Overall I enjoyed the story. It had a diverse character set, perpetual conflict, and decent resolution — but the fundamentals were really lacking.
The character development was almost non-existent. It’s safe to assume that most people reading this book are familiar with the bridge crew of the Enterprise, but that doesn’t mean a refresher course and author interpretation of the characters wouldn’t go a long way to getting the reader immersed in the story. There were efforts made, but all through dialogue, so nothing memorable.
The environment wasn’t accessible. The most important part of Star Trek stories is the thing that gets the characters where they are — the Enterprise. That stage wasn’t set. We are just supposed to know the layout, where everything is, and how everything works. Which again, considering most readers that are picking up the 32nd book of the Star Trek TOS book series are familiar with the ship, there’s an opportunity to immerse the reader in it with some basic interactions, descriptions, anything at all.
The first 30 pages could have hit the cutting room floor. Honestly, it’s surprising I made it through them, but I really wanted to escape into space for a couple weeks so I plowed through.
I’m being very critical of this book but here’s why — I REALLY liked the story. And I’m leaving these notes here as notes to myself about what not to do if I am ever in a situation where I get to tell a story within an already established universe.
The initial complication was scary, the Enterprise essentially gets “lost in space” and their first mission objective is obviously to get home. They get lost by going through a gate, some sort of wormhole that uses ancient technology. They come to find, that alien race is long gone, and this tech is thousands of years old.
They then encounter two alien races that have been at war with each other for hundreds of years. Why? Because they’re scared the other race will destroy them. Why do they think that? Because every habitable planet in this galaxy has been annihilated with weapons of mass destruction. This destruction was actually caused by the race that designed the gates, but these current alien races don’t know that. They each just assume the other has planet killing technology. They don’t.
When Captain Kirk eventually brings these two warring tribes to the peace table, and they walk away with a truce, they ally with each other, and decide that the Federation are the planet killers.
So now the crew of the Enterprise, in a beat up ship, has to get home and activate the gate before these new allies kill them, and they’re on their way to do that when they’re abducted by a third alien race that holds them prisoner. So what do they do now?
So the story is great. It was a great idea. It just wasn’t executed well.
Not unhappy I read it, but wouldn’t read it again. Unless I was adapting it for a screenplay, which, if done well, would be exceptional.