I was waiting for this book; Angelology, although not without faults, had an interesting premise, more-or-less coherent storyline and a cliff-hanger; I was curious "what's next". Next turned to be a major disappointment. The storyline is convoluted, choppy, new characters are introduced, then dropped like hot potato, they advance the plot somehow, and we never hear of them again; the writing is really clumsy, virtually everyone in the book speaks in exactly same, wooden, "let me give you a lecture" style. The most interesting and engaging character, Evangeline, has only a few pages in the sequel - why? Her motives to surrender to the evil killer angel Eno are totally unclear; the meeting between her and Verlaine, after 10 years, could be just as well a meeting between casual acquaintances. Verlaine thinks he's in love with her and wants to go to the end of the earth to find her; yet, when he does, at the end of the book, he completely changes his mind - I'm trying to avoid spoilers here - again, why, we have no idea. The book ends abruptly and my first reaction was - WTF? A major irritation for me, an art history graduate, was the story of Fabergé eggs. The two prominent angelology scholars, Bruno and Verlaine, think that the egg they were given is "gaudy", and they have not a slightest idea what the gaudy thing can possibly be; good that they did not throw it to the garbage. Really, guys? You never, ever heard of Fabergé eggs? Google it, dammit. OK, maybe I'm biased on this...but, as experienced and successful angel hunters, they act in an extremely stupid and incompetent ways when faced with their adversaries. I may be missing something, but I don't understand why they were not quickly killed many times over. Long story short - the book seems to be hastily slapped together, the editor didn't help much - for ex., imprisoned angels are in empty cells, yet later on use the "broken chairs and cots" to break out from the prison... well, it was bad enough that I'm not willing to read the third part. You've lost yourself a reader, Ms. Trussoni.