I had really high hopes for this book - and they were mercilessly dashed within the first 50 pages.
As this is a collection of three stories, I decided to stick with it to see it through to the end, and although it improved marginally with the second book, Charmed, I was still left feeling extremely disappointed.
As a fan of fairytale reimaginings, the premise for the book was really intriguing: interconnected retellings of Snow White, Cinderella and Sleeping Beauty, with a few more classic fairytales sprinkled in-between - what’s not to love, right?
But the stories were bland, the interesting twists and changes too few and far between to redeem them, the sex scenes interspersed through the three books clunky and mostly irrelevant to the plot, making it look like they were forcibly shoehorned in just for the sake of it.
Unfortunately, the characters do not fare much better; although some of the initial ideas showed real promise, they were not developed on, falling flat into unlikeable half-baked tropes instead.
And then there is the writing. Grammar and punctuation are a pet peeve of mine; if I spot errors over and over again in a book, it is enough to put me off the story altogether. And the author of this book should really, really go read about the correct usage of commas, as this kind of syntax is something I would expect from half-passable fanfiction, not from a published author. Too often the sentences run into each other, to the point that one has to stop and re-read them a couple of times to make sense of them.
There is a sentence in the third book:
“After the fierceness of the storm damp lingered on every surface and the trees glistened green as water dripped from their branches, but although there was a light breeze it was not cold.”
The use of 'but although' aside, there really should have been a comma between 'storm' and 'damp', and another between 'breeze' and 'it'. And maybe I am nitpicking here, but this was done throughout the three books, which I found very off-putting.
At the end of the day, this was not a good fairytale retelling, nor was it a good book; if you are in the mood for something along these lines, I would recommend going for A Court of Thorns and Roses (which puts a lovely fae-centric twist on Beauty and the Beast), The Wrath and the Dawn (my favourite version of Arabian Nights yet) or any of the Twisted Tale Disney novels.
Two stars, reluctantly given.