I saw this in the bookshop I volunteer at, & couldn't wait til I pulled the shelves so I could get this for free. Pirate books are a little rare to find.
I found the name Raeven very unlikely in that time period, especially spelled with an extra E, which is a very modern thing to do. There were a couple moments early on when Raeven sounded modern too. "You're just full of delusions" and 'Down and dirty.'
Things happened only for plot conflict's sake, because it made no sense otherwise. It was very convenient that Captain Cutlass needed a cabin boy, & definitely made no sense that after discovering she was a woman, still took her. It also made no sense when she said she'd rather have Cutlass take her and escape later than to be rescued. Surely her pride wouldn't make her act so stupidly.
I liked his quartermaster, Maine. He was likable. Bastien said he was a man of few vices, if any. So I didn't like when the author ruined a good character by having him react to Raeven, even though he's married. Bastien had never known him to show interest in other women, but of course when he sees Raeven, he stares at her and says she's more than pretty.
We go 64 pages without knowing his real name is Sebastien. I think the real name should be used first, as well as put on the synopsis before we're given their nicknames.
She was so bent on revenge, which then turned to lust too quickly. Just because he's handsome & responded to his kisses doesn't mean she'd keep wanting to kiss him,& act on her lust, as if it was more important than her revenge.& she didn't even feel guilty or confused by it.
I loved the phrase "The British are here."
It didn't take long for the requisite sad past of the male MC to come out. He was the last of the Harcourts, the de Valere, the French aristocracy dying in the revolution. His twin brother, oldest brother and mother died in a fire while his dad was publicly executed. Why does the hero always have to have a sad story?
I thought Raeven used Percy and didn't appreciate him, constantly asking for his help,& putting him in jeopardy with her dad, like the stunt where she asked him to row her to Bastien's ship, knowing her dad would flog and court-martial Percy. I loved the line when Percy said "after your father blows the Shadow out of the water."
I loved all the information of ships, like the new terms I learned, bosun and purser.
'His hands were everywhere--on her body, in her hair, his fingers in her mouth.' I'm sorry, what? His fingers are in your mouth?!
It was a tad repetitive, her continuing to have plans to kill Sebastien. Although I did like the cat and mouse aspect of it, how you knew they'd keep seeing each other, when she'd plan to board his ship.
I was glad they were interrupted from almost having sex in his berth, but I didn't like that Raeven and Percy were trapped on his ship while he set sail after Jordain.
I liked the idea of her getting her sword and leaving another note, before Percy got captured and the plan ruined. So it didn't end up happening. Also when Bastien planned to let them both go by night's end. But that doesn't happen, because he goes after Jordain. I looked forward to them meeting up again.
I really didn't like how she'd loved Timothy, but didn't feel desire for him.& Bastien somehow knows this. She actually thought she was lacking and incapable of passion. So the men get to feel passion countless times with other women,& but the female MC doesn't get to even feel it once for another man besides the male lead? That is so unfair and unbalanced.
Bastien goes to the brig to look for Raeven, and sees her with Mr. Williams. He immediately can tell Percy is in love with her,& feels jealous, but immediately relaxes when he sees Raeven treated him like a puppy dog. So she gets to see a trunk full of women's clothes, because he's had so many women on his ship he keeps clothes for them, while the hero can't even feel jealousy of men around the heroine?
I kept waiting for a reason of why he had a trunk full of women's clothing on his ship, hopefully they were his mother's, or...something other than the obvious, that he's had such a parade of women that he has clothing kept on hand. But it never happened. For some reason, in pirate books, the guy always has clothes on board, very convenient just so the woman has outfits to change into. Do you really wanna wear woman's clothing from your guys past? That is not romantic, it's disgusting. And unnecessary, because she wore men's clothing all the time.
Percy was saying he helped Raeven board Bastien's ship, because she'd be better off with him. That didn't even make me think of the bosun, but it was just a convenient way for the author to let Bastien know a man asked to see her breasts before he'd help her. What woman would say in front of two men "I had to show him my tits." Btw, the term tits and balls seem too modern.
She knew how to French kiss and wanted Bastien to make love to her hard and fast. What woman back then would know of that?
She made a couple comments that made me think she'd had sex with Timothy, but I was hoping it wasn't true. Although the scales are more even, because the guys sure as heck aren't virgins in romance books. It isn't until pg 150 that is bluntly thrown out that she gave Timothy her maidenhead. I wish Raeven was classier and more gently bred.
It was sweet when Gaston meets Raeven, and said so she's the raven, he wondered why Bastien was speaking of birds in his sleep.
In the beginning his title was "pirate bastard" or "pirate" or "bastard." It was pretty repetitive. It also sounded stupid once, "You'll have topry the blunt out of my cold, dead hands, pirate bastard."
On 156 she asks Gaston about the name Bastien, as if she's never heard of it. Seeing as how he's referred to that from the beginning, I couldn't believe she'd never heard of it.
The French Revolution had killed or displaced much of the aristocracy. I liked the line: 'a deposed marquis.'
I liked the French titles like duc. And he said she pronounced marquis in the English fashion, marquess.
He calls her Miss Russell,& she asks when had she become Miss Russell,& he says she's earned his respect. It made me wonder what he called her before. Raeven? I didn't remember.
I didn't like when he said "I've known a lot of beautiful women" but I liked her response "if you're trying to seduce me, you're sailing in the wrong direction," because for some reason women are usually turned on by the man's past with other women.
However he did finish his statement by saying but he's known very few women who impressed him.
I didn't like how he asked wasn't she gonna make a show of protesting,& said '"oui--protesting. 'No, no, Monsieur, we shouldn't" he said in a high-pitched voice. "And finally you give in because you are overwhelmed by my caresses."' It made me wonder if he was recalling that from memory.
She made it sound like it was only the one time, then it turns out her and Timothy were together a few times. Bastien asks her what she likes& she says she doesn't know. He thinks she's a virgin, and sounds worried, but of course that ship has set sail. & he asks if she's ever experienced la petite mort, the little death. Of course she's never experienced it with Timothy, because Bastien is the ultimate lover, & the heroine isn't allowed to feel desire for anyone but the hero, although the heroes can feel it many times with other women. Real fair.
Of course, 'like most men, he preferred large breasts, and hers were abundant.' 'Almost too large for her small frame, for she had a tiny waist and slim hips.' Raeven was a little too perfectly built in here. And btw, there's no way if her breasts were that large, binding them would completely disguise them like that.
Her hair smelled of cherries and she tasted like cherries. How can your hair smell like cherries if you don't use cherry shampoo? & how can you taste of cherries if you haven't eaten cherries?! Romance books are so ridiculous because the heroines always smell like flowers, fruit or honey.
This was just weird to me: 'She'd flung her head back, reached up to cup her breasts,& arched hard against him.'
When she jokes that she's ready for a nap, he tells her he didn't think she had much of a sense of humor, which idl in characters. When she said he didn't know everything about her, I realized she actually doesn't have much of a sense of humor.
Of course when she sees him naked she says "I suppose I've seen naked men before, but I've never seen anything like you." He said women had complimented him before but it hadn't meant anything to him.
'Normally, he would think of some excuse to go on deck, smoke a cigar, or breathe fresh air. Instead, he gathered her close.' Of course she's the first one he's wanted to snuggle with after.
Raeven or Bastien never told us they suspected a traitor on board, because there was no way Jordain knew it was them when they attacked unless they were waiting for them. They throw it out suddenly and it was a shock.
Pirates made their fortune by running blockades and robbing merchant ships.
She says Leveque said the duchesse was dead, but I didn't remember him saying that. In fact, the only one they were sure of was the duc, his dad, being dead. Although one time they said it was only reported in the papers. His mom and brothers might be alive.
Bastien says Gaston would never talk about Bastien's past, that he can withstand tortures, but Gaston has told Raeven quite a lot about his past, very freely.
I didn't like how Bastien had to consult Raeven on where Jordain could have gone, only coming up with a plan with her, and not hours in the wardroom with his trusted crew.
Percy, being friends with Timothy, and adoring Raeven, made me think he was a grown man, so I was very surprised when Bastien referenced him as a boy.
It's very unlikely that Percy would respect Bastien and be ok with him bedding Raeven, when he likes her.
Percy tells Bastien to be gentle when he puts Raeven aside and he says 'of course he would set her aside. He had no intention of marrying the woman.' When early in the book, in the marketplace fight he said if she drew her dagger he'd consider marrying her. Why make a comment then when you didn't know her as well, but not now?
He says "I already think you're the most beautiful woman in the world" and he makes her see the truth in his eyes. He said before he's known many beautiful women, so this is very unlikely. I wish authors would just skip speech like that, because it isn't believable.
I didn't like when he said "you'd be the most valuable crew member I had--in here or on deck" completely devaluing his men. It's laughable that she'd have more experience than a veteran of the Spanish war, not to mention all his other seasoned men.
'If anyone but Raeven had reported seeing a light, Bastien would have been skeptical.' You mean you wouldn't believe your trusted, loyal crew?
Duties on a pirate ship varied from those on a naval vessel. I wish we were told how.
I really didn't like that Maine turned out to be the traitor, because I liked him.
Idl Bastien referencing her as his paramour.
I knew for sure the author wouldn't kill Percy, and couldn't believe it when she did. It was so unnecessary, so awful. It made me mad at Raeven because it was her fault for asking for his help. Percy didn't even need to be on the ship.
It was so sad when he said "Lo...you" meaning love you.
Percy said it wasn't her fault, that he made his own choices, & Bastien said the same, even though it was. She said she never knew he loved her, or did she. "Maybe I knew all along and used his love to get what I wanted from him." Bastien says he's known women like that and she's not like that. She was so right when she said Percy always told her she only thought of herself,& she's so selfish.
It was funny when Bastien said "let's go watch La Sirena sink" as if they were going to watch a movie. And the lines "help her along to hell."
But I did actually feel bad that he left Jordain and his crew on a sinking ship while they struggled to repair it.
The ship and crew sank, even though he planned to kill Jordain and sell his crew into slavery, which I didn't like, but it was like he forgot his plans. His men came back aboard so idk when they had time to take the booty from Jordain's ship.
He said he was a marquis and maybe a duc. I wondered how titles worked. If his dad was a duc, how was he a marquis? And his oldest brother should be the duc, not Bastien.
The British practiced impressment, where they forced captured sailors into the British navy.
'In couplings with other women, he had always sought release--not that he didn't make sure they enjoyed the experience, but he made love because he enjoyed the end result.' I really don't wanna hear that.
'Once he sailed away, he would find other adventures, other women. She hoped one of those adventures was locating his family. She supposed she could find other adventures and other men, as well, but she knew she wouldn't. She knew no man would ever measure up to Bastien, no adventure would ever compare to those they had shared, simply because no adventure would have the excitement of sharing the risks with him.'
If he was gonna do that, I wouldn't care if he found his family. & are you kidding me? He had scores of women, but you'll never get with another man because they won't compare to him? This is the problem with romance books.
She turned 20 without even mentioning it. She told Gaston she'd be 20 soon, but all of a sudden she was 20 without having a birthday celebration or even a mention of it.
At pg275 she makes a guess that Bastien is 25. We should be told of their ages at the beginning. We actually don't even know how old he is.
I loved when her dad said one of the conditions is that she wasn't to know the terms he made with Bastien. And when she asks why he wouldn't want her to know he says "why do assume it was my condition?" And we wonder why the crew is frowning at her,& that we thought Bastien wasn't going to say bye. It turns out he negotiated his trial and was aboard the Regal the whole time. That was a good surprise.
There was a reference to Debrett's,& I looked it up& it's about etiquette and behavior in the 1700s. I'd love to read that!
It was almost eye-roll worthy when it turns out Bastien's oldest brother Julien is alive, married and in England. There's no way Bastien wouldn't have heard of him, especially since he's in the shipping business.
I didn't like Bastien getting physical with the butler,& the way he found out that his twin Armand, and mother were also alive. I knew it would happen,& it's so unrealistic.
Because he was on the run and didn't have time to sit and talk with his family, it was very unsatisfying. He didn't even hug his brother.
Only a short scene told in a couple lines that happened earlier when Bastien and his mother reunited. We don't even get to read it in real time.
It's very unlikely that just because Julian is rich and would buy the navy three ships, they'd overlook Sebastien being a pirate.
I didn't like that he doubted Raeven loved him,& only saved him out of guilt, because she didn't want anyone else to die because of her. That's absurd. At least she told you she loved you.
I thought it was possible, but I was still surprised when her father admitted he gave them a chance to run away. He cut the number of guards Bastien had to Newgate.
I didn't like that Bastien enrolled in the British navy,& became purser on her dad's ship. It's horrible to go from being a captain to a purser.
A marquis was called a comte, and his wife was called a comtesse.
I was disappointed he wouldn't be a pirate anymore. For some reason every guy, if he doesn't start out as the nobility, he ends up as one. Because at the heart of it, authors don't wanna be with a man who isn't rich.
There was no mention of his ship or crew. Earlier he planned to meet up with Ridley & get his ship back. What's gonna happen to it now?
We didn't get to see him reunite with Armand, his twin.
The ending was a tad on the rushed side. I wanted an emotional reunion with his family. And I realized we didn't even have an explanation of how everyone had survived the fire. How can you not explain that? Or why was Armand imprisoned, for those of us that haven't read previous books in the series.
The plot itself is a bit of a stretch, that an admiral would let his daughter live on a ship. Surely she had family she could have lived with. It was also a stretch that she'd know how to use every single weapon, as well as firing a cannon. Again, why would the admiral let his daughter fight in battles? He wanted her to get married and start a family, but then why had she been on the ship for 14 years?
The ending could have been better. It was a tad rushed, & some things were unresolved, like Bastien's ship and crew. I was disappointed with the way things were handled at the end, specifically with Bastien's family. It was a huge oversight to rush through him reuniting with his family. It's been talked about most of the book, how he wondered if they were alive. They turn out to be, and the author just brushes over it quickly, with no very little emotion? What was she thinking? I was happy for him, but it was very unlikely and unrealistic, and a little too perfect for me.
The epilogue could have been longer, and I wish it had covered more. Even though it was happy, I was just wish it had been better. Boom, they had a baby, and everyone's coming into the room. This was a pretty good book, but it was better in the beginning until a little before the halfway mark.
I definitely want to read the first two. I like this authors style of writing. She's humorous too.
I liked that this book wasn’t predictable, besides knowing the author would have his family alive. When she hatched a plan to kill Bastien, would she succeed? Would she stay on the ship? Would they part ways and meet again? It was nice not knowing.
It was also interesting to read about a french guy, which is rare in romance books. I liked learning the french expressions.