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Shadows of Asphodel #2.5

Clockwork Menagerie

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1914. Konstantin would love to hide in his laboratory and dissect the clockwork dragon captured from Russia, but the Archmages of Vienna have other plans. He finds himself shipped off to St. Petersburg as the scientific attaché to an ambassador. His orders? Look, but don't touch. Of course, he considers this an impossible request with so much enemy technomancy to explore.

To make matters worse, Konstantin has to work with the dashing zeppelin commander Himmel, a man who should also be untouchable. They can't act on the smoldering attraction between them without risking it all. Faced with an illegal relationship and a devious rival technomancer, Konstantin might not return from this mission in Russia without conquering the forbidden.

102 pages, Kindle Edition

First published September 1, 2015

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Karen Kincy

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Karen Kincy writes books when she isn’t writing code. She has a BA in Linguistics and Literature from The Evergreen State College, and an MS in Computational Linguistics from the University of Washington.

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1,541 reviews172 followers
September 13, 2016
I'm not always up with this genre in terms of what's expected. I don't read a lot of steampunk, I think this may have been called dieselpunk, or technomancy. However, the setting was really well drawn, I felt a sense of time and a sense of machinery and inventions and wonder and worry at what these things could do. How they could be brought to life - and how dark that aspect was. The action was good, as was the suspense that was built.

I felt the romance between Konstantin and Himmel was lacking sizzling chemistry. There was a sound backboard to work with - Himmel, more comfortable being with a man. Konstantin, a bit more caught up in his work, fearful of/the danger being caught with another man in this time and place.

I haven't read any of the other books in this series but I didn't feel lost because of that, the MCs were the ones that were concentrated on.

A more in depth review to come to the blog shortly.
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1,685 reviews90 followers
August 26, 2015
I received an ARC copy to review.

Beautifully written. I loved both Shadows of Asphodel and Storms of Lazarus, so I knew I would enjoy this novella. Karen Kincy has a a way with words and how she creates her characters into these amazing people. The world of technomancy is just all too interesting.

Konstantin was an archmage battling to save his home and with who he was. I loved him because he found a way to balance both out. He was nerdy, quirky and downright smart. He knew things were going wrong with Russia and the Countess and no matter who he told and how they laughed at him about it he didn't stop to uncover the truth.

Captain Himmel is downright bold, brave and naughty. He knew what he wanted and didn't care about the law much. He had his points where I was annoyed like when he tried to arrest Konstantin, but he recovered towards the end.

This being my first true m/m read I was intrigued by the romance and sexual aspects of it. I liked the cat and mouse chase they had going on. It wasn't too intense, but the sex scenes were short, sweet and descriptive enough.

That ending was just too cute! I was so happy and giddy for both Konstantin and Himmel. Great novella!!!
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659 reviews102 followers
November 3, 2015
I've read and liked the two books of the series so I read this novella, too; all the better that it focused on Konstantin, an interesting character who could have more adventures on his own.
I knew there was going to be romance and it was fine, the series had a nice balance, but the story here is just a backdrop for the romance, and a dull one at that.

Both the protagonists behave either stiffly or as giddy teenagers and there is neither tension nor intensity. The story has too many gaps and contrived plot devices (), it's predictable and not convincing.

The ending was consistent with the boring ride. I could have safely skipped this one, it adds nothing to the series.

“Why did you decide to tell me tonight?” “Because this might be my only shot.”
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Author 5 books394 followers
September 19, 2015
I love it when an author takes a break from the main characters to give a compelling minor character his story. Konstantin has been a pivotal secondary character through both the first two books in the series and he started up a bit of romance in the second book so it was fun to get his quirky, distracted, and sometimes impulsive thoughts and actions and see him bumble his way toward his chance at love.

In the second novel, Konstantin makes a chilling discovery about one of the clockwork machines sent to attack the Prussians. He is busy learning the secrets behind the clockwork dragon and its soul-powered heart when he is called away to act as a scientific assistant to the Archmanges' Ambassador to Russia. He is both pleased and nervous about the fact that Captain Himmel is to pilot their airship and accompany them on their tours.

Konstantin is drawn to Himmel, but is afraid to jeopardize his career, his freedom, and possibly his life if they are caught being together. Plus there is the fact that he has no idea how to be with Himmel. He is better with inventions and technomancy than people. Himmel is patient and supportive even when, after meeting the cunning inventor of the soul-powered clockwork weaponry and clashing forces, Konstantin goes against his orders to bring down evil.

This is a novella-length story and as such it moves along quickly. But happily, it doesn't stint on all that I have come to enjoy about the series. The author did a great job of altering the narration to suit Konstantin's personality. He is brilliant and curious about all things tech and inventions, but he is relatively naive as to making his way in social situations and relationships. He actually hurts Himmel when he panics and withdraws, but then when faced with death realizes what is truly important.

And shorter though this is, it doesn't short change the reader on action and intrigue. Konstantin is following the trail of an evil technomancer (inventor magic wielder) who enslaves souls to power his clockwork inventions. It's illegal and immoral, but the ambassador doesn't want to cause a stink over it. The rival technomancer is devious and has the home ground advantage and more ruthlessness. It was exciting and fun to see Konstantin who has been the geeky behind the lines support guy, get in on the action.

So a fun in between adventure for a minor character in the series. This one could be read as a standalone in a pinch, but works best in order. Lovers of blending steampunk (or in this case, dieselpunk) and paranormal romance might want to pick this series up.

My thanks to Curiosity Quills for providing this book in exchange for an honest review.
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1,368 reviews78 followers
September 24, 2015
When I initially started this series with the first book, Shadows of Asphodel, I was very unsure of Konstantin -- a scientist with the Archmages, specializing in technomancy. He initially wasn't very personable, he was quite gruff at times, certainly not the kind of man to let loose and have some fun. With the second book, Kincy changed all of that, giving dear old Konstantin such personality and loading him up with such endearing characteristics. Not only is he so incredibly personable now as the series moves along, he's also a very conflicted man.

In a time when homosexuality and anything remotely regarded as sodomy is deemed illegal and severely punished, such constraints weigh rather heavily on poor Konstantin. In love with a man, one who shares his feelings, no less, Konstantin is deeply troubled. Acting on his heart's wishes could not only get him arrested, it could also cost him his job. The one he loves so dearly. Acting on his brain's wishes ensures he misses out on what could truly blossom into something beautiful. When Konstantin is tasked with a mission taking him to Russia, he's both elated and dismayed. Elated, because airship Captain Himmel will be traveling alongside him. Dismayed, because Himmel is the object of his desire.

Clockwork Menagerie was such a welcome addition to Kincy's Shadows of Asphodel series. As I've stated before in my review for the second book of this series, I absolutely adore how Kincy embraces sexuality and diversity, and this novella is a perfect example. Despite this being so short, it was jam packed with both action and emotion, and let's not forget the steam. As with the other books in this series, the sex isn't overly graphic, although I was hoping it would be for this installment :)

I absolutely recommend this novella, but only after the first two books have been read. Not that that's a hardship, mind you, because this series truly is wonderful. Full of diesel powered technology, magic, and airships, Kincy has created such an interesting, alternate world with this series, putting her own touches and spins on real events and people. It's a series that's quickly growing to my list of favorites and one that I look forward to with each new installment.


**eARC received from the publisher, Curiosity Quills Press, in exchange for my honest opinion.
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Author 104 books769 followers
September 26, 2016
In a world that is much like one to be found in a Steampunk universe, it may be 1914 and some of the politics and the fact that there is a world war are familiar, but it is a very different version of reality than the one we know from our past. Clockwork machinery rules the day, but steam does not drive it, rather it is powered by magic (technomancy), diesel (hence the author has dubbed this Dieselpunk), or the highly illegal energy of souls (necromancy). The Austro-Hungarian and the German empire under the leadership of the Prussians are fighting the Tsar and the Russian Empire, while France and other nations have not yet joined the war. Zeppelins and giant soldiers in the form of human-powered exoskeletons are supporting the fight, and numerous other fascinating little details make this alternate reality come to life. The result is an imaginative action/adventure that is suspenseful and very entertaining.

Konstantin is an archmage from Vienna on loan to Prussia so he can help figure out the superior Russian clockwork war machines. He is dedicated to the work in his lab and not very sociable, and his preference for men will get him killed if he is discovered since sodomy is illegal. But there is a certain zeppelin captain who is hard to resist, and when they are sent on a “diplomatic” mission – read: they are supposed to spy for the Austro-Hungarian/German alliance – to St. Petersburg, Konstantin and Theodore give in to temptation. Of course this has disastrous consequences, and added to Konstantin’s attempts to stop the Russians from using illegal means to win the war, things get a lot worse for both of them before they have a chance to improve the situation.

If you like imaginative worlds that are only vaguely related to our own, if two men who fight almost insurmountable odds to be together are your thing, and if you’re looking for a suspenseful adventure with lots of mishaps, funny moments, and some fantastical technology, then you will probably like this novella.


NOTE: This book was provided by the author for the purpose of a review on Rainbow Book Reviews.
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377 reviews
September 11, 2015
I am not new to fantasy or historical or romance part of the genres. But, still I found Clockwork Menagerie to be something new. Konstantin (I do not know before now that I love this name - I think it's the spelling part that does it ;) ) is an Archmage and has struggled a lot to have achieved what he is now. He is working hard to save his homeland and be with the man he loves. Himmel, the love interest of Konstantin, is the polar opposite of Konstantin. While Konstantin is shy, nerdy and smart, whereas Himmel is bold, spontaneous and open. I loved the chemistry between the two and their decisions towards the end. Apart from the romance, there is some interesting mystery added to the story, which keeps you completely engaged.

Although this is a part of the series and a companion novella, I have no problem understanding this book. So, it can be read as a stand-alone and I highly recommend to read this one.

In a few places, I actually felt like Himmel, not knowing what to do or less interested when Konstantin speaks about technomancer. But otherwise, I loved this book and it was really surprising that I loved it when I least expected it. :)

Definitely recommended!
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1,655 reviews95 followers
July 1, 2024
My first taste of Kincy's steampunk world and it won't be the last.

THE ADVENTURE: I loved that it took us to Russia with an underdog for a hero. The technology is very steampunk with a touch of paranormalcy which puts the series right up y alley.

THE ROMANCE: This novella is MM romance.
It didn't consume the story although it's there.
It's not too raunchy too, but it wasn't fade to black either. Kincy just didn't linger on the acts.

CLOCKWORK MENAGERIE is paced well with a plot that's ambitious yet executed in a very straightforward manner. Very satisfying shorty and I am picking up the series, for sure!
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538 reviews99 followers
September 15, 2015
This review originally appeared on my blog, Leeanna.me.

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CLOCKWORK MENAGERIE is a novella set in the dieselpunk world of the Shadows of Asphodel series. While the series mainly follows Ardis and Wendel, this novella focuses on Archmage Konstantin and zeppelin captain Himmel. The two are part of a diplomatic mission to Russia, Austria-Hungary’s enemy. Konstantin is just supposed to observe Russia’s technomancy, but he’s distracted by two things: his attraction to Himmel and the illegal use of souls to power clockwork creations.

You don’t necessarily need to have read the main books in the Shadows of Asphodel series to understand CLOCKWORK MENAGERIE, since the novella has different main characters and takes place mostly in Russia, but I’d recommend checking them out for full understanding of Karen Kincy’s universe. Or use CLOCKWORK MENAGERIE as your introduction to the author’s world. Because Konstantin is an archmage, there’s enough explanation about the magic in this series that it’s not hard to understand what’s going on. Konstantin likes to geek out a lot about the magic, which I enjoyed.

For the most part, I enjoyed CLOCKWORK MENAGERIE. It’s about 100 pages, so a good length for a novella. The story doesn’t leave any loose ends, which is always nice. And it’s a story I liked, because Konstantin and Himmel go up against a devious Russian technomancer. Well, Konstantin does. Himmel wants to follow orders, which are to look but not touch. Konstantin manages to get himself into scrape after scrape, but luckily he has Himmel to rescue him. You know how even super smart people can have no common sense? Yeah, Konstantin’s a great example of that. For example, he remembers to pack magical supplies but no food for himself.

The romance in CLOCKWORK MENAGERIE is the aspect that didn’t work for me. I was intrigued by a relationship between Konstantin and Himmel, because I could see it, but I wanted more development for me to really believe it. I understand their attraction to each other is forbidden -- it’s 1914, in Russia -- but still. I think if the novella were a bit longer, there would have been more room to expand on their attraction and relationship.

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Disclaimer: I received a copy of this book from the publisher in exchange for an honest review.

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346 reviews26 followers
November 25, 2016
I received this book for free in exchange for an honest review. This does not affect my opinion of the book or the content of my review.

Plot: Konstantin is an Archmage, sent to St. Petersburg with an ambassador to view some of the technomancy Russia has to offer, with strict instructions to not cause any trouble. Of course, trouble finds him when he realises who they are up against, and he will do all he can to stop them causing more harm to the world. Along for the ride is Himmel, an airship captain who Konstantin has feelings for.

My Thoughts: I love Konstantin, and I love the fact that he is totally the opposite of straight. This is a romance story of sorts, with his (forbidden) love interest accompanying him and the ambassador on the trip. But it still felt weird reading about this 'verse from his point of view.

It was cool to see more of the technology behind the series, and it was fun being back amongst it all for 100 short pages. I wanted more (as always) and think this would have benefited from being a little longer. Parts of the story felt a little rushed, and the romance didn't really grab my attention.

Which is a bit weird, because I quite favour m/m romance stories over heterosexual ones, but I think because there was plot the romance sort of got squished into a corner? I didn't feel the threat that the characters did about it being forbidden (though I did rather enjoy their interactions over a dog haha)

The plot itself was okay, it sort of felt like it deserved a novel of its own with the discovery of how the Russians are powering their tech; and the lengths they'll go to to win. It baffled me a bit as to why they'd be venturing into enemy territory, but I guess these things happen for peace talks and goodwill and all that jazz. And I guess, when one nation wants to show off :P

As always, the writing is great and really hooks you from the start. And that cover! Look at it! All of these novels have such lovely covers to just stare at.

In Brief: All in all, a nice companion novella to the Shadows of Asphodel series. I wouldn't say it was strictly necessary to read it, but it's still fun to revisit this world through another set of eyes!
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295 reviews32 followers
September 17, 2015
*Free copy from the publisher for an honest review*

I actually read this book as a standalone. I hadn't read any of the previous books in the series, Shadows of Asphodel and I think it did pretty well just on its own. I wish I had known it was a part of a series. As much as I liked reading it, I would have preferred to have gone in with more knowledge about the world and the characters.

That being said, let me start with the story line. It was flawlessly done as far as I am concerned. I am a newbie to Karen Kincy's writing and it is a great introduction to her. I would definitely check her other works out when I have the time. The plot was decisive and well suited for a novella. The start is done well with the right amount of intrigue followed by the action part to end with a non cliff hanger finale. That's what I liked most about it.

The characters were developed only to a certain part. I would have liked to know more about them and their views of the war they are part of. Only few of their thoughts are revealed in this book. Maybe more light will be shed in the coming books?? Konstantin seems to be a bit delicate and at times childish while Theodore comes across as a strong person. They are complete opposites and that's one of the strong points of their romance.

Now coming to the romance element of the story, I felt it was a bit too instant but it might be because I missed the previous books. The book has steamy M/M scenes. If I had known about it earlier, I would never have picked up the book, to be honest. I just skimmed those parts since I wasn't comfortable with it and it was something out of my comfort zone.

The parts I absolutely loved about the book were the steampunk, sci-fi/fantasy parts. Those rocked my world!! For that alone, I would rate it a 5 star but alas I have to take the other points into account too. The concept of technomancy and psychothaumaturgy were totally new and intriguing for me. I am hooked to them and I hope to read the series from the first book!

In short, the novella was a very fast read and I finished it in a few hours.

My one line review : A fast paced sci-fi fantasy with intriguing storyline

My rating : 4/5

My reread factor : 3/5
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1,429 reviews213 followers
September 5, 2015
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Disclaimer: I received a free copy of this book via the publisher in exchange for an honest review

This one was such a good interlude and refresher on the Shadows of Asphodel story line. I loved Konstantin since the first time we met him and he grew into such a great character that I was super excited to see that he got his own novella. I love him and Himmel together and I was really excited to see that this story focused more so on the two of them than anything else.

I enjoyed that we got to see a bit more about the technology of the clockwork mechanisms. I liked that there is someone just as smart and determined as Konstantin to use what is available to win the war. But I also liked seeing Konstantin's moral compass. I almost wish he had struggled a bit more between whether or not he should use the type of weapons that the Countess was using.

I have an issue with novellas some times because they advance the plot too much that you have to read it before reading the next book in the actual series. But I didn't find that with this one. Do I think it will be helpful to read this before the third in Shadows of Asphodel? Probably. But that doesn't mean you have to.

I liked that there was no shying away from the romance in this one; this relationship was treated the same way as Ardis and Wendel's. That was the best part. Like I love when authors do this.

I rated this one 4/5 stars because I found myself smiling the entire time I read it. It was beautifully written (of course) and it made me fall a little more in love with this series than I already was. I would love to see more of the series from Konstantin's perspective!
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2,325 reviews191 followers
October 12, 2015
I was delighted to come back to the steampunk world of the Archmages of Vienna and their technomancy, a Europe on the brink of war, and zeppelin adventures.

Even for as short a time as this 90-page novella allows, it was so worth it. I had the chance to reacquaint myself with a couple of interesting characters such as archmage Konstantin Falkenrath and captain Himmel.

Sucked into a diplomatic venture into imposing Russia, they have to uncover the deadly secrets behind illegal use of soul magic in machines. At the same time, they deal with the perils of giving into an unlawful attraction between them. I'm not used to this kind of MM romance, but i can only confess it was sweetly exhilarating as I was fond of the characters, and their feelings and attitudes were so touchingly conveyed. And, yes, hot too.

With a fast pace, lots of things going on and an engaging plot of war politics, this Russian adventure packs an entertaining combination of dragon machines, heartfelt and impossible romance, deadly enemies and swashbuckling zeppelins.

The end came too quickly as I'd hoped for a more concrete conclusion, yet I have the inkling this is the beginning of a beautiful future of stories featuring the daring couple, or maybe a well-planned link to the next full-length novel. Either way, I'm more than happy to have read this adventure with characters that feel so real and clever. I really enjoyed Himmel's stiff and loyal stance, and Konstantin's endearing inadequacy and brave morals. I hope to see more of them soon!

First reviewed on Torre de Babel http://torretadebabel.blogspot.com
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1,264 reviews38 followers
August 24, 2017
See my full review here: http://alyshadeshae.com/2015/09/22/blog-tour-clockwork-menagerie-by-karen-kincy/

Disclaimer: I received an ARC from the publisher for an honest review.

You know those books that you want to like, but don’t and can’t figure out why? What about those books that are so poorly written you can barely get past the words to read the story? Or maybe you’re aware of those books that start out with such potential and then just fall short of the mark and you’re more disappointed than anything?

Well you’re in luck! Clockwork Menagerie is none of those! I will freely admit that I have not read the first two books in A Shadows of Asphodel series, but I’m rectifying that mistake very soon. I’m not going to say that the novella is 100% stand-alone, because I do think it would have made more sense to me and been even more enjoyable if I had read the preceding books, but I could barely put this book down. I started reading it one evening, passed out while reading (I’m sure you bookworms know that problem), and was almost late to work because I simply had to finish it the next morning.

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5,621 reviews326 followers
September 16, 2015
Review: CLOCKWORK MENAGERIE by Karen Kincy 

By far my favorite of this exciting series [SHADOWS OF ASPHODEL], this companion novella is "Dieselpunk Romance" for the gentlemen. Technomancer Archmage Konstantin and Airship Captain Theodore Himmel pair off. What a glorious spark, matching a world-wise Navy captain, with that pilot mystique--bold and daring; and a true research scientist: dedicated, diligent, nerdy, and sometimes potentially dreary. Put these two on a diplomatic mission from 1914 Prussia to The Court of St. Petersburg--oh my!! The troubles they can cause--and the troubles that are caused for them [not to mention the illegality of their relationship]. Will Love triumph over tribulations? Read this adorable novella and see! 16 Stars!!!
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Author 38 books271 followers
August 6, 2017
I picked this up on Amazon not realising that it was a sequel. That meant that some of the progression felt rushed due to it leaning on character building from previous books that I haven't read. Still, it was easy enough to read.

The world is fascinating and well done, and the author has a talent for descriptions. Unfortunately, the pacing felt very rough, it was more like a sequence of essential scenes than a smooth progression. The reason this book got two stars instead of four is the ending. It was sudden, unsatisfactory, and followed by a bonus story that takes up 10% of the novella.
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1,539 reviews6 followers
July 14, 2020
Novella length tale set in wartime with magical mechanicals key to the battles. Archangel an explain pilot portrayed as the good guys. Entertaining, well written plot with excellent descriptions of environment.

.As I am a gatherer of books, I collect books and ebooks from a variety of sources: Goodreads wins, Bookhub, BookFunnel, emails from authors and publishers, and others. I do lose track of their sources. But, as a reader, I feel I should give an honest, unencumbered review for all I read.
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1,381 reviews18 followers
January 9, 2020
3.5 stars

Didn't realise this was a novella in the midst of a series, but it absolutely explained the super steamy kiss that happened on page 1. Phew.

Really enjoyed the steampunk and magic system. Read the excerpt on Wendel, from Shadows of Asphodel, and I think I'm hooked.
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424 reviews23 followers
June 7, 2016
The Skinny
All of Europe was a mess of alliances, each country eager to defend its honor.
It is 1914 and Konstantin is busy trying to dissect the clockwork dragon. However, he has orders to act as a scientific attaché in St. Petersburg. The mission must uphold diplomacy fully, but once Konstantin discovers a sinister and unethical technomancy practice in his Russian rival he begins to cross the diplomatic lines. Add into the mix Captain Himmel, who makes Konstantin’s cogs whir even though such a relationship is illegal, and it makes for a strained and secretive mission in more ways than one.

The Players
Konstantin – an archmage who specializes in technomancy
Himmel – naval airship captian; selected frequently to command zeppelins for travel missions
von Bach – Austria-Hungary ambassador to Russia; in charge of the diplomatic mission
Alexsandr – the Russian guide to von Bach and Konstantin
Zinoviya – dowager countess of Russia; owns the clockwork menagerie

First Impressions
I’ve already read the first two books in the series, so I wasn’t sure what was going to pop up in this short novella or where it would lead.

Second Thoughts
The book continues where the second installment in the series left off. It is still 1914 and the brink of WWI is about to come crashing down, despite the Hex that the Archmages created for protection.

Konstantin, an archmage of Vienna, is set off on a mission to Russia with a diplomatic ambassador. It becomes very clear to Konstantin that he is only allowed to look at the various technomancy workings in Russia. He is not to discuss them or touch them. For a man who lives for his research, this is a hard thing to keep from doing, especially when he finds himself a mere pawn in the game. He must come to terms that his own works have caused destruction and death just as his enemies’ creations have.

“Oh, dear, didn’t you know?”

Heat scorched his face. He had been trotted out like a pawn on the chessboard, ignorant of the bigger players. “Why you?”

“Tsar Nicholas finds my talents useful.”

“Your clockwork dragon killed dozens of men.” He hated how his voice shook.

“And your hands haven’t been stained by a drop of blood.”
In the Russian clockwork dragon Konstantin has discovered a new and unethical practice in technomancy: Siberian chrysoberyl. The highly unethical and restricted practice is a magnified version of pyschothaumaturgy – “a soul trapped in a diabolical mechanism.” This requires capturing a soul during its moment of death and imprisoning it, creating a beast that possesses an immense power. A highly illegal practice. As Konstantin struggles to prove to the world what he knows to be true, he must make sacrifices, perhaps at his very own cost.

He had never seen Siberian chrysoberyl outside of the latest scientific articles, since the Russian government kept a chokehold on its distribution. Whoever built the clockwork dragon needed approval from the Tsar himself. It would be marvelous to talk with the technomancer who engineered the dragon, but of course that would be consorting with the enemy.
I found Konstatin’s character to be very charming, even when distressed. He tries to always be proper and polite, but he is also very much a nerd and it shows in his own inner conversations with himself. The most comical moment was either when he pretended to be an American to avoid suspicion or wanted to set up a makeshift labratory in Himmel’s hotel room.

Konstantin stroked his beard. “I need to tinker with the temporal magic. Might I use your hotel room as a makeshift labratory?”

Himmel arched an eyebrow. “Try not to burn down the building.”

“I won’t.”

“Or electrocute yourself.”
I loved the initial description of the dowager countess. She is portrayed as something so delicate.

A slim young brunette tilted her head, listening to a gentleman, diamonds sparkling in her ears. Red and gold butterflies perched in her hair, as if she were the most delectable flower, wings quivering in the slightest breeze.
I also loved the relationship that Himmel and Konstantin have with one another, despite their actual feelings for one another. They work together well and their romance must be heavily suppressed in order for them both to survive in their worlds.

I definitely recommend Clockwork Menagerie. It is a captivating story with intrigue, enemies and forbidden romance.
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Author 28 books53 followers
September 25, 2015
Intermingling the fast-paced action of a spy thriller with solid character development against a background of clockwork mysticism, Kincy produces a story that will appeal to a broad range of speculative fiction readers.

Archmage Konstantin would like nothing more than to devote his time to studying the clockwork dragon Vienna has captured from Russia. However, his undeniable, and very illegal, mutual attraction to Captain Himmel leaves both his schedule and his notes in a mess. And no sooner has he convinced Himmel nothing can come of it, than Vienna assigns him as technical advisor to their ambassador to Russia; a role that involves taking extended passage on Himmel’s dirigible. Between Konstantin’s desires and his lack of political experience, the question isn’t whether he will embarrass himself but which social construct will collapse around him first.

The novella is set in a Europe politically and socially at the early 20th Century where complex clockwork (called technomancy) rather than combustion forms the backbone of military might. Parallel to pure clockwork, but banned by international convention, are other techniques that produce more efficient mechanisms.

While the extent of technomancy and its dark companion are revealed as the book progresses, it is not clear at the start (perhaps because this is a supporting volume to an existing series) why Konstantin is called a mage rather than an engineer. This somewhat blurs the line between acceptable machinery and not, potentially robbing Konstantin’s early suspicions of some of their impact.

However – possible nuances of engineering and magic aside – the story is a well-crafted example of a character’s knowledge and experience revealing a threat that their own superiors would rather continued discretely than ended publicly.

In parallel to the international politics, Kincy weaves the developing relationship between Konstanin and Himmel. Showing Konstantin’s mix of disgust and joy while writing the intimacy itself in the language of romance, she portrays the internal struggle of someone who doesn’t fit society’s model of normal without letting that in-world judgement become an objective assessment of sexuality itself.

Although the relationship flows naturally from the characters rather than being a salacious addition, Kincy does not hide the physical aspects of stolen moments of passion. As such, while the book is in nowise erotica, readers who prefer romance to be kisses and implication might find some scenes too graphic.

Konstantin is an interesting variant on the socially awkward scientist, shaped but not defined by his sexuality. His obvious intellect provides both successes and failures in international espionage, sometimes because directness catches others off guard and sometimes because he does the logical thing rather than the acceptable thing. This balance makes him both plausible and sympathetic.

The supporting cast are equally composed of plausible tensions: Himmel is the bluff military officer yet is also politically adept, and has reached his own unstable accommodation with his sexuality making him both support and obstacle to Konstantin’s well-being; the Ambassador is insightful yet supports the shallow veneer of international politics over the benefits of truth.

Overall, I enjoyed this novella greatly. I recommend it both to readers seeking steampunk driven by characters not technology, and those who enjoy a good thriller.

I received a free copy from the publisher in exchange for a fair review.
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56 reviews1 follower
November 5, 2015
Archmage Konstantin Falkenrath is called to act as a scientific attache for the Austria-Hungary Ambassador to Russia when he is sent on a diplomatic mission to discover what they can about the technomancy weapons the Russians have been deploying in the war. Captain Theodore Himmel is the decorated navy airship captain assigned to the mission, and despite the many laws against it – with punishments up to and including death – both the Archmage and the Captain find themselves desperately drawn to each other. His orders are “look but don’t touch” but this command becomes increasingly difficult to follow in more ways than one. Konstantin finds himself in over his head in matters of magic and love, and must decide with the help of his loyal Captain if saving his country and his relationship are worth his job…and possibly his life.

I am not a big fan of romance, at all, and I didn’t read the two books this novella comes from so I didn’t know the characters, but, come on, how could I not read it straight through when the first line is “Pity the clockwork dragon had been so violent”?! I definitely now want to read Shadows of Asphodel and Storms of Lazarus to learn more about Konstantin and Himmel, and this technomancy war they’re in. I don’t feel like I got to learn a whole lot in the novella – it’s clear they were established characters, and the novella focused more on the development of their relationship (both sexual and romantic) with the diplomatic mission as a sort of background plot to that. It does stand on its own, however, and I didn’t feel that I was missing anything important by reading it this way.

I felt about this novella as I do about most romances. While the background plot was incredibly interesting, it was not very detailed and served mostly to further the romance and sexual encounters. The characters were not very in-depth. They personified certain personality traits (Konstantin was curious and socially awkward, Himmel was loyal and passionate) and didn’t have any real growth throughout the story, nor was there any real description of background characters (who were overwhelmingly male). While the story took place in some beautiful locales (Austria-Hungary, Russia, Vienna, an airship) there is no real detail about the world around them. The novella is very tightly focused on the relationship.

If you’re looking for a titillating read about forbidden love, this fits the bill. It’s an easy, fun read with a series to follow up on if you’re interested in more. It isn’t a serious read so it’s perfect for a lazy night on the couch with something hot to drink, or for those long commutes on the bus when your brain needs a break after work.

**I received a free ARC in exchange for an honest review. My review first appeared on my blog on 9/15/15**
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Author 3 books10 followers
October 10, 2015
I would like to thank Curiosity Quills Press for an ARC of this Novella in exchange for an open and honest review.

This was a good story; my only regret about it is that I wasn’t paying attention when I requested it to see it was a novella and book “2.5” in a series I’d not yet read. Totally my own fault as Curiosity Quills did say it was what it was, but I’m a bit of a diva about coming into a series midway and so couldn’t give this story a higher grade as I wasn’t caught up on it all.

Saying that, I did enjoy reading it as a stand-alone type story, but would have liked more history on the world in which it was set, which I’m pretty sure the first to books would have given me.

My only other minor gripe (it seriously is minor) is that it was more of a romance story than the urban fantasy/ steampunk I had been hoping for. I have no problem that it is “male on male” romance as that’s perfectly natural, and I don’t mind romance stories… but I am getting frustrated at the amount of paranormal, supernatural, steampunk and urban fantasy stories that seem to need to rely on sex and romance to be an interesting read. The romance in this book was good. The minor sex scenes were done well and didn’t hog the lime light. I just feel it would be nice to see more urban fantasy (and similar genres) not needing the romance sub-genre to get by. Okay, getting down off my little soapbox on that one. ;-)

Other than that, I loved it. I want to know more about the world in which it is set, its technology, history, etc. So that is a well written story when the world captures your entire imagination and draws you in.

Would I recommend this book to others? I would mention it in passing to those interested in urban fantasy and steampunk worlds, but would warn people this isn’t the first in the series and would suggest they check out the first two books before reading this one.

Would I buy this book for myself? Possibly. The excellent writing style and world created intrigued me enough to go check out the first two books, but as they too seem to heavily rely on romance to be a story… I’m really undecided as to whether I’d buy them to read them. I’m more likely to be a cheapskate and look out for them in my library catalogue first to see if I could cope with the romance and see if it was the lead genre or the sub-genre of the stories.

In summary: A good story concept, a good little novella adventure. But not the first in the series and not a pure urban fantasy/ steampunk genre tale. Contains romance and should include this in its genre statement.
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766 reviews1 follower
January 16, 2017
Review written for Love Bytes Reviews.

Ordered to accompany a diplomatic mission to Russia, Konstantin can’t help but feel out of place. With no knowledge of the Russian language, strict orders not to touch anything or speak out of turn, and an experiment awaiting him back home in his lab, Konstantin would rather be ensconced in his own space and left to his own devices. Add one devastatingly handsome zeppelin commander to the list of things he can’t touch and the trip has officially become a world class example of torture. When an unexpected discovery leaves Konstantin stranded and without a job, he’ll have to make a choice: go home in shame or take a chance and do something that will either end the war or land him in jail.

I’ve never heard of dieselpunk before but I really hope this isn’t the last book I read that uses it. (Think steampunk only instead of mechanicals run on either magic or steam, they’re run on magic or diesel fuel.) I’ve also not read any of the previous books in the series as they’re all M/F as far as I can tell but this was a great introduction to the world the author has created and I found this interesting enough to give the other books a look. While some knowledge of the previous books would’ve been helpful at the beginning of the story context wise, enough information was given along the way to know exactly what was going on so I had no problems understanding and enjoying the story. I adored Konstantin; he was a great protagonist and it was hard not to admire his determination to do what was right no matter the cost to himself. I really enjoyed Himmel, as well, though I do wish I had more of his back story. He and Konstantin seemed well matched and his actions both during and at the end of the story spoke volumes about what sort of man he is.

The setting of the story was great, the world building was great, I loved the characters and my only complaint is that I wasn’t ready to be done with them yet. I’m not sure if the main characters here will appear later on in the series again but, if they do, it will be another point in favor of checking the other books out. If you like steampunk I’d highly recommend you check this one out, even if you don’t give the other books in the series a second look, as it was really well done and really enjoyable.

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984 reviews23 followers
September 30, 2024
I am not into m/m books. At all. So why did I read this one you ask? I had no idea it was one. When I requested this, it was because it was a Shadows of Asphodel novella and I probably only read the first paragraph of the synopsis. I knew it was from Konstantin's point of view but I figured it would just be a short tie in of his to the main story. Should have read that second paragraph sooner... But I already had it, so I had to read it. And honestly, it took quite a while to finally get good. Eventually things picked up toward the end and I was glad for that.

It was easy enough to get over the m/m moments between Konstantin and Himmel because they made me laugh each time, it was so awkward. And thank gawd it didn't actually go that far. I don't think Konstantin was a very good main character. He was so out of place everywhere he went and with everything he did. Except, of course, when it came to the technomancy. I disliked Himmel for the simple fact that, considering the consequences of what could happen to them, he was incredibly pushy and too open about being more than friends with Konstantin.

When Konstantin is assigned a diplomatic mission to Russia, he's definitely not happy about being taken away from the clockwork dragon. Nothing goes well for him there, especially when he's told to observe only and don't touch. Making things worse is Himmel being there and the feelings he stirs in him. But things go from bad to worse when Konstantin finds out who is responsible for the illegal act of capturing souls and trapping them in machines. Being told to leave it be, he takes things into his own hands which only makes things worse for him. Eventually he manages to expose the criminal and deal a great blow to the Russians, but it costs him something big. I did not like that ending though.


Copy provided by publisher via Netgalley.
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296 reviews98 followers
September 7, 2015
Clockwork Menagerie was an interesting chance for a little insight into Archmage Konstantin’s work and his budding relationship with Himmel. I enjoyed both of their characters and was happy to realize that this was their story. As usual Kontantin did annoy me a bit, he just seems way too immature for his age but it didn’t hinder my enjoyemnt of the novella too much.

As usual Karen Kincy’s writing is superb, the plot flowed effortlessly and the descriptives are amazing. I love living in a new world through her eyes and the taste of St. Petersburg that we got in this novella was rich and gorgeous.

The deiselpunk aspects of the story – the technomancy and psychothaumaturgy – boggled my mind just a bit, but it’s easy enough to set ones questions aside and just go with the flow of the story.

Magic is Magic after all.

I love how imaginative the Shadows of Asphodel series is!

The M/M romance in this one was something completely new and a bit outside of my comfort zone. To be honest, although we all knew where these two were headed, I wish there had been a bit more development of their relationship. It just seemed a bit too rushed and inevitable feeling. (I skimmed through the few love scenes that there were…they were relatively short and tastefully done but were fairly explicit.)

I do wish that Kincy had taken a bit more time to delve into the feeling of each of the men regarding the wqar efforts and the cost involved. Konstantin has a bit of a crisis of conscience toward the end of the novella and Himmel makes some compelling ppoints which I felt would have been a great jumping bourd to delve a bit deeper into both of their psyches. I was disappointed that Kincy chose not to go there.

And I can’t deny that I missed Ardis and Wendel.

But perhaps that is due to the nature of writing a novella. There’s just never enough time to develop the story as much as in a full novel.

All in all, a strong effort and a solid addition to the Shadows of Asphodel series. I definitely recommend reading Clockwork Menagerie if you’ve enjoyed the first two books in the series.
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418 reviews10 followers
September 9, 2015
Clockwork Menagerie is a very quick read set in the rich world of Karen Kincy's Shadows of Asphodel series. It takes place in an alternate historical world on the cusp of WWII, and is categorized best as steampunk or dieselpunk. We follow archmage Konstantin as he finds himself dragged into perhaps more political intrigue than he'd like -- he wants to stay in his lab and do his experiments, but life has other plans for him. He winds up in Russia where, well, drama seems to find him.

Konstantin is a fun character -- he reminded me a lot of a combination of the scientist characters in Pacific Rim. Nerdy, kind of awkward, but very very good at his job and, when it comes down to it, has a good heart, too. I liked the glimpses that we saw of his relationship with Himmel, which is fraught with danger in many ways. I'd love to read more about them, and am curious to see how they will figure in to any future books in the series.

Despite the story's brief length, the plot felt fully realized and I felt like I had a good grasp on each of the characters throughout. I could easily see this as perhaps an HBO miniseries or something with its quick pacing.

If I had any complaint, it's that sometimes it was hard to tell just how much time had passed in between scenes. There is a lot of travel (zeppelin, train, etc.) over long distances and I was never really sure if the characters hadn't seen each other for a day, a week, or more. It's a minor quibble to be sure and didn't interfere with my enjoyment of the story.

Although this novella is part of a series, it stands alone very well. I've never read the other books in the series and had no problem following along. Readers familiar with the series will of course have greater understanding of the world/context for the characters but I didn't feel disadvantaged by coming in fresh. If anything, reading this makes me want to go back and read the first two books in the series.

Finally, this story does have some sexual content so is probably best for more mature readers.
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Author 1 book47 followers
September 21, 2015
(I received a free copy of this book in exchange for a review).

(This review may contain spoilers).

Having read the previous two books in this series, I was really happy to have the opportunity to read this novella set in the same universe.

I liked being able to see Konstantin and Himmel in this story. Although I would have liked to see the events expanded a bit, it was nice to see the hints in the previous book come to fruition.

It was interesting to see Konstantin from his own perspective. Although he was a well-rounded character in the previous books (and there were times I felt sorry for him), it added a new dimension to be able to see him as a main, focal character.

I thought the author did a good job of showing Konstantin’s struggle with what he wanted and the laws that were in place. It was interesting that, for all the advances in society, the people didn’t have the freedom to love those they were attracted to. I found it really easy to follow Konstantin’s struggle… and see how he wanted to be with Himmel but was scared of losing everything.

It was good to see some of the clockwork technology, though I wasn’t sure how the soul elements really fit in. Because the book was shorter, the villain wasn’t as well-rounded as they could have been.

I liked seeing Konstantin with the dog and it was good to see him interacting with the other characters. I was a bit disappointed that the elements of conflict shown to begin with weren’t expanded upon… but I did believe in the main characters’ feelings for each other. And by the end, I was rooting for them to get together.

It was a bit disappointing not to have the opportunity to see more of the characters from the previous two books, since I would have liked to see how Konstantin viewed them. I did like the fact that he was still an active character and didn’t just rely constantly on his magic, or for someone else to save the day.

I’d definitely be interested in reading more books in this series in the future. This was quick and easy to read… but it did leave me wanting more.
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307 reviews33 followers
September 14, 2015
I am so happy I was able to pay a nice visit to the world portrayed in the Shadows of Asphodel's books. This alternate history with gears, zeppelins, complicated magic, war and engaging characters is a must read! I've contributed to Karen Kincy's Kickstarter campaigns to finance her previous Shadows of Asphodel books, thus I was thrilled I got the opportunity to read & review this story for its Blog Tour launch!

This novella gave me all that I expected regarding previous Karen Kincy's stories. Even got me wanting moooreeeee.

Konstantin is such a great character. Is fun to learn more about his passion for his work, his desires and his loyalties.

The relationship between him and Captain Himmel was believable and perfectly described. This was the first m/m story I've read and I'm glad for it. Love is an amazing theme to weave a cool story.

The setting was absolutely brilliant, I felt the cold weather, the sense of time and space while doing that snowy exploration with Konstantin: from The Trans Siberian Railway descriptions, to St. Petersburg.
The food was so yummy: salmon, spicy ciders, borsch garnished with dill and sour cream, walnut salad, beef stroganoff, tarts stuffed with cherries and sandwiches made with love. I was mouthwatering with these delicious fictional meals! And I laughed when I imagined Konstantin and his allergy to potatoes and tomatoes riding on top of sacks of potatoes.

And a nice canine companion: Fang is so cute! I wish she gets a more prominent role in the future adventures of Konstantin and Himmel :)

Overall I hope there are more stories around Shadows of Asphodel.

- I received a free copy of this story from the publisher, Curiosity Quills in exchange for an honest review.
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647 reviews78 followers
March 20, 2016
Mind Blown!

I have been eyeing this series since the first book popped up in the blogosphere. Heck, I even own the first book, but haven’t read it. After finishing this short novella, the first book may be the next book I read.

It doesn’t appear to be necessary to have read the first two novels in the series to understand what is going on in “Clockwork Menagerie.” This isn’t always the case with series novellas. This short peek into Konstantin’s and Himmel’s lives will give you a taste for the dieselpunk genre and the style of Kincy’s writing.

This short peek is a love story. A HOT love story. If you are not open to other lifestyles you may want to steer clear though. I found the blossoming relationship between Konstantin and Himmel to be genuine. There was nothing odd or uncomfortable about it. It was real. They (Konstantin and Himmel) were real. And that was refreshing.

Some of the political information about the war and the technomancy/psychothaumaturgy details were a bit over my head. Just enough hints were given in the text for this to not be too distracting and I have a feeling when I continue with the other books in the series, all will become clear. And I’m looking forward to cracking open my copy of Shadows of Asphodel soon after finishing “Clockwork Menagerie.”


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