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Rothston #1
Foreseen
"An adventurous twist of genre, much recommended." ~The Midwest Book Review.
A secret organization, four college students, and the ability to alter quantum states with their minds. What could possibly go wrong?
The Rothston Institute can secretly manipulate the decisions of anyone in the world – from ordinary friends to government leaders – using the abilities of its operatives known as adepts. Having discovered that she possesses these special skills, college student Kinzie Nicolosi is training to assist them to protect humankind from destruction. A student missing an exam? A construction worker fired for an industrial accident? A Congressman ruined in scandal? Necessary consequences of honing her skills for the greater good. But Kinzie brings more than her remarkable talent to Rothston. She bears an unexpected power that rivals Rothston's own… and the clash may be something none of them can control.
First time author Smiles has devised a convincing supernatural culture...By continually paying such close attention to detail, Smiles has proven that she’s skilled at crafting a nuanced page turner...A worthy sci-fi thriller à la Dean Koontz. ~The Kirkus Review
A secret organization, four college students, and the ability to alter quantum states with their minds. What could possibly go wrong?
The Rothston Institute can secretly manipulate the decisions of anyone in the world – from ordinary friends to government leaders – using the abilities of its operatives known as adepts. Having discovered that she possesses these special skills, college student Kinzie Nicolosi is training to assist them to protect humankind from destruction. A student missing an exam? A construction worker fired for an industrial accident? A Congressman ruined in scandal? Necessary consequences of honing her skills for the greater good. But Kinzie brings more than her remarkable talent to Rothston. She bears an unexpected power that rivals Rothston's own… and the clash may be something none of them can control.
First time author Smiles has devised a convincing supernatural culture...By continually paying such close attention to detail, Smiles has proven that she’s skilled at crafting a nuanced page turner...A worthy sci-fi thriller à la Dean Koontz. ~The Kirkus Review
402 pages, Paperback
First published June 25, 2012
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About the author
Terri-Lynne Smiles
5 books39 followersTerri-Lynne Smiles writes accessible, cross-genre novels from her central Ohio home. Her science fantasy novels composing The Rothston Series create "a fascinating sci-fi world mapped directly onto the everyday reality." (The Kirkus Review). Possessing "a native talent for imaginative storytelling," (Midwest Book Review) Terri-Lynne’s analytic skills were previously put to work as an attorney, where she was recognized as a Best Lawyer in America, an Ohio Super Lawyer, and one of the Top 25 Female Attorneys in Ohio. Her novels have been noted as "highly recommended reading" by the Midwest Book review. She is an active volunteer for several nonprofit civic organizations and is current board chair of the Ohio Association.
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February 7, 2013
Stayed up too late to finish this one. Good story. Tightly written. Good, realistic characters. Bad guys REALLY bad guys!
Kinzie is in her freshman year at college when strange things start happening. First, she influences a lab rat to make a perfect project, then she finds out she is an Adept - someone who can control others thoughts. Her roommate and date from hell Rex are both adepts as well. As Kinzie learns more about the world of adepts, she also learns more about dating from Greg, her roommate's ex-boyfriend.
The discussion about booblets made me laugh out loud. I like the way Ms. Smiles made Kinzie go through the gamut of emotions.
Kinzie is in her freshman year at college when strange things start happening. First, she influences a lab rat to make a perfect project, then she finds out she is an Adept - someone who can control others thoughts. Her roommate and date from hell Rex are both adepts as well. As Kinzie learns more about the world of adepts, she also learns more about dating from Greg, her roommate's ex-boyfriend.
The discussion about booblets made me laugh out loud. I like the way Ms. Smiles made Kinzie go through the gamut of emotions.
December 14, 2012
This is a wonderful book - the first in a trilogy. A bigger publisher should pick up this author - I think she is going to achieve great things.
February 8, 2013
I received a copy of this book in return for a review.
I didn’t know what to expect going into this book. It turned out to be very different than what I had assumed was going to happen when I read the synopsis. Although I was a tad apprehensive, it quickly became one of those “just one more chapter” stories. I think this is largely due to the alternating perspectives between Kinzie and Greg. In the beginning I was very much invested in Greg’s point of view but near the end I was looking forward to Kinzie’s. Either way, I couldn’t put it down until my eyes bleared in the wee hours of the morning.
After a strange occurrence during her lab, Kinzie is told that she is an adept, a person that can see and manipulate the future and the world around her. By controlling certain aspects around her, she can influence the decisions that people make in order to change the possible outcomes. Although she improves her abilities in great strides at Rothston, a company for adepts that claim they work for the good of others, it catches unwanted attention of those who would harm her to get their way. While she works for Rothston, she finds that all might not be what it seems.
I had expected this to be a lot more YA and paranormal but it was surprisingly so much more than that. The writing was mature, the story was solid and the characters were well made. Kinzie and Greg were typical YA characters put in typical positions but it did not feel like it was rehashed and overused. I loved the little things that added to these characters such as Kinzie’s fear of crowds (which actually plays into the story and isn’t just a way to make her seem more than a cardboard cut out) and Greg being a physics major despite his jock like attitude. I appreciated that Kinzie’s abilities are explained differently than most other books where they say that it’s just how it works. Physics played a big role in explaining the rules of the books and I admired that the adepts' abilities stayed within the rules that were created for the story.
What also impressed me was the fact that I felt the danger in the book. I’ve read many books in which the characters keep speaking of an imminent threat with no real sense of danger and without spoiling anything, that was not the case in Foreseen.
What Smiles did very well was stretch certain plot lines just the right amount to keep me engaged. Everything was balanced. Smiles didn’t linger too long with Kinzie’s discovery of her powers and headed straight into what sort of issues would arise with such power. Fortunately the romance between Greg and Kinzie was fleshed out well as this could usually make or break a book for me. It did not seem rushed and it did not threaten to take over the rest of the story and minimize Kinzie’s (and Greg’s) issues with her abilities.
I was very much impressed by the issues that Smiles brought up early in the game by making Kinzie discover how power can change those who wield them and influence others around them for better or for worse (usually for worse).
There were some moments near the end when I felt that Kinzie might have acted a bit out of character but that did not ruin the book for me. Another thing that disappointing me was how obviously evil the bad guys were. There was not real mystery in the who or why of the conflict but at least that was covered by the well written mystery of how. I also wished that her parentage was discussed more but I have a feeling that Smiles is saving that for the next installment.
Overall 4 out of 5 stars and I’m looking forward to the next book in the series.
I didn’t know what to expect going into this book. It turned out to be very different than what I had assumed was going to happen when I read the synopsis. Although I was a tad apprehensive, it quickly became one of those “just one more chapter” stories. I think this is largely due to the alternating perspectives between Kinzie and Greg. In the beginning I was very much invested in Greg’s point of view but near the end I was looking forward to Kinzie’s. Either way, I couldn’t put it down until my eyes bleared in the wee hours of the morning.
After a strange occurrence during her lab, Kinzie is told that she is an adept, a person that can see and manipulate the future and the world around her. By controlling certain aspects around her, she can influence the decisions that people make in order to change the possible outcomes. Although she improves her abilities in great strides at Rothston, a company for adepts that claim they work for the good of others, it catches unwanted attention of those who would harm her to get their way. While she works for Rothston, she finds that all might not be what it seems.
I had expected this to be a lot more YA and paranormal but it was surprisingly so much more than that. The writing was mature, the story was solid and the characters were well made. Kinzie and Greg were typical YA characters put in typical positions but it did not feel like it was rehashed and overused. I loved the little things that added to these characters such as Kinzie’s fear of crowds (which actually plays into the story and isn’t just a way to make her seem more than a cardboard cut out) and Greg being a physics major despite his jock like attitude. I appreciated that Kinzie’s abilities are explained differently than most other books where they say that it’s just how it works. Physics played a big role in explaining the rules of the books and I admired that the adepts' abilities stayed within the rules that were created for the story.
What also impressed me was the fact that I felt the danger in the book. I’ve read many books in which the characters keep speaking of an imminent threat with no real sense of danger and without spoiling anything, that was not the case in Foreseen.
What Smiles did very well was stretch certain plot lines just the right amount to keep me engaged. Everything was balanced. Smiles didn’t linger too long with Kinzie’s discovery of her powers and headed straight into what sort of issues would arise with such power. Fortunately the romance between Greg and Kinzie was fleshed out well as this could usually make or break a book for me. It did not seem rushed and it did not threaten to take over the rest of the story and minimize Kinzie’s (and Greg’s) issues with her abilities.
I was very much impressed by the issues that Smiles brought up early in the game by making Kinzie discover how power can change those who wield them and influence others around them for better or for worse (usually for worse).
There were some moments near the end when I felt that Kinzie might have acted a bit out of character but that did not ruin the book for me. Another thing that disappointing me was how obviously evil the bad guys were. There was not real mystery in the who or why of the conflict but at least that was covered by the well written mystery of how. I also wished that her parentage was discussed more but I have a feeling that Smiles is saving that for the next installment.
Overall 4 out of 5 stars and I’m looking forward to the next book in the series.
October 28, 2012
Terri-Lynne Smiles is a good writer, and this is a strong and compelling read.
Foreseen mixes coming of age with quantum foam, romance with political conspiracy, in this able science fiction story. Kinzie Nicolosi, on surface a rather ordinary college student, possesses extraordinary gifts--gifts she will discover and develop throughout the story. Accompanied by her resourceful (if often baffled) boyfriend, Kinzie comes to terms with the depths and double edge of her considerable powers, as her story widens to include community and nation.
One of the problems I sometimes have with science fiction is when its premise outweighs its people: for me to like a book, even the most intriguing concept should work its way out through believable characters. In this, Smiles succeeds unequivocally: Foreseen’s protagonists, Greg and Kinzie, are drawn sharply and sympathetically, Kinzie especially so. Her gift is also her vulnerability, her strength her weakness: smuggled to a secret school in Maine, she learns to shape the decisions and responses of others, but also (and with greater difficulty) to govern her own fears, insecurities, and desires.
The book’s use of quantum physics is provocative but accessible. I am no scientist, but I could follow Kinzie’s experience with no difficulty, and Smiles has a talent for making her concepts visually and narratively vivid. That being said, the book expects an active reader. You are kept guessing as to whether the characters’ motives are entirely their own, or swayed by some outside intelligence.
Foreseen makes you think as you enjoy. It’s both speculative and edge-of-your-seat. In short, it’s the kind of fiction I like and would recommend highly.
Foreseen mixes coming of age with quantum foam, romance with political conspiracy, in this able science fiction story. Kinzie Nicolosi, on surface a rather ordinary college student, possesses extraordinary gifts--gifts she will discover and develop throughout the story. Accompanied by her resourceful (if often baffled) boyfriend, Kinzie comes to terms with the depths and double edge of her considerable powers, as her story widens to include community and nation.
One of the problems I sometimes have with science fiction is when its premise outweighs its people: for me to like a book, even the most intriguing concept should work its way out through believable characters. In this, Smiles succeeds unequivocally: Foreseen’s protagonists, Greg and Kinzie, are drawn sharply and sympathetically, Kinzie especially so. Her gift is also her vulnerability, her strength her weakness: smuggled to a secret school in Maine, she learns to shape the decisions and responses of others, but also (and with greater difficulty) to govern her own fears, insecurities, and desires.
The book’s use of quantum physics is provocative but accessible. I am no scientist, but I could follow Kinzie’s experience with no difficulty, and Smiles has a talent for making her concepts visually and narratively vivid. That being said, the book expects an active reader. You are kept guessing as to whether the characters’ motives are entirely their own, or swayed by some outside intelligence.
Foreseen makes you think as you enjoy. It’s both speculative and edge-of-your-seat. In short, it’s the kind of fiction I like and would recommend highly.
February 17, 2013
First things first, I received a free copy of this book by the author (via goodreads.com group Shutup and Read) for a fair and honest review. I do not know the author personally.
4.5 stars. This was an exciting, paranormal romance read. After just a few pages I was drawn into the world of the story and the plight of the characters.
I enjoyed reading how each of the main characters struggled as they faced moral challenges, with some rising above their challenge while others will still need to grow as the series continues.
This story poses the question, Can one be gifted with great powers and use (or not use) them wisely?
The pace of the read is solid, with a lot of activities and locations to keep the readers mind happy envisioning them all.
The copy that I received had a fair amount of typos, but I encourage readers not to let that stop you, push on and enjoy the read. Because it is a really good read that you do not want to miss out on.
I recommend this book to readers of the Paranormal, Young Adult, and Romance genres.
4.5 stars. This was an exciting, paranormal romance read. After just a few pages I was drawn into the world of the story and the plight of the characters.
I enjoyed reading how each of the main characters struggled as they faced moral challenges, with some rising above their challenge while others will still need to grow as the series continues.
This story poses the question, Can one be gifted with great powers and use (or not use) them wisely?
The pace of the read is solid, with a lot of activities and locations to keep the readers mind happy envisioning them all.
The copy that I received had a fair amount of typos, but I encourage readers not to let that stop you, push on and enjoy the read. Because it is a really good read that you do not want to miss out on.
I recommend this book to readers of the Paranormal, Young Adult, and Romance genres.
January 18, 2013
Terri-Lynne Smiles had me hooked from the word "go". Foreseen was an absolutely amazing, entertaining, sharp witted tale of a relate-able college girl in an alternative world. Each chapter offered a glimpse into the inner workings of the books main characters, as well as adding a piece to the complicated plot puzzle that left you guessing until the very end. For those that love a deeper story, or even someone looking for a great way to spend a weekend (yes, I read the book in two days), this is the book for you.
February 5, 2013
Well here is my version of a review without spoiling it for others. The story was awesome and very fascinating. I couldn't help but to read the whole book at one time that's just how intriguing it was. I love Kinzie's personality and somewhat of Greg's. I really enjoyed it. I truly recommend it.!!!!!!!!!!
February 18, 2013
Okay, this was a great book. I thought it was very well written and had just enough science to make the story very plausible but not so much so that it took away from the book. Both Kinzie and Greg were engaging characters and I really enjoyed reading both their perspectives of the story. I look forward to the next phase of their story.
August 8, 2012
Note: Contains minor spoilers.
Review: In receiving a copy from Foreseen, I hadn’t quite known what to expect and after beginning, I was a bit worried I would not be able to even read the first fifty pages let alone finish the novel. The novel started off rather boring and remained so for the first forty pages or so then gradually built up to an interesting enough plot that I decided to stick with the book, curious as to where the author would take the story. Truth be told, even though the book fell somewhere between The Darkest Powers Trilogy by Kelley Armstrong and the movie Push, I was surprised by how much I came to actually like a great deal of the book and characters.
Kinzie is shy, quiet, very much a tomboy and doesn’t really have a lot of friends. She spends more time with her head in a book and handling scientific projects than people. I could relate to Kinzie since growing up (and even now) I was VERY shy and just as much of a tomboy as Kinzie’s character. But she is also honest and incredibly stubborn. I didn’t fully like Kinzie’s character though. She is too gullible and is easily manipulated. She always talks about her distrust of people but she instantly trusts the Seven, the leaders of the Rothston Institute, without really questioning them until it’s too late and she has to be rescued. She also made incredibly stupid decisions with her new found adept gifts when she knew better!
Greg was my favorite character out of the entire novel. I hadn’t expected to really like him at all since he starts off as an ego-centric playboy who depends on his naturally born good looks and family money to impress people. He matures and grows throughout the book as he develops a friendship with Kinzie which transforms into a romantic relationship. I liked how realistic his character was portrayed and how much Greg is changed by his love for Kinzie. He learns to respect women better and to focus on building a life outside of his family’s money.
The Seven are the leaders at Rothston and frankly, the only likeable one out of the bunch was Melvina. She was kind and caring whereas the rest where just evil, egotistical, power hungry maniacs. Rex was the main villain of the book and he was as pompous as the Seven and equally annoying which I supposed worked for the role he played.
There are a few secondary characters both within Kinzie and Greg’s life. Sasha was Kinzine’s roommate and only friend (until Greg). She was the most annoying character out of the bunch. I had been hoping she wouldn’t survive to see the end of Foreseen so I wouldn’t have to deal with in the second novel. Curtis was sweet and cute. Greg’s roommates, Boomer and Pete, were hilarious and guy-guys.
The romance between Greg and Kinzie developed pretty well. They started off as awkward friends, learning to feel comfortable around each other as they worked on a school project. They gradually grow into a friendship and learn to trust each other. I liked when Greg realizes his feelings for Kinzie have grown since they come as such a shock to him. I did get annoyed with how often Kinzie needed to be cuddled by Greg to be made to feel better about herself. I also got frustrated with how much the author intertwined scientific jargon for Kinzine to describe how she felt for Greg. It didn’t mix well. It made Kinzie’s thoughts come off too analytical.
After the first 40 pages or so, the pacing to the novel begins to grow and gets better. The suspense is slow growing and not as strong considering Kinzie is rather dull and gullible but works well when Greg is narrating. The action scenes are pretty standard, nothing too surprising about them.
Foreseen was a pretty good debut novel and I do look forward to checking out what will be done in the second installment, Choices. I definitely want to see how Greg and Kinzie’s relationship develops and what will happen with the Seven at the Rothston Institute after how the book ended.
Science fiction fans will thoroughly enjoy this book!
Review: In receiving a copy from Foreseen, I hadn’t quite known what to expect and after beginning, I was a bit worried I would not be able to even read the first fifty pages let alone finish the novel. The novel started off rather boring and remained so for the first forty pages or so then gradually built up to an interesting enough plot that I decided to stick with the book, curious as to where the author would take the story. Truth be told, even though the book fell somewhere between The Darkest Powers Trilogy by Kelley Armstrong and the movie Push, I was surprised by how much I came to actually like a great deal of the book and characters.
Kinzie is shy, quiet, very much a tomboy and doesn’t really have a lot of friends. She spends more time with her head in a book and handling scientific projects than people. I could relate to Kinzie since growing up (and even now) I was VERY shy and just as much of a tomboy as Kinzie’s character. But she is also honest and incredibly stubborn. I didn’t fully like Kinzie’s character though. She is too gullible and is easily manipulated. She always talks about her distrust of people but she instantly trusts the Seven, the leaders of the Rothston Institute, without really questioning them until it’s too late and she has to be rescued. She also made incredibly stupid decisions with her new found adept gifts when she knew better!
Greg was my favorite character out of the entire novel. I hadn’t expected to really like him at all since he starts off as an ego-centric playboy who depends on his naturally born good looks and family money to impress people. He matures and grows throughout the book as he develops a friendship with Kinzie which transforms into a romantic relationship. I liked how realistic his character was portrayed and how much Greg is changed by his love for Kinzie. He learns to respect women better and to focus on building a life outside of his family’s money.
The Seven are the leaders at Rothston and frankly, the only likeable one out of the bunch was Melvina. She was kind and caring whereas the rest where just evil, egotistical, power hungry maniacs. Rex was the main villain of the book and he was as pompous as the Seven and equally annoying which I supposed worked for the role he played.
There are a few secondary characters both within Kinzie and Greg’s life. Sasha was Kinzine’s roommate and only friend (until Greg). She was the most annoying character out of the bunch. I had been hoping she wouldn’t survive to see the end of Foreseen so I wouldn’t have to deal with in the second novel. Curtis was sweet and cute. Greg’s roommates, Boomer and Pete, were hilarious and guy-guys.
The romance between Greg and Kinzie developed pretty well. They started off as awkward friends, learning to feel comfortable around each other as they worked on a school project. They gradually grow into a friendship and learn to trust each other. I liked when Greg realizes his feelings for Kinzie have grown since they come as such a shock to him. I did get annoyed with how often Kinzie needed to be cuddled by Greg to be made to feel better about herself. I also got frustrated with how much the author intertwined scientific jargon for Kinzine to describe how she felt for Greg. It didn’t mix well. It made Kinzie’s thoughts come off too analytical.
After the first 40 pages or so, the pacing to the novel begins to grow and gets better. The suspense is slow growing and not as strong considering Kinzie is rather dull and gullible but works well when Greg is narrating. The action scenes are pretty standard, nothing too surprising about them.
Foreseen was a pretty good debut novel and I do look forward to checking out what will be done in the second installment, Choices. I definitely want to see how Greg and Kinzie’s relationship develops and what will happen with the Seven at the Rothston Institute after how the book ended.
Science fiction fans will thoroughly enjoy this book!
December 24, 2012
Once you get into it, this is a pretty decent little tale. I was a bit bored at first and wondering if it would pick up, which it did as the characters began to develop and the plot shine through. The zombie game that the book opens up with is interesting, and as a reader, I expected it to lead into something. It really didn't do much, it was more of a snap shot "in the day of" the main character Kinzie.
This book is hard to categorize. At first, you assume that it is sci-fi because it banters around words like "quantum foam" and "physics" and "teleportation." Yet, when it comes right down to it, it really deals with clairvoyance and telepathic/telekinetic powers. So take your pick: sci-fi or paranormal fantasy/romance? Since I've been a hard sci-fi fan for years, I'm going to file this one in my book categories as paranormal romance.
The story is about a group of people with special mental powers. The call themselves "adept." In the US, the 'adept' are managed by the "Seven" who operate out of the Rothston institution. Their goal is to manipulate world events for the "good" of mankind (shady, huh?). Kinzie discovers that she is adept as an older kid (18) which is odd for most. She is then shuffled around to the Rothston institute to learn about adepts and her own powers.
Pros: The characterization was good with the main characters, and even though the villains were flat, they were still creepy! Greg was the best character, having the most range and being the most believable. Kinzie was ok, but she made some weird decisions that didn't really fit where her character was going at the beginning. Since we saw those scenes through Greg's eyes, they were even more strange. I assumed she was trying to drive him away and faking stuff, but no. It was just out of character.
My biggest pro with this book, is the exploration of the theme who decides what's good for mankind? We see several instances of this in the book. Kinzie like most naive college students thinks she can change the world, and worse, she knows what's best for it. Because of this the Rothston institute seduces her into believing that they do have the answers. She finds herself justifying some horrific actions because of this, bringing up the theme. My idea for what is good for all is not the same as everyone else's and I like how the book dealt with that.
Cons: There really aren't a lot of cons I didn't already mention above. The weird characterization issues with Kinzie are about it. I wanted her to be a little stronger. She is obviously much more 'adept' then most of the others having very strong powers. She needed to use those when it would help her. I wanted to know more of why Greg's touch helped her clarify her ability. Mainly I just thought that the superpowers of the Rothston crowd were too iffy. When it suited the scene, they were unstoppable, when it didn't they were easily overcome. I just think that the presentation of the powers should be more consistent, and the characters should be able to see/feel when they are being manipulated. The whole thing with Mel was a bit obvious and I don't know why no one picked up on it!
Overall, this was a decent and original read. It's a good starter sci-fi for YA readers to make the transition from Paranormal romance. Or if you enjoy paranormal romance, you'll enjoy this tale. I'd recommend it to the YA PR and Sci-fi crowd.
This book is hard to categorize. At first, you assume that it is sci-fi because it banters around words like "quantum foam" and "physics" and "teleportation." Yet, when it comes right down to it, it really deals with clairvoyance and telepathic/telekinetic powers. So take your pick: sci-fi or paranormal fantasy/romance? Since I've been a hard sci-fi fan for years, I'm going to file this one in my book categories as paranormal romance.
The story is about a group of people with special mental powers. The call themselves "adept." In the US, the 'adept' are managed by the "Seven" who operate out of the Rothston institution. Their goal is to manipulate world events for the "good" of mankind (shady, huh?). Kinzie discovers that she is adept as an older kid (18) which is odd for most. She is then shuffled around to the Rothston institute to learn about adepts and her own powers.
Pros: The characterization was good with the main characters, and even though the villains were flat, they were still creepy! Greg was the best character, having the most range and being the most believable. Kinzie was ok, but she made some weird decisions that didn't really fit where her character was going at the beginning. Since we saw those scenes through Greg's eyes, they were even more strange. I assumed she was trying to drive him away and faking stuff, but no. It was just out of character.
My biggest pro with this book, is the exploration of the theme who decides what's good for mankind? We see several instances of this in the book. Kinzie like most naive college students thinks she can change the world, and worse, she knows what's best for it. Because of this the Rothston institute seduces her into believing that they do have the answers. She finds herself justifying some horrific actions because of this, bringing up the theme. My idea for what is good for all is not the same as everyone else's and I like how the book dealt with that.
Cons: There really aren't a lot of cons I didn't already mention above. The weird characterization issues with Kinzie are about it. I wanted her to be a little stronger. She is obviously much more 'adept' then most of the others having very strong powers. She needed to use those when it would help her. I wanted to know more of why Greg's touch helped her clarify her ability. Mainly I just thought that the superpowers of the Rothston crowd were too iffy. When it suited the scene, they were unstoppable, when it didn't they were easily overcome. I just think that the presentation of the powers should be more consistent, and the characters should be able to see/feel when they are being manipulated. The whole thing with Mel was a bit obvious and I don't know why no one picked up on it!
Overall, this was a decent and original read. It's a good starter sci-fi for YA readers to make the transition from Paranormal romance. Or if you enjoy paranormal romance, you'll enjoy this tale. I'd recommend it to the YA PR and Sci-fi crowd.
January 29, 2013
My Review: 5/5*
*This book was received in exchange for an honest review*
W.o.w. If a book deserves a 5* rating it's this one! Smiles' world building is fantastic, I was drawn in from the word go and devoured the book in my free time. Foreseen shows the process undertaken by Kinzi, our main protagonist, and her adapting to becoming a part of the Adept community. Adept's are a group of people that can manipulate the thoughts of those around them for the 'greater good'. All is not what it seems at the Rothston institute, and suspicious things begin to happen around them.
I loved this book. Absolutely loved it and cannot be thankful enough to Terri-Lynne Smiles for allowing me to read and review it. Kinzi is a feisty yet shy female figure with very real flaws and positive aspects. She suffers from panic and anxiety when in crowds - something I can entirely relate to - which plays a strong aspect within the novel. Her fight against this, against her own developing adept skills as well as her fight for the greater good throughout the novel creates a very likeable character, someone I entirely empathised with.
The relationship which develops between a Physics Major, Greg, is slightly cliché but I loved it! Greg is a womanising, rich, 'jock' type figure with one unexpected aspect - he is incredibly intelligent. Their relationship begins to develop as Greg seeks her out in order to become partners for a class project. From this, the friendship morphs into something much deeper and meaningful. Smiles' develops the relationship with its trials and tribulations stunningly and I found myself hoping that everything would work out for them.
Along with the heroes and heroines, every novel must have a villain. This novel's villain forms in the shape of the figure Rex. Upon his introduction questions begin arising within the novel. Are the characters acting on their own accord or are they being influenced? Is Kinzie influencing Greg's emotions towards her? All of these questions and many more had me reading on eagerly to see how everything developed. Rex is the perfect villain. He is detestable, egotistical and provides one of the biggest turns within the novel.
This novel was truly amazing and I cannot wait for the next one. The world building was strong, the characters were sound and realistic - despite the paranormal/ sci-fi elements - they were people I could sympathise with. Smiles' is an intelligent and talented writer with many scientific references (my personal favourite was the Schroedinger's cat joke!) so bring on the next novel!
*This book was received in exchange for an honest review*
W.o.w. If a book deserves a 5* rating it's this one! Smiles' world building is fantastic, I was drawn in from the word go and devoured the book in my free time. Foreseen shows the process undertaken by Kinzi, our main protagonist, and her adapting to becoming a part of the Adept community. Adept's are a group of people that can manipulate the thoughts of those around them for the 'greater good'. All is not what it seems at the Rothston institute, and suspicious things begin to happen around them.
I loved this book. Absolutely loved it and cannot be thankful enough to Terri-Lynne Smiles for allowing me to read and review it. Kinzi is a feisty yet shy female figure with very real flaws and positive aspects. She suffers from panic and anxiety when in crowds - something I can entirely relate to - which plays a strong aspect within the novel. Her fight against this, against her own developing adept skills as well as her fight for the greater good throughout the novel creates a very likeable character, someone I entirely empathised with.
The relationship which develops between a Physics Major, Greg, is slightly cliché but I loved it! Greg is a womanising, rich, 'jock' type figure with one unexpected aspect - he is incredibly intelligent. Their relationship begins to develop as Greg seeks her out in order to become partners for a class project. From this, the friendship morphs into something much deeper and meaningful. Smiles' develops the relationship with its trials and tribulations stunningly and I found myself hoping that everything would work out for them.
Along with the heroes and heroines, every novel must have a villain. This novel's villain forms in the shape of the figure Rex. Upon his introduction questions begin arising within the novel. Are the characters acting on their own accord or are they being influenced? Is Kinzie influencing Greg's emotions towards her? All of these questions and many more had me reading on eagerly to see how everything developed. Rex is the perfect villain. He is detestable, egotistical and provides one of the biggest turns within the novel.
This novel was truly amazing and I cannot wait for the next one. The world building was strong, the characters were sound and realistic - despite the paranormal/ sci-fi elements - they were people I could sympathise with. Smiles' is an intelligent and talented writer with many scientific references (my personal favourite was the Schroedinger's cat joke!) so bring on the next novel!
March 22, 2013
I'd like to thank the author for giving me a copy of this book, in exchange for my honest review.
This book was really good. I liked Kinzie from the start. She was a strong, witty heroine, but with a crippling fear of crowds. I liked the contrast that created, although sometimes the fear really did annoy me, because it kept her from doing things to help herself. Other than that, I really liked her. She learned a great lesson along the way, and her heart was in the right place. I could definitely relate to her, and I'm interested to see where her story goes next.
As for Greg, he was a nice love interest. I loved his intelligence, but the whole playboy hero is a bit stereotypical. Of course, we see that he is way more than that, and he's brave, sweet, and loyal, but I am a bit weary of all the playboys in New Adult. That being said, I grew to really like him when he stood up to Kinzie, and later helped in the climax of the story. I thought that was so unique and amazing, that it really does cancel out the whole playboy issue.
As for the other characters in this book, I thought Mel was amazing. She was sort of like a female Dumbledore, although she was obviously different. I loved her strength, and her concern that the Institute did the right things. Then, there was Rex. He has to be one of the most evil and arrogant villains I've read about in some time. I hated him almost instantly, and that hate only grew. Therefore, I give the author lots of credit for being able to write both wonderful and horrible characters.
As for the plot of the story, I thought it was really interesting. The whole boarding school issue isn't unique, but I think the kind of school that it is is pretty original. I loved how Kinzie went there, as a college student. I thought that was a wonderful twist, and watching her learn and train were some of my favorite parts.
Of course, there is so much more to this story. There's intrigue, betrayal, love, and fighting. It all blended into a great story that I flew through in one day. So needless to say, I highly recommend reading this if you love New Adult, and especially paranormal/Sci-Fi New Adult.
This book was really good. I liked Kinzie from the start. She was a strong, witty heroine, but with a crippling fear of crowds. I liked the contrast that created, although sometimes the fear really did annoy me, because it kept her from doing things to help herself. Other than that, I really liked her. She learned a great lesson along the way, and her heart was in the right place. I could definitely relate to her, and I'm interested to see where her story goes next.
As for Greg, he was a nice love interest. I loved his intelligence, but the whole playboy hero is a bit stereotypical. Of course, we see that he is way more than that, and he's brave, sweet, and loyal, but I am a bit weary of all the playboys in New Adult. That being said, I grew to really like him when he stood up to Kinzie, and later helped in the climax of the story. I thought that was so unique and amazing, that it really does cancel out the whole playboy issue.
As for the other characters in this book, I thought Mel was amazing. She was sort of like a female Dumbledore, although she was obviously different. I loved her strength, and her concern that the Institute did the right things. Then, there was Rex. He has to be one of the most evil and arrogant villains I've read about in some time. I hated him almost instantly, and that hate only grew. Therefore, I give the author lots of credit for being able to write both wonderful and horrible characters.
As for the plot of the story, I thought it was really interesting. The whole boarding school issue isn't unique, but I think the kind of school that it is is pretty original. I loved how Kinzie went there, as a college student. I thought that was a wonderful twist, and watching her learn and train were some of my favorite parts.
Of course, there is so much more to this story. There's intrigue, betrayal, love, and fighting. It all blended into a great story that I flew through in one day. So needless to say, I highly recommend reading this if you love New Adult, and especially paranormal/Sci-Fi New Adult.
February 12, 2013
I received a free copy of this book in exchange for an honest review.
Prior to signing up for the read for review for Foreseen I hadn't heard of this book. I read through the synopsis and the story sounded interesting so thought I'd put my hand up for a free copy in exchange for a review. I'm so glad I was lucky enough to get a copy - Foreseen was fantastic!!
Terri-Lynne Smiles has created a wonderful world, full of intrigue, deception, supernatural abilities and even managed to weave in some very believable romance. I loved all the characters - villains so dark it was very easy to hate them, good guys you were very quickly cheering on and hoping they'd come out on top.
The whole concept of 'influencing' the behaviours and choices of others is something that is very believable and I think that is why I enjoyed Foreseen so much. While it was a little 'out there', it can't be completely discounted.
I'll be keeping an eye out for the next book and will definitely be recommending Foreseen to others.
Prior to signing up for the read for review for Foreseen I hadn't heard of this book. I read through the synopsis and the story sounded interesting so thought I'd put my hand up for a free copy in exchange for a review. I'm so glad I was lucky enough to get a copy - Foreseen was fantastic!!
Terri-Lynne Smiles has created a wonderful world, full of intrigue, deception, supernatural abilities and even managed to weave in some very believable romance. I loved all the characters - villains so dark it was very easy to hate them, good guys you were very quickly cheering on and hoping they'd come out on top.
The whole concept of 'influencing' the behaviours and choices of others is something that is very believable and I think that is why I enjoyed Foreseen so much. While it was a little 'out there', it can't be completely discounted.
I'll be keeping an eye out for the next book and will definitely be recommending Foreseen to others.
February 12, 2013
I was given this book by the author for free in exchange for an honest review.
I absolutely loved this book.
It was smart, witty and original.
The concepts of Adepts held my attention all the way through as well as the love story between the two main characters Kinzie and Greg. I was very happy it was not your typical YA love story where it is love at first sight. Kinzie and Greg's relationship progressed at a stead and healthy pace that was believable.
This is definitely a must read for it's originality and fantastic story telling.
I am definitely looking forward to the next installment of this series.
I absolutely loved this book.
It was smart, witty and original.
The concepts of Adepts held my attention all the way through as well as the love story between the two main characters Kinzie and Greg. I was very happy it was not your typical YA love story where it is love at first sight. Kinzie and Greg's relationship progressed at a stead and healthy pace that was believable.
This is definitely a must read for it's originality and fantastic story telling.
I am definitely looking forward to the next installment of this series.
April 21, 2014
I must say that I really enjoyed reading this book. I couldn't put it down though sometimes I had to, but all I could think about is what is gonna happen next! Kinzie I thought was a very strong character who just kept learning to get stronger, to believe in herself and the gifts that she held inside of her. I thought that this book was well thought out, and the storyline, plot was put together amazingly. Everything fit and made so much since. I really can not wait to read the next book to this one. Foreseen is an amazing book and I really do recommend it to readers. I give it a five star!! :)
January 9, 2013
I wasn't sure what I would think of this book, but I really ended up enjoying it. I loved that it was told by two characters, it gave you an interesting perspective on the story. At first the book was a little slower than I would normally like, but it quickly sucked me in completely and got much more exciting. I really can't think of a negative thing to say it was a very good book.
If you are a fan or paranormal, sci-fi romance, or even dystopian you should definitely give this book a chance. I think you will really enjoy it.
If you are a fan or paranormal, sci-fi romance, or even dystopian you should definitely give this book a chance. I think you will really enjoy it.
February 6, 2013
*Received a copy of this book for an honest review.*
I liked this book. It was fairly easy to read. The story seemed well developed and the characters were generally well developed. I love how Kinzie is a person. I also love how Greg can be an asshole, but struggles with understanding his feelings for Kinzie.
At some points in the storyline I wanted to smack generally Rex, but definitely Greg because they were being idiots, but it did help the storyline. I would recommend it to people I know who like this style of book.
I liked this book. It was fairly easy to read. The story seemed well developed and the characters were generally well developed. I love how Kinzie is a person. I also love how Greg can be an asshole, but struggles with understanding his feelings for Kinzie.
At some points in the storyline I wanted to smack generally Rex, but definitely Greg because they were being idiots, but it did help the storyline. I would recommend it to people I know who like this style of book.
July 24, 2012
Couldn't put it down. Great Teen fiction. Usually my daughter (19) tells me what she likes but this time I'm
suggesting this book to her. It has a creative plot with many surprises. Can't wait to see what's next in the series.
suggesting this book to her. It has a creative plot with many surprises. Can't wait to see what's next in the series.
September 7, 2012
Loved it. At first it started a little slow but quickly picked up speed from there. The character development is excellent, the story flows well and the plot is well worked. Descriptions ate well done also.
Overall a compelling fascinating read!
Overall a compelling fascinating read!
June 5, 2014
A fun read. The characters were well developed and the story had a good flow to it. Does absolute power corrupt absolutely? Can true love moderate power? This novel raises these questions in the midst of an interesting adventure.
July 20, 2012
Excellent! Stayed up till middle of the night to finish. : ) Looking forward to the sequel.
September 24, 2012
What can I say? I wrote this book and embedded my favorite aspects in it. Why wouldn't I rate it a five?
September 8, 2012
loved it, couldn't put it down. First thought on finishing it was "when can I read the next?" It's a definite must read.
May 14, 2014
Fast paced, fun to read. Not too heavy on the science.
February 17, 2013
I was given a chance to read this book in exchange for an honest review. Warning... It does contain Spoilers.
Foreseen
I have to be brutally honest. I had a hard time getting into this book... at first. The pace and story line just didn't hold me, but I kept picking it back up because I HAD to do the review.
I'm glad I did. There came a point in the book, I think when Greg is breaking up with Sasha over the phone, and then through text message. After that... I did have a hard time putting it down. It still took me a few days to get through the rest, but only because I have time constraints of kids and a job.
I know there other reviews commenting negatively on the language and sexual connotation and even calling it immature. I disagree. The language and sexual innuendos in the book fit right in with the college scene. Most guys in college have ONE thing on their brains, and the language is that of college age people. I do agree that it is not appropriate for a younger reader, but I get a sense that the writer did not intend for the audience to be 12 year olds.
I love how two people from two different worlds seem to pull towards each other over a project. Kenzie is a reserved focus driven student that doesn't fit in anywhere and not really friends with anyone. She is talked into a class project with Greg, who is rich, popular, and known for being a 'ladies man'. Greg is the quintessential college frat boy that is looking for his next lay. Greg is also very smart, and driven to be a physics major.
Through Greg, Kenzie finds herself... she is drawn to him, feels more laid back, feels like she can tell him anything. Through Kenzie, Greg finds that he doesn't have to be the stereotypical frat sex God. He doesn't have to live up to the stigma that he has been living.
Kenzie's life is turned up side down when she learns she is adept, (or can perceive things at the quantum physics level). She can manipulate things, and even humans. She keeps telling herself the whole time, that Greg's actions towards her are her influences on him.
Then there is Rex. Every story needs a Rex. He is the antagonist that you LOVE to hate... although I do think that some of his actions take it a bit far... but that just adds to lack of likability. He is mean, crude, perverse, and down right cruel.
I do have a hard time believing that the people at Rotheston did not know the extent of Rex's cruelty... but I suppose when you have someone talented like that especially working with Jameson, it is a little believable. They are suppose to be able to perceive the future, yet the have someone lined up as the next Seven who is cruel and a murderer.
The climax occurs when Kenzie translocates Rex. I do have to admit, I was a little disappointed that there wasn't more action in the scene. I believed that those circumstances warranted more action from Rex than just a slap. I know that he probably intended to do more, but I figured how his character had been, he would have taken the opportunity to ruin Kenzie in the worst way possible, which we know she wouldn't have been able to translocate him while he was on top of her.
At first I thought that the 'trial' was a farse, not hearing Kenzie's side... but by the end I understood how they all had been manipulated.
It fit right in with Greg that once he broke up with Kenzie, that he would ignore he calls, and ignored her cry for help. I would of thought he would put two and two together a little faster when Kenzie's dad came looking for her. Then, Greg became the knight and shining armor.
I feel the ending was well played, and it definitely called for a sequel. I will have to read it to find out what happens with Kenzie and Rex (because you know that's who it really is about).
Foreseen
I have to be brutally honest. I had a hard time getting into this book... at first. The pace and story line just didn't hold me, but I kept picking it back up because I HAD to do the review.
I'm glad I did. There came a point in the book, I think when Greg is breaking up with Sasha over the phone, and then through text message. After that... I did have a hard time putting it down. It still took me a few days to get through the rest, but only because I have time constraints of kids and a job.
I know there other reviews commenting negatively on the language and sexual connotation and even calling it immature. I disagree. The language and sexual innuendos in the book fit right in with the college scene. Most guys in college have ONE thing on their brains, and the language is that of college age people. I do agree that it is not appropriate for a younger reader, but I get a sense that the writer did not intend for the audience to be 12 year olds.
I love how two people from two different worlds seem to pull towards each other over a project. Kenzie is a reserved focus driven student that doesn't fit in anywhere and not really friends with anyone. She is talked into a class project with Greg, who is rich, popular, and known for being a 'ladies man'. Greg is the quintessential college frat boy that is looking for his next lay. Greg is also very smart, and driven to be a physics major.
Through Greg, Kenzie finds herself... she is drawn to him, feels more laid back, feels like she can tell him anything. Through Kenzie, Greg finds that he doesn't have to be the stereotypical frat sex God. He doesn't have to live up to the stigma that he has been living.
Kenzie's life is turned up side down when she learns she is adept, (or can perceive things at the quantum physics level). She can manipulate things, and even humans. She keeps telling herself the whole time, that Greg's actions towards her are her influences on him.
Then there is Rex. Every story needs a Rex. He is the antagonist that you LOVE to hate... although I do think that some of his actions take it a bit far... but that just adds to lack of likability. He is mean, crude, perverse, and down right cruel.
I do have a hard time believing that the people at Rotheston did not know the extent of Rex's cruelty... but I suppose when you have someone talented like that especially working with Jameson, it is a little believable. They are suppose to be able to perceive the future, yet the have someone lined up as the next Seven who is cruel and a murderer.
The climax occurs when Kenzie translocates Rex. I do have to admit, I was a little disappointed that there wasn't more action in the scene. I believed that those circumstances warranted more action from Rex than just a slap. I know that he probably intended to do more, but I figured how his character had been, he would have taken the opportunity to ruin Kenzie in the worst way possible, which we know she wouldn't have been able to translocate him while he was on top of her.
At first I thought that the 'trial' was a farse, not hearing Kenzie's side... but by the end I understood how they all had been manipulated.
It fit right in with Greg that once he broke up with Kenzie, that he would ignore he calls, and ignored her cry for help. I would of thought he would put two and two together a little faster when Kenzie's dad came looking for her. Then, Greg became the knight and shining armor.
I feel the ending was well played, and it definitely called for a sequel. I will have to read it to find out what happens with Kenzie and Rex (because you know that's who it really is about).
This entire review has been hidden because of spoilers.
April 22, 2013
Foreseen falls into the New Adult as well as the Young Adult categories. This isn't my usual read, but the tag line and blurb caught my attention. The book took me by surprise, it's an unusual combination of YA romance, suspense, and science fiction with a dark theme and it was kind of strange reading it. One moment I was thinking “how YA” and the next I was “OMG! What is going to happen!?”. It didn't take me long to get caught up in the thrilling tale Terri-Lynne created.
I wasn’t expecting to find a romance based on the blurb and that fact that this is a science fiction book. The romance in and of itself is very sweet and typical of YA and wouldn’t appeal to me under normal conditions. Kinzie is a shy, average-looking college student. She is exceptionally smart and has a great relationship with her adopted father but she suffers from debilitating anxiety when in a crowd. Greg is a partying jock type, who also happens to be very intelligent and majoring in physics. I immediately liked both of them and experiencing the story through their eyes adds much to the telling of the story and creating characters with a lot of depth. Sometimes the changing of POVs was a little awkward, it felt like there were chunks of story edited out and the author explained it away with “it has been 3 weeks since… “, but the story does move at a fast pace because of it.
What I really enjoyed was the dark direction the plot and some of the characters. The Rothston’s Institute is made up of people called Adepts who can see the world in a unique way that lets them manipulate people’s thought processes, and in special cases teleport objects. The science Terri-Lynne came up with for how this is done is fascinating and very believable. She didn't give these people super powers; there are limitations with the laws of physics and human will that come into play. Now imagine if some of these people decide to use their abilities to influence world politics or a personal vendetta. Kinzie discovers not only is she an Adept, but she is an unusual one. Adepts keep their existence a secret from the commons, normal people, and Kinzie struggles with issues of keeping the two worlds separate, getting caught up in her own abilities, and the morality of using them. This is where having the story told from the POV of Kenzie and Greg adds to the story. We get to see how Adepts view commons and how commons would view Adepts if they knew about them.
There are quite a few surprising twists, and the fast pace action and characters kept me glued to my e-reader. The ending definitely leaves a lot of questions that need to be answered about Kinzie’s past and the future of Adepts so I am looking forward to the next book. If you are looking for something a little different with excellent storytelling and writing give this one a try.
Greg- “Even if I’d sounded like a babbling fool today, it was okay with her. I didn’t have to play the part of the cocky stud – a card I’d played so many times, I’d begun to think it was the only one I had – the ace of assholes. Kinzie let me dust off the rest of the deck. And I felt good when I was around her. But her opinion was right. I wasn't a likable guy.”
4.5 “I know what you’re thinking” Sheep
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I wasn’t expecting to find a romance based on the blurb and that fact that this is a science fiction book. The romance in and of itself is very sweet and typical of YA and wouldn’t appeal to me under normal conditions. Kinzie is a shy, average-looking college student. She is exceptionally smart and has a great relationship with her adopted father but she suffers from debilitating anxiety when in a crowd. Greg is a partying jock type, who also happens to be very intelligent and majoring in physics. I immediately liked both of them and experiencing the story through their eyes adds much to the telling of the story and creating characters with a lot of depth. Sometimes the changing of POVs was a little awkward, it felt like there were chunks of story edited out and the author explained it away with “it has been 3 weeks since… “, but the story does move at a fast pace because of it.
What I really enjoyed was the dark direction the plot and some of the characters. The Rothston’s Institute is made up of people called Adepts who can see the world in a unique way that lets them manipulate people’s thought processes, and in special cases teleport objects. The science Terri-Lynne came up with for how this is done is fascinating and very believable. She didn't give these people super powers; there are limitations with the laws of physics and human will that come into play. Now imagine if some of these people decide to use their abilities to influence world politics or a personal vendetta. Kinzie discovers not only is she an Adept, but she is an unusual one. Adepts keep their existence a secret from the commons, normal people, and Kinzie struggles with issues of keeping the two worlds separate, getting caught up in her own abilities, and the morality of using them. This is where having the story told from the POV of Kenzie and Greg adds to the story. We get to see how Adepts view commons and how commons would view Adepts if they knew about them.
There are quite a few surprising twists, and the fast pace action and characters kept me glued to my e-reader. The ending definitely leaves a lot of questions that need to be answered about Kinzie’s past and the future of Adepts so I am looking forward to the next book. If you are looking for something a little different with excellent storytelling and writing give this one a try.
Greg- “Even if I’d sounded like a babbling fool today, it was okay with her. I didn’t have to play the part of the cocky stud – a card I’d played so many times, I’d begun to think it was the only one I had – the ace of assholes. Kinzie let me dust off the rest of the deck. And I felt good when I was around her. But her opinion was right. I wasn't a likable guy.”
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February 8, 2013
I struggled with what to rate this book. I think I would really give it 2.5 stars. I received this book for an honest review and if I hadn't I am not sure I would have finished it. The writing was distractingly descriptive - I would start to get into the story and then there would be a descriptive sentence that would just pull me right out of it and make me stop and say what? Read the line again then be all why? Why did you have to write it like that? It seems like no one else was bothered by this, but man especially in the beginning it was really bad. Not the worst I have read, and not overly descriptive, but enough that it kept pulling me out of the story so I would have to try and re-immerse myself again only to get another distracting line of description (especially about things that didn't matter and I am not sure why they were described in the first place). Not sure why it bothered me so much. I mean most authors I do not actively notice when they describe things, but for some reason when this author did it just pulled me out of the story. Kind of like cheesy descriptive or something. I cannot quite figure out what exactly it was that bothered me.
Okay so enough on the writing - **Note some spoilers ahead** I did start to get into the story and was enjoying it, though I really thought Kinzie was annoying as well. She is just so stupid! I hate when the main girl is just....she just cannot see what she should know already and is obvious. Take when Curtis tries to tell her Rex is behind Mel leaving and other bad stuff. What does Kinzie say? No way! Not possible even though I know Rex is a horrible horrible person and has great power and everyone loves him and the whole freakin book is about people influencing other people to do what they want them to, no way could Rex be influencing people. Really? Really. I mean that is the whole point of the secret society you are a part of! You saw what Rex does to people! But no way could he do something that evil...oh wait he already has in your presence! It is like come on! She is supposed to be smart and distrusting, yet she instantly trusts all these horrible people and they cannot possibly be bad? And cannot figure out things that are right in front of her face! Okay.
The only characters I really liked was Greg (and I guess Curtis was alright). I understood Greg and he was the one to stand up to Kinzie when she started to change and be just like Rex. He said when he found out about Kinzie and everyone and what they could do that such power in anyone's hands is dangerous - even someone good like Kinzie. Which turns out to be true in the story as Kinzie starts becoming just like Rex. Greg is the only one who stands up for what is right and he was just a good character. I know Kinzie comes around by the end, but man. When the second book comes out I might read it just to see what happens - I mean I enjoyed the general story and if it were out now I would probably go ahead and read it just to find out what happens.
Okay so enough on the writing - **Note some spoilers ahead** I did start to get into the story and was enjoying it, though I really thought Kinzie was annoying as well. She is just so stupid! I hate when the main girl is just....she just cannot see what she should know already and is obvious. Take when Curtis tries to tell her Rex is behind Mel leaving and other bad stuff. What does Kinzie say? No way! Not possible even though I know Rex is a horrible horrible person and has great power and everyone loves him and the whole freakin book is about people influencing other people to do what they want them to, no way could Rex be influencing people. Really? Really. I mean that is the whole point of the secret society you are a part of! You saw what Rex does to people! But no way could he do something that evil...oh wait he already has in your presence! It is like come on! She is supposed to be smart and distrusting, yet she instantly trusts all these horrible people and they cannot possibly be bad? And cannot figure out things that are right in front of her face! Okay.
The only characters I really liked was Greg (and I guess Curtis was alright). I understood Greg and he was the one to stand up to Kinzie when she started to change and be just like Rex. He said when he found out about Kinzie and everyone and what they could do that such power in anyone's hands is dangerous - even someone good like Kinzie. Which turns out to be true in the story as Kinzie starts becoming just like Rex. Greg is the only one who stands up for what is right and he was just a good character. I know Kinzie comes around by the end, but man. When the second book comes out I might read it just to see what happens - I mean I enjoyed the general story and if it were out now I would probably go ahead and read it just to find out what happens.
April 14, 2013
First things first: I received a copy of this book from the author in exchange for a review.
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And I was very pleasantly surprised by this book.
The premise of the story is not something I would usually read. A girl finds out she has the ability to see/sense things (and people) on quantum level and then manipulate them - Like interfere and make people decide to do something different from what would seem the obvious choice for them. Really I'm not at all science-y enough to understand any of this. How unlikely is this in real life? Cause I kind of felt like I do with the wizard powers (and world) in Harry Potter: This might exist. And that right there is what gets this book it's first point with me: It's made this - probably unlikely? - premise of adept people seem quite likely to me. I'm convinced.
Secondly: The writing wasn't bad. There wasn't to many typos thrown around to distract the reader. (Major pet peeve of mine. Major.) There was some variation in the language, there were funny points in the dialogue. (I actually quite liked the dialogues between Greg and Kinzie.)The pacing of the story was fine. The build up to the climax at Grand Central Station worked. The characters (for the most part) were believable - maybe especially Greg and Kinzie. And there weren't any major inconsistencies. There was more focus on the plot story line than on the love story between Kinzie and Greg. The love story developed nicely as an addition to the main story revolving the Rothston Institute. 2, 3, 4 points
Overall the story was a quick and easy read - And that's meant as a positive thing. It didn't blow me away, but one doesn't have to be blown away for it to be a nice read. It was engaging. I wanted to keep reading. I wanted to know how it turned out. How far Rex would get with his plans (to take over the world?;)). And I was involved enough with the characters to be annoyed when Greg didn't go to Kinzie, when she texted him that she needed him - But at the same time I felt with Greg and his frustrations about the situation. And I liked the fact that Kinzie didn't have everything figured out in regards to how she was going to handle combining Greg and college with Rothston. It all felt genuine. 5 points [not to be confused with star-ratings:)]
I would say that this is a pretty well executed debut novel in the NA Fantasy/Sci-fi genre. And I would recommend this to NA-readers (and maybe especially ones who're looking for a little more of a story line other than "bad boy meets good girl, ..."), and fantasy and sci-fi readers. And anyone else looking for an entertaining read.
This is to be the first in a series. Honestly I liked the open ending. I personally don't need a sequel. BUT I'm sure that there will be many readers out there who would be interested in knowing that happened to the people who got away. (I like to just let my mind wander ... (They got away and are going to take down the Institute and the rest of the world with their evil ways;))
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And I was very pleasantly surprised by this book.
The premise of the story is not something I would usually read. A girl finds out she has the ability to see/sense things (and people) on quantum level and then manipulate them - Like interfere and make people decide to do something different from what would seem the obvious choice for them. Really I'm not at all science-y enough to understand any of this. How unlikely is this in real life? Cause I kind of felt like I do with the wizard powers (and world) in Harry Potter: This might exist. And that right there is what gets this book it's first point with me: It's made this - probably unlikely? - premise of adept people seem quite likely to me. I'm convinced.
Secondly: The writing wasn't bad. There wasn't to many typos thrown around to distract the reader. (Major pet peeve of mine. Major.) There was some variation in the language, there were funny points in the dialogue. (I actually quite liked the dialogues between Greg and Kinzie.)The pacing of the story was fine. The build up to the climax at Grand Central Station worked. The characters (for the most part) were believable - maybe especially Greg and Kinzie. And there weren't any major inconsistencies. There was more focus on the plot story line than on the love story between Kinzie and Greg. The love story developed nicely as an addition to the main story revolving the Rothston Institute. 2, 3, 4 points
Overall the story was a quick and easy read - And that's meant as a positive thing. It didn't blow me away, but one doesn't have to be blown away for it to be a nice read. It was engaging. I wanted to keep reading. I wanted to know how it turned out. How far Rex would get with his plans (to take over the world?;)). And I was involved enough with the characters to be annoyed when Greg didn't go to Kinzie, when she texted him that she needed him - But at the same time I felt with Greg and his frustrations about the situation. And I liked the fact that Kinzie didn't have everything figured out in regards to how she was going to handle combining Greg and college with Rothston. It all felt genuine. 5 points [not to be confused with star-ratings:)]
I would say that this is a pretty well executed debut novel in the NA Fantasy/Sci-fi genre. And I would recommend this to NA-readers (and maybe especially ones who're looking for a little more of a story line other than "bad boy meets good girl, ..."), and fantasy and sci-fi readers. And anyone else looking for an entertaining read.
This is to be the first in a series. Honestly I liked the open ending. I personally don't need a sequel. BUT I'm sure that there will be many readers out there who would be interested in knowing that happened to the people who got away. (I like to just let my mind wander ... (They got away and are going to take down the Institute and the rest of the world with their evil ways;))
February 5, 2013
*** I received this book in exchange for an Honest Review ***
My actual rating for this book would be 3.5 but since we don't have that option i have marked it 4
First, a Big time Thank You to the author for the free book and such a wonderful one for that :) It was a beautiful experience reading it and quite different from the books i have been reading since a couple of months.. this took me to a different world altogether..
Let me start by saying, I thoroughly enjoyed this book and eagerly waiting for the sequel to be released (when)(when)?? I loved the concept and the way it was executed and the plot development.. All the characters looked realistic and believable.. loved the way friendship developed between the lead roles and the way it turned into "Love", nothing fairy tale'ish here.. However, I must admit it was hard for me to handle the first couple of pages, it sort of dragged and dragged forever, but once the plot was set-in, it was a fun read or I must say I was anxious as to what would happen to the people I had grown to sympathize with.. I was worried about the turn of events and was holding my breath all the way until everything was sort of, 'set alright!' And let me say that the antagonist here, was a super villian and I sort of liked that his role made the plot much more difficult to digest.. and that behind the scene antagonist was predictable from the beginning though!
And to think of -ves, the first part of the book dragged unnecessarily and I somehow felt did not add to the plot. Some of the parts were predictable like what Kinzie's headache would conclude to or about Mel's Alzheimer's attack etc etc.. Greg's touch making Kinzie all the more powerful sounded lil cheesy and i hope that the author comes up with a beautiful explanation for that in the sequels. Also, the way Kinzie always thinks of his beauty even in the midst of all the adversities was way too immature even though she was somewhere around 20 now,that just did not suit her age.. I understand she is 'In Love' , yet the weight of the situation dangling on their head should have made her think more about the other things... and then there is this one, that the characters tend to remember their powers when in impossible situations only and I just couldn't figure out why they hadn't used it in the first place.. And then the Cover, it was plain boring :(
All in all, a great read and a beautiful/original concept.. I would definitely recommend this to all Sci-Fi fans and to that matter I believe even the Non-Sci-Fi fans would enjoy this :p ..only that the person should have the patience to get thru the first few pages.. and to conclude I would definitely read it a second time ;)
My actual rating for this book would be 3.5 but since we don't have that option i have marked it 4
First, a Big time Thank You to the author for the free book and such a wonderful one for that :) It was a beautiful experience reading it and quite different from the books i have been reading since a couple of months.. this took me to a different world altogether..
Let me start by saying, I thoroughly enjoyed this book and eagerly waiting for the sequel to be released (when)(when)?? I loved the concept and the way it was executed and the plot development.. All the characters looked realistic and believable.. loved the way friendship developed between the lead roles and the way it turned into "Love", nothing fairy tale'ish here.. However, I must admit it was hard for me to handle the first couple of pages, it sort of dragged and dragged forever, but once the plot was set-in, it was a fun read or I must say I was anxious as to what would happen to the people I had grown to sympathize with.. I was worried about the turn of events and was holding my breath all the way until everything was sort of, 'set alright!' And let me say that the antagonist here, was a super villian and I sort of liked that his role made the plot much more difficult to digest.. and that behind the scene antagonist was predictable from the beginning though!
And to think of -ves, the first part of the book dragged unnecessarily and I somehow felt did not add to the plot. Some of the parts were predictable like what Kinzie's headache would conclude to or about Mel's Alzheimer's attack etc etc.. Greg's touch making Kinzie all the more powerful sounded lil cheesy and i hope that the author comes up with a beautiful explanation for that in the sequels. Also, the way Kinzie always thinks of his beauty even in the midst of all the adversities was way too immature even though she was somewhere around 20 now,that just did not suit her age.. I understand she is 'In Love' , yet the weight of the situation dangling on their head should have made her think more about the other things... and then there is this one, that the characters tend to remember their powers when in impossible situations only and I just couldn't figure out why they hadn't used it in the first place.. And then the Cover, it was plain boring :(
All in all, a great read and a beautiful/original concept.. I would definitely recommend this to all Sci-Fi fans and to that matter I believe even the Non-Sci-Fi fans would enjoy this :p ..only that the person should have the patience to get thru the first few pages.. and to conclude I would definitely read it a second time ;)
February 14, 2013
This review contains spoilers .
Honestly if you are a sci-fi fan, urban fantasy fan or just someone looking for a good read. Pick this book up right now. This. Book. Is. Excellent. It has a solid intriguing plot with well thought out characters who maintain believable relationships. It is absolutely wonderful to see the seer amount of character development coming from every member of the cast big or small. It has been a long time since I've enjoyed a book as much as I enjoyed this one.
The plot develops slowly, enticing you into the world that Terri-Lynne Smiles has created. Reading it I could tell just how much thought went into creating it -- she thought of the social, and economical impact 'adepts', people who can read all the possible futures and influence which one they want to happen, would have on a modern society. In the beginning the story isn't necessarily fast-paced but it is griping and I found myself unable to put the book down.
Did I mention that the characters that make up the cast are fantastic? Did I -- because I don't think I can stress that enough. I loved the main characters of Kinzie and Greg and their relationship with each other. The friendship and romance between the two of them unfolds perfectly and at such a believable pace that you can't help but root for them. The 'bad guys'? I loved to hate them! They were so well done and despicable that at some points I wanted to shout 'No' at the book! One part in particular that stands out in my mind is when Rex influences one of Greg's friends to swallow a cue ball. The colourful supporting cast is amazing as well and have meaningful characters interactions with each other and the main characters -- they aren't just a cardboard backdrop.
What I like best about the books is that you are given all the clue to try and figure out the plot along with the characters. So as you go through the book, the connections that you start to make (sometime before the characters do) only add to the incredible suspense that this book already generates. Nearing the end of the book I swear my heart was in my throat the entire time as I worked my way to the books finish -- not knowing how things were going to end up.
In short. Read this book. It's intriguing. Smart -- makes you think. Awesome characters. Well thought out plot. Fantastic story. I'll be recommending this one for awhile! Can't wait to read the next one in the series!
Rating: 10/10 stars (see the review policy on my site for more details)
Honestly if you are a sci-fi fan, urban fantasy fan or just someone looking for a good read. Pick this book up right now. This. Book. Is. Excellent. It has a solid intriguing plot with well thought out characters who maintain believable relationships. It is absolutely wonderful to see the seer amount of character development coming from every member of the cast big or small. It has been a long time since I've enjoyed a book as much as I enjoyed this one.
The plot develops slowly, enticing you into the world that Terri-Lynne Smiles has created. Reading it I could tell just how much thought went into creating it -- she thought of the social, and economical impact 'adepts', people who can read all the possible futures and influence which one they want to happen, would have on a modern society. In the beginning the story isn't necessarily fast-paced but it is griping and I found myself unable to put the book down.
Did I mention that the characters that make up the cast are fantastic? Did I -- because I don't think I can stress that enough. I loved the main characters of Kinzie and Greg and their relationship with each other. The friendship and romance between the two of them unfolds perfectly and at such a believable pace that you can't help but root for them. The 'bad guys'? I loved to hate them! They were so well done and despicable that at some points I wanted to shout 'No' at the book! One part in particular that stands out in my mind is when Rex influences one of Greg's friends to swallow a cue ball. The colourful supporting cast is amazing as well and have meaningful characters interactions with each other and the main characters -- they aren't just a cardboard backdrop.
What I like best about the books is that you are given all the clue to try and figure out the plot along with the characters. So as you go through the book, the connections that you start to make (sometime before the characters do) only add to the incredible suspense that this book already generates. Nearing the end of the book I swear my heart was in my throat the entire time as I worked my way to the books finish -- not knowing how things were going to end up.
In short. Read this book. It's intriguing. Smart -- makes you think. Awesome characters. Well thought out plot. Fantastic story. I'll be recommending this one for awhile! Can't wait to read the next one in the series!
Rating: 10/10 stars (see the review policy on my site for more details)
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