Pretending

by Shanna Clayton

Top 100 Amazon Bestseller! Four years. That’s how long Wesley Kent has to live with the girl his dad shacked him up with, and then he can collect his inheritance and escape small-town life. He gets through the prison sentence by pretending Dahlia Reynolds doesn’t exist. With three years down and one more to go, he doesn’t expect much to change. That is, until the girl that’s not supposed to exist sharpens into his reality, making it impossible to ignore her. Three years. That’s how long Dahlia Reynolds has been living with a total stranger. She’s convinced herself Wesley Kent is no more than an illusion in the hallways. It’s easy to do, especially since that same illusion has never spoken more than two words to her. But one mistaken identity later, and she finds herself caught up in the mysterious world Wesley lives in. One by one, he begins knocking down the safe, comfortable walls she built, leaving her wondering what his motives are. Does he want to expose her—or free her? CONTEMPORARY NEW ADULT ROMANCE Pretending is a FULL-LENGTH novel at 90,000+ words. Recommended for 17+ due to mature language and adult situations.

Genres: New Adult, Romance, Contemporary, College, Contemporary Romance, Mystery, Young Adult

340 pages, Kindle Edition

First published March 11, 2014

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Reviews

[Wendy'sThoughts · Rating 3 out of 5]

3.5 Indian Jones, Walks Like An Egyptian, Hidden in Plain Sight Stars

There are people out there doing things I only read about. They are having adventures right now as I type this. Some are actually living that Indian Jones life looking for the lost treasures of mankind. I don't usually think about all of these scientists, archeologists and treasure hunters unless there is a huge discovery or exhibit mentioned in the media.

This is the basis of Pretending. You have two young adults who have been surrounded and nurtured with these types of activities because their parents were involved in these pursuits. Both Wesley and Dahlia are from different families but tied together due to Wesley's father's will. It states both must live under the same roof of the Kent estate during their 4 years of college. After the 4 years, they split the estate between them.

Both of the players dislike each other; there has been circumstances and mistakes made by Wesley's dad. From his will, he is trying to bring these two together in the hopes they will find each other while living under the same roof.

Three years have passed and both characters have stayed on their side of the estate... something which was easy to do. Also, Dahlia has been disguising herself... wishing to melt into the woodwork... not wanting to stand out in the home or on campus. She covers her beauty with make up so she appears plain and unrecognizable. She has her reasons and the few times Wesley has seen her over the years, he hasn't paid much attention.

There paths cross one day in the library where glorious treasures from all over the world are displayed amidst the first additions. Dahlia has decided to give the room some well needed love... since the passing of her stepfather... she could hardly bare to be in the room... the memories so dear. She is up on a ladder, cleaning the dust and Wesley thinks she is one of the maids... he doesn't see her as Dahlia... he sees this beauty and is struck.

They converse, he is smitten; she thinks he knows who she is and as they both get very frisky with each other.... Wesley asks for her name... putting the brakes on the whole "let's get physical thing"... Dahlia cannot believe it and stomps away from Wesley.

So, we have these two, who are both treasure hunters... the historical, priceless trophies of times gone by unknowingly searching for the same prize; new feelings confusing the dynamic of their relationship and outside forces looking to undercut both of them achieving their goals.

This was a fun read with some interesting side stories... the secondary characters had enough happening where they may be up next for books...
I did get a little confused and my belief in all which was happening stretched... but over all it read fast and made me think.
It also approached the issues of betrayal; cheating and jumping to the wrong conclusions. Stubbornness also played a huge part of the story.


A gifted copy was provided by author/publisher for an honest review.

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[Seena Seena · Rating 4 out of 5]

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4 BookwhoreASaurus's!



College boy Wesley Kent and College girl Dahlia Reynolds.
Girl tries to be "invisible" and boy is a cocky bastard.
Boy sees girl for the beauty she is.
Girl tries to fight it.
Throw in a ex boyfriend.
Nerdy neighbor.
2 BFFs (And to be honest which I did not like)
Throw in all the above and you would think TOTES TYPICAL, TOTES CLICHE.

But it's not.
It's far from it.

There was this mystery and intrigue that held me from get go to right to the very end.

The whole treasure hunters, maps, swords and secret groups is the nice touch that makes this story not as typical and over done as other college books.

The story is solid, the writing is solid and characters are also solid.
I honestly can not wait for more work from Shanna Clayton.

[Kellie Maddox-Ward · Rating 4 out of 5]

An Invisible Girl.
A Big Man On Campus.

Forced to share a house for 4 years, all to get their inheritance.

One night changes the dynamics in the house.
After 3 years of ignoring each other.
Suddenly he wants her, she doesn't want to want him.

He's not the arrogant ass she thought he was.
She's not the ugly gold digger he thought she was.
But they both have secrets.
Secrets that make them the way they are.
Secrets no-one knows.

Throw in secret societies, treasure hunting (Yep, real treasure hunting!), secrets, hurricane's, betrayals, shit friends, good friends and a trip to Morocco and you have a winner!

Solid writing by Shanna Clayton that had me hooked till the last page. Will def be checking out her other books.

A copy gifted from author in exchange for an honest review

[Shanna Clayton · Rating 5 out of 5]

Uh, duh...it's my book! Of course I'm gonna give it 5 stars :D

[Raquel · Rating 4 out of 5]

Pretending was a fun, light-hearted read. I was in dire need of one of those, too! Dahlia Reynolds has spent the last three years living in a mansion.. Alone.. But not really. She's barely seen her roommate during those three years and although she's always wanted a friendship with him, she's yet to achieve anything. Wesley Kent has spent the last three years ignoring his roommate, longing for the day he graduates and inherits his half of the fortune. However, when a chance encounter brings these two together, Wesley can't manage to get her out of his head, and so begins his chase.

There wasn't anything remarkable about Dahlia--and I don't mean that in a negative way. She's clearly been through a tough time with both her mother's, and then Harland's, passing. Still, one of Harland's last wishes were that she finish her degree and in order to do so, she'd have to live in the Kent Estate for the duration of those four years. While Dahlia has no interest in Harland's fortune, she does want to fill one of his last wishes, so she stays. Honestly, Clayton surprised me when it came to revealing Dahlia's reasons for her disguise. I had pictured a much worse outcome, and while it was still difficult for Dahlia, I'm glad it wasn't what I had originally thought of. That being said, I found Dahlia to be a stubborn, loyal friend--and I love those kinds of protagonists.

Wesley was also stubborn and persistent in his own right. However, it was his love for his brother that truly made me connect with him as a character. There were, of course, time when I just wanted to slap him and shake him up, but he does make up for it in the end. Wesley's always believed that Dahlia's mother was the reason for his father left, and he's always resented Dahlia because of that. He carries that resentment and dislike throughout those three years, and it isn't until later that he truly lets go of that hatred.

Wesley and Dahlia's relationship was both slow-paced and a whirlwind. Dahlia, ever cautious and careful, is hesitant to get involved with the guy who has spent the last three years completely ignoring her. Wesley, on the other hand, can't get enough of her. I liked Dahlia's take on their relationship, and I did feel like Clayton rushed Wesley's feelings. Lust, I understand, but this all-consumming need to be around each other so soon in a novel? Sometimes it falls a bit short. Still, the status of their relationship at then end was what truly made me fall for them as a couple.

My favorite part about this book? All the archeology snippets! Archeology is definitely not a topic a lot of New Adult authors have incorporated into their stories yet. Scratch that, even in Young Adult and Fiction, archeology is a rare main topic. I really enjoyed reading about the treasure hunts and expeditions. It was unique, and the twist at the end really sold it for me. Despite my initial thoughts, Pretending ended up pleasantly surprising me.

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[Sorcha O'Dowd · Rating 5 out of 5]

What an amazing story! I could not put it down! 5 stars. Full review will be posted over at my blog on the 19th April for my stop on the 'Pretending' blog tour. http://www.oldvictorianquill.wordpres....

This entire review will probably consist of me jumping up and down squealing ‘I LOVE THIS BOOK!’, because honestly, this book was amazing!

I fell in love with this book from the first page. The writing style was just so fresh and drew me into the story and it was one of those books that I couldn’t put down until I’d finished it. I just had to know how it ended. I loved both main characters Wesley and Dahlia, and seeing their different perspectives of their living situation was brilliant. There were times I wanted to whack Wesley around the head for being so close-minded, but he was just so loveable and kind-hearted beneath the hurt that I really couldn’t hold his anger against him. Whilst I as a reader knew the circumstances surrounding Dahlia’s future inheritance of half of Wesley’s fathers assets, I could see how the situation, if not explained, would be a point of contention between Wesley and Dahlia, so it was brilliant to see how this story played out, and how Wesley’s opinion of Dahlia changed before these revelations.

Dahlia was a character that I’m sure a lot of women will relate to. She likes to remain hidden, and attempts to do so by hiding behind thick pale makeup and baggy clothes. It was really heartbreaking to see how she was treated because of the way she dressed, and I first really warmed to Wesley as a character when he tried to keep her from being hurt by some petty frat girls at a party.

There is a case of mistaken identity at the beginning of Wesley and Dahlia’s relationship and it was really funny to witness the ‘kicked puppy’ Wesley when he didn’t understand why he’d been rejected. It also really drew home just how little Wesley knew of Dahlia when he made assumptions about her character. The fact that he didn’t recognise her speaks volumes and made for some relationship development when he learns of his mistakes.

The archaeological mystery of this story was entwined beautifully throughout. It was this that gave the story a real edge and made it so different to many other books in the same genre. I loved that the story was centred around the topic of archaeology, as it made the educational side of the story more realistic and exciting.

There are many twists and turns in this story, with people with false pretences, family drama, romance and the breaking apart of friendships over romantic jealousy. I can’t recommend this book enough.

[Lynn]

I wrote a whole review and Goodreads ate it!! When I saved it the little spinning save circle just spun around for 30 minutes and chewed up my review. I'm so irritated that I took the time to write it for nothing!

Suffice it to say this wasn't my thing. I'm not going to write a second long review to say why. My brief review is that I was looking for something different in New Adult and thought this would be it. It wasn't. It was full of drama, over the top/non realistic situations, characters and reactions. It's full of people who do things for reasons that don't make sense (the girl tries to make herself uglier for nonsensical reasons and a dad abandons his family to die but doesn't tell them why he left. He didn't want to hurt them by making them watch him die. He just leaves without saying anything. Yeah, that makes tons of sense. O.o Side characters that cheat (a BFF steals another girl's boyfriend but first they see each other behind the girl's back and there are minimal consequences. They get their HEA. Blech!) The cliched hook-up culture that is overly represented in NA. An ex boyfriend who behaves in ways that don't hold water.

I like the idea of reading about the age group represented by New Adult but I rarely actually like New Adult books. They're soap operatic messes and not my thing.

[Jennifer · Rating 5 out of 5]

I can honestly say, without any reservations, this is the best contemporary romance I've read this year. Perhaps because, while it has all the things you crave in the best romance novels, Clayton gives us so much more. So much of the plot and characters took me by surprise.

We begin with Doll, who lives in a mansion with a guy she has ignored the past three years. It's quickly established they aren't related. He is the son of the man who gave Doll a home and chance at being part of a real family, before his tragic death. In his will, he declares his son and Doll will split his estate...if they agree to live in the house together, while completing their college degrees. As for exposition, this is one of the more original and intriguing set-ups I've read in ages. Possibly my favorite theme in this novel is the love of treasure and archaeology that is shared by our MC's.

The two main characters, Doll and Wesley, both carry big chips on their shoulders, entirely based on misunderstandings. Towards the end of their junior year of college, Wesley returns from a school dig in Egypt. Wesley soon runs into the housemate he's ignored out of spite, only to find she's not at all what he believed. Doll is set on hating him, but neither are prepared for their instant attraction, or the fact they might be soul mates after all. I loved Doll and Wesley's individual struggles. Finally, I could read a romance with relatable and reasonable characters. Instead of treating each other with contempt, they seek to learn each other.

As past secrets and more difficulties come to light, these two choose to fight for each other, to work out their issues. I can't tell you how often I've wanted to throw a book (or my phone) across the room because of two romantic leads who are too selfish to give into the selflessness of true love. For me, this is true love, not two people lashing out at each other when they don't get what they want. Rather, two people who will go to any lengths to make the other happy. So thank you, Shanna Clayton, for avoiding that unnecessary trope. Thank you for writing such an unputdownable book, and crafting the perfect love story. This is a book that will remind you why we read romance in the first place, to recapture that incandescent feeling of falling in love for the first time.

[Mary · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is my first book by this author and I was pleasantly surprised.

H misjudged/ disliked the h and realizes it almost too late.

Plot: h and H have been living together as strangers for the past 3 years. The terms of receiving their inheritance is living in the same mansion for 4 years and to stay in college. How they are connected is a bit long and complicated but ultimately Hs dad wanted them to become friends or more. One day H really notices the h and find himself smitten and the story goes from there. She has a lot of secrets that he has to uncover and he realizes he has her completely wrong and has misjudged her. They both love Egyptian archeology so there was a side story with treasure hunting that was fun.

Safety: some ow drama when H is propositioned and ow is more connected to them than they realize. But no cheating. There is a lot of cheating among the side characters though.
Death of parents to cancer.

It had some OTT elements but overall I really enjoyed it and especially liked archeology/ treasure hunting side story.
It was kind of sad how the Hs dad just abandoned him during his last years of his life.

[Lori Palle · Rating 5 out of 5]

“Wesley and I live our lives pretending the other doesn’t exist.”—Dahlia

Four years total, three years down, two strangers, and one more year for them to stay roommates and receive their inheritances. For Dahlia and Wesley, it should have been easy to finish up their college senior years avoiding each other in the huge mansion they live in. ‘Should’ being the key word. Could it be that the two souls perfect for each other had been living under the same roof and not know it? Wesley’s determined to find out. Dahlia would rather not know–at least that’s what she tells herself. Someone else wants something Wesley has and is willing to put Wesley’s and Dahlia’s lives on the line to get it…

“Part of me wonders if this is real. Two people can’t fit together so perfectly—can they?”—Dahlia

Before reading the book, from the blurb and cover I thought it would be a sexual tension-filled drama full of angst with broken characters severely needing to heal from their traumatic pasts—you know, the route many new adult books take. Sure, the book does have drama and some characters needing to heal—but it is so much more! It’s highly entertaining while still having some drama, and the characters are fantastic, fun, and fleshed out. And if the characters weren’t enough to make the book great, we’ve got disguises, treasure hunters, and a mysterious secret society thrown in to add in some suspense!

Wait—what? Did I just say treasure hunters? Yes! You wouldn’t guess from the blurb or cover, but this has a fun treasure hunting storyline mixed in that I loved! It turns out the mansion that our two key players are staying in belonged to treasure hunters! And since Wesley is the son of a long line of seekers and Dahlia fell in love with archeology—you’ve got a fun plot line. By the way, can Wesley and Dahlia be any more perfect for each other (should point out low-medium heat level in the romance scale)?

I’m glad Wesley opened his eyes and got over the anger that made him ignore Dahlia for so long. Like I said, Wesley has treasure hunting in his blood and being contractually bound to live in his ancestors’ mansion and finish college to inherit said mansion makes Wesley a very angry hunter. And who does he pinpoint his rage against? Dahlia, for being the daughter of the woman who stole his father away. Yeah…this one? Another awesome plot line. Awesome. Tear-worthy awesome.

And frankly, how could anyone not love Dahlia? The scene when they first confront each other is great and totally adds more to the fun factor of the book. It’s easy to see why Wesley and her stalker blackmailing harem-owning ex-boyfriend love her and why she has not one, but two best friends and a germophobic confidant. She has an emotionally bruising past—hint, she’s an orphan. Kinda. And watching her come out of her shell with Wesley throughout the book was great!

We get to read the story alternating with Wesley and Dahlia’s first POV (mostly Dahlia) so we can see what both of them are thinking. I loved their character voices and the humor. I had the misfortune of starting the book late at night thinking I would just read one chapter and ended up getting seriously hooked, not wanting to put the book down! Well, going with the treasure hunting theme, I ended up finding a surprise treasure with this book, and it’s going on my favorite books’ shelf! This is a 5 out of 5 for me!

(Originally posted on my blog; I received a review copy in exchange for an honest and unbiased review.)

[Bookish.Midnight. and. black · Rating 2 out of 5]

#forcedproximity

[Cyle · Rating 4 out of 5]

GENRE: New Adult
THEME: Contemporary, Romance, Mystery
RECEIVED: Tour
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REVIEW:
Pretending was a bit of a surprise, I was expecting a new adult romance of two angst college students, but what I got was an Indiana Jones adventure. Pretending was a great start to what I hope is a series, there is so much more that can happen and secondary characters I hope to learn more about.

Pretending follows Dahlia Reynolds who has been living with a roommate in a large mansion, and he really doesn’t want her there. You see the only man she saw as a father figure left her an inheritance along with his biological son Wesley Kent, but there is a catch. Both must earn their college degrees and live with each other for four years, neither know why this was a must. But after finally having a chance in really meeting each other, they discover they have a lot in common and that their chemistry is undeniable. But the Kent family has an interesting secret and it leads to a highly prized treasure.

Dahlia is a shy and quite girl in the beginning; she just wants to stay hidden and unnoticed. But after years of ignoring each other, Dahlia runs into her housemate Wesley and sparks fly…well until he opens his mouth. Dahlia has only known a few things about the guy she’s been living with for three years; he likes girls and likes whiskey. But after one stormy night she finally sees the real him and they connect. It was interesting to see how these two knew so little about each other after three years but also how wrong they were about each other’s character. I liked watching their discovery and seeing how Wesley’s father knew that would find some connection. Dahlia has lost a lot in her life and even more so is blamed for a misunderstanding, I was glad she was strong about it but I felt it was childish of her to hide from it all. I wanted her to stand up and speak the truth about her real father.

Wesley has a bad boy persona, but deep down seeks adventure and also had a terrible falling out with his father before he passed. After the falling out he didn’t understand why his father would to have him go to school and live with his fathers girlfriends daughter for four years. He tried to ignore her until one meeting in their library led to an attraction he couldn’t forget. He slowly learned why his father left, why he chose to have Dahlia stay with him and that he knew their connection would help them both to the right path. I adored Wesley’s reckless and protective nature, he is smart and in the end grows up to do something he is passionate about.

Overall I thought this was such a great adventure story, the truth behind the treasure, and the secret society after it and two young adults were thrown into a dangerous quest. There are also some good secondary characters; they had some side stories consisting of betrayal, secrets, and lots of misunderstandings. In the end it all tied together but I’m hoping that we get more Wesley and Dahlia adventures.

RECOMMENDATION:
This is a young adult novel full of adventure and steamy romance. Fans of the Curse Keepers series by Denise Grover and Eversea by Natasha Boyd will enjoy Pretending by Shanna Clayton.

[Aarati · Rating 3 out of 5]

Pretending was a very good and well written novel. I liked the characters, the story and the mystery. The book had a somewhat somber and solemn feel to it. That is not to say that the book wasn't enjoyable. 'Cause it really was.

For the past three years Dahlia Reynolds has been living in the same house as Wesley Kent as strangers. They don't know anything about each other, other than the fact that the other person exists. They have made it a point to go out of the way to stay clear of each other.

Wesley Kent has to share his house with Dahlia for four years in order to get his share of inheritance. Both he and Dahlia are required to go to school and complete their education, and stay together. If they break any of these rules, they won't get their share.Wesley lives the life of a wild child. Parties and women are his daily dose of medicine. But his love lies in archaeology. There is a good guy hidden behind the cool facade of his.

After three years of pretending that the other other person doesn't exist, a case of mistaken identity throws them into each others paths and their lives. The quite and shy Dahlia suddenly finds herself in the midst of Wesley Kent's world.

After three years of being virtually non-existent to each other, Wesley does not have a hard time putting forth a hand of friendship, and maybe even something more. Dahlia on the other hand is bit reserved and takes a while while to warm around to him. They grow out of their shells with each other and maybe even for each other.

The mystery aspect of the book was, well, mysterious. I never suspected anything. The characters were well developed and all of them were enjoyable. I like Gwen, one of Dahlia's beat friend very much initially. She was fun and outspoken and didn't mince her words. But her one act made me dislike her. Mainly because I hate what she did and can't understand the reason behind her actions.

There were quite a few secrets which were revealed which were pretty shocking. Especially the real culprit behind the threats to Wesley. Dahlia's secret was not quite shocking. I figured it out way before Wesley did anyway.

The one thing I did not like about Wesley, despite saying he trusted her, he did not trust Dahlia. It only took one girl and her misunderstanding of a situation to make Wesley question Dahlia. But I forgave him for that, because he really is a sweetheart otherwise. He was caring and affectionate, naughty fun and adventurous. I especially liked the ending of the book. It was so sweet and romantic.

I really enjoyed the archaeological part of the book. The constant references to Wesley's father and brother, his achievements, Dahlia's dreams related to archaeology. Their trip to Egypt was quite enjoyable too. even they were practically being kidnapped and blackmailed. This whole aspect of the book was quite fun and intriguing. I loved what Dahlia did for Wesley's brother. It was very sweet and considerate of her.

Over all Pretending was a very well written and well thought out book. Really enjoyable and emotional when needed. A definite recommend.

[Kendall {Book Crazy} · Rating 4 out of 5]

I was really intrigued by the synopsis and cover of this book that I really wanted to read it and find out more! I do have to admit that while I enjoyed this book, it was slightly strange lol! It had a bit of a, not paranormal, but sort of suspenseful side to it! I actually didn't think it was going to have suspense in it after reading the synopsis, but it did! The plot was also quite long! It took a while for something to actually happen and questions to be answered! That's why I took it down a star! I like my plots to be fast-paced and lots of action in it, but It took a while for these things to happen in this plot! I really enjoyed the plot though! I also thought that this book was going to be a contemporary book, and it was, but it was contemporary with a side of something else! It's hard to explain unless you've actually read the book or someone's explained it in their review lol! I don't want to spoil it, so I'm not going to say a thing lol! I did love the development of the plot as well and I loved the whole concept of it, even though it was different to what I was expecting! The characters were amazing! I connected really well with them! Wes was the main male character and he was pretty damn hot! Wes was the one hiding a secret in this book, and it was a pretty big secret! I could completely understand why Wes hid his secret though! He did it for his brother and I thought that was very beautiful! I also loved how protective Wes was of his love interest, Dahlia! I could see that he had strong feelings for her and that he would give up the thing that everyone wanted in this book to protect her, which I thought was so cute, and sort of made Wes ever hotter! Dahlia was the main female character and I connected really well with her! Dahlia's intentions in this book were the same as Wes' in a sense! They both wanted the same thing! And I don't mean in the romantic sense lol! Well, that came later lol! Dahlia was also sort of pulled into the middle of the suspense and danger in this book! She wanted the same thing as Wes, but she was going about a different way of getting it! Dahlia was such an amazing character and I loved seeing her feelings for Wes develop as this book progressed! I loved that this book was written from both Wes and Dahlia's point of views! I was expecting it to be after reading the synopsis and I have to say that this book was actually better written from both their point of views! I don't think I would have enjoyed it as much if it had only been written from one of the characters point of view! The ending of this book was so perfect! It just completely summed up how beautiful Wes and Dahlia's relationship was and also how far it had come! I'm also really happy that this book is a standalone because everything was answered and wrapped up! The cover for this book so pretty! It was one of the things that made me want to read this book! I love the colouring and everything! Big thank you to Shanna for a copy of Pretending and to Xpresso Book Tours for having me on the Blog Tour!

[books are love · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is a wonderful book. We see pretenses dropped and people see who they really are. I felt for Dahlia and when I see why she is hiding herself behind makeup I wanted to hug her. She has been through so much and to just want that connection to her family is touching. Her feelings to Wes are understandable as well. They are thrown together under circumstances neither can control and Wes is angry. She uses this anger as a reason to stay away so she doesn't fail. Failure when she is grieving and trying to cope is not an option for her. After three years, Wes sees her I mean really sees her and it disarms her. No one has ever gotten past the defenses and understood but somehow he does. I think it's because of all the pain and sadness he has gone through. These two are meant for each other. They are both suffering loss and anger. They both are adventurers and love the hunt for treasure. Each for different reasons but still love it none the less.

As they get to know each other one night, things change. Feelings can't be denied and a bond forms. One of support, comfort and love. They both try to deny it but can't in the end. It is especially seen when Dahlia is forced into a situation she had no idea about and Wes has to make decisions he never believed he would. I feel for him at this point, he found out his dad pushed him away for reasons that weren't what they seemed but is upset because he would have liked him to realize it didn't matter and all he wanted was him, Dahlia isn't talking to him, he has to give up a promise to his brother for Dahlia and his friend isn't who he thought he was. Meanwhile he loves Dahlia with everything in him and doesn't know how to let her know.

As they go on a adventure, the anger and disappointment each feels dissipates and they rely on one another to get through things. They also stop denying each other exists. Unfortunately once they realize how they feel and stop denying, a opportunity comes up that Wes can't turn down and Dahlia won't let him. Dahlia does something silly and they lose time together but Wes in the end has enough and goes to her. The ending is beautiful and we see how love heals wounds, shows support for each other and is patient and kind.

A sweet beautiful romance that shows the power of love to heal, support and be patient. Such a beautiful story I would though like to see if they stay together and how his hunt turns out.

[Nicci · Rating 4 out of 5]

Well this book was not at all what I was expecting!
I was expecting a romance with lots of relationship drama, y'know resentful man and shunned women clashing and eventually working out their issues and living happy ever after and I was quite looking forward to it...
But!
That is NOT what this story is about at all.
Ok, I guess it is a little.

Dahlia and Wesley have been forced to live together by the terms of Wes' dad's will and Wesley - rather than getting to know his room-mate (who goes by the name Doll) - has treated her like she doesn't exist and she has let him.
One mistaken identity issue later the relationship begins. It makes you laugh, makes you want to smack them up-side the head and generally just keeps you entertained until they reach their HEA.
Dahlia is likeable and Wes is cocky-as-hell with a chip on his shoulder but he is really appealing and you like him from the beginning.

So, what wasn't I expecting?
What I wasn't expecting was a treasure-hunting romp!
I don't know how best to describe what I read beyond saying it drummed up memories of films like The Mummy or Indiana Jones but it wasn't like either of them at all, lol, except for the fact there are historical artefacts (one in particular), secret societies trying to steal the artefacts and lots of danger and intrigue surrounding it all.

The story is first person from both Wesley and Dahlia's POV and it made it very easy to understand the characters, it kept the story moving along and it made it really easy to escape into the novel and not put it down until I was finished reading it.
That's right, I inhaled it in one sitting.

So, why is this not a 5 star read for me?
Basically because I got a bit annoyed waiting on more information at a couple of points. I had to fight the urge to flick to find the answer to what was bugging me then go back and continue reading...

[Jasmine · Rating 2 out of 5]

2.5 Stars.

Dahlia and Wesley have lived together for the last 3 years, not by choice of course. Wesley's father, Dahlia's step father left terms in his will stating that in order for them to receive their inheritance they had to graduate college and live together while getting their degree. They live in a huge mansion and they don't really see each other, and that's they way Wesley likes it. He avoids Dahlia at all costs. Dahlia keeps to herself, mostly because of a secret she is hiding. In the mix of that there is an archeological / indian jones feel to the book. Both Dahlia and Wesley are treasure hunters and are after a unique antique.

The likes:
*Funny banter between Dahlia and Wesley
*From "hate to love" book :)
*Wesley's protectiveness of Dahlia.
*Dual POV

The dislikes:
*You're really telling me that you live in a house with someone for years and you don't know what they look like? Come on Wesley!
*Dahlia's crazy need to be invisible, going as far as having her friend put makeup on her everyday to make her look ugly....? What?!?!
*Although I liked Wesley, I had a hard time connecting with him. There wasn't much depth to his character and could be lumped in with every other cocky guy closed off guy who falls and changes for the girl.
*At times there was too much going on. Dahlia's ex-boyfriend, the treasure hunt, archeology, Weasley's father, Dahlia's shitty best friends, black mail.... the list goes on.

The book reminded me of the movie "The Mummy". There was actually a part in the book that is VERY similar to the movie- Daliah and Wesley's first encounter in the library.

Enjoy.

[Paula Phillips · Rating 4 out of 5]

Dahlia Reynolds aka Doll has been living in her step-father's house while studying as he has recently died and the stipulation was that she finish her degree and live in the house to receive half of what was left for her in the will. The other half goes to her stepfather Harland's son Wesley Kent aka Wes. Three years has passed since Harland's death and the two are non-speaking roommates as the house is big enough for neither one to get in the others way, that is until now when Wes arrives home drunk and Doll has to cater to him, then later he spots her in the library. As the story goes on we learn that both of them are hiding secrets, secrets that if they were to be leaked could end up dangerous to those around them and also they have one thing in common - the sword of dreams , each wanting to search for the lost treasure to prove to a loved one that they are worth it, no matter what anyone else says. Can Wes be the guy that can pull Dahlia out of her funk and help her to realise that she isn't worthless and that she isn't alone in this world ? Can Dahlia be the one that will make Wes settle down and has he found a partner in this world to accompany him on his treasure hunt escapades ?

Find out in "Pretending" by Shanna Clayton - A book which reminded me of a cross between the films "Fools Gold" and "Indiana Jones #4".

[Patty · Rating 4 out of 5]

Pretending came at a time when I really needed a light and fun read! If I didn't have so much going on I would have been able to finish this in one sitting instead of a couple of days. I loved the strained relationship between Wesley and Dahlia! I have a weakness for banter, and oh did Wesley and Dahila ever banter! I couldn't stop giggling when Wesley sees "her" for the first time. I don't want to give anything away, so if you read it you know what I mean! I loved the characters and the storyline, I remember when I first read the synopsis for Pretending I was hooked! There were a couple of surprises throughout Pretending and I enjoyed the minor characters and how the plot developed, there was never a point where this book left me feeling bored.

Shanna Clayton is definitely being added to my list of authors to watch out for! If you're looking for a light-hearted, fun, fast paced read that will keep you on your toes I recommend Pretending!!

[Briana Gaitan · Rating 4 out of 5]

This book was provided to me by the author for an honest review.Doll has been living in a mansion with Wes. They are roommates, but have hardly spoken or seen each other. Wes finds himself attracted to her after a chance encounter one afternoon. Though he doesn't recognize her as his roommate, since she isn't covered up with horrible makeup and clothes (what she does to make herself look unattractive. I know, issues!) This was a sweet love story between the couple, who are forced to live there until graduation as part of Wes' father's will. This book isn't your typical love story, it involved treasure and adventure unlike anything I have ever read! My only con was that the book didn't tell the reader much background, especially about Doll and her relationship to Wes' father until later on so it took some time to catch on. Also the character's were supposed to be college age, but they acted more mature and I kept feeling like they were in their late twenties instead of 21/22. Nonetheless, the author has written a WONDERFUL story with some great writing and editing. I would recommend this book to anyone who loves new adult books and adventure books. Will I read more from this author? Definitely.

[Amazeballs Book Addicts · Rating 4 out of 5]

Pretending is a good book. At first I wasn't liking it. I was a little confused on how some of the characters knew each other. At first I thought maybe Pretending was book two in a sires but it's not. We know from the start that Wes' Dad (Harland) has passed away. Wes and Doll (at first I wasn't sure how doll fit in with Wes' Dad) are living together in Harland's house, in order to get any inheritance they must live their until they graduate from college. At some point in the story Shanna Clayton pulls everything nicely together.

Harland was a treasure hunter. Wes and doll also have an interest in finding treasures. There is romance between Wes and Doll but the book also contains some suspense. Pretending is told in dual POVs of Wes and Doll.

This is the type of book that when you are done reading and looking back at what you read, you can say wow that was a good book. There is no cliffhanger.

[Nena · Rating 5 out of 5]

I signed up for a blog tour at Xpresso Blog Tours, and I was accepted to review this book.

It's too bad that I was so busy these past few days or I would have finished it in one day (finished it in two but still haha)

I really loved this book, I loved the characters, the storyline and just about everything, There wasn't one moment where I felt bored.

There were a lot of things that surprised me in this book, it was definitely much different than i expected it to be and that was so awesome.

If you are looking for an awesome read that will keep you on your toes then this is that book!

and here is the link to my review on my blog - http://nenaath.blogspot.no/2014/04/pr...

[Jodie Squelch · Rating 4 out of 5]

This is a fun, light hearted, enjoyable read….
An invisible girl and a popular boy, are forced to share a house for four years, to receive their inheritance.
They spend the first three years avoiding and ignoring each other…. But one chance encounter changes everything……..
He instantly wants her in a way he’s never felt before and she doesn’t want to want him.
Both have pre-set ideas of what the others like…. But when they start to open up to each other, they discover they are very much alike.
This book is full of mystery, treasure hunting and adventure…. It will keep you hooked and guessing… a really brilliant refreshing read as it’s not your typical college romance…..
I look forward to more read’s from Hanna Clayton.

[Theodora Catalina · Rating 4 out of 5]

loved the characters!!
review to come

[BlebeTanja · Rating 2 out of 5]

Boooooooooooooring. That's why it took me more than half a year to get back to it and attempt to finish it.

[William]

Just ok, I thought

I couldn't seem to get enthralled with this love story. It was pretty juvenile and disjointed. Oh well, on to better reads!

[Natward1 · Rating 2 out of 5]

Did not finish after chapter nine. This book started okay actually. It seemed interesting with the two characters not having any kind of relationship, or I guess having a very complicated relationship. But once the two characters start to interact, it all starts becoming very cliche, very unoriginal, and very uninteresting. Maybe if you don't read a lot of romance like I do you won't be as put off as I am about the rehashed, worn out scenarios and lines. Lines such as, "you're beautiful behind your disguise." Eye roll! Especially because it's coming from Dahlia when she is talking to Wesley. Who she's been talking to for about twenty minutes for the first time in years. So How can she even see that he's wearing "a disguise"? She's barely seen him in years, let alone seen him interact with others or interacted with him personally. So How does she know what he's even like normally? Before she interacts with him in the book, she keeps referring to Wesley and saying she wishes she could see the old Wesley. The one his father would portray to her before he passed away. But how does she know he still isn't the old Wesley? They don't even know eachother. I just feel like the author was trying to tell us this story she wanted told but without actually thinking it through and developing the characters and their lives. Like, she wanted both Wesley and dahlia to be "hiding behind something" but didn't develop it at all. Just because dahlia tells me that she thinks Wesley is hiding behind his issues doesn't make me believe that he is. Unless she were to get to know him more intimately, she isn't a credible source because she doesn't know him. And yes, we hear Wesley monologuing about how he is always pretending to fit in, which indicates hes wearing some kind of disguise, but that's also not enough. It isn't developed enough. And, again, Dahlia would never know this about him after being with him for a handful of minutes. Especially because he doesn't actually act any differently from what I've already seen from him. He doesn't feel like two different people at all. He is absolutely the playboy, fun, social type person he says he's hiding behind. Where is the other side? What other side does he have? Show me! Especially if dahlia claims that she notices it. Anyways, these are subtle nuances that I look for in books. Plus, the dialogue is just kinda predictable. Bland. Nothing is unexpected. It isn't horrible, but it's also just ho hum. Dahlia responds to Wesley just how you think she'd respond and Wesley responds to dahlia just how you think he'd respond to her. Plus, the dual point of view writing makes it so that there is no mystery whatsoever. I know what each character is thinking and feeling the entire time. Plus, I was bothered that, when Wesley interacts with dahlia for the first time in years he starts taking off her clothes. They basically almost have sex after a five minute conversation. Does this happen? If a guy I'm just meeting has a five minute conversation with me and then is all of the sudden trying to do me I'd be grossed out. I mean, unless you're at a club and it's understood that you're trying to hook up with someone it's different. But this scene just makes the whole thing feel sleezy. And once again shows that Wesley has no different sides or that he's "wearing a disguise". Because, he is attracted to dahlia and so of course he tries to immediately sleep with her. And He isn't pretending for anyone in this scenario is he?. It's just him and her. So this would be considered the "real Wesley", right? Or is he still pretending? I guess I'm not sure. Again, the development of the story need to be worked on. Not just thrown together to accommodate the authors overall ideas. It also bugged me that dahlia gets pissed when Wesley doesn't recognize her. Like, dahlia goes way out of her way to make herself look completely different everyday-I'm talking full make up done in a way to alter her face to be completely different. (Which I thought was a bit overkill actually and seemed out of place. Wearing big hoodies and hats and baggy clothes and glasses and stuff felt like it would be enough for her "disguise", but whatever). But that's beside the point. My point is that if dahlia goes way out of her way to disguise herself completely, how is she mad that Wesley can't recognize her???! Girl what?? I get that he knew her from before but he hasn't seen her in years. And yes that does seem far fetched that he wouldn't recognize her even after not seeing her for a few years so I can see why dahlia would be surprised. But mad??? She should be glad her disguise had worked all this time right?? And since it is far fetched that he wouldn't recognize her the author probably should have done some rethinking of this one anyways. This is just another example of the author wanting to tell this particular story but not thinking things through all the way. It just didn't quite feel like it was coming together cohesively. Anyways, the book probably isn't horrible. I didn't hate it by any means. The author seemed to be a capable writer, she just needed to work on her story development a bit and it could have been better!

[Fiza · Rating 4 out of 5]

3.5* out of 5*

review coming up

[Jessica · Rating 2 out of 5]

This was one of those books that turned out to be completely different from what you expected it to be. It's not that it was a bad thing but it wasn't a good thing either, it was just...different. I was expecting a lot of hostility and angst between Wes and Dahlia, a lot more hesitation and slowly coming to terms with that they weren't what the other thought. The archaeology storyline played a major role that seemed to draw attention away from the romance between them. It was interesting but I wanted to see the relationship change between Wes and Dahlia much more than an ancient sword. If the blurb had been upfront I wouldn't have minded as much but based on that I assumed that we'd have a bigger focus on seeing them change from strangers to a couple. That's what I wanted and was looking forward to. Their whole perception of the other was indifference and the next day they see them in a whole new light. It was too fast and to be honest, for me it was dull. Boring, unexciting, there was no buildup, no anticipation, no worrying that they wouldn't make it or that something bad was gonna mess everything up for them. It didn't deliver on its promise of two people finally taking notice of the person they were forced to live with and realizing their beliefs were wrong.

I don't like how Wesley completely did a turnaround from the first chapter. I think it should have gone slower to be believable. He spent three years ignoring and believing the worst intentions of her. For him to suddenly change his mind because he was attracted to her and had one conversation with her was shallow and off putting. It just didn't make sense that he never once even tried to confront her. He also tried to act mature for his age, but it seemed fake when he didn't even bother looking for the truth of his father, Dahlia, and things that went wrong in his life. He was ok if you can look past his little annoyances, my problem with him was how quick he suddenly changed up his perception of her to the exact opposite of what it used to be, how weird that he immersed himself into her life when before he did everything to avoid her, and how out of character it was for him to check up on her and caring about her personal life. Sometimes it felt like he treated her as if she were a child, like when he purposely goaded her into revealing things she didn't want to say out loud or forcing her to lash out at him in anger to get it out in the open. I'm the type that believes a person has a right to their privacy in feelings that should be respected, not provoked because you think you know what's best for them. His character was just too fake to take seriously after he pulled the Dr Jekyll and Mr Hyde switch in character.

I also didn't like how Dahlia was too forgiving and took responsibility for things that weren't her fault or made excuses for people who didn't deserve it. She needed a backbone and a little bit of common sense. She gave in too easily after he screwed up, they didn't even talk it out, she completely forgot about or absolved him of responsibility once they got in a bad situation. While I liked her ok, I felt that she wasn't her own person, she had no self-image if that makes sense. She didn't know who she was. Dahlia didn't know who Dahlia was in the beginning or the end. She was an actress playing a part or rather like a clone of the people around her. She picks up their likes and beliefs and accepts them as her own. She didn't care about archaeology and hated it when she met Harland, her father figure, who in a way forced it on her. If you do something or are around it so much, you're bound to wanna pick it up sooner or later because it's what you know or someone important to you loves it. Wesley explained to her his misconceptions and misjudgments of her, her mother, and his father, before and during the book events, and once he does, she suddenly understands why he felt the way he did, why he did the things he did, and removes any negative feelings towards him as if it's ok for him to behave the way he did.

She tries to be nice and tell Jordan, one of her creepy ex's roommate, that she has options and shouldn't sacrifice her self-respect and pride for Styler's entertainment just to get free rent to help pay for school and Jordan turns it on her telling her not to judge her because she's doing the same thing, sacrificing herself to get something from Styler. Which if you look at it that way, they are both sacrificing themselves yes, but the difference is Dahlia doesn't have to walk around in her underwear and be at his beck and call for sex, she merely has to live in the same apartment with him for a semester. She's doing it because it's her ONLY option to get the map that she can't get anywhere else. Jordan is doing it because she doesn't want to get a job to pay rent and go to school like the majority of students do. Instead of Dahlia defending her reason, she sees Jordan's side of things and decides she is totally right and feels guilty for ever judging her wrongly. Sorry Jordan, and any other girl in college who feels like they have no option (for tuition, rent, food whatever) except to put out or take off their clothes, but if you had any self-respect for yourself, get off your a*s and get a damn job like everyone else. Work through your school's work program like the library, at the mall, McDonald's, the coffee shop, deliver newspapers, there ARE jobs for college students, add that in with your financial aid and you'll BE alright. You might be broke most of the time after bills and but you will make it.

Those are just a few of the things that Dahlia gives in to but they are the most prominent that shows me she follows what everyone else does or says by their example. She could have a mind of her own if she sticks to it but from what I've seen it's ingrained in to her to follow the crowd and adopt their mindset. It's sad that she's almost done with school and still doesn't know who she is though. Overall, this isn't a book I'll read again, not for the story or the characters. It just didn't hit any marks for me.

[Sam Domingo · Rating 4 out of 5]

I quite liked this book. I liked seeing our couple fall for one another. I only wish that we got to have a book about the friend that got cheated on. And that the ex didn't get to have a happy ending lol

With the way things ended, there could be more adventures for our couple, though. But I'd be more interested reading about the friend than them 😅