Thank you to NetGalley and Tor Teen for providing me with a digital ARC of this novel in exchange for an honest review!
Kacen Callender has been on my list of authors I want to read for awhile, so when I saw they had written a queer fantasy book featuring polyamorous characters, I was so excited to give it a try. The story takes place in a world where everyone is capable of using alchemy, but its use beyond the beginner-level is restricted to an elite few who receive a license to practice it. Ash, an 18-year-old trans man, applied to Lancaster College to study alchemy, but he was rejected. So, he is now working as a groundskeeper there and is studying alchemy in secret. One day, he is discovered by a prodigy apprentice, Ramsay Thorne, who agrees to teach Ash alchemy in exchange for help finding a powerful book. The two embark on a dangerous quest, strengthening their alchemy skills, dodging enemies, and even forming a poly relationship. This story has so many elements that I usually love in books - including many types of queer representation, intersectional themes, a unique fantasy world, and more. However, it unfortunately did not work for me. There were some interesting concepts and characters, but it truly felt like this should have been a three-part series, yet it was all shoved into one book.
My biggest issue with this novel is the pacing. It took me months to read this book, because it felt like such a chore. I would read what felt like 50+ pages in a sitting, only to look down at my screen and see I had only progressed 5%. I often got discouraged and would go read an entirely different book before picking this one up again. I think what caused this issue is that there was a lot of action thrown into the novel, but it was written in a shallow way. The entire plot takes place over approximately one month, but Ash meets and falls in love with two separate people, learns advanced levels of alchemy, adventures through many different towns and cities, and does so many more things I can't get into because of spoilers. None of the events were explained in much detail, so it was difficult to stay engaged. I never felt like I understood the characters, their motivations, or even the world or magic system.
I wish the author had divided this book's plot into multiple full-length novels. I would argue that there are three main sections of this book (Ash's time with Ramsay, Ash's time with Callum, and their time together as a group), and each of those sections could have been expanded into an entire novel. I would have loved to have spent more time watching Ash grow his relationships with Ramsay and Callum and to have learned more about the various settings. The different Houses seemed interesting, but they were extremely underutilized. Apparently there were many alchemists searching for the Book of Source, but we only saw a couple of them. If everything was slowed down and expanded upon, it would have been such a richer reading experience. Also, the magic system needed to be developed further at a steadier pace. Though Source is the main focus of this book, it is described so vaguely that I never understood what its limitations were. The main characters all naturally excelled at its use, and they could practice advanced alchemy very early on. So, it was hard to grasp the magic system when it felt like anyone could do anything with no clear rules.
Another major issue I have with Infinity Alchemist is Ash and his hot temper, He is so insufferable at many points throughout this story. He had a difficult life growing up, and I understand why he'd be so angry at the world. He is a great example of all of the issues with classism. However, the way he would go from 0 to 100 in anger and lash out at everyone was just over the top. No matter how high the stakes were, he would always be comfortable making a scene. There were countless times I physically rolled my eyes at his lack of self-awareness. He was on a journey for a greater cause, but he almost ruined it over and over again because he had to have the last word. It was difficult to read, and I have no idea how he convinced two other characters to fall in love with him.
My final big complaint about this story is the pacing of the romance. The polyamory is handled well (I'll discuss that more in a moment). However, the characters repeatedly go from hating one another to falling in love... sometimes with just a couple of chapters in between. They even have fights over major issues that are resolved immediately. I appreciated the queer and poly representation, but I had a tough time believing the romance, since it was so rushed. As with everything else in this story, if it had been slowed down so that the characters had room to grow together, it would have been so much better.
This book had a lot of potential, and I want to be sure to highlight the things it did well. The queer and poly representation here is great! I've never read a YA novel featuring polyamory, so the fact that it is included here and is done with care is amazing. There are many intersectional identities shown throughout the story, and they are also handled well. The characters are diverse in many ways (race, class, gender identity, and more), and that diversity is used to inform greater themes throughout the novel. I appreciated the focus on classism. It was also interesting to read about their society's prejudice against alchemy and think about how that could be a metaphor for prejudice in today's society. The themes felt authentic. I thought the writing was okay overall, but it shined whenever it was conveying a major theme.
I also liked Ramsay and Callum. Ramsay's gender-fluidity was refreshing; it was cool to read about how Source came into play with it. Callum had a unique backstory - I was intrigued by his perspective of wanting to make a change but feeling tied to familial obligations. The two characters balanced each other out well. The other side characters seemed interesting, but I wish they were featured more frequently. The Houses seemed to be thought out well; I would have loved to have seen more characters appear from different Houses, as well.
There was too much going on at once for this book to work for me. I wouldn't really recommend it to fantasy readers, because the fantasy is so underdeveloped. I would probably only recommend this to "romantasy" readers who enjoy romance in a fantasy setting, but who also don't mind if the fantasy elements take a backseat to the romance. If you are purely looking for a whirlwind of a novel featuring a polyamorous relationship in a fantasy world, you might like this. However, if you want a developed fantasy world with descriptive worldbuilding, I expect you'll be disappointed by this story. It looks like this might be the start of a series. I don't think I will read a second installment if it is published, unless it is much more developed than Infinity Alchemist.
2 out of 5 stars.