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262 pages, Mass Market Paperback
First published September 6, 2011
When I was young, about 12 or 13, I tried my hand at writing a two-fisted detective story. I was no Mickey Spillane. I'm still not. I gave it to a man I respected to read and review, and he told me it was juvenile. I don't believe that he was trying to be hurtful, but I only remember one word: juvenile. At the age of 13, I believe it is to be expected that my writing be juvenile. I say this to explain that I don't say this next bit lightly. I found this book to be written in a very inexperienced manner. I really do hate to use this word, but I find this novel very juvenile.
The story is very shallow. I found several problems with the plot and some various side plot issues. The language of the book is very immature. It's almost like a pitch for a Scooby-Doo knock off, just turn the family psychic ability into a quirky ghost and BOOM! You've got the Galloping Ghost or the Funky Phantom. Also giving the aforementioned psychic powers a pet name is always a tricky venture, and in this case, I don't think it works.
I'm sure that with some work the author can continue to improve, but I don't think I'll go along for this ride.