"If he’d been a poet, maybe, he could have written a poem and said what was in his memory concerning her. A brief epic. If he were a novelist he could tell her story. But he was an old man with a rambling imagination, a spotty if distinct memory."
Based on the passage above, I suppose I could argue that this book is one in which newspaper/radio man Finus Bates relays to us the story of the love of his life, Birdie Wells. A couple of years ago, I read and reviewed Brad Watson’s Miss Jane, a book I greatly admired. I went back to look at my review for that one before writing this. I used such words as meditative, lyrical, elegant, superb writing, solid, and convincing. Some of these adjectives hold true for this, his first novel, but there was something about it that lacked in cohesiveness and therefore made it less ‘solid and convincing.’ This is also a much darker novel in many ways – a real southern gothic piece. Not that this would deter from my enjoyment one bit, certainly not, but it felt a bit more experimental in some ways. As if Watson wasn’t quite sure what kind of book he wanted to offer us on his first shot. It was very episodic in nature, with a pretty large cast of characters that I had trouble grabbing hold of for the majority of the read. Any shortcomings in plot and structure, however, were made up for by the beauty of some very stunning passages.
There’s almost nothing I love more than an excellent character study, and I think this had potential to be just that. It’s an eccentric bunch without a doubt, with an old, gnarled medicine woman, Aunt Vish, and a creepy but somehow agreeable fellow who runs the local funeral parlor, Parnell Grimes, winning the prizes for most vivid female and male roles.
"The old woman’s hands lay on the table before her, two black crooked claws, long yellow nails resting on the unfinished plank top of the table. She showed what teeth she had then, one long dark horse tooth in front, gaps between what seemed occasional sharpened incisors here and there on back."
"His child-size hands were almost translucent, made Finus shiver a little at the thought of them handling the dead—or him, dead. And within that cartoonish gathering of flesh blinked those deep-set and absurdly pretty eyes, like a movie idol’s, so anomalous as to shock one upon first noticing."
Spanning the time between the earlier 1900s straight through a good chunk of that century, The Heaven of Mercury is set in the fictional town of Mercury, Mississippi. There are a number of valuable themes coursing through the heart of the novel, including reflections on love and lust, death and aging, racism, and the hazy lens of memory. There’s a mystery or two that added an element of suspense, but I felt at least one thread fizzled out. By the end I didn’t really care if one or the other was resolved or not, unfortunately. By far, the prose saved the day. Like I’ve said, I already knew Brad Watson could write – boy, can he write!! There’s a lot of wisdom he extends through the ruminations of Finus, and my highlighter got a decent workout on my kindle with this one. So, overall, I’d say this is a good introduction to Watson’s writing, and a foreshadowing of the brilliance to come. Of course, I say this with the foreknowledge of the excellence I know to be Miss Jane.
"Disappointments flock to us like crows and mock us from their perches on buildings or the flimsy swaying tips of pines, or flying over, a glimpse of black wing and parted beak, or in dreams, caustic, ephemeral. You love someone, you hate them. The major crime, as has been said: indifference."