Moderately disappointed in this book, which was very surprising. I had read Andy McNab's Bravo Two Zero in the mid 90s and loved it, and as a result, perhaps I set the bar too high for this, which was McNab's first novel.
In Bravo Two Zero--McNab's account of his SAS team in action in Iraq during the 1991 Gulf War--he showed considerable talent for first-person narrative and description. His insights into the demands on special forces operatives were very colorful and a pleasure to read. He knows how to tell really good, tight, engaging stories, so he seems a natural for writing novels based on his military experiences.
With Remote Control, we have a rather standard plot setup--something bad happens to the parents of a young girl, and Nick Stone, a former SAS operative who is friends with her father, has to protect her while trying to solve what happened to her parents.
If this made it to the silver screen, I would fully expect Jason Statham cast as Nick Stone, and with no disrespect to Mr. Statham, it is the kind of story tailor-made for a B-grade action movie.
There are aspects of the book I enjoyed--some of the interactions between Stone and the girl are well plotted, and his technical descriptions are excellent. Nick Stone is obviously not a fatherly type of guy, so he's grasping for ways of controlling the emotions of this girl who's had her world turned upside down but doesn't know why. Stone evolves a bit through the course of the novel and develops a kind of parental instinct which brings him closer to the girl and her situation. That was pretty well done, too.
But the book's big plot hole was the sort you could drive a truck through. I did not care for Stone keeping the truth from the girl for so long, even when he could sense she might be figuring things out. She does not learn the truth until well into the third act, basically. In the beginning, sure, I understand. How do you get the girl to cooperate and play along with you when she doesn't know why? And when she starts asking why, how do you control her curiosity without blowing the whole thing? And then, of course, if you do tell her the truth, you are risking a total meltdown which will compromise your whole situation! Still, it would not take that long for a girl of that age to figure out something was seriously wrong the first day after Stone rescued her. Keeping that charade going just made me lose rather than gain trust in him. That trust did not resolve until much later, by which point I had about given up on the novel.
The action scenes were reasonably well done, though not as potent as I would have liked. Some of the situations were optimistic, with the girl at times way too close to the action. But I know that's pretty much the dilemma of the book, and that McNab was looking for ways of skirting that fine line between suspense and plausibility.
Sometimes it works, other times it doesn't. Ultimately, I was looking for more meat on the bone from a guy whose non-fiction writing I've appreciated. Maybe I'll try this again someday and see if I was too hard on him.