This is a comforting and sweet magical story. The art is lovely, some characters are more expressive than others which makes their personalities more distinct. I was surprised and thrilled to see that the average age of these characters is around 30 years old, this is a nice piece of representation showing queer ADULTS in established jobs/relationships/friendships/hobbies, we definitely need more of that in literature!!
I see other reviews that say that the text focuses too much on things like pronouns and identities, and I actually don't really agree - I think most of the time the language used to introduce people makes sense and doesn't feel overly-shoehorned or anything, but maybe where I might slightly agree with this critique is that the dialogue uses peoples' names too often and once in a while feels clunky. It made me think of the CinemaSins youtube video making fun of the Titanic movie's script for how often Jack and Rose say "Jack" and "Rose," like, in real life people don't use names/nicknames quite this often, I think. So maybe the dialogue could be tweaked a bit but I didn't find it too distracting.
Overall, this maybe 'isn't terribly realistic' but that's fine! The world needs some fluffy, hopeful, sunshine-y characters going on fluffy, hopeful, queer adventures.