I was looking forward to finishing this book, a) so I would be done with it, and b) so I could write this scathing review. First and foremost, let me say that the writing was overall good, but the editing for the third book was clearly incomplete (typos, repeating language, etc.). The story was convoluted, and the end of the conflict with the Ro was unnecessarily drawn out. But my real issue with the series, and especially this last book, was the characters. I hated every single one of them. Here’s why.
Mac, the protagonist, was written to be a snarky, intelligent, scientist. However, somehow she ends up being the object of everyone’s admiration and love/lust, the focus of a whole species (why did the Ro care about her anyway?), and the only person in the room ever able to figure anything out, ever. In some ways, it felt as if the author (also a biologist) was living her own fantasy in the form of Mac’s character. Aside from the unrealistic importance given to her, Mac herself was just a crappy person. She treated grad students like children (sorry, they’re not, and I’ve had my doctorate for a while now so I can say that). She objectified her significant other – the “yummy” thing was so incredibly off-putting, I almost stopped reading the first time Mac said it. Also, “get your own spy” as if her boyfriend belonged to her? Barf. Finally, her lack of interest in aliens or alien species was, to me, completely off-putting as a fellow scientist. You don’t have to be a biologist to find other species fascinating.
As a Latina, Emily’s depiction in the series was a very sore spot for me as well. She was the stereotypical not-serious, sex-crazed Latin woman, whose technical accomplishments were only mentioned in passing, with the focus always on her looks and her blind pursuit of men. And her huge contribution at the end – finding the Ro portal which saved everyone’s lives – was mentioned almost as a footnote! I literally said out loud, “What the Hell?” because Emily saved everyone, and it is never mentioned after the fact.
Other characters were laughable in their flatness. Nik had no endearing qualities (no, “yummy” definitely does not count) nor any unique personality traits. While Mudge and Fourteen were better fleshed out, saying “Harrumph” or “Idiot” over and over again is not character development! Nor is their being obsessed with Mac (Ew…just ew.). The Sinzi were all the same, and the other species added unnecessary complexity to their stories. The mention of the species of pregnant females being the cause of conflict due to pregnancy hormones was incredibly sexist, unnecessary to the story, and just plain lazy writing.
All in all, the second and third books get one star from me, but I liked the first book, so that brings my rating up a little bit. The story was dragged out in the last two books, and the fact that Mac never actually made it to her destination was incredibly frustrating as a reader.
I was really excited to read this series as an author and a scientist, and because it had a high score here on Goodreads. But, sadly, I was very disappointed by the end.