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The Doorknob Society
Chloe Masters’s world changed in a heartbeat - and all she did was touch a doorknob.
When she was young Chloe’s mother vanished. Wracked by feelings of abandonment and anger she lost herself traveling with her father's magic act, where illusions were part of her everyday life. Yet everything changes when they are pursued by a mysterious man in black out to kill her father. Touching a doorknob activates abilities she never knew she had and she finds herself thrust into a world of ancient societies and secrets.
When her father disappears it is a race against time to find answers before she loses what is left of her family. Now Chloe must choose who to trust, the man who will do anything for her or the one she can’t stop thinking about.
When she was young Chloe’s mother vanished. Wracked by feelings of abandonment and anger she lost herself traveling with her father's magic act, where illusions were part of her everyday life. Yet everything changes when they are pursued by a mysterious man in black out to kill her father. Touching a doorknob activates abilities she never knew she had and she finds herself thrust into a world of ancient societies and secrets.
When her father disappears it is a race against time to find answers before she loses what is left of her family. Now Chloe must choose who to trust, the man who will do anything for her or the one she can’t stop thinking about.
307 pages, Kindle Edition
First published February 9, 2012
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About the author
M.J. Fletcher
20 books145 followersMJ Fletcher was born in New Jersey and now lives by the beach with his very understanding wife and daughter. He has been writing since he first stapled pages together as a child and called them a book. He finally realized his ambitions when his comic book series Adam Zero The Last Man of Earth was published by Ronin Studios. His other comic book work includes Digital Webbing Presents and The Hero Initiative. His first novel The Doorknob Society released in 2012 was nominated for a Cybil award in the young adult category. He has continued writing the Doorknob Society Saga his rollicking steampunk adventure series as well as working on numerous other writing projects.
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May 7, 2015
This book was free on Kindle. So I bought it with no expectations. The premise is cool. Original type idea. But it was lacking in some areas.
My biggest complaint, which drove me crazy, were the typos. Tons and tons of horrible typos!! Like, "He rushed passed me..." and "I strolled passed..." Hello! If you're a writer or editor, you need to know the difference between "passed" and "past." Hell... if you 'passed' the 3rd grade, you should know it. This was multiple times. And so many uses of "your" instead of "you're." And the other thing was there were dozens of times when the character would say something and it was ended with a question mark instead of a period. Example, "You could have called?" I had to read those sentences twice because they are read differently as a question.
Just a lot of horrible mistakes that have no place in a final copy of a book.
My biggest complaint, which drove me crazy, were the typos. Tons and tons of horrible typos!! Like, "He rushed passed me..." and "I strolled passed..." Hello! If you're a writer or editor, you need to know the difference between "passed" and "past." Hell... if you 'passed' the 3rd grade, you should know it. This was multiple times. And so many uses of "your" instead of "you're." And the other thing was there were dozens of times when the character would say something and it was ended with a question mark instead of a period. Example, "You could have called?" I had to read those sentences twice because they are read differently as a question.
Just a lot of horrible mistakes that have no place in a final copy of a book.
January 31, 2018
I think the annoyance factor has finally overtaken the entertainment factor. DNF @ 58% This disappoints me because I think with some more work this could have been really good.
I have a lot of mixed feelings about this one. So, I'll bottom-line it first for those that don't want to read the particulars.
In general I found this a fairly entertaining YA Fantasy, with a protagonist that was reasonably likable. The premise is a mix of very imaginative and fairly original ideas along with things reminiscent of, and done better in, Harry Potter.
The story is actually pretty good, although flawed. Writing has some issues, but it kept my interest for awhile anyway, and has imaginative, interesting, and entertaining elements.
I also must say, in spite of what some seem to think, including apparently the author, this story is not Steampunk.
Unfortunately this book also contains many glaring editing errors. It shows it was originally published in 2012. I bought my copy (for free) in 2015. I am surprised that the Kindle version has not (yet) been corrected to remove these obvious editing problems in all this time. I checked before writing this, no updated Kindle version is available. This is inexcusable, in my opinion.
This causes me to give the side-eye to all those who posted glowing 5 star reviews for this book (and the others in this series - which, according to other reviewers, have the same editing issues). Never mentioning this obvious problem. Most particularly those who are bookbloggers. They aren't doing their followers any favors by not telling them the truth. Most especially as the subsequent books in this series are not free. No one should pay money for books published in this amatuerish condition, most especially without knowing they're sub-par and not professional quality products.
I will also say that if it had just been the editing errors I might have stuck with this one, but there were other issues I had with the writing, which sometimes was fine, other times annoying. See below for more explanation on that.
However, this book is free for the Kindle version. If it sounds interesting to you, and you can tolerate some editing issues without wanting to poke your eyes out, I advise giving this a try and seeing for yourself. It's got something, it just could have used a bit more work and polish to bring it up to snuff.
What I liked:
MC is tough, sassy, and it gets her in trouble. She's not over powerful at the start. Her mouth gets her in trouble. Still, she doesn't whimp out. A couple of times she steps right in, not very wisely, but I still liked her for it. She tells jerkwad adults off with no fear, even one with authority. Which is probably unwise, but still I liked her for it.
The concept of magically traveling through doorways.
The MCs mysterious dreams, that appear to not really be dreams.
I really liked her group of friends, and how they each had their own personalities. I like how her friend Val annoyed Chloe, but then Chloe started to see a bigger picture and grew more tolerant of Val.
What I didn't like:
Lack of explanations. Repeatedly being told about her "brokenness" and being bad at relationships with no real explanation or justification shown for it.
Her contrariness regarding the Love Interest. She likes him, he likes her, she doesn't want to be in a relationship, yadda yadda. Fine. Then they have sweet moments, clearly she likes him, then poof she goes all contrary on him for no reason. I like that there isn't insta-love, but sheesh. I began to wonder what he sees in her, she's like psycho around him. And her back and forth about it in her own head gets really tiresome.
She also makes judgements about him, and regarding her, simply based on their preferred fashion choices. Which annoyed me. And her mentioning being "messed up" for which we're never shown any real reason for.
'I had a hard time imagining why he seemed interested in talking to someone as messed up as me. I didn’t exactly see a future with Mr. Wonderful walking around town with me in my combat boots, hoodie and dark eyeliner.'
The "Steampunk" devices. This is set in our present day. This seems cobbled in perhaps to appeal to Steampunk fans, but this is not at all Steampunk. It just makes this story seem a mish mash of things that don't really fit or make much sense.
Vague passage of time, and contradictions. Here's one example:
The MC, Chloe, is at her grandmother's house with her cousin. Her cousin is going out and her grandmother says, "Make sure you're home for dinner."
Chloe and her grandmother talk a bit then start making dinner (the cousin isn't yet home, no mention of time). Then, "When the stir fry was finished we sat at the table, ate and reminisced about my parents."
Didn't wait to eat for the cousin, who was supposed to be home for dinner. No mention that her cousin was perhaps late and it was past dinner time.
'I heard the front door open having completely forgotten about my cousin. She walked into the kitchen, stopped a moment to stare at us and then she walked over grabbed a bit of food from the bowl and nibbled on it.
“How was your night dear?” Gran asked her.'
So, either the cousin was back at dinner time, but they didn't bother to wait for her - which no one mentions, or she was late - which no one mentions - and her grandmother asks how her "night" was, as if she'd been out for the evening, yet she was supposed to be home at dinner time and they were just then eating dinner.
And her grandmother says, '‘Sounds lovely but obviously you didn’t eat, so sit down and have something."'
Well of course she hadn't eaten, she'd been told to come home in time for dinner.
This makes no sense.
There's a lot of telling rather than showing. And the story really suffers for it.
Editing errors.
There are numerous missing commas, I didn't even bother to note them. At least three times the word "passed" is used when "past" is meant. I stopped counting the number of instances a question mark was used at the end of a statement and obviously not a question after five occurrences.
I have a lot of mixed feelings about this one. So, I'll bottom-line it first for those that don't want to read the particulars.
In general I found this a fairly entertaining YA Fantasy, with a protagonist that was reasonably likable. The premise is a mix of very imaginative and fairly original ideas along with things reminiscent of, and done better in, Harry Potter.
The story is actually pretty good, although flawed. Writing has some issues, but it kept my interest for awhile anyway, and has imaginative, interesting, and entertaining elements.
I also must say, in spite of what some seem to think, including apparently the author, this story is not Steampunk.
Unfortunately this book also contains many glaring editing errors. It shows it was originally published in 2012. I bought my copy (for free) in 2015. I am surprised that the Kindle version has not (yet) been corrected to remove these obvious editing problems in all this time. I checked before writing this, no updated Kindle version is available. This is inexcusable, in my opinion.
This causes me to give the side-eye to all those who posted glowing 5 star reviews for this book (and the others in this series - which, according to other reviewers, have the same editing issues). Never mentioning this obvious problem. Most particularly those who are bookbloggers. They aren't doing their followers any favors by not telling them the truth. Most especially as the subsequent books in this series are not free. No one should pay money for books published in this amatuerish condition, most especially without knowing they're sub-par and not professional quality products.
I will also say that if it had just been the editing errors I might have stuck with this one, but there were other issues I had with the writing, which sometimes was fine, other times annoying. See below for more explanation on that.
However, this book is free for the Kindle version. If it sounds interesting to you, and you can tolerate some editing issues without wanting to poke your eyes out, I advise giving this a try and seeing for yourself. It's got something, it just could have used a bit more work and polish to bring it up to snuff.
What I liked:
MC is tough, sassy, and it gets her in trouble. She's not over powerful at the start. Her mouth gets her in trouble. Still, she doesn't whimp out. A couple of times she steps right in, not very wisely, but I still liked her for it. She tells jerkwad adults off with no fear, even one with authority. Which is probably unwise, but still I liked her for it.
The concept of magically traveling through doorways.
The MCs mysterious dreams, that appear to not really be dreams.
I really liked her group of friends, and how they each had their own personalities. I like how her friend Val annoyed Chloe, but then Chloe started to see a bigger picture and grew more tolerant of Val.
What I didn't like:
Lack of explanations. Repeatedly being told about her "brokenness" and being bad at relationships with no real explanation or justification shown for it.
Her contrariness regarding the Love Interest. She likes him, he likes her, she doesn't want to be in a relationship, yadda yadda. Fine. Then they have sweet moments, clearly she likes him, then poof she goes all contrary on him for no reason. I like that there isn't insta-love, but sheesh. I began to wonder what he sees in her, she's like psycho around him. And her back and forth about it in her own head gets really tiresome.
She also makes judgements about him, and regarding her, simply based on their preferred fashion choices. Which annoyed me. And her mentioning being "messed up" for which we're never shown any real reason for.
'I had a hard time imagining why he seemed interested in talking to someone as messed up as me. I didn’t exactly see a future with Mr. Wonderful walking around town with me in my combat boots, hoodie and dark eyeliner.'
The "Steampunk" devices. This is set in our present day. This seems cobbled in perhaps to appeal to Steampunk fans, but this is not at all Steampunk. It just makes this story seem a mish mash of things that don't really fit or make much sense.
Vague passage of time, and contradictions. Here's one example:
The MC, Chloe, is at her grandmother's house with her cousin. Her cousin is going out and her grandmother says, "Make sure you're home for dinner."
Chloe and her grandmother talk a bit then start making dinner (the cousin isn't yet home, no mention of time). Then, "When the stir fry was finished we sat at the table, ate and reminisced about my parents."
Didn't wait to eat for the cousin, who was supposed to be home for dinner. No mention that her cousin was perhaps late and it was past dinner time.
'I heard the front door open having completely forgotten about my cousin. She walked into the kitchen, stopped a moment to stare at us and then she walked over grabbed a bit of food from the bowl and nibbled on it.
“How was your night dear?” Gran asked her.'
So, either the cousin was back at dinner time, but they didn't bother to wait for her - which no one mentions, or she was late - which no one mentions - and her grandmother asks how her "night" was, as if she'd been out for the evening, yet she was supposed to be home at dinner time and they were just then eating dinner.
And her grandmother says, '‘Sounds lovely but obviously you didn’t eat, so sit down and have something."'
Well of course she hadn't eaten, she'd been told to come home in time for dinner.
This makes no sense.
There's a lot of telling rather than showing. And the story really suffers for it.
Editing errors.
There are numerous missing commas, I didn't even bother to note them. At least three times the word "passed" is used when "past" is meant. I stopped counting the number of instances a question mark was used at the end of a statement and obviously not a question after five occurrences.
May 20, 2012
full disclosure: I'm dear friends with MJ Fletcher.
Great YA novel. Wonderful storyline. My biggest criticism is the number of typos. OY! I pulled out my red pen more times than I'd like to admit.
Great YA novel. Wonderful storyline. My biggest criticism is the number of typos. OY! I pulled out my red pen more times than I'd like to admit.
August 3, 2012
Gosh there was SUCH potential for this book! I really REALLY want to love it because it has so many original, unique and just plain outstanding ideas in it.
The problems started right off the bat with not enough description being given to the characters and settings to paint an accurate picture. I mean...if you have to wait until the 4th chapter to get a physical description of the main character, it's kind of hard to create that movie in your head. Other examples were very vague or insubstantial descriptions like "that girl was stunning" or "he was the most handsome man I had ever seen" we kinda get a bit of a picture, but without further details or even basics like hair and eye color it was just kind of a mess.
Plot-wise, I really loved the direction that the author was going in. An academy of steampunk-esk societies and guilds,all battling (with words...not literally) to maintain supremacy while also keeping peace and order. It was really cool, but again, I didn't get enough backdrop. The world-building was sub par in that you didn't get ANY descriptions of where you were...generalized words like "amazing" and "breathtaking" cluttered up the pages without actually telling us what MADE these structures, these settings, these people so amazing and breathtaking. We are also provided with very little history and context for these secret magical orders. Apparently they've existed since before men walked on two feet...but we don't understand who they are, how they came to be, what they believe in...ANYTHING....though there was a lot of plot and action in the NOW you never learn about the past, leaving a kind of baseless story where you just live in the moment without a clear understanding of your(or the character's ) place in the world.
The book is also guilty of one of the worst literary crimes that I can think of...Stupid, weak, and easily defeated villains. The dialogue smacked of cheap saturday morning cartoons, and the cheesy modern power-rangers-esk feel to it. Villains stepped into easy traps, were defeated by people with no real sense of power, and were outsmarted by characters who had no idea what they were doing. Kind of a let down.
I really wish the book would go under massive re-writes and edits because it could be SO amazing! There were times when I caught a glimpse of some really magical scenes and ideas but they just weren't given the description and history that they deserved. Two out of Five Stars.
The problems started right off the bat with not enough description being given to the characters and settings to paint an accurate picture. I mean...if you have to wait until the 4th chapter to get a physical description of the main character, it's kind of hard to create that movie in your head. Other examples were very vague or insubstantial descriptions like "that girl was stunning" or "he was the most handsome man I had ever seen" we kinda get a bit of a picture, but without further details or even basics like hair and eye color it was just kind of a mess.
Plot-wise, I really loved the direction that the author was going in. An academy of steampunk-esk societies and guilds,all battling (with words...not literally) to maintain supremacy while also keeping peace and order. It was really cool, but again, I didn't get enough backdrop. The world-building was sub par in that you didn't get ANY descriptions of where you were...generalized words like "amazing" and "breathtaking" cluttered up the pages without actually telling us what MADE these structures, these settings, these people so amazing and breathtaking. We are also provided with very little history and context for these secret magical orders. Apparently they've existed since before men walked on two feet...but we don't understand who they are, how they came to be, what they believe in...ANYTHING....though there was a lot of plot and action in the NOW you never learn about the past, leaving a kind of baseless story where you just live in the moment without a clear understanding of your(or the character's ) place in the world.
The book is also guilty of one of the worst literary crimes that I can think of...Stupid, weak, and easily defeated villains. The dialogue smacked of cheap saturday morning cartoons, and the cheesy modern power-rangers-esk feel to it. Villains stepped into easy traps, were defeated by people with no real sense of power, and were outsmarted by characters who had no idea what they were doing. Kind of a let down.
I really wish the book would go under massive re-writes and edits because it could be SO amazing! There were times when I caught a glimpse of some really magical scenes and ideas but they just weren't given the description and history that they deserved. Two out of Five Stars.
September 21, 2018
If you're looking for a fresh voice in fiction, the answer is M. J. Fletcher. The Doorknob Society is like nothing I've ever read before and that's a good thing. The characters fascinated me and the plot moved quickly. Highly recommend!
Reviewed by: Mrs. N
My Rating: 5 stars
Reviewed by: Mrs. N
My Rating: 5 stars
June 28, 2012
The Doorknob Society by MJ Fletcher – Book Review
Magic, hotties, a new world, and a feisty lead. MJ Fletcher pulls you in and keeps you flipping pages with The Doorknob Society.
Once I got into the story I started to really like Chloe. She is feisty, stands up to anyone and everyone and as every teenage girl, she has issues. Her attitude and quick thinking keeps the story moving along at a nice pace.
In my opinion, MJ Fletcher’s biggest accomplishment with this story would have to be the concept. Fletcher took old, everyday objects, mixed in some magic and changed them into a fresh new idea. With suspense, adventure, romance, and mystery tied in, the storyline keeps you wanting more until the very end.
However, I think this story still needs some tender love and care. The two main issues I had were the technical aspects and repetition. There were many spelling and grammar issues and unfortunately as the reader (this may also be the writer in me) I felt as if I needed to pull out my red pen. This really pulls you away from the action in the story. Also, throughout most of the book I was frustrated with all the repetition. If Chloe wasn’t thinking about not wanting a relationship, she was thinking about how broken she was. Every chapter seemed to touch on this, and at times I wanted to scream, Okay, we get it. You don’t want a relationship. Move on.
With that said, when I hit the halfway mark of the book, I did in fact start to like Chloe. Her constant reminders of how broken she was didn’t bother me as much and I became very intrigue with James Nightshade. He brought out a different side of Chloe, which definitely was not annoying.
All in all, this was an entertaining read, and I would recommend it.
Magic, hotties, a new world, and a feisty lead. MJ Fletcher pulls you in and keeps you flipping pages with The Doorknob Society.
Once I got into the story I started to really like Chloe. She is feisty, stands up to anyone and everyone and as every teenage girl, she has issues. Her attitude and quick thinking keeps the story moving along at a nice pace.
In my opinion, MJ Fletcher’s biggest accomplishment with this story would have to be the concept. Fletcher took old, everyday objects, mixed in some magic and changed them into a fresh new idea. With suspense, adventure, romance, and mystery tied in, the storyline keeps you wanting more until the very end.
However, I think this story still needs some tender love and care. The two main issues I had were the technical aspects and repetition. There were many spelling and grammar issues and unfortunately as the reader (this may also be the writer in me) I felt as if I needed to pull out my red pen. This really pulls you away from the action in the story. Also, throughout most of the book I was frustrated with all the repetition. If Chloe wasn’t thinking about not wanting a relationship, she was thinking about how broken she was. Every chapter seemed to touch on this, and at times I wanted to scream, Okay, we get it. You don’t want a relationship. Move on.
With that said, when I hit the halfway mark of the book, I did in fact start to like Chloe. Her constant reminders of how broken she was didn’t bother me as much and I became very intrigue with James Nightshade. He brought out a different side of Chloe, which definitely was not annoying.
All in all, this was an entertaining read, and I would recommend it.
March 22, 2012
Ok. this is one incredible book. I couldn't put it down! At first I thought it was very similar to the story of a certain young wizard...multiple groups of power, each student at a special school had to 'declare' themselves to a group...Well, I couldn't have been more wrong. This book is just amazing!
The characters are unique. They are able to form a very strong emotional bond between them, which is great because when the initially met, they almost hated each other.
Enough about my gushing about this book. My thoughts? Read this book!!! The main character is Chloe Masters. She is the daughter of a blended marriage. Her dad is a former member of The Doorknob Society and her mom, well, you have to read the book to find out where her mom fit into the picture. Chloe and her friends, Edgar, Slade, James and Jess form a strong bond that even the axis of evil could not destroy. They are just teenagers who must fight for what is right, against all odds. Each and every character has a distinct personality, fun, snarky, loveable...but they all mesh together perfectly.
This is book one of a series. I hope I get the opportunity to receive an ARC of book two. I cannot wait to see what happens!
The characters are unique. They are able to form a very strong emotional bond between them, which is great because when the initially met, they almost hated each other.
Enough about my gushing about this book. My thoughts? Read this book!!! The main character is Chloe Masters. She is the daughter of a blended marriage. Her dad is a former member of The Doorknob Society and her mom, well, you have to read the book to find out where her mom fit into the picture. Chloe and her friends, Edgar, Slade, James and Jess form a strong bond that even the axis of evil could not destroy. They are just teenagers who must fight for what is right, against all odds. Each and every character has a distinct personality, fun, snarky, loveable...but they all mesh together perfectly.
This is book one of a series. I hope I get the opportunity to receive an ARC of book two. I cannot wait to see what happens!
December 12, 2012
Overall, pretty decent ( although I've gotta say, I am sick to death of wispy blond girls saving everyone all of the time. Where are the non-European heroines in recent YA? WHERE?)
However the loss of those last few stars is mainly because of a few points where the heroine, so intent on finding her father, forgets to follow his own instructions. And also because, come on, I can't have been the only one who guessed the ending after she mentions in the first 10 pages that her mother went missing, can I?
In all honesty, this is more of a 3.5. At times it feels like the Author had a checklist of all of the things Modern YA titles are supposed to hit these days: Kind of tired Love triangle (check), sort of annoying sidekick who is kept in the dark (check), Secret society run by mostly incompetent bureaucrats (check), but the magic system is interesting, and despite the slightly hackneyed plot-line, I'm still looking forward to the next one.
We'll see if that one proves me to be a glutton for punishment.
However the loss of those last few stars is mainly because of a few points where the heroine, so intent on finding her father, forgets to follow his own instructions. And also because, come on, I can't have been the only one who guessed the ending after she mentions in the first 10 pages that her mother went missing, can I?
In all honesty, this is more of a 3.5. At times it feels like the Author had a checklist of all of the things Modern YA titles are supposed to hit these days: Kind of tired Love triangle (check), sort of annoying sidekick who is kept in the dark (check), Secret society run by mostly incompetent bureaucrats (check), but the magic system is interesting, and despite the slightly hackneyed plot-line, I'm still looking forward to the next one.
We'll see if that one proves me to be a glutton for punishment.
February 15, 2012
I am SO GLAD that I said I'd review the book!! It had me interested from the first chapter, and HOOKED shortly after that!
Chloe Masters' dad is a well known magician, and they live a gypsy lifestyle, traveling all over the world performing together after her mom disappeared 11 years ago. Everything is as usual for them until they go to leave Paris. Their passports are confiscated and they are not allowed to leave. Chloe sneaks out to break into the office where the passports are being held to get them back, and when she does, she runs into trouble. Finding no way out and all doors locked, she tries again to open a door. As she is trying to open the door, she gets a really strange feeling and next thing she knows the door is opening.
Read my FULL REVIEW here: http://shoes-n-more.blogspot.com/2012...
Chloe Masters' dad is a well known magician, and they live a gypsy lifestyle, traveling all over the world performing together after her mom disappeared 11 years ago. Everything is as usual for them until they go to leave Paris. Their passports are confiscated and they are not allowed to leave. Chloe sneaks out to break into the office where the passports are being held to get them back, and when she does, she runs into trouble. Finding no way out and all doors locked, she tries again to open a door. As she is trying to open the door, she gets a really strange feeling and next thing she knows the door is opening.
Read my FULL REVIEW here: http://shoes-n-more.blogspot.com/2012...
January 18, 2013
Very interesting ideas and world. Loved the voice and the characters were great. Not sure what didn't drive it over the top for me. I really enjoyed it and want to continue the series.
July 25, 2017
Needs editing
I gave up at 40%, exhausted by the copious awkward writing. Missing commas, missing possessives, run-ons, and just plain awkward writing. It had intrigued me some, but got too much headache and frustration from the messiness to continue. It is possible other people won't be bothered by it.
30 highlights in 40% yet I didn't mark all of it!!!
I gave up at 40%, exhausted by the copious awkward writing. Missing commas, missing possessives, run-ons, and just plain awkward writing. It had intrigued me some, but got too much headache and frustration from the messiness to continue. It is possible other people won't be bothered by it.
30 highlights in 40% yet I didn't mark all of it!!!
October 23, 2016
Book #28 for 2016
I was in the mood to read something with a skeleton key on the cover. Yes, I have oddly specific moods. This was actually my second attempt. I first tried The Legacy of the Key, but it was so relentlessly stupid that I ditched it at the 3% mark. So this book at least beat that benchmark of quality. I was a little worried that it was trying to be a YA/steampunk Neverwhere, and the volume of errors did not bode well, but there were enough intriguing elements that it held my attention long enough for me to decide that I might as well finish it. Because skeleton key cover.
As it happens, my original worry was ungrounded. There was not enough depth or texture or sophistication to the tale for it to be more than momentarily compared to anything from Neil Gaiman's fertile imagination. It is tempting to call it an attempt at a steampunk Harry Potter, because the amount that Fletcher borrowed from Rowling is insulting, but that implies a certain level of effort that I highly doubt was put forth. The characters were flat, the internal dialogue was emotionally tone-deaf, the pacing was bogged down in banal exchanges and re-hashes, and the action scenes were choppy and poorly blocked.
And then there are the errors. Look, I get that not all writers are strong with the mechanics of the language. Even some of the big names rely heavily on their editors, and even the major publishing houses get a little sloppy now and then. I rarely find a book without at least one typo. But if you need help with homophones and apostrophes and basic sentence structure and such, then GET HELP! And do it before you even think about hitting that publish button on whatever vanity press site you've chosen. And if your beta readers are not informing you that you clearly don't have even the vaguest understanding of how punctuation works, you need new beta readers.
Despite the fact that the protagonist read like a poorly educated 12-year-old boy impersonating a somewhat dense 15-year-old girl he can't figure out, she did come up with a few clever ideas here and there in the story. And when Fletcher bothered to provide any worthwhile detail, some of the steampunky visuals were kind of cool. It was all just interesting enough to keep me reading to the (dissatisfying) end, so I'd give it 1.5 stars for being almost okay. But I look at how many young readers are reviewing this book under the serious misapprehension that it is a quality publication, and I have to take a stand and round down to 1 star. They can do so much better.
I was in the mood to read something with a skeleton key on the cover. Yes, I have oddly specific moods. This was actually my second attempt. I first tried The Legacy of the Key, but it was so relentlessly stupid that I ditched it at the 3% mark. So this book at least beat that benchmark of quality. I was a little worried that it was trying to be a YA/steampunk Neverwhere, and the volume of errors did not bode well, but there were enough intriguing elements that it held my attention long enough for me to decide that I might as well finish it. Because skeleton key cover.
As it happens, my original worry was ungrounded. There was not enough depth or texture or sophistication to the tale for it to be more than momentarily compared to anything from Neil Gaiman's fertile imagination. It is tempting to call it an attempt at a steampunk Harry Potter, because the amount that Fletcher borrowed from Rowling is insulting, but that implies a certain level of effort that I highly doubt was put forth. The characters were flat, the internal dialogue was emotionally tone-deaf, the pacing was bogged down in banal exchanges and re-hashes, and the action scenes were choppy and poorly blocked.
And then there are the errors. Look, I get that not all writers are strong with the mechanics of the language. Even some of the big names rely heavily on their editors, and even the major publishing houses get a little sloppy now and then. I rarely find a book without at least one typo. But if you need help with homophones and apostrophes and basic sentence structure and such, then GET HELP! And do it before you even think about hitting that publish button on whatever vanity press site you've chosen. And if your beta readers are not informing you that you clearly don't have even the vaguest understanding of how punctuation works, you need new beta readers.
Despite the fact that the protagonist read like a poorly educated 12-year-old boy impersonating a somewhat dense 15-year-old girl he can't figure out, she did come up with a few clever ideas here and there in the story. And when Fletcher bothered to provide any worthwhile detail, some of the steampunky visuals were kind of cool. It was all just interesting enough to keep me reading to the (dissatisfying) end, so I'd give it 1.5 stars for being almost okay. But I look at how many young readers are reviewing this book under the serious misapprehension that it is a quality publication, and I have to take a stand and round down to 1 star. They can do so much better.
May 26, 2012
I was pleasantly surprised by The Doorknob Society, the synopsis in itself was intriguing but once I got started I was literally pulled into the amazing fantasy world Mr. Fletcher has created.
Chloe Masters has spent most of her life traveling with her master magician father, whilst on a tour in France life as Chloe knows it is about to change; she discovers she will become a part of a unique society known as the Doorknob Society, an order of the Old Kind and can travel through parallel dimensions by touching a doorknob.
Things initially are complicated for Chloe as her father isn’t exactly forthcoming with information about their history, his expulsion from the society, where her mother who disappeared 10 years prior fits in and why there is someone after her. But attending the exclusive Paladin Academy will give her a chance to learn about her new life.
Helping her along the way is Edgar who I found hilarious, Michael Slade who was smart and dreamy and of course arrogant and infuriating James Nightshade. Each character had wonderful characteristics and was developed perfectly; I also liked how Chloe’s friendship progressed with Val.
There was so much happening with this captivating plot, Chloe’s father has gone missing, she needs to find out where her powers lie and within which of the five groups she will fit into (The Doorknob Society, Mapmakers Union, Honorable and Venerable Order of Detective Inspectors, The Impossible Engineers or the Skeleton Key Guild), she is learning about her family history and she is also in the middle of finding out about why people are disappearing and why there is tension between the societies. There was a lot going on but I never found it confusing or hard to keep up, the pacing was spot on.
As a main character feisty Chloe was amazing! I loved how kick-butt she was and stood up for everything she believed in and although it took her a little while to warm to her new friends she eventually came to trust and rely on them which I liked. We also got a great glimpse into each of the secondary characters; James Nightshade certainly has me intrigued.
The Doorknob Society had the perfect amount of mystery, suspense, action and romance. The concept was unique, the plot solid and the characters fleshed out perfectly. I also loved each of the status updates at the beginning of each chapter.
Mr. Fletcher has weaved a wonderfully engrossing story that kept me riveted, I wanted to know so much more about each of the groups and am eager to get hold of the sequel, The Impossible Engineers to learn more about the amazing world Fletcher has created.
Chloe Masters has spent most of her life traveling with her master magician father, whilst on a tour in France life as Chloe knows it is about to change; she discovers she will become a part of a unique society known as the Doorknob Society, an order of the Old Kind and can travel through parallel dimensions by touching a doorknob.
Things initially are complicated for Chloe as her father isn’t exactly forthcoming with information about their history, his expulsion from the society, where her mother who disappeared 10 years prior fits in and why there is someone after her. But attending the exclusive Paladin Academy will give her a chance to learn about her new life.
Helping her along the way is Edgar who I found hilarious, Michael Slade who was smart and dreamy and of course arrogant and infuriating James Nightshade. Each character had wonderful characteristics and was developed perfectly; I also liked how Chloe’s friendship progressed with Val.
There was so much happening with this captivating plot, Chloe’s father has gone missing, she needs to find out where her powers lie and within which of the five groups she will fit into (The Doorknob Society, Mapmakers Union, Honorable and Venerable Order of Detective Inspectors, The Impossible Engineers or the Skeleton Key Guild), she is learning about her family history and she is also in the middle of finding out about why people are disappearing and why there is tension between the societies. There was a lot going on but I never found it confusing or hard to keep up, the pacing was spot on.
As a main character feisty Chloe was amazing! I loved how kick-butt she was and stood up for everything she believed in and although it took her a little while to warm to her new friends she eventually came to trust and rely on them which I liked. We also got a great glimpse into each of the secondary characters; James Nightshade certainly has me intrigued.
The Doorknob Society had the perfect amount of mystery, suspense, action and romance. The concept was unique, the plot solid and the characters fleshed out perfectly. I also loved each of the status updates at the beginning of each chapter.
Mr. Fletcher has weaved a wonderfully engrossing story that kept me riveted, I wanted to know so much more about each of the groups and am eager to get hold of the sequel, The Impossible Engineers to learn more about the amazing world Fletcher has created.
July 30, 2012
I really love the premise of the book. When I first read the synopsis of this book, I knew I needed to read it, and the story didn't disappoint! The story was so mysterious and suspenseful. I was begging the book for more information because I couldn't stand the suspense and mystery (which could be good and bad)! I really enjoyed the steampunk and sci-fi elements. The story was full of action and the pace was great. The romance was okay and typical. Team Michael or James? Team neither, not a big fan of love triangle. Plus I don't know, I didn't feel them.
Chloe was the typical kickass character that stood up for what she believed, but her own emotional issues (which is the reason for the love triangle). She was feisty but kept on saying that she didn't want a relationship. I don't quite know how I feel about her. I guess I just don't like "typical", haha, call me hipster.
I think this book was a good read but really the only problem was the relationship between the character. I don't like repetition about how Chloe was broken (it took up the first part of the book). Thanks, bye, I'm out. Also at times I just wanted to skip over the chapters to find out what happened in the end because I wanted to know the mystery. It sure was tempting.
Chloe was the typical kickass character that stood up for what she believed, but her own emotional issues (which is the reason for the love triangle). She was feisty but kept on saying that she didn't want a relationship. I don't quite know how I feel about her. I guess I just don't like "typical", haha, call me hipster.
I think this book was a good read but really the only problem was the relationship between the character. I don't like repetition about how Chloe was broken (it took up the first part of the book). Thanks, bye, I'm out. Also at times I just wanted to skip over the chapters to find out what happened in the end because I wanted to know the mystery. It sure was tempting.
January 21, 2015
This book has a good idea for a plot, but both the setting and characters are under-realized so that the story becomes inconsistent and conflicting from beginning to end. Clearly shaped by the Harry Potter world, the story is about a girl who doesn't realize she has "magical" powers until she attends a special school with 4 houses, or specializations. How these powers work changes between the beginning and the end of the story, which means the characters' actions stop making sense. The school the main character attends is not described with any clarity. The relationships she has with the people around her are contrived and absurdly unrealistic. The passage of time is not described at all, making it seem that the main character goes from ignorant of her powers to being an expert with no explanation of how that took place. Punctuation is horrible. Question marks and missing commas leave even the dialog up to the reader's own imagination.
If you are interested in how a plot thread can be developed, this is worth your time. If you are interested in a good story, this book will leave you very frustrated and muttering under your breath.
If you are interested in how a plot thread can be developed, this is worth your time. If you are interested in a good story, this book will leave you very frustrated and muttering under your breath.
June 29, 2012
Holy crap this book is soooo well written. I loved the story line, The plot and the characters very much. My favorite character was of course James Nightshade. It has everything...Inter denominational travel, steampunk devises, magic, mythical creatures and so much more. I truly loved reading this book and can't wait until the next book comes out! Cloe is a smart ass tough girl and I love that in a main character. Slade (Cloes' love interest) is down to earth and tries to keep her grounded. Nightshade is a smart ass that has a comment for every thing and keeps her on her toes. Jess her estranged cousin (after a huge fallout) becomes her best friend.Edgar always imparts a witty since of knowledge. And Val (the only normal one) is very supportive in a self absorbed kind of way. All in all this group of misfits make one hell of a team. I think this book has a little bit for everyone and anyone who enjoys a good book should check it out.
April 16, 2014
Basically, Harry Potter with doorknobs. Not terrible, as derivative YA fantasy goes, better than many similar attempts, and at least entertaining enough for me to bother finishing. The characters could use some fleshing out, something to give them substance and make them more interesting and real to the reader. A little more exposition and detail about the world in which the story takes place wouldn't go amiss either. The book is in desperate need of proofreading. Punctuation and grammatical errors abound, making the book difficult to read at times. I also think it would be terrific if the author learned the difference between "hurdle" and "hurtle," and "passed" and "past." There were several glaring instances of you're/your and too/to confusion, and I nearly put the book down and walked away as a result. But all in all, not the worst thing I've ever read. No great literary achievement, but not bad as some lightweight, escapist fantasy reading.
June 23, 2012
~Status~ Great read!!
I am really glad I choose to review this book!!! The book had me hooked right away! Chloe travels the world with her father who is a magician, who was formally part of The Doorknob Society. Chloe and her father are chased when chloe awakens her powers. The only way to protect Chole is to enroll her in school, at Paladin Academy she will learn about her powers and meet new people. Edgar, Slade, Nightsade, and Jess will all come together during this book. Chloes father goes missing and people are disappearing! During all of this she is trying to find who her powers lie with as well as trying to find her father.
I thought this was a great read! I love all the characters, it full of supense,action and a little romance! Really looking forward for the next book!
I am really glad I choose to review this book!!! The book had me hooked right away! Chloe travels the world with her father who is a magician, who was formally part of The Doorknob Society. Chloe and her father are chased when chloe awakens her powers. The only way to protect Chole is to enroll her in school, at Paladin Academy she will learn about her powers and meet new people. Edgar, Slade, Nightsade, and Jess will all come together during this book. Chloes father goes missing and people are disappearing! During all of this she is trying to find who her powers lie with as well as trying to find her father.
I thought this was a great read! I love all the characters, it full of supense,action and a little romance! Really looking forward for the next book!
May 10, 2015
This is an enjoyable fantasy-ish, young-adult novel. The biggest drawback is the horrendous and consistent miss-spellings. I don't know if this is coming from the author, a terrible editor, or just a quirk of e-books but it was terrifically distracting and diminished the reading enjoyment. It wasn't just the usual mistakes of to/too or your/you're. The most occurring, and most annoying, mistake was using "passed" for "past," and vice-versa. Really grates on the nerves.
March 4, 2012
It had me from the first chapter, Chloe is one of the most engrossing heroines I've read. It felt like you were in her head and knew exactly how she felt! I couldn't put it down and read straight through and was so mad at myself for finsihing it. I. CAN. NOT. WAIT. FOR. THE. NEXT. BOOK!
I am completelly with Nightshade!!!!
I am completelly with Nightshade!!!!
February 18, 2012
Loved this!! Action, romance, magic...it has it all! I have 2 words for you....James Nightshade.
June 22, 2012
I spent the whole day yesterday reading this.
Althought there were some parts that dragged I liked it alot. The author should send it to a producer, it would do great as a series.
Althought there were some parts that dragged I liked it alot. The author should send it to a producer, it would do great as a series.
Want to read
November 27, 2012This looks interesting and it's free on kindle right now. I love the key and door on this cover.
gave-up
January 12, 2015Interesting (and somewhat annoying) that it's only available on kindle... So I downloaded it, but then couldn't get past the awkward writing. Oh well.
January 15, 2013
Can't put it down! So intrigued as to where this story will continue to take me! Love it so far!
July 16, 2012
I had a weird yet recurring thought while I was reading this book: I sure miss Harry Potter. That parallel universe sort of world where certain parts were everyday and familiar, but even better, many parts were not. People dress differently, there are otherworldly creatures, they have their own school and there is magic. Lots of magic. The thing is, you could really see that world from JK Rowling’s descriptions and immerse yourself until you felt like you could live there. On occasion, I got glimpses of an similarly interesting world while reading The Doorknob Society. Now, don’t get your wands in a twist - this book is a far cry from the tales of our beloved Mr. Potter. I will say this, though: having read over 100 books in the past year, the vast majority of them in the young adult genre, I just realized that I miss a good made-up story where the unusual is the norm.
Chloe Masters is the daughter of a magician. She and her parents have been traveling around the world her whole life while her parents perform their magic show. Unfortunately, Chloe’s Mom leaves with no explanation when Chloe is six. Now 16, Chloe is about to have her world turned upside down when she finds out that her father, Elijah, is no amateur magician. Chloe decides to help when she and her dad are forbidden to leave France and their passports are confiscated. Trying to retrieve them, she accidentally activates an unknown power, which propels her through a portal and back into her hotel room. Promising to explain everything when they get home, that promise gets put on hold when a evil-looking man emerges into their hotel room...from another portal. Elijah escapes with Chloe to their family home in Cape May, New Jersey.
Though Chloe has innumerable questions, her father remains tight-lipped for the most part. What he does say, however, stuns Chloe: they are staying in Cape May, there is something called the Doorknob Society and she is to attend Paladin Academy. In addition, there are more groups like the Society: The Skeleton Key Guild, the Mapmakers Union, the Impossible Engineers, and the Honorable and Venerable Order of Detective Inspectors who are known collectively as the Old Kind. Not all factions get along, but they are required to at the Academy. Chloe soon meets Michael Slade, a cute boy who seems to already like her. Her group of friends grows to include Edgar Manus, a student who has declared for the Mapmaker’s Union. Their adventures begin immediately, when Chloe begins to hear rumors about her parents and her father’s banishment from the Doorknob Society. She is determined to find out the truth, which also could possibly lead to figuring out why her mother left.
She soon meets her match in James Nightshade, a member of the Skeleton Key Guild and fellow student. He’s a snarky and irritating person, with whom, against her wishes, she feels a connection. The last member of their group is James’ friend, Jessica. After a rough beginning, she and Chloe discover that they are more than enemies - they are cousins. United when their grandmother is attacked, they swear to get whomever is behind it.
This story is a whirlwind; as Chloe knows nothing of her family history, the Old Kind or her powers, she gets dumped, completely clueless, in the center of a fight that started well before she was born. Despite her inexperience, and due to her stubbornness, she is immediately catapulted into an unfamiliar word with real-world consequences. To top it off, Michael is pursuing her affections. Is there time for that? Does she want it? For now, her father is missing, his nemesis is demanding her full cooperation, and a detective inspector is on her tail. Who can she trust?
My main issue with this book is my pettest of peeves: bad grammar! The most perplexing, of all things, was the author’s use (misuse, to be precise) of the question mark. I thought most people had that one down? (See how I used it in that previous sentence.) For some reason, Mr. Fletcher put question marks at the end of sentences that weren’t questions at all. It was seriously annoying, as they were quite plentiful. I started reading the sentences like questions in my head. In addition, the sentence structure was poor. There were many run-on sentences that were begging for some form of punctuation, as well as a few spelling mishaps (to/too; past/passed). Lastly, word usage. I don’t know what a “mouthy smile” is, for example. A good editor can help with these issues.
The story itself is interesting and I do like the world that was created. I think Chloe’s repetitive chant of “I’m broken” is a little heavy-handed, mainly because it seems to only be a device to keep her from being with Michael. When she does kiss Michael, she seems to wholeheartedly like him. In addition, her relationship with James is a little confusing. I get it that she doesn’t know why she has a connection with him; it just makes her “submissions” to Michael ring false. As a reader, it could eventually alienate me since Michael has done nothing except, well, everything Chloe has asked him to do. It seems like drama is being inserted in the wrong place. Obviously, I don’t know where either relationship is headed, but there is going to have to be some kind of resolution before Chloe starts to have feelings for her own cousin to boot.
The animosity between the groups of the Old Kind isn’t sufficiently explained, either. I think that would make the relationships and the drama more understandable and believable. And where are Jessica’s parents? Yes, you should save some of the information/drama for future volumes, but you have to answer the obvious ones, even if only obtusely. Give the reader something.
In spite of the grammatical issues, I am giving the story 3 stars. I am very intrigued. I would love for the next book to be a little bit more leisurely in its pacing so the characters can take a breath every now and then and so I, as the reader, can immerse myself more fully into their world. I hope that makes sense? Sorry. Had to.
3 of 5 Stars
The Doorknob Society by MJ Fletcher was published February 9, 2012 by Smashwords. A free copy of this book was given to Ink and Page in return for an honest review.
Chloe Masters is the daughter of a magician. She and her parents have been traveling around the world her whole life while her parents perform their magic show. Unfortunately, Chloe’s Mom leaves with no explanation when Chloe is six. Now 16, Chloe is about to have her world turned upside down when she finds out that her father, Elijah, is no amateur magician. Chloe decides to help when she and her dad are forbidden to leave France and their passports are confiscated. Trying to retrieve them, she accidentally activates an unknown power, which propels her through a portal and back into her hotel room. Promising to explain everything when they get home, that promise gets put on hold when a evil-looking man emerges into their hotel room...from another portal. Elijah escapes with Chloe to their family home in Cape May, New Jersey.
Though Chloe has innumerable questions, her father remains tight-lipped for the most part. What he does say, however, stuns Chloe: they are staying in Cape May, there is something called the Doorknob Society and she is to attend Paladin Academy. In addition, there are more groups like the Society: The Skeleton Key Guild, the Mapmakers Union, the Impossible Engineers, and the Honorable and Venerable Order of Detective Inspectors who are known collectively as the Old Kind. Not all factions get along, but they are required to at the Academy. Chloe soon meets Michael Slade, a cute boy who seems to already like her. Her group of friends grows to include Edgar Manus, a student who has declared for the Mapmaker’s Union. Their adventures begin immediately, when Chloe begins to hear rumors about her parents and her father’s banishment from the Doorknob Society. She is determined to find out the truth, which also could possibly lead to figuring out why her mother left.
She soon meets her match in James Nightshade, a member of the Skeleton Key Guild and fellow student. He’s a snarky and irritating person, with whom, against her wishes, she feels a connection. The last member of their group is James’ friend, Jessica. After a rough beginning, she and Chloe discover that they are more than enemies - they are cousins. United when their grandmother is attacked, they swear to get whomever is behind it.
This story is a whirlwind; as Chloe knows nothing of her family history, the Old Kind or her powers, she gets dumped, completely clueless, in the center of a fight that started well before she was born. Despite her inexperience, and due to her stubbornness, she is immediately catapulted into an unfamiliar word with real-world consequences. To top it off, Michael is pursuing her affections. Is there time for that? Does she want it? For now, her father is missing, his nemesis is demanding her full cooperation, and a detective inspector is on her tail. Who can she trust?
My main issue with this book is my pettest of peeves: bad grammar! The most perplexing, of all things, was the author’s use (misuse, to be precise) of the question mark. I thought most people had that one down? (See how I used it in that previous sentence.) For some reason, Mr. Fletcher put question marks at the end of sentences that weren’t questions at all. It was seriously annoying, as they were quite plentiful. I started reading the sentences like questions in my head. In addition, the sentence structure was poor. There were many run-on sentences that were begging for some form of punctuation, as well as a few spelling mishaps (to/too; past/passed). Lastly, word usage. I don’t know what a “mouthy smile” is, for example. A good editor can help with these issues.
The story itself is interesting and I do like the world that was created. I think Chloe’s repetitive chant of “I’m broken” is a little heavy-handed, mainly because it seems to only be a device to keep her from being with Michael. When she does kiss Michael, she seems to wholeheartedly like him. In addition, her relationship with James is a little confusing. I get it that she doesn’t know why she has a connection with him; it just makes her “submissions” to Michael ring false. As a reader, it could eventually alienate me since Michael has done nothing except, well, everything Chloe has asked him to do. It seems like drama is being inserted in the wrong place. Obviously, I don’t know where either relationship is headed, but there is going to have to be some kind of resolution before Chloe starts to have feelings for her own cousin to boot.
The animosity between the groups of the Old Kind isn’t sufficiently explained, either. I think that would make the relationships and the drama more understandable and believable. And where are Jessica’s parents? Yes, you should save some of the information/drama for future volumes, but you have to answer the obvious ones, even if only obtusely. Give the reader something.
In spite of the grammatical issues, I am giving the story 3 stars. I am very intrigued. I would love for the next book to be a little bit more leisurely in its pacing so the characters can take a breath every now and then and so I, as the reader, can immerse myself more fully into their world. I hope that makes sense? Sorry. Had to.
3 of 5 Stars
The Doorknob Society by MJ Fletcher was published February 9, 2012 by Smashwords. A free copy of this book was given to Ink and Page in return for an honest review.
September 1, 2019
Disappointing
I totally agree with those pointing out the poor grammar, etc. The use of "passed" in one sentence had me rereading it several times before I figured out it was "past". But, the overall story left me questioning reality or the lack thereof. Val is not magical. She takes advanced placement classes, but notices nothing strange about everyone else. The engineers built the academy so normals cannot see how it really looks. Why didn't they just make it invisible & unknown to normals? That way we wouldn't have to listen to Val whine about why she didn't get admitted.
Then there are the bad guys. Big, mean, evil. Why can't their organization just believe they are right. Like cults that fight for what they believe, that they are doing good. There could have been lots of good conflict before you can figure out who is right.
Before Chloe rescues her dad, she is determined to try each group, before she chooses one. Spoiler alert: start of book 2 she has already declared. I thought she was going to gain skills on all the group's & that would help her in the future. Maybe turn out she had multiple skills.
I totally agree with those pointing out the poor grammar, etc. The use of "passed" in one sentence had me rereading it several times before I figured out it was "past". But, the overall story left me questioning reality or the lack thereof. Val is not magical. She takes advanced placement classes, but notices nothing strange about everyone else. The engineers built the academy so normals cannot see how it really looks. Why didn't they just make it invisible & unknown to normals? That way we wouldn't have to listen to Val whine about why she didn't get admitted.
Then there are the bad guys. Big, mean, evil. Why can't their organization just believe they are right. Like cults that fight for what they believe, that they are doing good. There could have been lots of good conflict before you can figure out who is right.
Before Chloe rescues her dad, she is determined to try each group, before she chooses one. Spoiler alert: start of book 2 she has already declared. I thought she was going to gain skills on all the group's & that would help her in the future. Maybe turn out she had multiple skills.
June 27, 2017
I realize this book was not aimed at me, but that's no excuse for bad construction and bad writing. This book is a Harry Potter/Twilight wanna-be. Start with a protagonist who has been sheltered from the truth about her abilities, only to find out she has special abilities and someone is chasing her. Next poof! She gets to go to a private school to learn about her abilities complete with 5 'houses' of special abilities and having to declare which one she belongs to. And then there is the penchant for getting right in the middle of the battle of the century and somehow saving the day against all odds. Oh, but also irritatingly wondering every other page about which boy she wants to kiss -- the good guy or the bad boy. I won't be reading the others of this series, obviously.
December 5, 2016
What an incredibly creative story idea. 5 stars!
What absolutely horrible grammar, punctuation and sentences with words omitted. I literally lost the story several times because the question mark was used incorrectly dozens of times. But, the missing words really blew my mind. I put it down several times but kept giving it another chance. It also needs to have at least 75% of the self-condemnation removed. 1/2 of a star
This book could be fascinating if edited after a proofreader goes through it.
What absolutely horrible grammar, punctuation and sentences with words omitted. I literally lost the story several times because the question mark was used incorrectly dozens of times. But, the missing words really blew my mind. I put it down several times but kept giving it another chance. It also needs to have at least 75% of the self-condemnation removed. 1/2 of a star
This book could be fascinating if edited after a proofreader goes through it.
August 1, 2017
I always try to fit myself inside every book I read. I can't imagine having no clue about these abilities until touching a random doorknob. It's very odd and far-fetched to imagine. However, the story was good, characters are good, interesting names and personalities. Not predictable which I LOVE!!! Interested to see what comes next.
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