Goodreads discourse is so interesting. USA! Yay ??
My YouTube picks of the moment.
Isaac Arthur, iWriterly, Alizee, Big Train -Mark Randall, Cunk, Mark R Largent, Pacific 201, Abbie Emmons. Sideprojects, Megaprojects, Jean's Thoughts, Smack the Pony. Silicon Curtain, Jake Broe, Owen Jones, Ben and Emily, Second Thought, Hello Future Me, Horses, Terrible Writing Advice.
About Amazon/Kindle/Goodreads. Please consider treating this site as potentially hostile. 😐
Ominous music begins. 🙂 The nutcase members are terrible but they will not necessarily stop at the offensive and sometimes threatening comment. After my Powers review, I was introduced to the mad lads of Kindle/Goodreads and there the real danger lies. There is according to ex-employees no oversight of Kindle and Kindle techs who resolve your Goodreads queries and issues. Something to think about.
After my Powers review, there were periodic Kindle service multi-day outages while my internet service was perfect. Some of the other harassment is listed on my review of Powers, Into the Black by Currie or "Dark Horse", a good novel by Diener. Goodreads shared my limited message history with a third party. The result was an attempt by Australian Intelligence to interrogate a friend for my personal information. It was apparently a favour through Pine Gap Centre for a US secret clearance holder. The US really should stop handing those out like party favours. I realize that this was an honour but being the odd duck, I was somewhat upset with Amazon and Australia. Amazon should consider revamping the customer service protocols. 🤗
You may not be targeted but as is said "What is once done, is more easily done again". Some precautions are in order. You might minimize profile information, remove lurkers (those friends who monitor but never post), be careful when using Goodreads messaging, trust nothing personal to Kindle, screenshot the odd and the ugly and it would not hurt to move Amazon/Kindle/Goodreads to a single use email address. Do not forget that the vicious man-children, both members and employees alike are Americans. Ominous music ends. 🙂
May we all find Good Reading! 😊
I am not a great advisor for the best of YouTube channels but these are Some of my favourite.
Acollierastro, Chris and Shell, LuckyBlackCat, Lore Reloaded, Some More News, Tara Mooknee, Hakim, Philosophy Tube, May Moon Narrowboat, IL Neige, Munecat, History with Cy, Cambrian Chronicles, Beautifully Bookish Bethany, Just Write, Eckharts Ladder, Lady Knight The Brave, The Clockwork Reader, Sabine Hossenfelder, Chloe Stafler, Tom Nicholas, TVP News, Bobbing Along, Boat Time, Ship Happens, Ukraine Matters, Diane Callahan Quotidian Writer, Physics Girl, Roomies Digest, The Welsh Viking, The Prime of Midlife, Fantasy and World Music by the Fletchers, Tibees, Snappy Dragon, Jill Bearup, Northern Narrowboaters, Interior Design Hub, It's Black Friday, May, Ask a Mortician, Arvin Ash, KernowDamo, Book Furnace, Sci-Fi Odyssey, Renegade Cut, The Bands of HM Royal Marines, Karolina Zebrowska, Shannon Makes, Bolero Flashmob, The Little Platoon, Verilybitchie, Female Warriors - Teresatessa, ATP Geopolitics, The Researcher, Danica Patrick, iiLuminaughtii, Dominic Noble, Big Train, BlondiHacks, Morgan Donner, Patrick is a Navajo, Dungeons and Discourse, Sarah Z, Lily Alexandre, Geo Girl, Octupus Lady, Planarwalker, Gutsick Gibbon, What Vivi did next, Abney Park, Malinda, Owen Jones, Autumn's Boutique, Adult Wednesday Addams - 2 seasons, Overly Sarcastic Productions, Chris Animations, Jessie Gender, Wayward Winchester, The Who Addicts, Travelling K, Perun, Quinn's Ideas, Spacedock, Squire, Kris Atomic, Nomadic Crobot, Narrowboat Pirate, Gemma Dyer, Dark_Ops16, Kathy's Flog in France, Viva La Dirt League, Steve Shives, Three Arrows, Dungeon Dad, Kazachka, Bernadette Banner.
I wish you a splendid morning, a relaxing afternoon, a wonderful evening, a pleasant night and may we all continue learning.
When a person allows Another to speak in their name unchallenged, they adopt Another's sins.
My grandmother