An entertaining, interesting, unpredictable book in general, with a few things that bugged me:
- Characters writing texts or emails in ALL CAPS... no one actually does that, why not use italics? I almost stopped reading at that point because to me that was a sign of a poorly written or edited book. (But I'm glad I kept going.)
- The coincidences... I don't want to just list a serious of spoilers, but seriously, the number of fortuitous coincidences and lucky breaks the main characters get was a bit ridiculous. (Three strangers who become fast friends in a few days and ALL need new jobs and ALL have talents and money to bring to the table and ALL find new partners at the same time?)
- The timeline... In addition to unrealistic plot-advancing coincidences, everything seemed to happen on way too short a timeframe. (Either that or the author didn't make it clear how much time had passed - it always sounded like the next chapter was taking place on the very next day, even the same day.) It certainly seemed like someone took a photo, commissioned a painting of the photo from an established artist, got the painting completed and hung in their home, and had a guest around to see it in the space of... two days, I think. No way.
- Two of the main characters had unresolved storylines... Maybe this is hypocritical of me after saying I didn't want things to be so unrealistic, and not everything in life wraps up neatly. But I was sad that we didn't get to see what happened next for Elizabeth and Sebastian, or Kiki and Brent.
- The dialogue at times was a bit cheesy. They called each other "babe" pretty quickly. And did we really need a blow by blow of them making plans to meet at the gym or the lawyer's office the next day?
- Tiffany. Poor, pregnant Tiffany was seen to be getting what she deserved. Um, actually, no one deserves a controlling, abusive, increasingly violent partner.
A few things I want to note that I really liked, though:
- Goofy, sweet, adorable Aimee.
- No-nonsense, ball-busting, smart Kiki.
- A story climax that wasn't all about romance.
- Sex scenes not being overdone.
- The accurate portrayal of domestic violence. Jack was scary, and realistically so. The most dangerous time for a women in a violent relationship is after she's left - more women are killed by former partners than by current partners (which is one reason many don't leave at all or go back). Aimee didn't choose to leave Jack, but she did show increasing agency, confidence, and happiness, and that made Jack more dangerous in his jealous and controlling behaviour. I loved when someone in the book said Jack is jealous because miserable people are jealous of happy people. That rang true to me and put a new spin on the role of jealousy in abusive relationships - it's not all about new partners.
Not many books inspire reviews this long from me - my reactions were quite mixed throughout the book - but overall I enjoyed it, and I have no qualms recommending it to someone who wants a light read (or who is interested in the depictions of violence, so rarely seen accurately - or at all - in light-hearted fiction).