Willard Price’s “Adventure” series is set up so that it has a continuous storyline. Whilst this does mean they are difficult to read singly and there is a slightly annoying introduction and outro to each novel to link them together, similar to those you find around television programmes, it does mean you stay involved in the series and can continue reading easily without needing to reacquaint yourself with the characters each time.
Running almost directly on from “Amazon Adventure”, the setting for “South Sea Adventure” is equally as obvious from the title. A private collector has asked for the Hunts to obtain many marine creatures for his personal collection and with too much going on at home, he decides to send Hal and Roger. He also asks them to look into something on behalf of Professor Stuyvesant, who has set up a secret pearl lagoon in the area the brothers are due to be going to, so they can check on the progress of his experiment. However, none of this is without risk, as the pearl lagoon could be extremely valuable and there are people who would kill for its location.
Hiring a ship and crew, the Hunts head for the Southern Pacific, catching various marine animals along the way. The dangers they encounter aren’t just in the sea, however, as they encounter a hurricane along the way which damages the ship and they also have concerns about a member of their crew. The side trip is not without problems, as a missionary they allow to join them isn’t what he seems and so the Hunts are soon marooned without food or water.
Price’s writing is always fast-moving and he knows a lot about marine creatures, having been a journalist in that field for many years prior to turning to fiction writing. This means that, even without the variations in conditions that were present in the earlier book, he is still able to come up with many different methods of capturing and storing the creatures. That said, there is one part where he is a little keen to show off his knowledge, but in a part of the novel where it interrupts events a little.
There is also a suspiciously “MacGyver” feel to the situation where the boys are marooned. The island they are stuck on is described as having been hit by a hurricane and seems devoid of food, water and shelter, but the steps they take and the things they find are suspiciously easily to hand without explanation. Whilst the boys are certainly very adaptable and resilient, as has been proven over the earlier novel, this does read like the kind of plot device where Price has figured out how to get his characters into a situation, but can’t easily get them out and the plot hole is gaping and this puts me off a little, as much as I liked “MacGyver”.
This is not the only weakness in the writing, as the character building is equally as weak as it was in the first novel. The boys build a very close relationship with Omo, one of the crew who is originally a Pacific islander, but there is nothing in the novel that suggests that this has built naturally. The treatment the islanders receive at the hands of both the crew and others belong to a different time and whilst their treatment isn’t as bad as written by the likes of Mark Twain, is does feel slightly uncomfortable to read and the situation on some of the islands does have an American colonial feel to it.
“South Sea Adventure” is a weaker novel than the first in the series, containing much of what makes Price’s writing good, with some great animal encounters, but having greater areas of weakness than that novel. The lack of character building is consistent, but it is the plot holes towards the end which really spoil this novel for me and whilst it certainly keeps things interesting, it removed me from the moment so forcibly that it took the edge away from it.