An entertaining fantastical soap opera…the junk food of epic fantasy. 😬 I like that Douglass is drawing on Norse imagery as well as Celtic/Euro, & the positives outweigh the negatives like uneven pacing, clumsy prose, & lolzy villains (Gorgreal is impossible to take seriously, because dude…screeching about having no friends & wedging wine glasses between your tusks is freakin’ hilarious). I did enjoy it, though it’s not without problems.
Major issue #1: Axis is a dick. He’s a Gary Stu in the truest sense, which isn’t a deal breaker—but he’s not an Aragorn/Skywalker/Jon Snow whom you hope kills the baddies & earns his laurels o’ awesomeness. Rather, Axis is a self-aggrandizing douchebag with no real vision beyond his own desires & destined glory. He’s such an ass that I hoped his half-brother would beat him soundly in single combat—not because Borneheld has good sense, sound judgment, or a sense of fair play (alas, poor Borneheld has none of those qualities), but because I wanted someone to take this creep down a peg.
Major issue #2: Azhure is one of the biggest Mary Sues who ever graced the pages of fantasy. In any series, in any era, in any format. I didn’t dislike Azhure per se, but everyone’s continual fawning & adoration for her perfection & instant capability was obnoxious. Fighting in combat, managing troops, designing defenses, rationing supplies, leading raids, doing magic, bonding with animals, mad bedroom skills, mothering, friendship, comforting, badassery, diplomacy, queenship, bearing perfect heirs for hard-to-breed lines… *yawn* Literally the only thing she can’t do is carry a tune. Literally the only male in her vicinity not stricken with cow-eyed instalust is Magariz, & that’s just because he’s already in love with Rivkah. (Magariz/Rivkah are my OTP, y’all. 💜) Enough, already! Let the poor woman have *some* flaws.
Major issue #2a: Everyone oh-so-conveniently seems to forget how Faraday is awesome & deserves way more appreciation for her bravery & sacrifice. Faraday is the WAYFARER equivalent of Jonathan Harker—the heroes cannot win without her, yet everyone seems to ignore and/or deride her accomplishments simply because she’s Not Azhure & doesn’t ride laughing into combat. 🙄 I really hope Faraday gets to show her strengths & quiet power in the 3rd book, because she deserves that kind of smug revenge.
Anyway.
Will I read book 3? Yup. And, much like books 1-2, I’m sure I’ll alternately fly through action sequences, lol at Gorgreal, roll my eyes at Axis, & cringe on behalf of the many minor characters whose lives are ruined by this knucklehead prophecy.