I enjoyed the books I read in Anna Hackett’s Hell Squad; the stories and characters were fresh and authentic. When I saw this “new generation” series, I decided to give it a miss because I did not see how that would work. But Jameson, book one in the new Hunter Squad series kept on appearing on my suggested reading list, and I thought: Why not? So, I downloaded the book and left it on my TBR list for a while and finally got to it this week. In a nutshell, it was an okay read, but it did reinforce my initial hesitancy, and I don’t know if I will be continuing with this series.
Thirty years after the defeat of the aliens (known as the Gizzida) at the hands of the human survivors, the Hell Squad members have procreated, and their progeny is introduced in this book. The focus is on Jameson, the son of Marcus and Elle Steele, and Greer, the daughter of Shaw and Claudia Baird. The two grew up together and were practically raised as siblings/best friends. Both have been harboring non-brotherly and sisterly feelings for the other but have never acted on it. Jameson never made a move on Greer because he thought he was not good enough for her. Greer similarly kept her feelings to herself because Jameson never showed a romantic interest in her. When a monster attacks the site where Greer is managing the building of a dam, her first action is to call Jameson for help. With assistance from the rest of the Hunter Squad, Jameson and Greer battle the monsters left behind by the Gizzida. Thus begins an action-packed adventure that keeps Jameson and Greer in each other’s orbit, forcing them to address their suppressed feelings for each other.
What worked for me was catching up with Marcus, Shaw, Cruz, and their respective partners, and I liked that they were doing well and still living their HEAs. The introduction to all the “children” and getting insight into their personalities were done well. Then there was the fast-paced action that made the book interesting and kept this reader on her toes.
However, using the word “monsters” for the new creatures did not work for me. It reminded me of the monster-in-the-closet stories old folk told to scare children into behaving. I wish the author gave these creatures a different, more adult-like name—that one word, unfortunately, removed any chance I had of viewing the plot and characters as adult-themed. To add, none of the characters’ ages were mentioned; the only indication given was that the war was won thirty years ago. From this, I deduced that the characters were thirty years of age or younger. Something else that did not help were the constant references to their parents (the first generation). I understand there is a link between this series and Hell Squad, but the constant mention of Marcus et al on almost every second page strengthened the notion of this being more YA, and I just could not take the action and characters seriously despite the spicy scenes.
Speaking of the characters, I liked everyone, including Jameson and Greer. Although, the story could have done with more background information on Jameson and Greer’s backgrounds in the relationship arena. Going by the information that was given, Jameson must have lived a monkish existence because there is no mention of any other woman—in his past or present—during the years he was pining for Greer. On Greer’s side, one recent boyfriend was mentioned; no one else, though. Also, if you’re pining for someone, why get involved with a different person? I honestly do not see the logic in that, but this might explain the high rate of divorces we have in the real would—people settle, and for the most part, it does not work out.
Other things that bugged me were:
• All these “children” practically grew up in the same household given how close their parents were/are, and now it seems they will be partnering up with each other (at least North’s book will have an “outsider” joining them, so there’s hope). I don’t know, hey, it feels just a little bit incestuous.
• Greer (as so many of this author’s FMCs) being the aggressor in all things bedroom related. She seemed to always be thinking about s€x, even in the most dangerous of situations.
• Jameson and Greer’s declaration of love had me confused, but Jameson got it right, at least. Greer’s response, however, had me scratching my head. If a guy tells you he loves you, and you respond with “I’m falling hard and fast for you too …”, then I have questions. What’s more, one of Greer’s monologues included the line “I am going to fall in love with Jameson” like it’s a choice …
Aside from a few proofing issues, the writing and storytelling was okay, but it felt like it was aimed at a younger audience, and I am not sure if that was the intention here. So, if you enjoy YA, then you will certainly enjoy this book.