Life is just about perfect for the Carters. John is busy running his own business and Susan’s position within the publishing world is a successful one. They have recently bought their ideal home and couldn’t be happier. But then the bank – which for years has supported John’s business – suddenly decides to call in it’s loans. John’s business could go under and the Carter’s could lose their home. On top of this, Susan’s sister is in a coma in an incredibly expensive, exclusive, hospital and the insurance cover is close to running out.
On the brink of financial ruin, about to lose everything, the Carter’s are thrown a life-line. Their financial problems will all go away if they agree to one very simple thing. If Susan will became a surrogate mother to the child of wealthy, influential banker, Mr Sarotzini.
The Carter’s have already decided they don’t want children of their own, so this could be an answer to all their prayers. A big decision to make? Absolutely! But ultimately this just means turning over 9 months of their lives. With no other alternatives, the Carter’s agree.
Ok, so this is a Peter James book, so we know this isn’t going to plain sailing! Of course, carrying another man’s child is going to be difficult for Susan and put a strain on her relationship with John, but they eventually decided this is something they can get through together.
Mr Sarotzini is always referred to as ‘Mr Sarotzini’, with only occasional mentions of his first name. This alone gives the impression of power and influence. How he exercises his power and influence may be highly immoral and illegal but it does mean he has a trusty core of people he can rely upon to carry out his instructions and see that his desires are met with limited resistance.
Susan and John, on the other hand, seem to be losing those they can rely on. One by one, those people they could trust and confide in, are gradually being lost. Susan is suffering from increasing bouts of pain in her abdomen, with no satisfactory explanation. More and more she is questioning what is going on around her and her decision to become a surrogate. She becomes increasingly paranoid, even starting to doubt her own husband.
Peter James is the master of setting the scene. Before the crux of the story gets going the reader already has a great insight into the lives and characters of Susan and John. We already like them and get a great sense that their successes and happiness are deserved. When it looks as though their world is about to fall apart around them, we want them to find a way out. When they are offered this possible solution we want them to find another way. We don’t want them to be beholden to Mr Sarotzini. But we ultimately know that this will be the road they will choose – given they have been unable to find any alternative – and that this is going to be far from smooth.
Mr Sarotzini – saviour or villain? Could he be both? He is an interesting character, and this interest comes from the power he wields. His operation is secretive and very limited information can be found on his bank. What we don’t know is just as intriguing as what we do.
As the story and Susan’s pregnancy progress, so does the tension. The background music getting more dramatic and Susan’s fear and paranoia increasing. What is the end game?
It’s interesting that, although this book was written over 20 years ago, nothing about it feels dated. Certainly there will have been greater technological advances over the last 20 years, but I never felt myself thinking ‘ well that wouldn’t happen now’. Every character I could picture clearly and all had their place within the story. Nobody was redundant, each character and their relationships to each other made absolute sense.
Just how far would you go if you desperate? If you were going to lose everything?