Rating: 3 / 5
This was a fairly average book for me. Maybe a bit above average. I liked it to a certain point, but I thought it could have been much better. The story just didn't hit the spots it needed to for me.
Series Note:
This book is part of the continuing McKettrick series (which ties in to the Stone Creek series and Creeds series), but it is not necessary to have read those to read this one (and the other 2 in the trilogy).
Summary:
Libby Remington and Tate McKettrick were high school sweethearts who planned to get through college, get married and live happily ever after. Then while Tate was at law school, away from Libby, he slept with another woman and got her pregnant with twins. Tate does what he thinks is right and marries the woman, breaking Libby's heart.
Tate's marriage doesn't last, his ex-wife is a manipulative nag, and so he has been a single part-time father for several years. He and Libby mostly avoid each other but after seeing her one day, Tate decides it's time to win her back. Libby is reluctant because Tate has already broken her heart once, but Tate is persistent and Libby can't help that she still loves him. They'll have to deal with annoying relatives, Tate's ex-wife, his kids, a death and other sundry things before they can completely resolve their relationship, though.
Review:
Usually I like to write my reviews by starting off with what I liked about the book and then talking about what didn't really work for me, but I can't really think of anything that completely worked for me in this book. Pretty much every element needed some tweaking. The book never completely clicked for me. But that's not to say I didn't like it. I did, but I thought it could have been a lot better.
One thing that bugged me right off, was the sort of lack of connection to the other books. I mean, I like that this trilogy is going to be able to stand on its own from the previous McKettrick stories, but at the same time, as someone who has read all those, I wanted to know how these McKettricks of Texas tied in to the other McKettricks. I kept reading and reading, waiting for the connection to be talked about, and there would be some small reference here or there, but it wasn't until the end that you learn how they tie in together. I thought this part of the book could have been much stronger.
The start of the romance bugged me as well. It seemed so abrupt. These two have a long history together and have been in the same town for years with both being single and neither trying to reunite. Then one day Tate stops by her coffee shop to get smoothies for his kids and suddenly decides to win her back. It made no sense at all. It was too sudden and just felt off.
Aside from that, the romance was okay. I liked both characters, but didn't feel any special connection to them. Neither really stood out. Which made the romance a little lackluster. And it really annoyed me that these two never had a serious conversation about what Tate did all those years ago (cheating on her). They never talked about why he cheated, how each felt and all that. I kept thinking, how can you reunite without getting the past out of the way?
I think part of the larger problem with the book, though, was that it didn't have anything to give it any kick. The whole thing seemed so mundane, just sort of going through the trials and tribulations of daily life - Libby's crazy mom, her coffee shop, problems with her car, Tate's kids, his bitchy ex-wife, his brothers' problems, a death of a friend, etc etc. Everything came off so ho-hum and there wasn't any story hook that really breathed some life into the story. Just all very mundane.
Plus, was it me, or did anyone else think that the kids in this book (Tate's twins, and Libby's nephew) were ridiculously written? I mean, the twins are 6 or so, the nephew 4 and they all act like little adults with perfect speech, pronunciation, vocabulary, talking about things like they were adults. They all acted older than they were. It was weird.
Even though this book could have been much better for me, I still plan to read the other two. I'm intrigued about Garrett and Austin...especially Austin. I'm just hoping their stories have a little more focus than this one did.