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216 pages, ebook
First published September 3, 2014





- Poor world building. No unauthorized persons were supposed to know about being lycan (or other paranormals) but everyone knew about the Paranormal Bureau of Investigations (PBI)? The (human) police helped the PBI but didn't know about them? A number of inconsistencies hindered my ability to grasp exactly how this world worked.Bottom line: Not for me. (Not even a little bit.)
- A F*cktarded Paranormal World. This world was built upon alphas and submissives. Okay, cool right? I love PNR! Well, what’s not so cool is that alphas chose their submissives and bit them (without their consent). Then these bite victims were given a “choice” to receive a second bite (and become the same paranormal type of being as the alpha (lycan, werewolf, etc.)) and a submissive OR die a slow and painful death. Hmmm, not much of a choice at all IMO. After the second bite, the alpha can control the submissive using the ‘alpha voice.’ There are no rules or expectations placed on alphas and some submissives are abused. Uh-huh, yeah. The submissive can eventually be set free by being given a third bite but it is in the alpha’s sole discretion whether to give that third and final bite. Fun times! NOT!
-Herman and Amanda Weiss
-Travis Chandler and Rick Barton
The happy-go-lucky MCs I’m supposed to swoon over giddily embraced their unequal power dynamic and thought that since Travis didn’t “make” Rick do anything too bad, it was all good. Well, I didn't buy it. Rick just got out of an abusive relationship. As an abuse survivor, the power dynamic in this world would make my skin crawl. Rick’s acceptance of Travis and embrace of this paranormal world rang false and left me feeling incredulous.