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The Treasure of Kafur
The fate of an empire trembles in the balance ...'Hindustan, 1580 AD. The Mughal Emperor Akbar is at the height of his power, seemingly invincible. But twenty years of war have earned him many enemies, and rebellion is brewing, led by Asaf Baig, the tyrannical ruler of Khandesh. Baig has stumbled upon the knowledge that the whereabouts of the fabulous lost treasure of Malik Kafur, which will guarantee victory to Akbar's enemies, is known to an old woman called Ambu.Baig kidnaps Ambu to wrest the knowledge of the treasure from her, but her twenty-year-old grandson, Dattatreya, escapes and flees across Hindustan to enlist the help of the the one person who has the most reason to stop Baig - the Mughal Emperor himself.Staying one step ahead of capture and death, Datta is swept up in a world of kings and warrior princesses, of uncommon friendships and an implacable evil; and a desperate race against time to save his grandmother - and the Empire.
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First published December 20, 2013
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About the author
Aroon Raman
5 books89 followersA Masters Degree in Economics from JNU and then an MBA from The Wharton School, University of Pennsylvania have given me an unusual education - a full spectrum from the left to the right!
Till 2014, I ran my own manufacturing and research companies, both of which have since been successfully divested to multinationals.
I'm now taking that old Chinese proverb seriously: 'Enjoy life: it's later than you think.' So what I really do is travel to strange and offbeat places, meet as many people as I can from all walks of life; in short explore every nook and corner that I possibly can of this enormous canvas called life.
I also write. Books have inevitably been an important part of my journey. Conan Doyle was once asked who he wrote his Sherlock Holmes stories for and he replied, 'For the man who is half a boy and for the boy who is half a man.' It has been so with me ever since. Doyle, John Buchan, Rider Haggard and Kalki’s novels in Tamil fired my imagination at an early age with their classics of detection, adventure and history and I’ve been hooked to a good yarn for as long as I can remember.
My three books are all in the thriller and adventure genre . My first, The Shadow Throne is a nuclear conspiracy plot that The Hindu called a 'roller-coaster of nail-biting suspense.' I followed that up with a Mughal period adventure called The Treasure of Kafur, for those who love a fast-paced story set in history, My third, Skyfire, was released in December 2016. It's also a thriller centred around weather manipulation and has been very well received. I'd like to think all my books will grip you and not let you go till the very last page!
When I'm not writing and traveling (and trekking in the Himalayas), I support a number of NGOs focusing on disability and the cause of deprived and missing children.
I also speak to schools and colleges, corporates and general audiences on topics as varied as converting one's life into a thriller, sparking the creativity within each of us, and similar topics. All talks are peppered with a lot of fun and examples taken from some of my own unusual and strange experiences.
Do visit my website for details about me, my writing, speaking, and other activities. I specially welcome those who want to get involved in voluntary activities with NGOs.
Till 2014, I ran my own manufacturing and research companies, both of which have since been successfully divested to multinationals.
I'm now taking that old Chinese proverb seriously: 'Enjoy life: it's later than you think.' So what I really do is travel to strange and offbeat places, meet as many people as I can from all walks of life; in short explore every nook and corner that I possibly can of this enormous canvas called life.
I also write. Books have inevitably been an important part of my journey. Conan Doyle was once asked who he wrote his Sherlock Holmes stories for and he replied, 'For the man who is half a boy and for the boy who is half a man.' It has been so with me ever since. Doyle, John Buchan, Rider Haggard and Kalki’s novels in Tamil fired my imagination at an early age with their classics of detection, adventure and history and I’ve been hooked to a good yarn for as long as I can remember.
My three books are all in the thriller and adventure genre . My first, The Shadow Throne is a nuclear conspiracy plot that The Hindu called a 'roller-coaster of nail-biting suspense.' I followed that up with a Mughal period adventure called The Treasure of Kafur, for those who love a fast-paced story set in history, My third, Skyfire, was released in December 2016. It's also a thriller centred around weather manipulation and has been very well received. I'd like to think all my books will grip you and not let you go till the very last page!
When I'm not writing and traveling (and trekking in the Himalayas), I support a number of NGOs focusing on disability and the cause of deprived and missing children.
I also speak to schools and colleges, corporates and general audiences on topics as varied as converting one's life into a thriller, sparking the creativity within each of us, and similar topics. All talks are peppered with a lot of fun and examples taken from some of my own unusual and strange experiences.
Do visit my website for details about me, my writing, speaking, and other activities. I specially welcome those who want to get involved in voluntary activities with NGOs.
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June 14, 2017
A secret treasure of import.
Being hidden so no one can find it.
The hiding place is ingenious.
You instantly hope you’re in for a treat.
Fast forward a few century. A coupe is brewing. The hunt for the treasure is afoot. The guardian of the treasure, Ambu, is being hunted. Dattatreya, Ambu’s grandson, the protagonist is a guardian in the making. Not yet aware of his charge. His world turns upside down when he becomes hunted for reasons he is not aware of. His grandmother kidnapped and his life at stake. He finds companions in his animal friends whom he can speak to.
Great Mughal emperor Akbar needs to be informed of the coupe for he and he alone can free Datta’s grandmother.
So begins the chase.
Sounds interesting right?
To me it sounded like a great plot. The writing was great and spot on from the very first page. But the whole story took a hit when Datta becomes a sidekick to all his animals.
So who’s the Protaginist you ask?
A Cow, A turtle, A parrot and Two Ravens. That’s right, Two ravens. Score!!!
Soon we realize that it is all about these animals. They go on to save the reign of Akbar. Jalaluddin Muhammad Akbar himself. The greatest emperor.
Well, this book was pretty bland. The only good thing was the writing which kept me from DNF’ing this. It is just the way this book is written, it comes across as decent. So writer has that going on for him.
Other than that the whole plot loses sense quarter of the way in. The worst part of the book is, the whole fabled Treasure of Kafur, main stay of the book is never revealed. I mean I can understand the author not revealing the treasure’s location but what is the nature of that treasure could’ve been disclosed.
I don’t know, my feelings for this book are confusing. I hated it in parts and liked it in parts. Lets just leave it at that.
Not gonna recommend to anybody though.
Being hidden so no one can find it.
The hiding place is ingenious.
You instantly hope you’re in for a treat.
Fast forward a few century. A coupe is brewing. The hunt for the treasure is afoot. The guardian of the treasure, Ambu, is being hunted. Dattatreya, Ambu’s grandson, the protagonist is a guardian in the making. Not yet aware of his charge. His world turns upside down when he becomes hunted for reasons he is not aware of. His grandmother kidnapped and his life at stake. He finds companions in his animal friends whom he can speak to.
Great Mughal emperor Akbar needs to be informed of the coupe for he and he alone can free Datta’s grandmother.
So begins the chase.
Sounds interesting right?
To me it sounded like a great plot. The writing was great and spot on from the very first page. But the whole story took a hit when Datta becomes a sidekick to all his animals.
So who’s the Protaginist you ask?
A Cow, A turtle, A parrot and Two Ravens. That’s right, Two ravens. Score!!!
Soon we realize that it is all about these animals. They go on to save the reign of Akbar. Jalaluddin Muhammad Akbar himself. The greatest emperor.
Well, this book was pretty bland. The only good thing was the writing which kept me from DNF’ing this. It is just the way this book is written, it comes across as decent. So writer has that going on for him.
Other than that the whole plot loses sense quarter of the way in. The worst part of the book is, the whole fabled Treasure of Kafur, main stay of the book is never revealed. I mean I can understand the author not revealing the treasure’s location but what is the nature of that treasure could’ve been disclosed.
I don’t know, my feelings for this book are confusing. I hated it in parts and liked it in parts. Lets just leave it at that.
Not gonna recommend to anybody though.
August 12, 2015
I just surface-read reviews before taking up a book, and I took this one up thinking that it was historical fiction. It came as a real surprise and a pleasant one at that when it turned out to be a brilliantly crafted action-packed fantasy set in Mughal India. Aroon Raman's command over the language combined with his Haggardian story-telling made this one a thoroughly compelling read for me.I think fantasy-lovers shouldn't miss this one.
March 1, 2014
There is a moment in the latter half of this book where Dattatreya, the protagonist, is engaged in battle with anti-Mughal forces as a scout when he suddenly falls off his horse because of an attack from an assailant (whose identity shall remain undisclosed for obvious reasons). And this is perhaps the point where this book stops being the effortlessly smooth ride it had been till that point. Unfulfilled promise, to sum it up in a couple of words.
I had the pleasure of reading Aroon Raman's debut novel "The Shadow Throne" last year, a gripping espionage thriller set in the backdrop of a possible nuclear armageddon in the subcontinent. "The Treasure of Kafur" is his second novel, but it was actually written before "The Shadow Throne", so in essence it is his first book.
The story, though most of it being set in the 16th century during the reign of Mughal Emperor Akbar the Great, opens in AD 1312 where a trusted band of men led by Malik Kafur, the famed general of Alauddin Khilji (Sultan of Delhi), covertly bury sealed chests in an unknown location in Central India. Fast forward two hundred & fifty years and we are in Khandesh, whose tyrannical ruler Asaf Ali Baig is plotting against the Mughal Empire & has stumbled upon the secret of Kafur's legendary treasure. The only person who knows where the treasure lies is Ambu, an old woman who lives in Sillod with her adolescent grandson Dattatreya. Both possess some incredible gifts on account of their lineage as Guardians, a fact that is unknown to most people in the world. When Baig realises this, he abducts Ambu & orders the capture of Datta as leverage, but Datta manages to escape somehow. But will he able to seek an audience with the Mughal Emperor & moreover, will Akbar believe what he knows? Plunged into a race against time & death, Datta's actions hold the key to the course of history of Hindustan as well as the Mughal Empire.
Despite being billed as a historical thriller, the book has a strong element of fantasy to it as well. Initially, this aspect was a bit irksome but as I read on it integrated itself well into the story, so much that I began to enjoy it too, such as this one sequence when Datta has to make a run for the Babur Darwaza (the gateway to the Mughal Empire in central India) with Baig's soldiers in hot pursuit. Characterisation is definitely a strong point of this book, as even the supporting cast such as Akbar's confidante Raja Man Singh, his daughter Princess Ahilya, Datta's companion Dilawar Khan, the Khandeshi army commander Rahmatullah Khan or even minor characters like the Sufi saint Zaheer-ud-din are well drawn out.
The writing is also very good for a thriller & Raman vividly brings the story to life, painting it on the canvas of 16th century India. Raman avoids the trappings of resorting to cliches as the budding friendship that develops between Datta & Princess Ahilya takes its course & instead chooses to portray the tension that is obvious between two intimate souls.
But the end, oh man - if only Datta had not fallen off that horse. Contrary to what I expected in the climax, the story veered off in a entirely different direction. I understand the need to bring closure to a certain set of events set in motion or characters & I do agree it certainly accomplished that, but what could've been a final flourish feels as if the conclusion misses its mark completely. That is where I stopped caring about what happened to either the central characters or the treasure or well, the story itself.
It is perhaps a point of criticism I levelled against the author even when I reviewed "The Shadow Throne" - that he resolves things far too easily for a thriller. While the novels overall are enjoyable, the endings leave behind a bittersweet taste. I hope I can say something to the contrary when I read his next book.
I'm going with 3 to 3.5 stars for "The Treasure of Kafur" by Aroon Raman. Despite its flaws, I'd suggest you do not give this a miss. Recommended for readers of Indian popular fiction & those who love a good ol' adventure tale.
P.S. I received a copy of this book from the author & I solemnly maintain that my review was in no way influenced by the same.
I had the pleasure of reading Aroon Raman's debut novel "The Shadow Throne" last year, a gripping espionage thriller set in the backdrop of a possible nuclear armageddon in the subcontinent. "The Treasure of Kafur" is his second novel, but it was actually written before "The Shadow Throne", so in essence it is his first book.
The story, though most of it being set in the 16th century during the reign of Mughal Emperor Akbar the Great, opens in AD 1312 where a trusted band of men led by Malik Kafur, the famed general of Alauddin Khilji (Sultan of Delhi), covertly bury sealed chests in an unknown location in Central India. Fast forward two hundred & fifty years and we are in Khandesh, whose tyrannical ruler Asaf Ali Baig is plotting against the Mughal Empire & has stumbled upon the secret of Kafur's legendary treasure. The only person who knows where the treasure lies is Ambu, an old woman who lives in Sillod with her adolescent grandson Dattatreya. Both possess some incredible gifts on account of their lineage as Guardians, a fact that is unknown to most people in the world. When Baig realises this, he abducts Ambu & orders the capture of Datta as leverage, but Datta manages to escape somehow. But will he able to seek an audience with the Mughal Emperor & moreover, will Akbar believe what he knows? Plunged into a race against time & death, Datta's actions hold the key to the course of history of Hindustan as well as the Mughal Empire.
Despite being billed as a historical thriller, the book has a strong element of fantasy to it as well. Initially, this aspect was a bit irksome but as I read on it integrated itself well into the story, so much that I began to enjoy it too, such as this one sequence when Datta has to make a run for the Babur Darwaza (the gateway to the Mughal Empire in central India) with Baig's soldiers in hot pursuit. Characterisation is definitely a strong point of this book, as even the supporting cast such as Akbar's confidante Raja Man Singh, his daughter Princess Ahilya, Datta's companion Dilawar Khan, the Khandeshi army commander Rahmatullah Khan or even minor characters like the Sufi saint Zaheer-ud-din are well drawn out.
The writing is also very good for a thriller & Raman vividly brings the story to life, painting it on the canvas of 16th century India. Raman avoids the trappings of resorting to cliches as the budding friendship that develops between Datta & Princess Ahilya takes its course & instead chooses to portray the tension that is obvious between two intimate souls.
But the end, oh man - if only Datta had not fallen off that horse. Contrary to what I expected in the climax, the story veered off in a entirely different direction. I understand the need to bring closure to a certain set of events set in motion or characters & I do agree it certainly accomplished that, but what could've been a final flourish feels as if the conclusion misses its mark completely. That is where I stopped caring about what happened to either the central characters or the treasure or well, the story itself.
It is perhaps a point of criticism I levelled against the author even when I reviewed "The Shadow Throne" - that he resolves things far too easily for a thriller. While the novels overall are enjoyable, the endings leave behind a bittersweet taste. I hope I can say something to the contrary when I read his next book.
I'm going with 3 to 3.5 stars for "The Treasure of Kafur" by Aroon Raman. Despite its flaws, I'd suggest you do not give this a miss. Recommended for readers of Indian popular fiction & those who love a good ol' adventure tale.
P.S. I received a copy of this book from the author & I solemnly maintain that my review was in no way influenced by the same.
February 24, 2014
I was very reluctant to start reading this book. Something about the cover of the book and the description didn't feel very inviting. However, the fact that I got an author signed copy to read(thanks to Goodreads) and that I had promised the author to review it when collecting the same forced me to start reading.
The is a fantasy novel based in Hindustan during the Mughal period. History and folklore has been used intermittently by the author to tell the tale. Though the canvas of the story is as large as the Hindustan empire, it is, in essence a simple tale of a 6 months long adventure of a man as he tries to rescue his grandmother who has been kidnapped by a Asaf Baig, the local tyrant king.
The author has written the story in a world which is quite dissimilar to the one we live in right now. Therefore the story was very unconvincing in the beginning. However once the ground rules has been set, the rest of the book was a gripping ride. This book would definitely capture the attention of people who have been mesmerized by the stories of great kings.
Though many of the characters seems to be too good to be true, it is clear that a lot of research has gone into the book. The way the cities, landscape and kingdoms have been described tells you that. The author also didn't make the mistake of throwing around trivia everywhere.
If you read this book without much expectation and without reading too much about it beforehand, I am sure you will love this thrilling tale, as I did. Though I haven't yet clicked on "become a fan", this book has certainly made me mark the other book by this author as "Want to Read".
The is a fantasy novel based in Hindustan during the Mughal period. History and folklore has been used intermittently by the author to tell the tale. Though the canvas of the story is as large as the Hindustan empire, it is, in essence a simple tale of a 6 months long adventure of a man as he tries to rescue his grandmother who has been kidnapped by a Asaf Baig, the local tyrant king.
The author has written the story in a world which is quite dissimilar to the one we live in right now. Therefore the story was very unconvincing in the beginning. However once the ground rules has been set, the rest of the book was a gripping ride. This book would definitely capture the attention of people who have been mesmerized by the stories of great kings.
Though many of the characters seems to be too good to be true, it is clear that a lot of research has gone into the book. The way the cities, landscape and kingdoms have been described tells you that. The author also didn't make the mistake of throwing around trivia everywhere.
If you read this book without much expectation and without reading too much about it beforehand, I am sure you will love this thrilling tale, as I did. Though I haven't yet clicked on "become a fan", this book has certainly made me mark the other book by this author as "Want to Read".
June 6, 2016
A chase-story with a little fantasy set in Akbar's India. The first half reminded me of the Jungle Book and the Lord of the Rings (dont know what happens in the second half of LOTR anyways :P ).
There r twists, there r places where u think game over and the author makes the game live on. There is a lot of thoughtful effort and smart editing in crafting this novel and there are hardly any dull moments and no lazy writing. A lot of things could have gone wrong - too much masala, too loud dialogues, too gaudy and heroic heroes, inconsistency in depicting fantasy but amazingly none went wrong, despite this being the author's first book. The author seemed self-assured.
The icing on the cake - I am a fan of Emperor Akbar, and he plays a great part in the last 100 pages or so. Also I read a superb historical fiction earlier on Malik Kafur Gods, Kings & Slaves: The Siege of Madurai and so the title appealed and held context for me.
There r twists, there r places where u think game over and the author makes the game live on. There is a lot of thoughtful effort and smart editing in crafting this novel and there are hardly any dull moments and no lazy writing. A lot of things could have gone wrong - too much masala, too loud dialogues, too gaudy and heroic heroes, inconsistency in depicting fantasy but amazingly none went wrong, despite this being the author's first book. The author seemed self-assured.
The icing on the cake - I am a fan of Emperor Akbar, and he plays a great part in the last 100 pages or so. Also I read a superb historical fiction earlier on Malik Kafur Gods, Kings & Slaves: The Siege of Madurai and so the title appealed and held context for me.
January 24, 2014
***I had received a signed copy of the book to review***
‘The Treasure of Kafur’ is a story set during the golden era of the Mughal period when Akbar is the King of Hindustan. The Deccanis want to seize the throne and are searching for the famed treasure of Malik Kafur to finance the war. The story involves the Rajput clans, elements of fantasy, a quest and an unfinished love story. There are some historical inaccuracies, but this can be ignored in this work of fiction.
Ambu, who is a Guardian of a grove, has been kidnapped by Asaf Baig, the ruler of Khandesh. Baig believes that Ambu can guide him to the treasure of Kafur. Her grandson, Datta, has to reach out to Akbar for saving her and the treasure. Ambu and Datta can telepathically communicate with the animals around them. The animals are very loyal to the Guardians. Baig has sent his men and some killers to capture Datta. Datta is able to reach Agra, where Akbar is presently residing and tell him about the approaching war and the presence of the treasure.
The main character of the story is Datta. He goes through a lot of hardships to reach the Emperor. His friendship with Dilawar, son of an army chief is very nicely developed. Akbar is shown as a just and fair ruler and makes his presence felt in the later part of the story. The book could have ended with the ending of the war. The only part of the story which I did not like was the love angel. Why was it needed? It could have been done without. Maybe the author, Aroon Raman was looking for a way to write a sequel. But in my opinion, the heroics of Akbar would have provided enough material for the next book.
My favourite part was the meeting between Akbar and Rana Pratap. And I was expecting a second meeting between them after the war was over and was disappointed not to see it.
Nevertheless, the author had written a very good story. It’s great to see that the authors are finally incorporating the rich historical past of our country in their stories. More books about Akbar would make for a great reading.
‘The Treasure of Kafur’ is a story set during the golden era of the Mughal period when Akbar is the King of Hindustan. The Deccanis want to seize the throne and are searching for the famed treasure of Malik Kafur to finance the war. The story involves the Rajput clans, elements of fantasy, a quest and an unfinished love story. There are some historical inaccuracies, but this can be ignored in this work of fiction.
Ambu, who is a Guardian of a grove, has been kidnapped by Asaf Baig, the ruler of Khandesh. Baig believes that Ambu can guide him to the treasure of Kafur. Her grandson, Datta, has to reach out to Akbar for saving her and the treasure. Ambu and Datta can telepathically communicate with the animals around them. The animals are very loyal to the Guardians. Baig has sent his men and some killers to capture Datta. Datta is able to reach Agra, where Akbar is presently residing and tell him about the approaching war and the presence of the treasure.
The main character of the story is Datta. He goes through a lot of hardships to reach the Emperor. His friendship with Dilawar, son of an army chief is very nicely developed. Akbar is shown as a just and fair ruler and makes his presence felt in the later part of the story. The book could have ended with the ending of the war. The only part of the story which I did not like was the love angel. Why was it needed? It could have been done without. Maybe the author, Aroon Raman was looking for a way to write a sequel. But in my opinion, the heroics of Akbar would have provided enough material for the next book.
My favourite part was the meeting between Akbar and Rana Pratap. And I was expecting a second meeting between them after the war was over and was disappointed not to see it.
Nevertheless, the author had written a very good story. It’s great to see that the authors are finally incorporating the rich historical past of our country in their stories. More books about Akbar would make for a great reading.
June 15, 2015
Author's hand down
First of all a huge thanks and a big hug to the author for sharing me a copy and going through the pain of personally sending me the book and was really touched by this gesture.
Coming on to the book, its not just because i got a personal copy, that i go on to say that this was one of the best books i have read and that too coming from an Indian author.I will admit that i m always a bit apprehensive about reading Indian authors because none of them take the effort in researching and going with full force on their work and this lethargy and incompleteness makes the book unworthy but in this case i was clearly impressed by the author as this book has focused on a dedicated research work that is beautifully threaded into the narration of the story.
what i like about the book is the whole plot itself that clearly shows the effect of hard work done in bringing together the research work and the storytelling skills together.The book is a historical fiction and the author has managed to bring the whole scene very vivid and authentic with description and each historic character has been etched so efficiently that in a way you learn the history as well as get more involved into the story. There is a bit mystical element sieved into the plot that clearly adds to the charm of the whole story. The whole narration of the war scenes shows the ability of the author to bring the words to life. The book has quite an impressive pace and retains your interest throughout.
what i did not like is the fact that the book made me open dictionary more frequently than expected because there are so many hard biting words that you do tend to halt and open that dictionary but apart from that the book was a fun ride
The book has a soul and the author has managed to capture it perfectly. The book is an interesting read with good narration capabilities that piques one's interest in historical facts and i m sure once you are over with the book you will start seeing the Mughal Emperor Akbar in a new perspective
First of all a huge thanks and a big hug to the author for sharing me a copy and going through the pain of personally sending me the book and was really touched by this gesture.
Coming on to the book, its not just because i got a personal copy, that i go on to say that this was one of the best books i have read and that too coming from an Indian author.I will admit that i m always a bit apprehensive about reading Indian authors because none of them take the effort in researching and going with full force on their work and this lethargy and incompleteness makes the book unworthy but in this case i was clearly impressed by the author as this book has focused on a dedicated research work that is beautifully threaded into the narration of the story.
what i like about the book is the whole plot itself that clearly shows the effect of hard work done in bringing together the research work and the storytelling skills together.The book is a historical fiction and the author has managed to bring the whole scene very vivid and authentic with description and each historic character has been etched so efficiently that in a way you learn the history as well as get more involved into the story. There is a bit mystical element sieved into the plot that clearly adds to the charm of the whole story. The whole narration of the war scenes shows the ability of the author to bring the words to life. The book has quite an impressive pace and retains your interest throughout.
what i did not like is the fact that the book made me open dictionary more frequently than expected because there are so many hard biting words that you do tend to halt and open that dictionary but apart from that the book was a fun ride
The book has a soul and the author has managed to capture it perfectly. The book is an interesting read with good narration capabilities that piques one's interest in historical facts and i m sure once you are over with the book you will start seeing the Mughal Emperor Akbar in a new perspective
January 9, 2014
This one turned out to be one very interesting surprise package. Quite an unexpected cast of characters who support the protagonist in the story.
The story has a treasure but much more than that the story is about the politics, about royalty, about a special gift, about the companions of the hero-kid and his friends ... and of the Emperor and the King ... of fierce loyalty and friendship.
The book blurb doesnt do it justice ... the book is much more than that ...
but then if the blurb had mentioned it .. it wouldn't have been such a sweet little surprise.
Must Read. I readily recommend ...
The story has a treasure but much more than that the story is about the politics, about royalty, about a special gift, about the companions of the hero-kid and his friends ... and of the Emperor and the King ... of fierce loyalty and friendship.
The book blurb doesnt do it justice ... the book is much more than that ...
but then if the blurb had mentioned it .. it wouldn't have been such a sweet little surprise.
Must Read. I readily recommend ...
January 29, 2014
There's always a wonderful feeling after completing a book with more than 375 pages. I am done reading one of the latest releases- THE TREASURE OF KAFUR. It's the second book of the author, Aroon Raman, after The Shadow Throne. I haven't read the latter one but what I have heard from people around me that it is an excellent and thrilling story. I got a chance to read his 2nd and the latest book which I did without thinking twice. The book is published by India's one of the leading publishers- Pan Macmillan. The first thing about this book that would attract you is its cover page. It itself has an essence and ambiance of Mughal era. It shows a king riding on his horse with the flag of his kingdom. Even the synopsis does justice to the story as its exactly what's in the book unlike few of our Indian books which has brilliance in the synopsis and depression inside the book. :-) Talking about the publishing quality, the book is well bound with strong pages and wonderful fonts.
SYNOPSIS:-
Hindustan, 1580 AD. The Mughal Emperor Akbar is at the height of his power, seemingly invincible. But twenty years of war have earned him many enemies and rebellion is brewing, led by Asaf Baig, the tyrannical ruler of Khandesh. Baig has stumbled upon the knowledge that the whereabouts of the fabulous lost treasure of Malik Kafur, which will guarantee victory to Akbars enemies, is known to an old woman called Ambu. Baig kidnaps Ambu to wrest the knowledge of the treasure from her but her twenty-year-old grandson, Dattatreya, escapes and flees across Hindustan to enlist the help of the one person who has the most reason to stop Baig the Mughal Emperor himself. Staying one step ahead of capture and death, Datta is swept up in a world of kings and warrior princesses, of uncommon friendships and an implacable evil and a desperate race against time to save his grandmother and the Empire.
About the Author:-
Aroon Raman, national bestselling author of The Shadow Throne, now brings us a riveting saga of action and adventure set in Mughal India. Aroon Raman is a Bengaluru based entrepreneur and author. His research and innovation company works in the area of materials science and has won critical acclaim for developing scientific talent at the grass-roots level. His debut novel, a spy thriller called The Shadow Throne, quickly became a national bestseller. The Treasure of Kafur is his second novel. He divides his spare time between trekking, advising and supporting NGOs and travel.
The Treasure of Kafur, for me, reflects the thoughts of the author. A fluid language in which this book is smoothly written makes it a wonderful read that it is. The command of language that the author has and the set of vocabulary that he possesses makes it possible for him to state the story exactly the way he wants to. The good thing is that the story reaches directly to the heart of readers. Aroon Raman has done a great research in making it sure that he doesn't forget to mention any fact about the Mughal emperor and empire. I have already read many books on Mughal and while in school, it was my favorite topic in history. Hence I loved this story because it is a level upper than all the book that I have read previously based on Mughal.
Each and every character is well defined in the book which helps us to understand them from their base. The protagonists- Ambu, Dattatreya and Emperor Akbar were well-defined and executed. None of them were under-stated in the book. The animal characters and the others from the protagonist's team were very interesting. I loved Manas, Aditi, chief, Shukracharya, Jeta friends and Sheherazad has been my favorite. Even the entry of parrot in the story was entertaining as there was conflicting between it and a protagonist. I also liked the interactions that had Mughals involved among each other. Later on, when Mughal Emperor, Akbar comes into the story, the book reaches a totally different level altogether. Book starts with very fast pace, gets slow in between and in the end, it starts screaming BESTSELLER BESTSELLER BESTSELLER with each sentence as the book reaches its end. I would rate The Treasure of Kafur 4.3/5. RECOMMENDED!!!
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ABHILASH RUHELA - VEERU!!!
January 31, 2014
The first book of Aroon Raman was a national bestseller (I haven't read that book yet). I bought the book because it has an eye catching title (I am always a sucker for historical fiction), lovely cover, and an engaging synopsis on the back cover. The story itself is way more interesting, engaging and entertaining than what the first visible aspects of the book promised.
In this story, we have the buried treasure of Malik Kafur, the plundering general of Alaudin Khilji who looted Devgiri and Uraiyur among others. We also have the protagonist Datta who has the gift of communicating telepathically with birds and animals, something that readers of fantasy would lap up easily. Now set this story against a well-known part of history involving the Mughal King Akbar, Raja Man Singh, Rana Pratap Singh and others. We have all the ingredients for a Master Chef (substitute Chef by Author) like Aroon Raman to whip up a delectable, exotic and immensely enjoyable dish!
Detractors of the mughal rule join together when the opportunity to grab the fabled treasure of Kafur surfaces to fund a campaign to defeat Akbar and install a puppet in his place. Datta's grandmother, Ambu, a Guardian is kidnapped so that the location of the treasure is revealed. Datta travels to Agra with his animal friends and Dilawar a soldier in the mughal army of Man Singh with the hope of seeking Akbar's help in freeing Ambu and preventing the treasure from falling into evil hands.
The evolving friendship between Dilawar and Datta has been wonderfully developed. Princess Ahilya is the spirited daughter of Man Singh and an expert archer. Ahilya gets friendly with Datta and Dilawar and experiences an amazing life outside the palace and its trappings. Akbar, accompanied by Dilawar and Datta go incognito on a mission to neutralize the leader of the detractors and free Ambu. Ahilya joins the mission at a critical stage.
I loved the encounter between Rana Pratap Singh and Akbar (in disguise). The pace of the narration is furious making the book a wonderful page turner. Datta's animal friends are lovable. I find this book a wholesome entertainment - a bit of history here, a bit of fantasy there, a bit of adventure, a bit of intrigue, a bit of subtle romance... What more can one ask for! A sequel perhaps!
Well, the author has concluded this book with that opportunity for a sequel. I, for one, would look out for the sequel.
I will now get hold of Aroon Raman's first book and read it too!
In this story, we have the buried treasure of Malik Kafur, the plundering general of Alaudin Khilji who looted Devgiri and Uraiyur among others. We also have the protagonist Datta who has the gift of communicating telepathically with birds and animals, something that readers of fantasy would lap up easily. Now set this story against a well-known part of history involving the Mughal King Akbar, Raja Man Singh, Rana Pratap Singh and others. We have all the ingredients for a Master Chef (substitute Chef by Author) like Aroon Raman to whip up a delectable, exotic and immensely enjoyable dish!
Detractors of the mughal rule join together when the opportunity to grab the fabled treasure of Kafur surfaces to fund a campaign to defeat Akbar and install a puppet in his place. Datta's grandmother, Ambu, a Guardian is kidnapped so that the location of the treasure is revealed. Datta travels to Agra with his animal friends and Dilawar a soldier in the mughal army of Man Singh with the hope of seeking Akbar's help in freeing Ambu and preventing the treasure from falling into evil hands.
The evolving friendship between Dilawar and Datta has been wonderfully developed. Princess Ahilya is the spirited daughter of Man Singh and an expert archer. Ahilya gets friendly with Datta and Dilawar and experiences an amazing life outside the palace and its trappings. Akbar, accompanied by Dilawar and Datta go incognito on a mission to neutralize the leader of the detractors and free Ambu. Ahilya joins the mission at a critical stage.
I loved the encounter between Rana Pratap Singh and Akbar (in disguise). The pace of the narration is furious making the book a wonderful page turner. Datta's animal friends are lovable. I find this book a wholesome entertainment - a bit of history here, a bit of fantasy there, a bit of adventure, a bit of intrigue, a bit of subtle romance... What more can one ask for! A sequel perhaps!
Well, the author has concluded this book with that opportunity for a sequel. I, for one, would look out for the sequel.
I will now get hold of Aroon Raman's first book and read it too!
August 28, 2017
I was motivated to take this book in hands. Neither because of reviews nor because of its ratings. I took this book in hand because I have seen Mr. Aroon Raman personally as an advisor in my professional life. He comes through his words as very simple and powerful person. The impression of Mr. Raman as an successful entrepreneur and brilliant advisor motivated me to grab The Treasure Of Kafur. I was sure that this treasure is going to be worth reading. I must tell you after finishing it today, believe it or not, this treasure is priceless. Go ahead and experience the journey of Dattatreya and his Grandmother Ambu. This thrilling journey will take you through Hindustan of Mughal times. You can live with the animals and birds who are the part of this thrilling journey of escapes and wars. I enjoyed it.
September 9, 2014
Let us begin with a little bit of history : Ala-ud-din Khilji ruled India in between the 12th and 13th centuries. He won renown as the ruler who brought down the might of the Rajputs with the defeat of Rani Padmini of Chittor after a ferocious battle. Khilji's rule was a front runner of the later rule of the Mughals in India from the early 16th century. He is one of the invisible yet powerful presences in this story. The second character is an extended cameo and is a renowned emperor of the Mughal dynasty : Jalal ud-din Muhammad Akbar. The emperor has been described by history to be a just, fair and wise ruler but one with a wild streak and an insatiable hunger for adventure. Aroon Raman's story connects both these characters separated by centuries of bloody history through the thread of a fabled lost treasure. A treasure that was hidden from the eyes of the world by Khilji's general Malik Kafur.
At the onset itself it becomes clear that this is not historical fiction. There is only a gossamer thin thread of historical fact running underneath a fantasy novel. A world populated by anthropomorphic animals, black magic and evil cults. The story is well written against the backdrop of the Mughal dynasty settling in slowly as it ascends higher to a truly pan-Indian reach. The author himself agrees that he has taken some artistic licenses with the dates of various events to come up with this tale. Considering the pace of story telling and the scenarios portrayed here, it is rather well done a plot.
This should have been a four star book for sure if it were not for the climax and the penultimate chapter. There is obviously the need for bringing all the plot points to a closure and in tying up all loose ends before you draw the curtains on the tale. But the last two chapters do this in a whirlwind fashion and the climax especially did not sit well with me. For a book that held my attention with its swift momentum and interesting characters, the climax was a let down.
Interesting work of fiction by all means. As for the climax, I would let the readers decide their feelings for it post your own read of it.
At the onset itself it becomes clear that this is not historical fiction. There is only a gossamer thin thread of historical fact running underneath a fantasy novel. A world populated by anthropomorphic animals, black magic and evil cults. The story is well written against the backdrop of the Mughal dynasty settling in slowly as it ascends higher to a truly pan-Indian reach. The author himself agrees that he has taken some artistic licenses with the dates of various events to come up with this tale. Considering the pace of story telling and the scenarios portrayed here, it is rather well done a plot.
This should have been a four star book for sure if it were not for the climax and the penultimate chapter. There is obviously the need for bringing all the plot points to a closure and in tying up all loose ends before you draw the curtains on the tale. But the last two chapters do this in a whirlwind fashion and the climax especially did not sit well with me. For a book that held my attention with its swift momentum and interesting characters, the climax was a let down.
Interesting work of fiction by all means. As for the climax, I would let the readers decide their feelings for it post your own read of it.
April 2, 2020
Wow what a wonder ride through history. This is a historical fiction with quite bit of fantasy mixed in and the result is simply great. This really is a pageturner. The story is about the treasure of Malik Kafur which is lost and no one knows its location except for our hero Datta's Grandma Ambu.
Our villain kidnaps Ambu and Datta starts his journey to Mughal emperor to seek help to free her and along with him he has his friends Aditi - a Cow, Manas - A Tortoise, Kanka - a Raven, Shukra - A Raven, Sheherazad - a Parrot (probably a Maccow).
I would repeat I simply loved this book all the major characters from that time period are present here namely: Raja Maan Singh, Akbar, Todarmal, Jodha Bai and Maharana Pratap Singh and many more as well.
People who don't read generally ask me my reasons for reading. Simply put I just love reading and so to that end I have made it my motto to just Keep on Reading. I love to read everything except for Self Help books but even those once in a while. I read almost all the genre but YA, Fantasy, Biographies are the most. My favorite series is, of course, Harry Potter but then there are many more books that I just adore. I have bookcases filled with books which are waiting to be read so can't stay and spend more time in this review, so remember I loved reading this and love reading more, you should also read what you love and then just Keep on Reading.
Major part of the story is dedicated to travel as it had to be the case during 1580s.
Give it a try you won't be missing anything else much.
I also received an author signed copy but the review is not influenced by that factor at all.
Our villain kidnaps Ambu and Datta starts his journey to Mughal emperor to seek help to free her and along with him he has his friends Aditi - a Cow, Manas - A Tortoise, Kanka - a Raven, Shukra - A Raven, Sheherazad - a Parrot (probably a Maccow).
I would repeat I simply loved this book all the major characters from that time period are present here namely: Raja Maan Singh, Akbar, Todarmal, Jodha Bai and Maharana Pratap Singh and many more as well.
People who don't read generally ask me my reasons for reading. Simply put I just love reading and so to that end I have made it my motto to just Keep on Reading. I love to read everything except for Self Help books but even those once in a while. I read almost all the genre but YA, Fantasy, Biographies are the most. My favorite series is, of course, Harry Potter but then there are many more books that I just adore. I have bookcases filled with books which are waiting to be read so can't stay and spend more time in this review, so remember I loved reading this and love reading more, you should also read what you love and then just Keep on Reading.
Major part of the story is dedicated to travel as it had to be the case during 1580s.
Give it a try you won't be missing anything else much.
I also received an author signed copy but the review is not influenced by that factor at all.
October 25, 2015
This is the first book I am reading written by Aroon. This is my first book regarding Indian historical fiction. Aroon got the pulse of the reader.
There are some elements of fantasy, but those are confided to only few characters in particular say two, only Ambu and Datta, have the capability to communicate with pets telepathically.
There are some statements which attracts more attention like, "Animals speak from their heart, you will have to do so from your head" written by Ambu to Datta to survive in a society where people speak from their head.
Also "Fear resides in the mind, it does not exist outside ourselves. When it seizes you, seize it back in turn; then you become its master." I think this is really outstanding.
There are many statements like these.
A mixture of many ingredients like adventure, love, history, suspense, fantasy are present here which make the book more savoring.
Secret is kept as a secret even for the reader. The secret mission of Akbar and Fateh to rescue Ambu from Asif Baig, the author did not mention how they have saved her but indicated before that The Emperor is the only one who possesses the ability to turn every challenge to his advantage.
This is definitely one of the best historical fictions.
There are some elements of fantasy, but those are confided to only few characters in particular say two, only Ambu and Datta, have the capability to communicate with pets telepathically.
There are some statements which attracts more attention like, "Animals speak from their heart, you will have to do so from your head" written by Ambu to Datta to survive in a society where people speak from their head.
Also "Fear resides in the mind, it does not exist outside ourselves. When it seizes you, seize it back in turn; then you become its master." I think this is really outstanding.
There are many statements like these.
A mixture of many ingredients like adventure, love, history, suspense, fantasy are present here which make the book more savoring.
Secret is kept as a secret even for the reader. The secret mission of Akbar and Fateh to rescue Ambu from Asif Baig, the author did not mention how they have saved her but indicated before that The Emperor is the only one who possesses the ability to turn every challenge to his advantage.
This is definitely one of the best historical fictions.
January 24, 2014
This book was sent to me by the author for an honest review.
I had not hear of Aroon's earlier book which is surprising because I felt he writes well. There was no unnecessary drama and lingering over the same thought.
The only thing I found out of place were the telepathic animals - I can understand talking to animals, but no the animal's ability to articulate so well and strategise. But once you get over that, it is a relatively fast-paced book. At first I wondered why there seems to be no rush in the rescue, but then those were the days of horses and even minor communications took days.
The history is not completely accurate as he mentions at the end, but a lot of it did happen, albeit at a different time.
I had not hear of Aroon's earlier book which is surprising because I felt he writes well. There was no unnecessary drama and lingering over the same thought.
The only thing I found out of place were the telepathic animals - I can understand talking to animals, but no the animal's ability to articulate so well and strategise. But once you get over that, it is a relatively fast-paced book. At first I wondered why there seems to be no rush in the rescue, but then those were the days of horses and even minor communications took days.
The history is not completely accurate as he mentions at the end, but a lot of it did happen, albeit at a different time.
April 13, 2014
The story revolves around a young boy by the name of Dattatreya who lives with his grandmother whom he calls Ambu. Asaf Baig, the most despised ruler of Khandesh, is after the treasure of Malik Kafur. The emperor of Hindustan, Akbar is at the same time planning an attack on Khandesh. Ambu is kidnapped by Asaf Baig so to save her Dattatreya rushes with his talking animal friends to Akbar for help. He makes many new friends who along with him embark on a long and tiring journey to save Ambu and the treasure of Kafur while simultaneously fighting off the attacks from the anti-mughal rulers.
This book is filled with excitement, drama, action, thrill and comedy and is amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
This book is filled with excitement, drama, action, thrill and comedy and is amazing !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
December 31, 2013
Probably this is the one historical fiction that I read so quickly. This may be due to the historical facts and figures are known to me as a part of history subject, but the narration part and the story also made me enjoy the book. I was keen to read the book before the new year begins.
October 15, 2014
By far, one of the best historical novels I've read. Each twist in the plot is beautifully written.
June 23, 2017
This is my second book from Aroon Raman and I am rating him a scale of 5 on 5 - his writing excited me. This is an action-fantasy adventure book during the times of bullock carts and horses and Akbar; took me quite by surprise when the pace of the story stared building and that too from page 1. I do not want to be a spoiler of sorts, but the story unravelled from the very start when Malik Kafur decided to hide his treasure (not a spoiler here - but isn't that the book about!). And I could not keep the book down, but as time would have it...I took quite a while to finish, due to the needs of the mundane.
Aroon has used his imagination to bring about a great journey spread out in the Mughal-age India, with subtle references to the kingdoms, kings, games, strife, struggles, conspiracies, magic, opulence, mystical nature of the common Indian life then.
One will find a ready-mix of plots and incidents (sometimes with predictable outcomes), which binds the chapters. A War scene has been described well; the maneuvers, squad movements, the gore...subtle but original. The mystical and magical elements have been interwoven with the mythical. Medieval thoughts, practices, culture, social systems...all interwoven into the story, but still makes for good reading.
The pace of the story is what binds all of it together. One might feel the urge to turn the pages faster and reach the conclusion. Quite movie-like, the script seems to be ready actually. Character building, plot execution, story-line...good reading, really enjoyed it. And Aroon has left an open event the end...for a sequel...that we gotta wait and see it that happens.
Aroon has used his imagination to bring about a great journey spread out in the Mughal-age India, with subtle references to the kingdoms, kings, games, strife, struggles, conspiracies, magic, opulence, mystical nature of the common Indian life then.
One will find a ready-mix of plots and incidents (sometimes with predictable outcomes), which binds the chapters. A War scene has been described well; the maneuvers, squad movements, the gore...subtle but original. The mystical and magical elements have been interwoven with the mythical. Medieval thoughts, practices, culture, social systems...all interwoven into the story, but still makes for good reading.
The pace of the story is what binds all of it together. One might feel the urge to turn the pages faster and reach the conclusion. Quite movie-like, the script seems to be ready actually. Character building, plot execution, story-line...good reading, really enjoyed it. And Aroon has left an open event the end...for a sequel...that we gotta wait and see it that happens.
March 2, 2020
The book is a great mix of fantasy, mystery, adventure and fast paced action. I enjoyed the telepathic conversations between Datta and his friends. For people who enjoyed Enid Blyton as children, this story will remind them of their childhood :)
The historical facts sewn into fiction makes for an interesting read and the author does this without slackening the pace or getting into lecturing on philosophy. The true emotions shared among the various characters are subtly brought out without being too dramatic.
One thing the author could have avoided using a lot would be the Emperor! Though Akbar was known for his escapades in disguise, this story took it a little too far! But overall the writing is so interesting that you tend to forgive the author for this overuse of Emperors heroics.
The historical facts sewn into fiction makes for an interesting read and the author does this without slackening the pace or getting into lecturing on philosophy. The true emotions shared among the various characters are subtly brought out without being too dramatic.
One thing the author could have avoided using a lot would be the Emperor! Though Akbar was known for his escapades in disguise, this story took it a little too far! But overall the writing is so interesting that you tend to forgive the author for this overuse of Emperors heroics.
May 24, 2019
Aroon Raman's maiden novel takes you on an interesting roadtrip across Central Hindustan in 1580 AD. The plot revolves around Ambu, her grandson Datta and a group of interesting characters whose sole aim is to reach the Mughal Emperor Akbar with important information on the lost treasure of Malik Kafur. They must do this before Akbar's many enemies get a hand on the treasure's whereabouts!
The story picks up immense pace with Akbar's entrance and I thoroughly enjoyed the author's potrayal of the Great Emperor of Hindustan!
The book ends with a cliffhanger and I am hopeful that there would be a continuation to Datta's Journey!
Historical fictions are always an interesting read!!!!
The story picks up immense pace with Akbar's entrance and I thoroughly enjoyed the author's potrayal of the Great Emperor of Hindustan!
The book ends with a cliffhanger and I am hopeful that there would be a continuation to Datta's Journey!
Historical fictions are always an interesting read!!!!
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
November 2, 2019
Have realised I am a sucker for historical fiction and this falls right in that definition. A regular action based thriller set in the Mughal era with a few Panchatantra strokes makes this a good masala read without too much time spent on effective character development because action packed storyline is supreme. There were times i felt I was reading a non graphical version of Amar Chitra Katha when well known protagonists like Akbar, Rana Pratap and Malik Kafur were introduced.
Hooter: A mad race to a hidden treasure that could bankroll a successful assault on the Mughal empire and change the course of history led by a motley crew of unlikely suspects hounded by assassins.
Hooter: A mad race to a hidden treasure that could bankroll a successful assault on the Mughal empire and change the course of history led by a motley crew of unlikely suspects hounded by assassins.
November 12, 2021
I think all critics are agreed that Aroon Raman is a gifted writer, I really admired his mastery of language through the book.
Then came in the fantasy bit with the communication with animals and birds, seeking and heeding their advice in matters as grave as war and by emperors, Akbar, no less.
The plot was intriguing, the many characterisations, impressive and a touch thrilling towards the end.
In the words of the author, it is in essence a story of high adventure.
For most readers from India, there will be points and spaces of familiarity, latent memories and piqued interest.
An enjoyable read.
Then came in the fantasy bit with the communication with animals and birds, seeking and heeding their advice in matters as grave as war and by emperors, Akbar, no less.
The plot was intriguing, the many characterisations, impressive and a touch thrilling towards the end.
In the words of the author, it is in essence a story of high adventure.
For most readers from India, there will be points and spaces of familiarity, latent memories and piqued interest.
An enjoyable read.
August 1, 2018
The Treasure of Kafur is a great tale which takes us to the life and times of Emperor Akbar. It also has people communicating with birds and animals, bloodthirsty savages and their practices, great treasures, some romance and edge-of-the-cliff adventures by the protagonists. Yes, there are also a few odd phrases and wrong word usage, which have made it less-than-perfect.
February 9, 2019
This novel offering from Aroon is as gripping as "The Shadow Throne" in terms of the plot and the eventful chronology that unfolds with each page.
The penmanship is commendable to galvanise readers' curiosity but the font size could have been better for an effortless and tedious reading endeavour.
Overall its a worth read.........
The penmanship is commendable to galvanise readers' curiosity but the font size could have been better for an effortless and tedious reading endeavour.
Overall its a worth read.........
June 26, 2020
An interesting buildup to a rather predictable end, Aroon Raman as an author has definitely put in a lot of efforts as if each word was carefully thought and chosen, the book really picks up in the second half, the first half would be inching towards a drag, all in all an a good read for people who want a parallel adventurous fictional story line to the Mughal Empire.
July 25, 2017
I thought it was a historical novel, until I realise that cows, turtles and crows talk.. not just talk, they give advice, keep watch for you, etc, etc...
genre mismatch..
genre mismatch..
May 31, 2019
Story is gripping till fag end, I felt end was stretched.
January 10, 2020
Amazing work on each and every character. Story line brilliantly written using fictional and non-fictional stories from mughal empire.
July 14, 2014
Confused.
Left with these questions among many others:
1. Taraks despite being far more capable enemy combatants, are unable to trace and capture their quarry in Agra, despite Datta walking around the city in open view, but suddenly unleashes attack on Datta’s impersonator when he leaves the city gates in the middle of the night dressed as a sadhu. Forgivable, I guess.
2. Datta who goes into a shock and jumps into the moat to rescue his hunter and is such a deep state of shock, he is rendered incapable of doing anything in the moat, had to rescued.
3. The event when the Tarak jumps on & subdues Datta on their first attempt is incomplete. The episode leaves a gap too huge, I cannot be brushed aside.
4. The central character of the story is a sunken treasure, which looses relevance in the eyes of author, as soon as Ambu (the holder of the secret of the treasure) is rescued. Several pages were spent on the built up of the events leading to the choice of placement and secrecy of the treasure, but then later the treasure is forgotten!!
5. The protagonist Datta repeatedly forgets to asks the all important agreement reached by Ambu and the Emperor on the treasure.
6. Ambu, the mystic “Guardian" who was once capable of (astrally) rescuing Datta from drowning becomes a hopeless wretch during the rest the story. She could not even see how safe her grandson was in Akbar’s Fort & allows her enemy to take control of her.
7. All the forces in this story are able to chase and afflict damage, if not capture their quarry. But when Baig runs off into an open wide desert of Rann, he suddenly become un-locatable, making the story look shallow.
8. Baig takes away the treasure he nearly died to capture and sends it all off to Rana. However unbelievable that might sound, it turns hilarious when the proud Rana decides to turn the treasure to Akbar.
9. One major disconnect from reality is about the Rajputs. Though the father of the bride prefers to choose a groom from a family higher in social standing, the bride’s consent was still sought in a Kachwaha Rajput marriage.
10. The Rajput Princess allowed by the Raja to be frequently in the presence of commoner boys just does not happen. The time when the Princess was travelling from Mandu to Agra, despite the caravan being divided into sections to reduce the impact of possible attack from Taraks, still left the Princess alone with Datta the whole time, despite the fact that they were the 2 most vulnerable to attack.
11. The biggest miss of them all, is how Taranath and the Taraks were completely unaware of the destruction of their temple and the looted treasure, which they and their ancestors have been guarding for centuries.
12. The story's abrupt ending makes it feel the author either found himself incapable of maintaining the twists of the events as in the previous events or he intends to continue it in another book after gauging the response of the first.
Was it a good try for a first book? No. Too many loose ends and the reader left to tie them all up himself. He would have tried if the number was within manageable limits.
Left with these questions among many others:
1. Taraks despite being far more capable enemy combatants, are unable to trace and capture their quarry in Agra, despite Datta walking around the city in open view, but suddenly unleashes attack on Datta’s impersonator when he leaves the city gates in the middle of the night dressed as a sadhu. Forgivable, I guess.
2. Datta who goes into a shock and jumps into the moat to rescue his hunter and is such a deep state of shock, he is rendered incapable of doing anything in the moat, had to rescued.
3. The event when the Tarak jumps on & subdues Datta on their first attempt is incomplete. The episode leaves a gap too huge, I cannot be brushed aside.
4. The central character of the story is a sunken treasure, which looses relevance in the eyes of author, as soon as Ambu (the holder of the secret of the treasure) is rescued. Several pages were spent on the built up of the events leading to the choice of placement and secrecy of the treasure, but then later the treasure is forgotten!!
5. The protagonist Datta repeatedly forgets to asks the all important agreement reached by Ambu and the Emperor on the treasure.
6. Ambu, the mystic “Guardian" who was once capable of (astrally) rescuing Datta from drowning becomes a hopeless wretch during the rest the story. She could not even see how safe her grandson was in Akbar’s Fort & allows her enemy to take control of her.
7. All the forces in this story are able to chase and afflict damage, if not capture their quarry. But when Baig runs off into an open wide desert of Rann, he suddenly become un-locatable, making the story look shallow.
8. Baig takes away the treasure he nearly died to capture and sends it all off to Rana. However unbelievable that might sound, it turns hilarious when the proud Rana decides to turn the treasure to Akbar.
9. One major disconnect from reality is about the Rajputs. Though the father of the bride prefers to choose a groom from a family higher in social standing, the bride’s consent was still sought in a Kachwaha Rajput marriage.
10. The Rajput Princess allowed by the Raja to be frequently in the presence of commoner boys just does not happen. The time when the Princess was travelling from Mandu to Agra, despite the caravan being divided into sections to reduce the impact of possible attack from Taraks, still left the Princess alone with Datta the whole time, despite the fact that they were the 2 most vulnerable to attack.
11. The biggest miss of them all, is how Taranath and the Taraks were completely unaware of the destruction of their temple and the looted treasure, which they and their ancestors have been guarding for centuries.
12. The story's abrupt ending makes it feel the author either found himself incapable of maintaining the twists of the events as in the previous events or he intends to continue it in another book after gauging the response of the first.
Was it a good try for a first book? No. Too many loose ends and the reader left to tie them all up himself. He would have tried if the number was within manageable limits.
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