This is a tough review to give because there *was* something about this book that kept me turning pages until the end. There was a spark of possibility here... something in the simple, inviting writing style or in the magic perhaps. I kept thinking I should put it down because by 1/3 of the way through I had identified too many weaknesses to give it an honest 3+ stars. But like I said, something just kept me going. There was so much potential here! I believe this is a new author and I can honestly say that I would consider giving future books of hers a try, after she's a bit more seasoned.
Here's the bottom line: The story lacks tension and there is little plot to tie it together. There was no defining story problem. Scenes came one after another, not advancing anything. Which is why it's so strange that I kept reading. Maybe I'm just really into dragons. (Okay, I AM really into dragons!)
Keira and Aaron fall in love very quickly. They say "I love you" to one another by about 1/4 of the way through. His dragon nature aside, two people meet, fall in love, get married, go back to his castle, and meet his family. Keira has some moments of doubt when faced with his dragon nature, but the doubts pass quickly as she repeatedly tells herself that loving him means loving all of him. A nice message but delivered in a tedious way.
I thought at first that the town's fear of dragons would cause problems and in the end it did, but this subplot was not woven into the fabric of the story very well. It was certainly not something I could point to and call a main story problem.
IMHO, this story desperately needed chapters from the dragon's point of view. Sticking with Keira's point of view gave it a limited scope and kept us from getting to know Aaron (the dragon) as well as I would have liked.
It is worth noting that while there is a lot of kissing, cuddling, and foreplay, the actual sex scenes are skipped. I am not a fan of curtain closing in the best of cases, and in a book with this much kissing, I find it particularly awkward.
There were a few other scenes that were skipped/skimmed over that would have been better if they had been fully expanded/explained. (Show, don't tell.)
Oh, and there were too many exclamation points!!! :)
But despite all that, I didn't hate this book. It just felt a little unfinished.