Jinto’s father makes an agreement with the space-faring Abh race to accept their rule on their planet, thus making Jinto a noble in Abh society. One day, when it is time for him to be sent off for schooling with the Abh, a small contingent including a princess of the Abh, Lafiel, comes to escort him across space to the new school.
The political situation surrounding the Abh and the war that begins during this journey between the Abh nation and a federation of four independent peoples comes across to me as half-baked – I can see how it could be convincing for the parties involved, but it also seems blown a bit out of proportion so that it can provide a suitable backdrop for the story of Jinto and Lafiel. We get a lot of information about it, but it seems like the key elements which would make it come across as important, as convincing, are not quite fully there. Probably playing in to this is how little we actually get of the down-on-the-ground aspects of it.
A further difficulty I had was just how much Abh language was used throughout the book – especially since I didn’t notice the glossary until the very end. It is clear that there is a whole set of vocabulary for the hierarchy, and another for the space travel. The thing is, the hierarchy vocabulary never seemed quite clear; it didn’t stand well on its own. As for the space travel, while a good portion of the words were convenient to create a special language all of its own (like for the terms to enter the worm-hole like intergalactic superhighway portals), it often went overboard in their usage. It would have helped drastically if one of two things happened: one, that the first foreign Abh word had a note saying what it meant, and that there was a dictionary in the back, or two, that each Abh word had an asterisk to bring your attention to the definition located somewhere on the page. Overall, I feel like this manga was written as a companion to a book or anime series where these terms would be clearer on their own, and the manga was an afterthought where the writer wanted to splice in as much of that vocabulary as possible.
The relationship between Lafiel and Jinto, however, is convincing, how they get to know each other, how they interact, and how this trial by fire for them begins a deeper friendship that will carry through this series. After all, despite the politics and the kidnapping and the intergalactic events, Crest of the Stars is really the story of Lafiel and Jinto, at least to me. The intergalactic war which begins in this book is just a backdrop and source of inciting events by which Lafiel and Jinto can learn and grow as individuals and in their relationship with each other.