Some fantasy stories are timeless. “The Forest of Forever” is not one of them. In fact, this is a story that emphatically does NOT stand up to the test of time. The tone is tongue-in-cheek, and while that could be funny, in this story it often comes across as creepy or cringey.
I was ready to give up by the second chapter, but I’ve heard the ending’s good, so I persevered, since the writing itself is not bad.
I’ve heard it said that some male writers cannot write believable female characters, only shallow, cliched ones (e.g. harlot vs virgin). With this story, I finally understand what that looks like.
It comes across as self-indulgent (creepily so) and, at times, offensive. Not something I can recommend.