Here we have it, folks: Phillipa Gregory’s first attempt to formularize a historical essay without her usual fictitious flair. How did it go? Read on, my friends.
The Women of the Cousins’ War began with a 40 page “introduction” which delivered Gregory’s thesis relating the similarities between historical fiction novelists and “actual” historians. Although Gregory made some interesting points regarding the composition/narration of both fiction and factual accounts, the speculation involved in both, and I also see her view and work in a new light; it still seemed like a desperate attempt at self-validation to prove that she is a historian and is out of place in such a book.
Another issue I had with the introduction? PG named Jacquetta as the “grandmother of Henry VIII and great-grandmother of Elizabeth I”. Ummm? Are you sure, PG? (Jacquetta --> Elizabeth Woodville --> Elizabeth of York --> Henry VIII --> Elizabeth I) Not sure how this missed the editing process. PG also admitted in the introduction that the piece on Jacquetta would involve speculation due to the lack of resource material (but again, tried to validate herself). I have some other complaints with the introduction but moving on to the more important aspects:
PG’s essay on Jacquetta:
Gregory’s essay consisted of an overuse of “perhaps” and “maybe” statements. I understand her desire to “cover” the life of a strong but less discussed character and wanting to begin an influx of coverage but I still don’t like “maybe” statements. This became very frustrating with such sentences as, “Jacquetta was probably with them. It would have been an anxious time for her; she probably did not know if her husband and son were alive or dead, or still imprisoned at Calais”. See what I mean?
PG also added her usual peculiar overuse of titles (i.e. Lord John, Duke of Bedford).
Other than that, PG did deliver smooth reading and it wasn’t a bad attempt at her straying from historical fiction. The essay did, however, read like a summary of The Lady of the Rivers, minus the dialogue. Not necessarily a strong history piece and it certainly could not have stood on its own but not a bad attempt. What else was lacking strength? The “Conclusion”statement. Most “afterwords” in history novels are powerful and moving and Gregory’s can simply be described as “odd”.
David Baldwin on Elizabeth Woodville:
Baldwin’s essay was very welcoming with a writing style which is eloquent and yet not too technical. It also (like Gregory) has some “perhaps” and “maybe” statements involving Elizabeth’s emotions. Clearly, we can’t fathom her emotions (unless it is recorded in a diary of sorts); so these statements (in my opinion) could be omitted. I also found Baldwin’s habit of ending paragraphs with exclamation points somewhat unusual.
The “fan favorite” tale of Elizabeth Woodville fighting off Edward’s sexual advances (and possible rape) with a knife was not mentioned. Further, his brief and loop-holed version of the “princes in the tower” mystery was not agreeable based on my many texts I have previously read; but it was still interestingly written. However, on a positive note, Baldwin did debunk some speculations with solid research resulting in the presentation of come compelling info. Also adding to the delight of the essay was the incorporation of Elizabeth’s will, in full.
Overall, Baldwin depicts a complementary ratio of a motive-study and biography which results in a page-turner, although an overall story we already know. Alas, very enjoyable.
Mike Jones on Margaret Beaufort:
This essay began on a powerful note with a very strong, unarguable voice. Jones efficiently packed a large amount of information into a small space, while telling Margaret’s story engagingly and effectively. Beginning with the impact of her father’s suicide on her childhood and adult life while also describing the brunt effects of John of Gaunt on her entire House; Jones provided a clear and “full” picture of Margaret’s world. Basically, Jones focused more at times on the family of Margaret versus Margaret herself, which would in normal circumstances displease me but it was written so well, that I can’t even complain.
Jones is obviously a huge supporter of Margaret and was “stuck” on portraying her in the usual angelic, pious light. In fact, if he repeated one more time how pious but pragmatic and astute she was; I was going to scream. Regardless of my lack of agreement on his stereotype of Margaret, it didn’t deter me from the reading or ruin my enjoyment.
My biggest “eh” moment was when Jones presented two possible scenarios to specific events, which I welcome in the detective sense; but he literally stopped the narration, stepped back to describe his upcoming execution, and then tried to rove back into the story. This completely stopped me at a climax in the book and caused me to lose my train of though and excitement. Yes, it is comparable to an orgasm which is about to happen… but does not.
Sadly, the Battle of Bosworth was glossed over which as my favorite historical event, was personally disappointing.
On the highlight: the essay successfully opened my eyes in a new way to Margaret. I always viewed her Elizabeth Woodville’s “rival” but it finally struck home how inexplicably they were tied together even before Elizabeth of York’s marriage to her son, Henry Tudor. They were destined to be blanketed together. I can’t vouch whether the essay made me like Margaret more or not, but it did allow me to understand her actions better. Jones certainly sparks your desire to read more literature on Margaret. Very beautifully written and I even wish it was longer.
Overall, a type of book in which a reader can “pick a favorite” author and their offering of the material. Each has a different writing style, tone, and carrying out of information. By far, I enjoyed Mike Jones the best, then Baldwin, and PR rounding in third. Although considered PG’s book, her essay was certainly the weakest based on her topic’s lack of source material but also her personal authoring skills. I did enjoy it better than her recent historical fiction pieces, however; so I do think she could (with some practice) manage the history world. Overall, a more solid book than the novels in her “Cousins’s War” series.